【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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  _- a' ?0 P1 `8 U9 \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% I6 L% u+ S/ o# v( yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 Y3 s) a  [8 U4 N- ^$ kFrom the first moment we met,
$ r3 l* i% c2 ?I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
& U* U5 u$ n. X8 g( t3 ]# _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 ?) D$ G7 |- V! lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 S: F5 c( f8 B* \% K. t7 sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 Y& ?! k" M) i1 NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 U  Z- {$ x: M* u% ]" S! |If today isn’t too late,
( [# T: }6 Q/ }% YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, J: Z  i7 Q! u2 D4 N3 u+ G( a9 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( ]" p0 O) b# ]( _2 H' d1 YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# P# w- t1 p/ ]' c! G$ xEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 F. \4 D+ ?; U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 w' |; p5 l; i& x" j3 G7 L<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: X3 j  x+ k9 B# l% U) f<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 X  v, g% I' t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 J9 T, H4 \* s( S: m# w! G<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! |8 |5 i/ A) t' u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 d- w: c4 z2 |- ~9 I5 G/ z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* _1 v- T6 k- e4 U% M4 G<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- j) ~8 M) \' U<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  G9 j0 [  J0 W3 V, Y! E6 B<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% }* v7 S- ^$ T) M: ?/ u# V<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 Y& z9 p; F5 C! o* R; W3 t, R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 O/ l. @1 s/ o" W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: n8 ~, i; W( x0 ]: {' L- @; M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; D4 n5 |! Q' t+ ~5 Q3 j8 @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 ~0 m- ?0 O4 w0 |9 i1 }+ K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 P: y. ~) c8 H' h<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- o3 r6 x! {! A) q, G  B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( p/ c( G6 E/ C" E4 p9 a7 P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 u8 W! v/ ]: h/ w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: N7 ~8 h5 r# K# C* q3 t4 i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 o$ @2 z& L$ C; T; D: ]! W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: E+ `+ ^: e3 p/ B) z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 p: c" n7 {( Q' C5 i. s<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! r3 w$ B8 g% C 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 G$ Y' C0 a( x! V) \5 J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- J6 W/ A7 p/ S2 x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>