【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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2 A8 C4 _  P! t% O- ?, o我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! G! |# `7 x  ~From the first moment we met,
7 c  e% E) e1 hI already loved you with all my heart
7 v" E' p: A1 I7 J  KWe meet and talk everyday,
8 O' e: K* A: `- L: _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ Y+ i. V" u* g9 p1 P, d+ nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 Z" ?- t6 Q" g/ xI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" d4 j7 i9 y& vWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) {, B* k+ R) `. yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! S' |. X5 a" bI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( P. r4 A% M- OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 c& u, j" ^, l6 r5 i" A$ Z% vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( }# J! v4 W5 t, _2 Q3 Z) H7 @9 eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' d7 A( X9 R5 UCan I entrust it to you?
: h! T! c$ C' Z+ t& wEntrust my love within your heart
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$ A4 t$ d- l* o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# U2 z# X  @  X6 d+ q5 ?* N<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; [/ g6 [; q0 @1 D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& y: x' ~8 h1 R( i" ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% R, r/ v, A8 K- h8 a  Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 J0 v: W2 b. b<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 B1 J& S5 M4 h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ X8 Q; j0 w) p1 i, q0 Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 h) `* G. l2 ^" g. _( s' a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 y$ [9 B' _- J; n$ B<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( E8 Q. ^3 C% L7 L<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' m# e. ?$ [+ e% q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! Q& @5 k, n3 o, K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 n; q0 ^8 B4 ?( q9 {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- k8 F$ m$ j# b) \0 k0 N<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' l4 S; G* E: w% |3 |; d/ j( C7 q7 g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 A2 X- e* k4 m+ i4 @$ e! r<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 z2 z8 V; S$ c6 ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* D- g; i' I# J2 z7 Z2 a6 h* Y/ ?, c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# X5 C) y) U5 g1 }- G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 B' d. u( Z2 a$ o9 {3 d: Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 @! l" q; h- ]5 ^3 D<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  v8 n: i0 V1 n/ }# n<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, j4 D4 L& w4 S& d; P8 u% O9 V6 L* e& b<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 h( w- P  d$ P' [6 i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 ]; _, i) a( c$ Y* g& V& A<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ W) l( ~' M0 X  o) `% F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 S9 J: i" W* S3 `* F, J& v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% z9 P& ~& j# M, t3 ?, Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 A3 `# e& M& i4 \5 b: ?0 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ X: F2 B* ?, l* _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 X8 e: `3 ~0 a3 T4 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& _2 D8 V/ W6 j7 H% F3 ^! ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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$ j0 ]! z: D" F" M, S$ \  R这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% P2 M# [& H" {5 Y( k( g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>