【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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% r. Q4 M5 G1 j8 n1 u我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- W+ D" u# U+ w% j8 eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, e2 k) q" r$ B3 b) D! M7 U; DFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 V; J. s& |. q( C& a, ?$ WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, B* v. {) @- m4 U# `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! q; u  @# P8 E7 P, E8 GCan I entrust it to you?
; t9 M4 X7 ]+ ?  a( t$ F1 bEntrust my love within your heart
5 ?" b& z  j. r" M& F, v4 Z, W+ |3 iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  _4 H# S8 h3 `" ?* I% j; `If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% V3 _& A- g. u' p$ @2 _8 C; J8 RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

1 V3 i6 x! E& c8 R0 \* Q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! T; C  f% x3 i" L- O: Q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: B8 ^' K5 }) o; Y% F: P<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: \; t$ m" Q- B  g1 D- A: l. ]$ Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, d/ ]: M4 q  L2 q9 Q) n0 |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  X% \& T: M* L& I. n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% S, @& s% D9 l<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ O1 Z# C" Z, Q9 @/ K4 D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- i3 T7 v* S) T& J9 r$ j& H<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
5 {6 d; I/ R% g, Y9 K& O<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 X( h- k! O- z5 X+ A<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& A% T# o6 m3 p1 W# U! ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 x( @$ ]) q- A# @" e0 b' w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ F% r/ H; s, {* a5 L$ m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; d. x( V5 ?% `5 Y! z+ E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* [4 y4 }1 c0 t' _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* G# @1 M! t0 p; f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ e6 V% k5 S, P5 r; N) j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 C6 }, h0 ?* T/ j  y: n<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* B% ]4 n; {( j2 b1 p/ e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) F9 y! J+ {' Z! Q* n1 q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" D: ]: z! A: v: U' a5 f7 v<P>But I never did </P>
7 R* R1 O: O6 g( a<P>但我不会 </P>
+ P, s" D* P  W: [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 e; j$ L9 G9 y; n7 e2 P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: u% K5 B+ c, b8 Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) M# H# w! C& p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# `1 @( b- }0 L& O. u( ]0 y% Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 D1 j; P" n! b, x' s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  z  P: P1 p# v4 J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>