【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
% [" f0 \. C& J, UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ H3 d9 K5 l+ ~6 z' R, {6 GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 r- O0 n; ^/ I4 iI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( I0 ~, Y# x! B. Z. p" mI want to confess that I love you,
1 q2 M( e; {% F& Y& u2 `" y3 nBut I never did
9 |$ k$ f+ @8 zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 Q1 O! W' C2 i- W" y+ jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" n; B& N& e$ A( r  yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ E9 h6 i4 j% U4 zEntrust my love within your heart
( o1 ~4 ~; N' Z4 \) qLove… just the word love
; P: c" \" i" S5 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
9 o( U5 Y! E7 A1 d8 a: m" Q* EI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 ?: ?$ W* z% yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! y; J0 f7 V4 q/ z: {6 sIf today isn’t too late,
) D) N1 W$ ~* lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 M/ C5 z* ^/ `8 A) jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( W; l6 H  a& R) HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. N" v" ?/ U+ O! d, l8 K! M<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 w- y! j* F- t% X8 ]: `<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, R/ Q1 N9 ?, P5 |4 y+ n<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# W" D- V1 W, p<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: ~5 }7 g( f+ n% T" _<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 Q# ?! j+ U! M  T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 H- ]$ _  ~1 y; N" ?<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ _) ?* L* I. t<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* {" w0 y1 g% H9 S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. |. M6 R# w& U; B8 ~<P>但我不会</P>
& q/ j- s4 P8 p" H" S4 W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 u+ p7 T# G4 v! Z0 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* l0 B( n7 `8 t* T6 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' m: \) F1 ]( p: o# |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ u; P) H; I* _2 z' ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 M! C5 i- V9 S; K/ @<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# G% ?; u7 @# x1 b* }<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: V, b) M" ?, b$ L: k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 C/ e0 C. u6 S$ w  q2 h& P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  x1 l! T, @' C- i" a0 ~  M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: ?- |, E3 f* E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. W+ x9 ?% {( ~1 S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* [2 h' i6 g, n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" F8 {( J& f. b<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 i, {) i# }* Z/ ^ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: {/ [- b/ v9 K5 M这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: S: @5 [3 T) h% x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>