【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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8 j% E4 ^, V% |. Y& b# i$ Y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ |' C  i, x" p. ?8 P+ r( fFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 z# n2 r7 E/ v6 [" DWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( O6 a6 j5 l. K" ]I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" H0 `6 O4 l" Z0 j/ tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 E* W9 j7 f2 D5 W: lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& ~6 ^$ b; G2 G+ C6 B* U' S, r2 \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! j/ c9 B* s2 X7 D' s+ s8 WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 t* e0 U9 V+ {. h  r% W# CCan I entrust it to you?
6 m# P8 Y6 w6 X, Q8 u) p( s/ |Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 T6 p9 \1 H5 O) tWhy is it so difficult to express?
* [2 |3 H, x$ G& Y. AI want to confess that I love you,
; _/ }; ]- P% s! j2 |But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 I8 V; Q& \: A( ^If today isn’t too late,
4 h" z2 l: Y1 m9 y2 f0 t4 wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, G" ^7 C$ p* ^8 G& ~! vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% }5 R& G) t" rEntrust my love within your heart

) o( {* V+ v! ^: }# L2 ^1 r5 [[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" M/ i( E. a/ v+ H' U/ K8 |<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 |. F; {! o4 j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 R$ c5 G+ \9 U  x. T6 }; {6 K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' m3 ~# r5 @5 t+ g: ~% t/ i( H% |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) Q% ~" o- ~( b. N<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; \; s  ]7 v4 \# A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 X# o& t4 `  `9 p! K<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, t1 Q" w6 G( W9 v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ m1 K3 n+ w; x+ v<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* S* \8 y- u$ e' [! [, k3 K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
+ L1 o! L! a  g. {. b6 B<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  F% G6 \. Z& I# l# @- o- m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 P7 K( @- W: D2 g; z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- p5 s7 |/ I6 F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ J- H1 q6 q! A( ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 C9 {( Y* n+ z9 L, b<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 a- l" {' d+ g7 n9 ?7 l<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# o2 R3 j$ R8 U) c& I7 p, @3 Z) I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  G# A2 n2 N# n/ H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% ^7 m: q9 V. X9 K3 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" A5 i- Z$ I3 t; k2 p9 |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; A% a  ~3 }0 R% k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 T; W$ J: U7 X; w' r4 ^" B0 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ ^* q6 h! ^$ I; d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  L4 e* u& o5 ], v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, V( i4 c; R0 I) Q. F5 J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  `" W$ a' B6 h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 u4 D9 k3 f" p% e; d<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: i, q. k$ e5 f: W' Q7 g 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 p* O, L2 x' n8 I: K1 M- H; J: X$ i这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>