【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' C" ^8 g/ d5 j0 rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 ]; t+ |$ P% a9 sFrom the first moment we met,
* d5 h" o- y, Q, S! PI already loved you with all my heart
/ W& Q& ~* l; R, Z5 R6 h$ }& AWe meet and talk everyday,
; A. D+ Y) G0 v4 v) L. c' N. cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 V" `# W8 X( @6 H6 `$ k; mI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% `, x7 K& i- ^9 dI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& R# w9 r/ Z$ d& IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ D* j. L2 T8 SIf today isn’t too late,
8 @; Y  T$ R2 S0 t) b' CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 A/ W  {0 G5 Z% |/ [: sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" ~0 W( Y0 ?: n% s# k* BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) h* T2 s+ s5 m1 v: c' ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 p- v% g3 ]" ]# @% B$ a0 UIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 ^1 H6 j0 G/ i  w+ \1 CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# C/ _5 G1 `: c- UEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ ?" }+ w- Y3 P" A6 v' ?: B+ REntrust my love within your heart
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9 t. O# ~' w# g$ a* x$ r5 ^$ S5 P3 _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 o# B6 q9 I! n3 f1 Z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* t( ?3 u3 V1 K+ t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 b8 R9 A2 M5 P: ~- K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; [0 E8 F; E3 l7 w; g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- y: P& [6 v( g/ f9 b) Y! m& f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 P! g( i$ ?& f* ]5 k1 T) h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; v2 ?2 t: r' B2 }5 U- B2 r<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. \& Z) }* V& h$ y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! d8 n! c* _* h7 M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' o2 t: F) u% E0 Y9 A<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% X8 J4 ~/ r- }. x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( M) R% r/ Z- e6 N+ X4 n$ j; i2 {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 c  ~9 v1 e$ l; f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! t" _! @; z: o7 [! w! a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 d$ m& K, d2 \8 C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 \8 @- p  Z' Q6 K+ A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 @: X0 {+ ?/ u! o<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, t1 S7 {5 [( M<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ i+ z, Z: ]1 q5 Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 Q  `* [4 f- w; e- ~, O<P>But I never did </P>
: s9 `! A) S( {7 K; R5 |/ E1 r<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: ?* k: B6 v: _% N; E! D1 l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, U7 J. B* L% r# A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& _: N- ?& c, O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! G0 q; B0 r8 @5 x/ `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ I  m: I. ^, y+ i' W2 ~! }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 u' X( Z! z% c* [9 e3 ^<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

1 w+ m0 p0 m- u* V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 N# K6 Y5 X, T! ~- N2 I! w/ B+ @这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 A1 [9 j9 D7 x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>