【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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) i" k4 V# O6 W* C, q( Y1 N7 n我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& T4 _# [) A) b* j6 FI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 N3 X/ x5 K5 |0 [" K# @9 VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 L8 M) E+ v& w% Y  a* U' vLove… just the word love
) k' K* T9 L" e" |  `3 h8 nWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 o" |  @4 o! b7 \& D0 `4 MI want to confess that I love you,
4 P. H( Y8 \5 Z' o- x8 i) H. m( @But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ P4 D$ A2 d4 e  NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ d  `. m9 ^2 j4 ]2 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. r1 d% s& y  ^, n9 p; E- K3 CLove… just the word love
2 D! ~, b& z9 o, C7 k( L  k. _Why is it so difficult to express?
6 ^3 i$ b1 w- c2 ?  y9 @$ C' MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" Y4 o3 S3 i$ KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ {+ R- n. m' d' T& b6 V' T9 gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 B& N8 h4 i7 J' x# b3 d/ hCan I entrust it to you?
7 X# L" }& c' R5 w6 e' mEntrust my love within your heart

5 J! P' t" c) I+ I2 ][ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* S1 I9 h5 F9 F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) \: P8 f5 Z1 h$ u4 K. A/ r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. ^0 E8 B) z8 Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. M. F' B3 L( ^  |) a<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" d% q. s6 u8 _% e- y9 M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 A8 l4 H; \$ ~1 @+ r  _2 U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: R; x- L7 _$ f9 ^, B, O  T* B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: @: e% k5 P5 d4 q$ ]( g4 Z: e<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& X) w. ?7 Y5 x( e9 S* b<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. f; E' ?) w1 }: O0 \2 k' s4 O9 J<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 P3 W) Z, S' X; e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% G' x! L( ^+ h<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
5 d* w7 {! z1 U6 W" j3 x$ G: E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 k* S' ^2 o$ m# z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 y4 j2 h  M8 x0 e% c6 D  D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- Y& M% G1 B0 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 y. Q) g) Q9 S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, M/ j+ @. p* Y# i4 n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 D% I6 o7 X1 w7 L5 c6 p1 ]) t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 @# }+ N1 C8 D) t* `<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 p* U7 |; Z( T9 a4 A4 \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. w7 V+ c+ j9 z- h, z# X  O8 ?: U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% M8 l7 _6 J6 @' H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 a2 M* y+ z1 Z" ~1 H3 f$ p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 }- y8 z2 F( Z9 [9 u 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! v' w! q% p9 p; z2 `0 K/ Y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' L' b0 V1 c4 f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; o0 P% Q/ I  Q9 a3 [; g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>