【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. T( z0 N$ d( S6 K4 g8 [我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 u+ v* ~! A! B) X) s: UFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 |+ h! L5 D7 _3 qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( Q" o% j7 s" k# }Love… just the word love
# W9 y! Y: s% ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
; x$ Y! {- P3 B5 M0 E& }I want to confess that I love you,
" J9 j9 w, O) _6 }5 ^) h1 y3 ^& S/ ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; b/ L6 r: c1 b" YBut I never did
- ~/ ]1 P+ F3 x3 S1 ?$ \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ s" r' Z3 d- J! O8 dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 _+ A+ h2 M# U$ `3 Y" Z' vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 f! ]3 \" \/ U; kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 `6 f8 s5 N8 h' E" o1 \# e/ GEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* I/ O  ]7 o3 Y# g, U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ w5 G# B4 r* e* R1 J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( s6 E/ R( {3 Q' C' D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' W$ N/ u5 S3 i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 j, L" ]( t# H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' W! t4 Z; J- h( s7 K, [8 Y  g2 D<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 a* x1 ^: r: n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: L$ A  H5 i9 t. M+ g* f<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: M1 T$ y9 G# }/ G6 D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 p/ x  l/ b: f" F% V: \8 r; j" o8 a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' q2 E* _+ G4 t: b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 v1 c+ l3 }3 z5 f( \6 ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' g1 f( i, b+ ^2 ^& b: V, P; d6 ?4 P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 d( B) H5 F0 [# C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) _- C# S- O, _' b" }3 A6 j<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% G' h4 M: i8 c, {# ^6 {6 H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) B' @" Q) _% m2 j1 V6 m& B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, k( p" g7 o6 J- W( {: ]2 s1 J4 P<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 X  H. |4 {* f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" u* Q4 @- k  Q+ T<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  |# s0 s( K8 c7 i; u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ r9 O# j9 ]2 {7 w$ u! l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& k& w! G4 M2 }3 z) l" r3 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& S3 ~0 t, Q$ P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 K, \: G* B) x" i 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( m4 _, K/ t) Z7 z5 u6 S$ Z' K这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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3 m9 b" f# \& C+ W& K2 ?2 c<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>