【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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0 e! u1 x2 G% a3 `. W7 k我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- d. ]# z, f- }; X+ y1 ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 [# g7 ]5 }8 M4 B+ i( xI already loved you with all my heart
3 I5 m  }5 P6 h/ N" ~5 i1 h/ jWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& o8 T& T; D8 E* QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! }7 g' L0 J- S+ c" mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 s+ g6 E5 y2 D& z4 {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. ], T0 R5 s7 W$ eEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* O- x4 ^5 L. L* N$ |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 @5 E& f7 I1 K( t2 |3 ^2 WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ Q8 L, s1 ~3 M# G  {: AIf today isn’t too late,
; t8 m) v+ i7 Z9 C3 s1 D$ e2 q& {4 `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 D1 G" i7 ~6 V0 m$ qEntrust my love within your heart
  ]) l$ }5 \: i8 FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% i: a" T5 u/ G# A0 F5 G/ I
<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 J0 x& M& k% _1 L9 H% I; o<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& s, l) @# c# c* A6 k  h/ X<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# t  S7 d7 k( j, O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" P4 \' p6 B' _# H6 x! @<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 T0 n/ V  H8 ]5 x% _' O! l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 E4 J/ J3 [- m" T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 [* y$ ~/ H# P) t: H9 i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  N0 O" A9 r* O' _# B" J% P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 l0 l3 e5 W; z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- ^& V5 c7 C7 G' z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' W) G: E8 q' Q; [1 ]. g" W5 V<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 `! c. a" h7 g: \0 _; B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- x2 m3 t$ k$ K, D" \  N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% s  ~' v# S8 v9 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ j) G/ e2 n/ W: v; Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" L0 @% A1 `+ ?/ n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' g4 a( A. C  v2 z% x! X% J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 i0 T) T( }+ W  N/ m9 Y/ y; G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% n5 `, V+ A! X<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' F' E$ K  {# `3 P! l* c$ w0 b<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  ]+ ]" y: r5 k! f+ N# o0 b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 m- W' z# V/ S% R5 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ x, ]8 ~+ f3 i  O5 R5 g/ K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 I2 e3 f  q" l& g8 p: g# e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# ^( C) v- X' O2 ^4 t- L9 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) \% F7 N) s1 U6 b; ~+ G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ i; L0 |, j' T0 B+ c8 \/ g<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

. a; A5 W( L) e6 C; |" ]3 U$ e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: E. ?4 I0 _4 ?5 _5 x9 f这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 ]% x% p# R+ M+ L( C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>