【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( w+ X. `' X+ k6 J4 i我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! w: k+ X9 V( W/ tFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# G  D1 ?8 q* x! MBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 u0 T+ z; C& e# d, D4 ^If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 x. g# [) S7 e" {" K: J: WWhy is it so difficult to express?
. I5 L2 l- M5 M+ Y8 y3 \6 p9 aI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 t3 d  [( n6 x$ DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; p- B6 S( h" w3 V7 g) T2 UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ y6 r# L  b* k2 aCan I entrust it to you?
4 H' \0 l: \7 f5 r  z# N3 gEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ ~1 B1 Q5 `$ m) |! dBut I never did
  W- }7 V0 D! G0 @4 u  F2 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 C! b( }( V( tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! s+ J+ ^! u& O* ]9 S' rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  L1 {6 a0 y& z- X3 q! }  SCan I entrust it to you?
; J) v" E- Y6 f6 q5 @  R2 aEntrust my love within your heart
+ J% m# ]" s. _3 Q) GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* `! _8 a8 A6 I5 ?1 q. {+ p8 n( |<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ r% i" c4 B. D- ^0 j1 O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* B& E- j! ]* W* s' k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" R5 u5 R3 b6 j3 S" ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( U* R9 U4 S2 i3 ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 P! ^) V+ D! S7 q6 H, u9 q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 M1 O$ n8 l7 X1 {6 `) y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( f. d9 F( n* [2 x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ N! ^% l- s, J7 _6 z2 X# j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: Z) q0 {& {) R7 X2 R$ C1 O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 Q6 R" t' o7 E9 S  M$ _& @<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ a- E& r- R( U& n! Q$ q# ]4 K<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 U; r& `6 j! l: p" X- C8 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, X( c# P# J4 C: w3 s<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ {# d: r9 j; q$ R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. [8 K- N: j6 s' E% b* j$ P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ Y! k: a) I  ^% l, S& b+ p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- z0 h, Q2 T% o6 \2 q' u3 a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* m8 v# p: g: y' d" N, g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 }& ]- T7 X0 I* l<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 m) a: x: ]! R+ n" V<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 w* D0 |$ m! ~7 W: H+ p) R8 p" B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% Z) s0 K* ?5 _<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% Y/ ^* o* j& m* q8 O, |9 K# g<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 A4 ^- d6 q& q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 g4 F' e  Q9 [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( v0 h# }* C) q- _# Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, H+ B( O3 x4 K7 |# l* `2 p, C7 M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  {! m" ~4 _0 G; f' U, O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 p3 W* s0 q. t) p& J) Z! F8 c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 ~( M/ R* f) W- a* e; O2 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# [( \! ^( @" O* V3 q( r; j) Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- L$ e' y2 x( a 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

/ F: s- F4 a* g, I. b" w4 ]  ?这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! h0 g8 `; ]2 s* M* p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>