【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 ^+ S4 ~/ `( PI already loved you with all my heart
2 C! \3 x3 F9 K+ I, Y$ u; RWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 b2 l( O' Z: O# [If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
/ G# X( o$ h- HLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 F6 M! \0 X1 C( yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; d2 P, x3 T+ j+ M7 m8 RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) y) F( V; i6 p5 {0 h1 N" V& sEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: n3 R6 Z* ]* ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 T" t! S$ a4 S) \: g3 O6 QI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; x8 R! N' j/ ?- j, n* NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 U2 O4 B+ J. _. L) v5 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 k  a& S! `; r/ L, o  uEntrust my love within your heart
/ `; `/ E# u, P4 |/ Z' F: ]3 YCan I entrust it to you?
! _9 ?2 T" E: {) q6 O( yEntrust my love within your heart
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% L" A6 \6 v0 a) U  c+ e[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 `. x. A9 W9 t4 W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; k& l9 h$ D' @/ j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* s# I1 ~! T3 X5 e7 l& s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" t+ I4 B' x/ x4 E+ d: D- e. v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. `( p% }% K- V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- Q0 u) W8 f: f' p' M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( b+ F8 V( f; h  D& _. h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 r' `6 H8 @, [5 N& Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' s* U; i, j# p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, B* q4 G3 h  j( F. N8 [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; n- {% n% d6 G- A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ e# k/ P. b$ Z1 H1 ?<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ c: R  G% _. o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* w$ Q( M, y9 M& |- m5 l<P>但我不会</P>
- \3 c1 \7 T3 u, a- I1 J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 N, R  |+ Z6 ^4 g9 f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* j" W2 B/ w7 k# t% t  {/ b<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% D7 f5 d6 h2 K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 }! e$ k* \2 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 S. o3 c5 K# L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) j. Q, w4 F* S) t# o: H4 p/ C0 h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, p! h1 _# Q1 J. U8 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ n: C+ O; C2 ?9 u. N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, E( w$ Z5 c2 u( B9 U! t; ?% B. h, j- m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ w: H  Y  C6 C/ ^! I: g# x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ [9 s( I* t" J2 \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 c6 c& c! s+ F8 U; m<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 Y7 F/ K( U9 W. }<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ J" j0 J2 R* R) n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& I9 ^6 h) a% c4 L# y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 A" a! a) h6 g  P2 L; E<P>但我不会 </P>
) d0 R) U* c1 c, y6 p0 s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: i' d2 L% d( {& r1 h5 z% Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- f$ C! w4 J( D6 _: a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; B  S/ C: L3 ~- q: P3 V9 o# q0 y0 t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# N3 P, @  y  l% t7 @! z. T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ V0 E, A, X3 Z, q4 Z8 S<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' c; ^/ X4 t5 y9 x- I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# S7 `! i* q5 E<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>