【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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* z9 ^- r2 }( L( o3 @5 {我另将歌词附在此。
2 A8 L+ W& E% W" N9 U. p8 CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 C' R5 O+ C: C' fFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 c; Q0 Q4 v8 j1 [: y* HWe meet and talk everyday,
8 @4 B4 ?* G" |# D. dBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ C$ x+ G1 x1 }# c4 aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# N  j' [0 p% x6 w: R5 B3 sWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 ^. E5 M/ D! p0 [. _; {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& t( F7 J% A" }% k' kCan I entrust it to you?
5 f) A0 x0 h& z. zEntrust my love within your heart
, H7 G* X3 Z% H6 `8 _2 e. JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- j/ X: w4 ^* KI want to confess that I love you,
' H0 P3 i5 _! y$ LBut I never did
# m. {! q" I# pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 u! R" B5 ~8 GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" a/ Z5 n/ ]# D9 C* w0 wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 y! {7 K9 T/ M1 T- b) q8 {) B6 aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

1 D8 g" i& o* k3 d7 v! n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  A3 r$ ~" {" ~4 }+ W; E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 G- {! a! ~. V; G8 Y" |& |<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# Y& e! w& w  ^. k3 A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 B6 Y5 q2 `; X0 }1 x( ]. t( B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 m) s/ L% M9 p( n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 y8 p9 S4 i3 ?, f: I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 {" z- {1 A; R) R8 b4 Y2 \<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- x1 m) o5 z" C, a* w7 r; G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; Z8 m, ]/ w; I) s- p& m  {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- O* D; c3 i% k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ r4 B( u6 g" h3 V<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& g/ n) g' d. `<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 v8 ?4 [2 r' y' e<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- p2 N% Z; a. r) L' Z9 Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 f0 m$ V8 P/ [& i! e1 I9 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( H8 |% e9 ?0 V9 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 o5 G8 f  `- `. l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 Q( B" I* q: ~# f( r9 X4 f* s. E<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 H2 f0 }1 t, v1 H! b) V& [, P- \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ ^( T. ]  _1 o' u& C' q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, ~& N: Y; S9 a. J  U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ z7 L; ?5 j$ J" B/ ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 ?2 w: a8 n: w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* ?, n2 x1 [9 z, U3 B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 C9 z. R9 g; f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- k0 U3 i/ ~& _9 z6 r2 m6 h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 N: O- D2 k  W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% v- O% G3 s$ B# M  ^6 |! a# p8 p3 P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# h& N& _: d* D% ~! Y. t+ }+ i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 S& Y- G  ]1 v* X( A, ~  B7 V 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- Z; l1 R8 v1 u" ]3 ?  w% `这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& g$ q, ^' T- i, a4 M9 |<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" M2 ]- a$ g! c6 N. w' f<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>