【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# m1 \0 F& z. h  LThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ u- c" P/ f5 D: z% i5 fFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 w# |. L! I4 c1 A! Q1 w! PWe meet and talk everyday,
: }9 y0 H1 r! f) f- q. i9 rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 N6 ?0 g2 `4 k# X, K, }4 gLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' g3 b2 O5 |0 o% c$ nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, c% O6 F& M. [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 T: H  d9 g3 D; G3 |: jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
7 I3 ]+ |0 \/ j% K  TWhy is it so difficult to express?
# T7 `$ z6 {4 h, J) S, WI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 i" E- A4 d' A1 P! POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, m1 Y( h! u) q2 ~  n* fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  `' Q3 v$ z4 J2 R5 C& N: {Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# ?6 ?. E% t7 `* C$ qEntrust my love within your heart
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$ y3 o, |' y+ a. G! K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 A4 J: A3 u8 \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, [2 ?! U5 h* E; H1 p" b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 T  ]; ^, N% g7 W1 S1 r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ E( z' \. z8 [3 N( N0 g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& T/ P: ?4 o6 z1 O, b: g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, D5 ^# z0 q0 i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. J# P0 |- N4 i6 V' b<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" G' s! Q5 s$ R0 c, n$ \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 ^8 J# p1 ]5 ~" a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 j3 T. \+ n* B1 G4 o3 {: v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' M/ h: S' @) \* P# @' u0 k<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; ]0 ~; @* j/ o<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- z/ Z0 {) r: X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 B/ \1 Y) N$ q8 D2 Z5 M; G" X# L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 \+ m% K# S7 ~) c: T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" o5 D5 W2 g& o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 _0 Z, z3 p( _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 G% W: v. a& N( j<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- t  R- U0 s8 z2 r$ \/ n! ]% C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; J" f. Q8 Z; s8 z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: Z+ V! g5 t& g$ [<P>But I never did </P>
/ }) n- [  Z* _9 |1 U" n, _$ s# X' D<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- m* S* i3 U) H" l! w% b<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 J# {. ~. B% v7 s& G# P$ r% X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& u) s4 i  X+ ^. f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 M: I4 `% c2 w% q1 k; G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* l! W6 C+ I# P. A* Z* W# |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. g! b4 v. b! J2 @3 B, B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' n$ P+ W& |( U/ m4 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 [" d8 c% s0 Y8 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 N- f/ j0 \, T) B6 t+ t  S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" H4 u% b, |( I% r+ \( t4 D/ Y% l<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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% L6 a' @% N5 M( {7 n7 @% ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 K/ }2 ]& V& Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 n0 s% k, E- r% H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>