【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
% R% Z# b3 q- f  Z7 l7 M+ [2 wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 ^) t; I4 B% Z  B: a% |; ZBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( R* C  w0 v  [I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" T5 d) f' z7 c  sWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: Q; \0 Z5 r" B9 r2 i' _+ Z3 P7 QBut I never did
- d+ o( T7 \  s: d0 cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 x' T5 Y. B3 s* ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ J5 j* l9 U7 v% d/ nCan I entrust it to you?
5 F( L6 y, ?4 p* Z" h6 w4 YEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; |% E2 _+ ~6 U: D1 W: LWhy is it so difficult to express?
# j& V2 j# ]4 Z5 Y7 ?1 n/ N- fI want to confess that I love you,
# J6 d8 N3 Y7 |( z# nBut I never did
5 d& H& o, c2 a% Q# O7 hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 v9 g5 T) q) ^( WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) w! N7 j# R( F, Y3 P  ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ I( f/ z2 p+ V; E7 NEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 U) M& L6 G5 gEntrust my love within your heart
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  U: u6 Z8 C/ ~; D! L! U* v0 i[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) \, B: k* _3 s, r8 L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* Q- W6 Y. Q- U, ~5 T<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 Y7 f& L$ a% _! S+ O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. W: ^) J& O$ B" \, Z" b<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# w. F. W( L: T( u5 p8 G# f" x<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& t) g; s9 D" A$ A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 I* J) [! E% ]3 M, a<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ U! W" I- n. S0 k3 I; m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" `0 Y; ^* |& i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 U7 q1 G# b; y6 G6 R. ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( Q' ]' Z; H4 A9 Z7 V" S5 M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& O! b/ F7 H2 U* I) \0 @<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# l' C, ~6 U. \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* D/ u/ E- a* L/ i' g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* \) _1 z. T* \# g/ P7 V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% e1 w! t- a9 ]+ v; E# q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- J. F. ^6 g* @2 o) M: U" ]( J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ a; n) D9 F8 m  S& f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. K( h- T2 N4 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 X2 h' M  O6 _$ I6 i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 P. G& ~& k4 S1 y/ }5 A<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: a* y% a4 M) q& K$ |1 o; {3 Z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
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<P>But I never did </P>
" w+ D1 V. |( B& {5 Y% x<P>但我不会 </P>
, F; @7 C4 W) j1 j1 u<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 ~; g1 ^4 C) _0 \: z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& p7 \# Z5 f$ N/ ?3 b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 o/ j3 T/ q) f, c3 [% N4 r* I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; f- U7 l+ V7 ~2 v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& K0 d  b  d+ J; h  m. @8 Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% l4 \9 Z" A, B+ C6 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ @( y7 _# J3 \' W1 w/ f/ w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: o* u1 Z& P( d6 I! Z( M% e6 E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  M/ R- }" m% ]0 z; {7 E<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>