【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 {3 L9 O( ~) u5 f# r' a( uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 n- Z" q6 {6 E. `* [From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( P! K3 l8 r" S+ _We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 `7 o+ ?3 d: E+ f5 P+ cLove… just the word love
5 ~  r0 A. _1 t$ P. F# z/ y1 e2 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) h* r' r5 [7 y% y5 R2 D8 pBut I never did
4 B; O8 {4 a  O; K. AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( H6 Q7 B4 i5 dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 ?' |% U8 O' r- LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! e6 g) m6 f6 zLove… just the word love
/ D" ~4 J+ J. b) w  M# q% a8 E8 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 X/ g5 H' d- K9 A* P0 Q7 a; `If today isn’t too late,
! ]7 w; p$ t' {0 W! u4 {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 ^4 g$ l# ]9 {! ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" y' x2 a; r+ H" t" l, A" K  yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

6 I# O( M( W& m( t% _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. j4 X8 R' L" {6 j6 T: z$ c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 F! ~" `# G3 W+ ]# z3 N<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# A0 h" h. K. X<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# s6 f, @# j; ^6 P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" e  Y' Q5 ?: n0 ^" u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 L( T3 h* `, w( F4 \1 y  j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 R) f/ H4 S% _/ e" {<P>但我不会</P>
) g! y! m$ l' ]: o, z. d# D" k  C* B<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 G1 h9 e8 Y! [) D5 e/ x( T$ I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: \$ U1 |7 e& e9 t8 X0 w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; F4 M- w- L6 [9 |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 ^: }# x: \& B( w. p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" \- g7 S! _/ B1 b( S- o. _; F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& k+ ~% R6 z8 ~) S6 b' Z" P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! U  w3 b+ T& \: x1 S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* j2 `8 {( C2 e; J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. x( z1 @2 ?$ F+ G+ D7 {/ C" k8 f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 S, I  s0 x/ R7 a! o6 L# D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  C6 L& N" x& ^. k- w6 K& q2 k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ q4 s; f2 M2 r& E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* Q0 x( {5 J; ?1 @2 N/ \3 A2 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; _! h1 T) U4 u1 j9 W9 Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& F: y- @* o) H0 G  }/ S5 j( z! P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& m6 C- w1 v/ G" l, C$ v8 o( ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( v" G+ N8 y3 M$ G<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>