【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" n/ O& E, G2 X7 _+ c, UFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) d! x8 \* D& Y6 |( HWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! h/ ?- H  G& Q9 s" N. N6 ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. @& l) Y3 G- |6 r$ Q3 l* ~; Y3 ~I want to confess that I love you,
- E; t, I: z9 MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- t/ c% x' {1 o+ o! bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 T0 F* W) L  i  Z1 a* N( O! l4 |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 h, H4 H9 S  Z( a6 z4 E! T/ ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. K9 t7 z8 f! A( v& a& }% q; TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! h2 |2 T- W" o4 {+ gBut I never did
+ J' u5 l/ t8 j. ^9 z& C/ BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 K# i2 Z5 D% o3 Q, m( TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( Y% {1 s7 }( M9 @1 ~$ W2 A! w6 P) _Can I entrust it to you?
; s. z0 F- O3 G& S; XEntrust my love within your heart
9 ^" i2 f2 ?/ @/ }6 P3 s  G5 OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( K- O' w% x  ~: r, B8 P<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 g+ @! [3 ]6 ^9 L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 W5 j4 @$ N. Z+ g3 i1 i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# J  z9 m2 g8 F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) X: F1 C- q8 g  t- J4 A6 m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ b9 S  q7 L' o$ D" M7 B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# b/ d1 |+ G( B, |6 t  ~( @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 Z# Z- O9 \2 s, G. L- y' U3 O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 T% ~7 I. ?4 C9 U) c4 p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 {" z1 P2 T: b: i( v- o<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* i$ D  @# r8 e  q: B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) t* {, ~+ m8 T5 f# y2 A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 e2 i3 r* q1 B<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 S& h& r5 g8 P6 A( {3 W<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 p4 E, l& S/ V7 z! g, Y. [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( e2 e- r/ v4 {' l2 ^7 Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! L+ a# i/ O( C9 N$ X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 g! o/ z- q8 m7 N& U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; T* g0 e4 t& n+ x" z5 \  w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 f$ }* B- P$ w' \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# w8 W" B3 @( c+ {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' e' |; N) s! i# _; [; ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% S# N) v' ]2 {7 M6 J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 x% e2 r' \/ I1 q<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 t/ E- Y  F' T5 U& d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 X7 w0 C' }5 N! W- |( ?& K0 l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  h3 L' a& F6 T9 s9 O: \/ Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 g! h1 _3 [$ ?& d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& L8 ^8 E9 p& Y# Y" C5 F1 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 Q+ C9 m& ?1 r+ q1 w5 r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  X9 q) Q& y& W* S) w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, I! {, s+ l9 m# s  ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) K; }7 V$ t$ G% R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 E. H/ m' \3 w; z6 j; N$ O2 b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>