【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
0 A9 f8 Y) h8 D' Y/ U4 U" SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* d- a1 p/ `9 N+ _1 f6 |8 PThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* i+ N+ s: X% p$ z/ P6 m+ vFrom the first moment we met,
7 ]# ^2 b5 @6 w' R+ A! {I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ _7 m5 ], @1 C2 X% b) }1 pIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- x+ B2 ~& C. {4 KI want to confess that I love you,
- a. T/ e& M4 `/ I1 c2 C4 F1 qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ T% e$ N) K% v) l9 XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 b: |6 _$ b, y, ~. o0 h, dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: x- {; G1 Z6 m1 z, H+ V4 }) NEntrust my love within your heart

5 W  |6 {3 F# K3 w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 l" E7 G/ F. }6 |<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. f5 S9 G  Y7 Z4 s0 q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ s% C2 @. Z" A- f<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ g7 e: }, u; r# n( x. @: E4 E<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 [3 R1 `" G  j6 G- u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; F/ j, z0 t' h$ s) W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 o( C. B( y3 I6 \$ L, s% _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 W5 c1 e* K8 S4 j2 r) d- V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 g- ]( {5 V+ |* T6 P. {/ u+ X<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% }0 a0 N; W# m/ s$ P0 k, p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 j7 a8 c- f! {( S1 n, a% H* S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 S. x! O3 C5 ?2 W* |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( Z. X4 c' e! m. N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, C3 |5 ^5 p$ b" H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& \* f( g- \$ t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ O8 B. B6 W8 N( d* x  r4 S9 b<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& ^( b$ ~, @/ I7 l% ?4 s) x<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; F! d* h" R, v6 v<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  M2 e" R  K: \3 h  \# F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ E. X; I, x9 j  U- v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, j9 M/ F; \1 K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 B0 y( ^8 N5 {6 d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& ?1 [4 o1 y! D3 y- Q. ^6 P! _- U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 ~; L9 L9 k: J. Z; T: u! k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) }* t: {! r2 {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* W2 s2 }( r2 u) k! H- N<P>But I never did </P>
$ d. y3 Z  j$ k# `/ x<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; z; ~& V- E4 M! o0 Z, T4 D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 \2 c& t' G$ [! P4 q, b9 i$ ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& o1 F" `$ k7 f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 A2 W" e# i, j- ?' d 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, J3 P6 b4 f6 x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- Y! C; e, P$ |<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>