【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
5 k! q: a8 j' c  u( SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" r+ Q  m; Z0 y# V& C6 v9 b5 hThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. a, |6 [! ^, y( r: E" W6 OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% f0 m6 c: j: [' b1 |( {If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 _6 I' V$ P' D) a' ?7 n3 P% BI would probably know how you feel
* }6 T1 ]" B9 u, o. C! KLove… just the word love
( H& x' j' W. i/ {: X: |( hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. O+ V( j% O) M0 T. zBut I never did
2 p& Q7 z, W! w; s, b. KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ w! L, E; {0 B# A  pIf today isn’t too late,
1 N0 w, @+ n' O0 S+ \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# z" q8 w  x4 c6 y, XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: D: A7 ]. d/ a, k4 E3 xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 g( [, o" x9 h+ P' U, ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ Z, ^4 ]1 h/ X8 kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. l" b7 L* q& m' Q& s+ w) ], PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, Q+ [/ w( q/ `) z, U" b3 OCan I entrust it to you?
% ]  |3 W; X/ }+ |0 hEntrust my love within your heart
" k+ l3 S  j0 r+ \. bCan I entrust it to you?
! U8 `) A5 w3 J6 T" t; ?' ]% ^Entrust my love within your heart

! I* |( o7 d/ @  S$ r/ M3 V% R9 D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 r7 F: ?, x1 b8 y0 x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' z9 l7 S& B7 H6 H; H' @* A2 C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* X  \; @) x+ t/ u/ i! v" J( W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ x: A2 F5 c# ]( m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: m% ^* C1 I6 F) @5 n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% ]8 d$ r7 M& U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 a0 e0 N) C6 \$ R5 k  c% \5 [% j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) e5 I! l  K# |. Z; M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; C- y  l' Y7 H# J4 u# v$ ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; H0 W7 E# B6 }2 K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 q& X! w7 j+ h, @: g0 v% ?8 h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ w' \# `; m" z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( ~$ p/ ]# Y' p' }; l3 Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ \! l0 N! |2 T$ a( x+ l<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 I. P0 @- W, V/ C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 i8 Q: Z3 O" y6 ~<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. }# P% p8 Z3 i2 M! @1 p2 V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 d$ |3 A' b4 T; \) y- X1 \6 R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 }$ B  [7 A7 g7 L0 f7 ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& o+ n1 P2 O8 B0 |- Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( B2 h, }* @2 U# }, L6 |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 q- J3 \* J3 H) A' C. ~# N& A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ r/ r2 u& @+ H<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( L* f; y- s" l9 j1 {5 X; a<P>But I never did </P>
, T) C' b6 ~" C( s<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 x$ d% m% J9 ^* E2 S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 x  _$ B- w/ [: {( }+ @! x4 G! U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 i5 `% [+ ^& N7 ]1 Z) T4 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. T$ X9 [# P9 _* `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* z1 H2 }; M# T! a& a6 Y5 |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% K7 i. n; |7 F! P这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ ]% \$ C# u( u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>