【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# l2 \0 o' Z5 {* F5 Y+ |0 a我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 |8 j/ y: a# w- z# hThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 p; J9 t! G* i$ L* Z- S* I$ JFrom the first moment we met,
7 s0 C. s! y0 Y0 b+ w5 c6 P2 R: {& u  U4 KI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 Q& {, K2 d* c5 F$ }, n; w0 f+ ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 X, O% P7 o6 u. o6 G! bLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- l1 y: R" [3 ?# x6 }* R: sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 b9 B3 l0 @1 q: `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ C* K0 @) i! yWhy is it so difficult to express?
* J- t# X6 }! i* a/ tI want to confess that I love you,
, |' [" m; x. a0 \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- R0 h& [$ f( AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 Z  e2 d1 j8 O7 _Can I entrust it to you?
( X9 q* G: u) h5 lEntrust my love within your heart
/ c! B$ A# K; c- C* w: B* uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

3 G; W( B2 }1 O6 g  [8 c[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 @: i( i: q. R% C3 K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 P8 W* j0 l9 b( w: A<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 L" L3 {; V  ?) V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 [% K4 U  J6 Y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 d! S. g7 D- n* a8 e  x9 x/ k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ N1 V: v3 F! M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  I2 y- Y1 O2 r' ~+ L( l. D<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; U& W; l7 c6 d0 p' U( \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ }$ U' m0 H4 f% H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 J  u# {# Y, s) ?6 f( C/ \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 S. P7 Z- S8 W; W, ]0 `$ J<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 B6 ^( D; P# |* b3 o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 h7 Q1 C0 g8 c/ S% x% P: q+ ~  s/ g<P>但我不会</P>
* ?* G0 r3 Z8 ?2 ?% D5 j, [# f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 ^1 c  E9 x- A6 Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 H8 w4 t# x  \/ W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 s3 P0 z5 T  S* l& [3 j' a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  u1 u3 ]! s/ [! H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ C- o! S) Q4 ]# a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! |& o0 @0 h: Z* I<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  W# F* O: P0 B' b: z' _; v<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- y$ E1 C- t( F" j0 H; B( L4 Y+ G1 F0 W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* U- v7 |- M- c0 J" s; B7 V% x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  x4 q! Z8 }! g' t4 P  r6 T7 m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* Y# F. w+ N* h8 z+ o* s% n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: b/ ?: [4 V0 f' A1 e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 T% P( A, D/ }7 s8 }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ x6 M, w! O( U6 j! D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 h! n7 z8 c5 d  `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 W, Z5 M& `, f& z( ?这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; }1 w6 W$ E, z7 e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>