【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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: Z; f. q/ p! j  u/ q3 ~, V- ~$ K我另将歌词附在此。
9 \% R: C/ F$ ~2 [. {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ o$ D, x( P# m; fFrom the first moment we met,
1 C1 w  L) E$ a* C9 \/ QI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ ]) v1 S0 i+ p, D) C$ X8 _. @! |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' C- l1 f4 r1 H& ~1 k! }I would probably know how you feel
- {$ r8 I/ _# i* [$ F* f; N# yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 k4 E; y' u" o. ^% Z% c& ]" EI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 I  N' F2 G; k1 O" G( i; O0 gIf today isn’t too late,
! k3 c2 d7 j& U; P7 MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, I$ I3 U- a" u- T+ B- X/ c2 eCan I entrust it to you?
3 d+ M. N$ _% H: a' d( `8 qEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 T. ~' L! `3 TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# v5 Q/ F+ Z) |/ f& HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, d6 r  n& _; J2 r$ q( ^7 C* SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( n" `: \: o7 e: _# {" M" ]& q+ vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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. A- f; @7 n3 G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! H9 K3 F8 C* z$ ?5 K! J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) m5 F6 V3 g+ e) H* x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# q# S1 ]" Q3 L. ^+ B! V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, b; V' J- d) J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 @/ g9 S, h5 j5 i# |0 g9 q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 d& y2 l  t0 |( c3 Q& d, k4 k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 z5 C, D1 l3 n4 L+ ]& e5 m, U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 e5 v  K1 H- c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. h4 J: \2 O$ c+ Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 s# P, d4 }* R2 ]% n; H7 h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 [7 |' H& B: |" v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: O7 L- V: j8 S) I" H<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' o% ^- @5 C0 N<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# D. q8 f4 l" v) V8 x' S# ]4 _<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 ~% L. u, |* N- q; ]5 ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 {8 `$ f" |9 L+ }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 `. l8 v# z5 P! b* z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 O6 S2 Y- p0 q  }7 }# F$ j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 K( D/ k  d3 E# |7 a2 [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) c" |" Y/ C5 N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( u' u' [* S7 O' z7 m$ {3 P<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 n3 a6 M3 G" ~<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 u9 p& [! y2 @7 _. ~' A, U+ |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& s, j# i) T. j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( S6 r9 q1 }- l& u, F& k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 |: A& f) {; y, Y! z$ B. ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 e) F0 g8 L. h) I$ a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# s8 F; T1 s0 K( _" R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: g% c: R/ Z4 P6 k. ]1 j# Z& G( S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 t+ L+ R1 z) T8 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& o1 }, W0 A# z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>