【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 v; w' L" l8 Q, l' i我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 [% Q$ L8 b6 O( V! ]+ X- J+ LI already loved you with all my heart
5 f* N1 R4 a0 U  `+ K. _We meet and talk everyday,
- h+ T9 P, d" B1 fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; j1 z9 D) d. D/ l# HI would probably know how you feel
- ~2 L3 f- F' j3 k' [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 Z$ J1 p) z2 H, g; w2 M5 \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* e8 q! p) P5 H& DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 L' b, h, Q! ?3 r1 t* \. x: OLove… just the word love
7 d' e# a3 I( j% r7 \Why is it so difficult to express?
' q5 D* r4 S- n/ A; rI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 o1 Y/ U9 r+ E" ]0 f  u+ F* V6 xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' Y7 s- E" Q9 CCan I entrust it to you?
( T0 v8 N% T; I  F# J5 m9 V, V7 CEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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7 A5 d4 K7 Q5 @3 e<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 u! x! M" N7 w: d' G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ {0 H" b# U+ i1 s* |<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 X# W  I( c% j+ ]<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 U; P, B. J0 h1 r: T& m2 I. C, |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 E: N- d" q5 l' B$ _; u. f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! Q+ Z. Q7 [) b; _5 z# |2 ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ g- R  B  g' {+ H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% V) H! T( {4 V/ x+ ~0 e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) r8 h4 f# _' ^% o<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# [, X% S! G3 {. h  E2 z<P>但我不会</P>
; I7 y. `* j8 @: W/ c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# B  {" v7 R0 D8 l4 _% ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 Z" K7 z9 |+ [- ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 o+ f- T  P# l% w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( r; I. n$ O5 [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 R8 R- g. i1 G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 K/ G% ^; {8 U' [- |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ ^% n! b6 v2 I8 U" J4 g. Q4 S& ^<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 Q( {0 Y+ R6 l8 _: L. g4 u  N/ M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 D; X$ W" Y3 h$ V4 O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 n1 ]7 a) `6 e% T! U5 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  t& Z# A9 i) \/ }9 h) A5 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ C9 {7 W% Y6 X( N7 g5 e, z- E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& F- t" k- u4 \8 A9 ?* V6 k' N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% u8 f# l9 y9 T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 I4 O9 S9 z6 M& Z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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& y& G9 L: F  e# L7 {这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) G' w+ l$ ^" X: y: t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>