【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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+ q4 R8 n/ [7 X/ t' c我另将歌词附在此。
- W& N0 E" o2 O( w/ Q' gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 n# b: s, I, m5 m/ b, j( GThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 G* O9 D" @' p4 @( iFrom the first moment we met,
. R8 w, b% @3 lI already loved you with all my heart
8 a) m+ Q' N6 b) \; \( aWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 p6 m* Z7 P7 @! w! e% E* u" ?0 fIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' C; Y6 E$ B- j& qI would probably know how you feel
6 ^2 g! C9 \& h( B: ^5 l2 r/ |7 ?Love… just the word love
- L, X7 l4 Q# s# k- AWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 I' }4 j3 K- n8 g# s7 YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 _  I- i" g1 e$ d7 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, K3 |" Q( ^+ R3 o7 M& n' s* X' KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' _( u0 ?' ]4 y: u+ B2 eBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' j: A, t2 n3 `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 _+ @* K! }$ [  K( @- REntrust my love within your heart
  l, o- ^! U  r& U7 d: ?4 eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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8 y1 V) t! _, S# m[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 R- N. S5 V4 A+ U. Y/ r& z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 t9 b1 e% h$ ?& a. x5 ~( `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 n& Q% ~. o# A; i, z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 p" s' L/ H7 U+ z! ~) j" B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 O8 c) ^% z: D7 d& L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 _, m% ?4 l# o5 S# w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ z( _% {- t$ [4 g7 W9 x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* Z  p0 V: X% L! l7 n9 W' x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 o$ h  Y% n8 Y9 n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 Y0 M+ D# ~; R9 ~; Q# a2 T<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 N! ]7 i" _5 C2 t7 Q6 ]/ {4 V<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% d% y6 h; b5 M! Q( A! q0 j9 U2 ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 t" D, v  t$ f) p4 N6 q& e( s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 l" I- t1 C" a, Q+ H$ a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% r. z% k% ?( k7 I8 Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) l, W: x5 e' S; |& l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* C1 h% W: o6 Q' D5 B' Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ d& M& {% z; E- N* O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" l- ]! ~- Y, y* n' w) a6 {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- F9 O/ |6 I9 s! R+ z& Y  e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  z$ S) v) n) f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 g- t; {' f& n0 Z8 @8 Q) w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& F; y& B' w' [2 O% A$ ?7 M* w<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
4 \7 M1 \4 b. f2 I3 G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! r/ F5 M0 J" Y/ A- k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ T5 L" }. I% {& ?+ Z* z: y* k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 N/ U  l. {1 W0 T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 O2 O. B6 C4 H" r  ^* I$ L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 z5 `5 T6 {/ X4 P/ t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' q: O, I( b5 f2 P9 W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 c, Y& p& m2 i2 B<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ N  G  p& c/ i6 f" C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>