【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
6 Y, }4 f7 \' Y1 g, Z3 h8 i6 TThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 n+ \* t; r& r0 F& o% A; w! eFrom the first moment we met,
' {5 H2 }3 Y) G& K8 l% {2 S. fI already loved you with all my heart
- M  @8 J* N5 W4 h9 E7 p7 b! n* jWe meet and talk everyday,
# ^' T, E$ B, C7 Z" ^; bBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# q/ l' U2 i" |2 ?' D) @; YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ a7 s4 l8 X8 q# B' i! @  wI would probably know how you feel
1 ]% K' Q# t, e$ _Love… just the word love
- m8 R6 h% {- B! n$ r- e2 m9 s9 fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; v% [- _+ I+ R7 u- VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' E( y1 M) }" q0 Q6 zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) G  _7 S. O* O9 E- g) [* b& TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& g- i1 G* C: F' d/ `0 NCan I entrust it to you?
5 k4 e9 L  u1 \* r6 o/ m5 PEntrust my love within your heart
7 q0 {9 y5 Q+ O9 `, y/ ?5 C2 ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ X6 ^% K8 r& u/ a5 j4 \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 Q3 d, I) y) ?+ G5 q& a; |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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& S3 r# u6 v+ m  `* R<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' y5 a$ U1 {8 `6 L2 O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 K9 @" z) R9 Z9 F7 w- q  K! x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 Q% R; s+ P! t. A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' k- [; n6 ?/ N& r, A& ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 {% q, i8 h& c: M6 \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 g/ \, W. ]6 O! [: v0 U2 r5 Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 B- e- {7 R" \% [6 }, c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 M, G& j  m1 U+ I1 h5 m<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) n: h. ^% l# n1 y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' a" q" e# s  n4 Z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 a3 o: |$ ~5 k8 ^* K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ m, S" g3 |% \' R+ }1 d3 V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. d0 l3 `2 ^* i! `/ I% u2 v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 s; ~: A3 o, D. p" _! D: N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 ~8 _4 ?$ ~1 Z  _& l8 m! _. L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. g- V. C/ r, H9 t% @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ }% R! w: |* N; m" I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 J( J* c: D4 P7 F- B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 N( v; X9 f1 b% K: k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
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<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 G8 L5 @' A( {# X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 j. n$ e% e- j# {7 j2 F( V) G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( I$ Y" c. s" a! r( p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' m% ^6 k% Y1 m. s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 X  W% L5 }' d9 R, o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ d4 ^" i& D8 H# s# n3 i+ ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

; _, ^, E' H2 {8 q) s这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 v# Y  I0 J, s2 p: j9 H# T0 N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 L! |! G: R: q' e7 r! I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>