【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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1 k' Y! K( v% U/ r7 `我另将歌词附在此。
8 X) z* a: G1 Z' F: m* X+ _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, I/ X1 |# g6 ?4 R0 D( \0 {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 D2 m" C9 B1 A5 gI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 q$ Y' w0 V1 Z. S' a! eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: g2 x9 ?8 N2 Y, X6 A5 K( Q7 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 D# z2 u2 P+ W; M( Z9 JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 v4 P2 l* q3 G# {+ t7 {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 Z! ?; W& ]3 N. jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) x1 v7 i# l" u( }3 H9 k% POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 x4 h/ `( m; r. x$ V+ yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: U* M* e% m; l8 [- cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! q! ?* n. v3 I6 A% v5 |! hCan I entrust it to you?
7 S* Y2 d) |* V& ZEntrust my love within your heart
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: k2 _% L7 k+ Q; H$ N1 W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! s. X7 U" j& o$ z0 a<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) d( W+ l( O' D: }( S- q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  A( s+ u5 l- F! o( v* }- L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% x# M) R: c  N. `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  ]/ f) y, n0 F! |2 b7 @1 O+ x<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. X# J  z! _/ w- F9 w0 k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" _8 n# ]" k9 a* j( T: f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 J, _0 d8 T$ B; ]" o<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" `" Z* A0 N& Z8 M6 f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; m0 X! {* L0 s+ ^7 N5 E: O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ C1 d0 d. E' Y' D<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- y: m3 X1 N( |% b4 G  n7 x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 |2 U6 K; j+ F& U1 Q: s2 y" _! W<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- v) F# k3 l4 z$ }: `2 n4 {" ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 n; q9 f% s. e/ L<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& ?7 k" N& z. \, c8 C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  ~3 J) c7 w4 e. N+ ?. \6 a& I8 K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( H4 w& Y+ q0 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 s/ D3 ^/ D+ x1 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ `2 g& h, ~3 g" |5 o8 a. c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: M* L: @/ r$ b7 q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 y; P+ r9 H$ i, V<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ G- ^4 t# d3 ^& S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 M8 i6 F! a' F' G& Y, e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 |2 L- K2 y% ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- r9 K9 A* W. [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# {9 L# h" y6 i& P* q2 D1 y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 s( j* N. ?. z4 y8 c) X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; {! `2 X$ s% E5 N' d" W, K' w' y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 H& L$ c, g, b$ t) I. q, V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  H% }/ v0 K0 s; P' A# Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>