【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 l! b% B* D2 {+ y4 x5 M7 ^From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 Q7 q( ]. ?% }We meet and talk everyday,
. [7 h& }" x  |- N) w9 z+ @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& P- [  x0 P8 ]6 RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! X, B4 H" B& J# k# _* b% ]" aBut I never did
1 g( U( u. ^/ }* x& O+ E. xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 i9 g9 k) b; s1 [If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' T. K) a5 x: O! l, A+ VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 L$ k- }$ \9 u* G: b# LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& c, D: z0 x" i2 p8 X8 ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* i! E* j% H' R. M0 hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. D: m+ I% e- u5 HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; y* Q, W) F% B+ F1 LCan I entrust it to you?
) j' W3 m3 m( K( ?  WEntrust my love within your heart
# i$ H$ l; h% M0 U5 c( ^0 e' `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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* d. M( t. e! M- k( o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 z2 k7 j! N2 x5 B<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ t9 S1 g4 ~" ^5 I& X9 |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 j' n+ v  x6 e6 W<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; Z/ j. L8 Q5 i2 I7 t! C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, p- U; T3 }( f& L4 \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ |+ f. }! ?4 ?  m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 N* p9 k& i6 ^3 u1 O& g$ z5 ~& x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 r8 U3 k0 a/ t2 l2 n7 v7 ^& u7 B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 w: x# l; z' i% e+ ?& m5 l1 \, Q6 ?<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' w( e5 O* g5 q) R$ q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' `2 d6 z' D  p5 }: z2 v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& [, m- s& ?- j. ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 P8 O4 b& \7 `0 h: s; p+ E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 h/ K0 F$ u, G* _; P<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, c% m! f- I. L& u5 r<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; _2 b2 _0 N; a, |( [5 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; v  q% f7 c% U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 c; d$ u0 S$ `  M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 w9 R- j8 Z/ w" s9 z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 f& z5 T# |& {0 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 X  \" s9 `5 p2 ]2 a, W: o- o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 k# z" g7 @0 P2 Z1 O  O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 H% e( }' a$ I: h6 D2 ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; [( H: o5 q; d2 T( ^; Q<P>但我不会 </P>
1 P6 l: V3 `  ~- b: R; o& J' ]; X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 I" Y' h. J# Q, A  N) i<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: M0 q  I/ |3 r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- w' Q: K9 X% ?. y2 J- s0 p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ T; z1 m6 A( J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: B8 W+ X* ~( \) o8 x) s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; N' y  V+ Y, F1 q6 Q  \( j8 S6 S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 Z* i' N# p0 O3 z6 x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& x5 ]( i$ r0 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 m# p5 T# T2 X9 [& {, _' J$ B, ^8 G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 g, J% u2 K0 s* P. W<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ X8 i5 p. y6 t; d/ a, ?5 a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>