【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
+ L+ H# h% u( ]* OThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; l8 s1 P8 v0 b4 aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
) h( a, B6 z9 W* b: Z* S& qI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
1 G, u" ^. K/ D0 ~+ X1 ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( r# |, f( J5 @+ G$ hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# @6 J; v' C, b: J  l! _+ {Why is it so difficult to express?
# E* f8 r* M0 A# N, M4 [3 A& UI want to confess that I love you,
( k+ e' G' z4 s! g7 z+ r; bBut I never did
% A2 a( S1 ?: j6 g; hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* K/ d0 X. L+ j0 e) w2 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 }: w1 Z# V7 [: @Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
) b( _5 Q2 x% W- C1 vWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ B! x2 |  k1 a2 r: \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% J* |: Q0 |8 Z* A9 K; }1 S. B4 r4 [, ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 T4 K2 E8 V- k9 LEntrust my love within your heart
+ e0 H- n3 D, L# z& i( X4 F# Z  yCan I entrust it to you?
; e: d  u! p# q# F- ~/ V* e( N  gEntrust my love within your heart
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- j7 {1 y: X, F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 J1 V, b# @0 ]+ S: \+ G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% I8 y$ w4 Y: j* U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 N  J5 w. t, Q" w5 v, A  P# w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ W7 b5 J' m- a3 U" I<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 H0 a1 t1 h( w% \& N$ T+ T1 X# g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: t+ j  s4 H1 O0 A0 i- V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% k8 {& P, Y) c. }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, d. X+ [+ |% X3 i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' E( H  c' C' ^9 H! K7 u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 I( W* `; c7 m/ b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" A8 a& x& i8 O( H& E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 m9 @. w  I/ _7 B; D! Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! P0 H+ l, Z7 @" W<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 n! n8 U0 W' R! \. ]  _4 f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* P# j$ k* {2 ?$ d( ^$ o7 ]<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; p5 i1 n3 \* @- ?3 ^0 X6 B5 T<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ V9 ~4 e2 c9 u4 \: @" C7 S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) z- L7 Q( W4 W6 C. M& @4 [) M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 w. w% R! _5 ^1 L6 A$ B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, R) k  e5 c3 m8 J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: i! X% @. ~( s1 T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: F; a1 l+ g5 q! B- f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% s2 H2 s$ Y& z! I5 L! [) a6 n<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; l- t  {8 `8 H  E( B) {<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 {# ]/ @" M: n" \. ~8 z7 T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 m) j6 Z* Z6 r) t; s; {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 L2 \, f+ ?7 {, Z% [9 p' C9 Q$ Y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; Y& q! }1 u- q  P6 h$ w) p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) Y) V  z7 P; K' b# ]" l( \# E5 h1 f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% b1 l* A6 k2 W- P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 ^- A) k! Z" a0 ]- i0 R- ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 K4 f. m, O5 S3 V7 }' H/ N/ Z% Y1 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& d  @* |* B8 Y5 e0 n" k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 E, G: p1 V0 y% x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* C1 X* a6 Y! e0 C4 s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 `) K+ c3 o1 E, @# g- T<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' }' Y, \4 W- w: V, W 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 C* y+ E& [: W' x5 {! U2 c1 ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>