【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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+ s/ i  g& l  Z% S, C* E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 @  \; X, z0 P! v, QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( g1 r3 X0 |! q' z3 YI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ {9 r/ D4 x( H: l4 G( CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 K" W! v$ f8 S, ?5 J( {9 N* ^I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# C, W7 \! [' S; A: i2 f6 T! HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* a8 i7 Z, [, UBut I never did
7 k( Z! |. i' ~$ s+ fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* b. ~% Y: c; }3 N+ m$ nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( }+ H2 Z3 x7 j% _& |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ {" D" R- w: ^3 v/ g# sLove… just the word love
9 ~3 P8 q# c9 `* |5 i0 a  X: HWhy is it so difficult to express?
' X, J& x( Y# G. p( {I want to confess that I love you,
( B/ o* W/ ]! k: f3 T: {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; c2 e1 \  J: DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# Z( q9 E9 w, ]  g# y0 }5 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& v9 ~7 a/ A1 g4 @; p0 ECan I entrust it to you?
9 g( m5 s/ w' g( dEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

, H2 s7 @. a7 i  `[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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! k, R$ Z$ j8 k7 E7 e& Z- |4 c' {- H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; l9 O& J2 d/ \; T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 O1 H4 u* \6 f7 x% [, h  J<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 p0 j* _" M' R9 z8 |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" E2 a( d# ]9 A! z5 r% f# G: g<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, l9 _. Z5 `: _6 B# F9 v, X<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 G% }& F9 {4 I! [5 p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( n2 b' L& e5 b% A' h% P, m<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- f4 c! k' t* P' M/ x8 ~<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 W0 G* D  v( h0 L# _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! d* |" i% U2 |- A5 z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. `  N( P) Z) \4 `<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 `! Q1 w, \' V; h' O" p' ]/ i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& }; j6 X: Y! [0 k2 y% _* e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- W5 e$ K. M( J. {) e# K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ S4 f/ V7 _- T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ b6 E: r; l: ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, ^* P4 u9 u/ T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% X( x1 \+ D- E6 t) ?& z3 t6 H<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, E' j3 e0 A8 a* M" S' c. N- r6 C" m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( ^  x: \( Q% U( j<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 ]8 b. g1 E/ ^4 k# ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- D3 g. B: ]7 r$ r6 |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' ~. u! K$ ~' D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- ~7 @& T% B! D2 X/ V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ B' R0 {) H0 t, h, a* H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. b5 `- `/ v' Z5 v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% c3 m+ p  J1 P: v: d+ r5 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  p: ~0 x' O" U- B! ]3 |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# Z; p7 Y7 y! |/ H$ r' Z& k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 f. |* v) g1 J' X+ t 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

' @: a8 l- C% o; ~( o/ g. L这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 l) O# h8 ~% o) l7 F% }4 P! [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ @% w9 F1 d4 @6 T( N$ h<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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