【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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' ~. d6 J$ `: [4 ~我另将歌词附在此。
8 X& N( d4 z" h& t, R# d. eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 Y. n+ v5 m  G, h6 a2 AFrom the first moment we met,
7 S$ e' d& w; }; H: e6 h- HI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
* `/ B& |6 |  s/ C) b" g: e) P. z7 o+ vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' e9 ]2 y- y# |# y+ CLove… just the word love
9 J' q% ^" ~* m) R4 r9 rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; k  b$ r" c- B# f( RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 I4 L: y8 o1 t6 N0 p' ^# _' MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 o9 I$ ~& Y/ z3 _& I5 c( H3 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& r/ U0 J1 O/ \* ~If today isn’t too late,
1 P* g7 }! j& F% xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; m* ?6 v) p6 \Entrust my love within your heart
0 L0 _! j3 N& P# FCan I entrust it to you?
8 u$ F( N+ E; Q/ i! F; @Entrust my love within your heart
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+ d- O8 ]1 n0 ?; u! @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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7 v( ]. W# L$ g7 D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 N9 V' f% B4 }3 o1 @# I: }( P<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& \; ^. g6 \1 h9 `! d; @/ |<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; i, L7 D, i* k9 p6 u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 ?) j1 m( m% }7 k1 X0 t( K1 \" f. l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; }8 a% V1 x! ^6 D<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ O5 b3 Z+ m) i% T+ v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ B: Q$ E+ C6 a; i) m5 K* R9 R7 p# ?! N<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* J# H. M# B  X. w/ E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 }* n& c. [0 ]<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 F$ ^, _& ]: L0 a6 ?8 t& R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; R6 C5 E3 V/ L: `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" H# d1 ~- f4 i' u/ ~: i) U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- w; Y& I' v4 `" h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- b0 F  ~9 G) E4 [" [& j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ U  L8 F1 ~, M& c6 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" O% U- B8 x* ^9 @7 l8 `9 i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 D' R. }  v( m* k/ x4 \5 n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) H0 @2 O: D& m  c% g<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 G  ^( e. j; [. x$ u. B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 h$ H7 Y) J' U) Q4 ~' W" v6 ]: ?<P>但我不会 </P>
  }* U" m% m: v, p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ J3 M) m% n0 Q) j5 j6 q. }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 z5 \9 @+ W0 y3 {0 D9 P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 R4 R) i) S; x5 B5 R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# q! I  q# j1 O/ O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# {6 [8 v1 V7 U7 ^, [$ e* `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 ]) T! L2 l) W+ d3 s+ g$ s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# ^: L) j8 J3 D  R1 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 }8 X' G6 U6 E  p" C; `* U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 p! h! a7 O" J# s5 k" w' F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; U7 A, Y& u2 D- |3 F) v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- Z& A! |+ m6 q- `<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>