【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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# E; ^( }! g; z" o0 q我另将歌词附在此。
- E6 P: a- C6 k5 v/ g% w" iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 ~5 u$ g- {+ b% d- U4 EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. x0 l, `- |# p( O3 S8 XFrom the first moment we met,
+ B# b3 I1 W7 Z0 e, [I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ Q" |! R3 w8 NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 @. _3 z9 a  A2 C6 M4 |/ zI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* B8 N4 g$ Y5 d% C: t8 yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ D) N) C* F3 y% T, E5 n0 wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 K) H! n0 m9 I6 sCan I entrust it to you?
3 @/ h. E+ a! Y. h0 l( fEntrust my love within your heart
! i5 A5 O. W9 ~. Z+ t9 mLove… just the word love
: Z7 q8 f  c1 _1 W. e6 WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ M' x( K- Z  i, |! \But I never did
4 t2 B$ E8 Z' \# vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 G7 A. X* T) C: ^3 {4 N2 X4 y( _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) A1 y! k; j9 J7 vEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: ]+ H. h  {0 B6 s( K  v  vEntrust my love within your heart

- h, W, f9 i4 a) P/ z1 \% L[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 s' k7 L# s6 w, s+ s4 W, q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; o& A- Y" a; K4 f<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 T9 n1 R+ ]8 @8 I8 ~<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# ^1 s2 o9 O# c% R& r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 K6 |5 ^- d5 |% v% Q2 ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ c, Z, a- W  D9 w3 ]; F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- \0 e& f% }& z) r! P<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 K7 S1 x" G, T* Y0 U  |% m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ l5 O' _+ G) W. e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! L, w( _1 O6 |( R4 |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. k* B) z  j! l<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ @$ V9 j! b) }- M  M% [% m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& Z* O( P. f1 `2 j# P; }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 G) f8 A. g7 }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( V- a" g6 }7 O3 ~' Z- @; @6 U+ q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& {% D# @9 N  u/ C- w3 X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* ]& ~, @# [- M# @* T6 s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) r4 i" x  ~. R<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" P# P7 i8 O' j; J/ V2 z; H: a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 V8 P& }( {$ K  U0 B9 k4 w3 i% x( B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ P; L$ ?4 Q' k- `<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, _/ C9 I9 F( [7 s' m4 P, i<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. V. C& U, V1 j9 z/ q, ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 ~7 H) H- I4 l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 F; B" r" i& i" T; m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ h; z, b8 j# D% k9 R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! k2 C- o0 J. r, t' H& p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# X/ s% F% d6 H( I8 J& R% K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) n% r( L) l6 `- C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! v5 Y, Y8 `  r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( \* Y. q6 K* r1 ]0 F4 \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' U$ @; E2 \, Y, I7 F& L3 C( [这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 P+ E7 x* @2 }. l" g# O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>