【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# J: \- k/ x  E* v4 h4 iWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# u; n& h, n( v7 N. u, A# a* SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: S. y( h4 Q7 _) eI would probably know how you feel
5 Q  h  X( `. d, S( l0 S( l+ MLove… just the word love
3 i4 x& U- B/ f$ O( ~5 @6 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
" _: K$ z6 P2 \( zI want to confess that I love you,
9 J: T1 e1 ^$ _$ \" lBut I never did
& W! O" }2 ?5 S' ?' COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! v* i) E- v9 W1 b7 G# p4 P' g; oIf today isn’t too late,
2 E# I" H- W" dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 J! P! g+ n5 \5 W8 A4 Q( KEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; V. B) k1 E$ \9 Y8 Y8 ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 v; J7 L. x, r9 f0 G1 I, YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# M" \9 ^* \- }6 x1 P. q$ @4 B6 ACan I entrust it to you?
; B5 ^0 L# D: ]- d0 tEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# H$ K4 b2 R) e# F1 |8 ~6 }: PEntrust my love within your heart
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9 r/ `! j: \# r1 p' }- U% S$ e* D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 r' I/ c/ T" s) }& K) R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- x7 u/ p$ B0 Z5 _# J) Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) a+ R9 Y8 z/ x. N  B! v<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 o# }" {% k" F& ?9 ]* j6 @* ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 i/ y% e9 Q. U+ j% n; @<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ Q. H3 M' \+ E  J/ e+ z( X1 ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- b5 c3 h" i4 c! a* l$ G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 q& c! q9 l+ Z0 m0 F$ E. w: {<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 Z  V8 o; F. A8 x# ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. B8 l+ B) y* n2 M<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. S7 [3 T, x$ N<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  o0 p5 O  K& |; }/ y4 d<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( W; A1 i8 M( W$ P# A<P>但我不会</P>
" n% E; D+ H- h! j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" i: H6 e4 c1 F; ^<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% u4 z8 M& x; O  K  L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 O: r; o# f% x! i0 q" `7 d4 W) p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" P  J% t: e( M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ [' U& q, ]! J5 O4 _2 l5 f- \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 k) h4 c# g$ _<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 ^9 `7 n9 |/ H/ P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 d2 J  z" ]% {9 m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ a) w* S7 m3 A<P>But I never did </P>
' Q1 ~' O: ?0 g/ j% F4 h) p<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 H3 h7 c/ p) b8 _$ \1 ^0 q4 q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ i5 `/ W! t9 t! m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 h0 d! b1 N: v6 r8 i- N, L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( B8 q* s2 Y! `9 `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  K) u. q# ?3 n- \; K1 s; J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" v; C  x# z, Q2 l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. Y+ k* C- H1 `5 L" ]) N<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; K2 A# |* k5 t+ s' e/ ~<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 J2 T& S3 g7 j6 g* R" i1 Y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 j: G, [5 v, y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>