【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* i! l& g( x- ?1 E6 wWe meet and talk everyday,
& m; u" y, u( G8 R5 bBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) W% l4 S/ c5 U  e( c, dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" T- C( _% Z# X; h( {. mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. G/ A" \" W- J/ B. Z) X6 nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 p8 v* D+ w2 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 R. E$ b5 i* g# z# cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ K8 M! ]/ Z: m; J, }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% m' n6 r! j0 X/ a( o. O  t* U* GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" e! o0 q8 C7 N" mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% W+ l' s' ?1 \/ L, ^8 g9 aCan I entrust it to you?
( R& p% Y7 J! n2 qEntrust my love within your heart
+ f! h/ V/ g+ h; U# R# E' [Can I entrust it to you?
/ N; n/ N( ]# {5 p; k" SEntrust my love within your heart

/ O: n7 O  k/ k* o: Y2 c[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ x# E1 F) f& H& [" ~, l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 V- u4 |" X1 ?) _, P3 I' p<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  z! c6 r! ^9 r; W& m+ o8 K, {3 z. S' x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 B- a% I$ |0 S% L7 ?7 k<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& N4 [* l: a. ^<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# I3 `1 d  J# \- T3 [' A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- V" i$ N  @2 X9 {) K1 [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 ^0 t. e' O. h" h6 L7 ?$ h9 S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% H# C; o- i4 O$ \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 V5 h# N+ X' F# M( U' Z* o: ]$ l<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ x, r7 A/ |& E$ y8 @) D+ Q$ q: s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 h" w8 B1 \: ^8 m+ j  U1 A; Y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 n( c3 n7 p" r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" {% k! O3 ^3 Z' `& H0 J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: h& G% b% W, a/ D# h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ D; |  e' C+ h& R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 E4 {$ M$ r1 S4 v# r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# [+ W7 f* b) L  J# S: Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" B& q( n3 F/ Q, Y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% h% m6 J/ [. \1 w; t2 l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, j; K* `4 F; s% C<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; A, y5 G1 }& L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& T- T" i- m/ I! b! k: M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& a& x. [8 y6 N" J5 M7 |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ p9 _+ z6 E; @( A1 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) b7 u+ `; X5 D4 l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) k0 D8 S, n% w3 M9 R+ V0 S这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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& g2 ?+ j2 |. Y. o! u1 H9 W: G+ C<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& d" c; e/ q& T7 r2 j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>