【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% m: v& c" R# j+ ]+ K1 rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( n% }. Y% P4 [! }5 z: L+ OFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
. a5 |) v. Q: B/ AWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 E; z5 P7 W' n" [  b  DIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" E, y, ~# z0 [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 Q) |) m( N) k& }: k6 @$ _5 {5 YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& q" U9 G5 q  o9 O8 k0 uIf today isn’t too late,
% ^1 [4 ]9 t, z+ \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. S& M6 q! v; H0 x) t7 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ ]& i# D6 [9 c7 d- V  \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: |  O. N8 x0 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# F$ ]& m4 {- s0 nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: u+ @' o5 P0 i1 {, ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; g: O, m& S( F3 HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; X: F; o/ w2 ?) \' P: n: ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( j% N8 h, J) o5 W8 j" w0 c<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 v6 B! h, b* Y5 [; {; u' V* y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 `4 ?2 v/ q2 X, t1 y& V<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% E6 e8 g9 e. _3 R0 `$ H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ a* z' F8 k  a+ }, M0 y. `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ O& b  Z6 b  M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& S$ _- K0 A4 R' ]8 f6 Y  h7 A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: ]7 f6 F! C) g# l; O7 K% s! ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: D6 _- V' i; F# m) H) k" q9 }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% x& p" X  @  U3 Y; J6 f8 y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ b. R) a  ~1 S7 h- a: ?3 Y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ t0 e' `' B; ]9 o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ O2 k0 n" U$ Z! ~8 P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* I' Q7 E" K1 y6 S" R<P>但我不会</P>
/ w6 U, |1 y" D; I* U9 g& G0 [<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. e8 j1 I9 X* K3 f2 b1 l6 ~<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 R5 B) Q. q0 T- ^: o6 p+ M1 Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 j8 K4 K7 K& [5 d3 `: I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; f4 g" I; ~1 C4 t; ~  o0 l" m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& g4 G! X  a" @3 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. R2 i2 B/ A4 G1 o: A: ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' l+ k$ s6 V* e* z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 [7 U" e* F- e; g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 r6 U! T, Z+ v1 }! W" I! d" J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ v9 C- \" L9 r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 o0 Q! F! Q3 N; q<P>但我不会 </P>
4 m8 C0 m( x) m9 X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( M% X* x; u" z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& q% f( n1 t/ G0 g- \/ A, `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 W7 H! N4 N( X9 V  J! r/ }& I5 K. ?! x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
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, |# Z% n1 j7 `6 E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 q9 B9 o4 {, n  d; R! Z0 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 X3 G/ h3 y1 C( J: o' m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- O* l% P: y& C, p* Y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 H( h4 M7 Z. O8 g6 V2 B<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>