【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
& z2 _# f( Z. ?9 @$ C9 R( T% Y/ ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 b" P; Z) }0 F0 D; K; QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 O( J7 e6 o% n" l; [. N9 tWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% a. R; [4 }; A. oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 d0 g$ y6 b. L, GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& E! y$ o+ P' o* U5 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' {3 C: g& J1 h0 n" J0 Q. N1 CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" C8 A- M: M3 H1 DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  s' k" D& q2 F3 LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 p! M' n9 w9 l6 w1 [3 E4 I2 j1 PLove… just the word love
2 Z  y: ^+ z1 N3 j( ~+ [: R& E) ?8 WWhy is it so difficult to express?
- p; Q0 m5 v& U3 P5 q5 [0 P; qI want to confess that I love you,
4 n% w: P4 Z: z% K- h+ N0 CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# ^1 w: i* x/ U2 A9 S9 RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- c. Y& S( y. ?# {+ r1 D4 z' Y, v3 ^Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 I& `. y  {6 c$ d/ b<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* Q7 T, |# K; [4 s% L$ O. S( Z3 e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; D: F$ g. k2 x% K9 [9 V<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  `, H( P# f! [( m% M* z7 H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, e2 m0 @! Y, n  t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ q' y/ e' J4 r$ p<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 i( p$ N6 s4 F8 {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 o, D0 l  m( B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  Q6 K- V1 H' _+ r0 _9 B9 h& |2 p: d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( E+ w6 j5 S+ ~, B/ X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 W/ w/ s& O! q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# l( S" |7 W3 D% Q& S4 C) H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- ^+ C# M# O% N% f9 e2 {+ ]: _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 p" ~* O: i6 X4 l! W* ~$ _3 f<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 ~4 N! o/ E$ s& u, D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ w( p0 e* h& y4 m% ]6 v2 ^3 {+ K2 k/ e( o<P>但我不会</P>
9 |* Z+ R; [* h: [2 h: c9 c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) g/ l# k  z3 R7 G0 G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 E3 \6 W; G# ~$ v" Y" U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* C% Q; |) ?* x. f6 H* [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 X; k/ {0 N% E3 y' F9 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! M5 l  e+ c3 K; m: a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! [1 Q& C; R% b0 t  J2 i<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 R: J4 c7 k  m/ s4 J$ M- w<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ N9 C' M& [6 j4 e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 ]9 r9 a3 V. D+ w; C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  j9 V, r1 g. E* n8 K$ }- p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ s( R: ^$ T  A+ E) B! x1 p" z0 X<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) W; c; J0 M# Q; f; A3 `- i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ r4 r5 t: p! d" T0 g$ O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) Z$ ^$ K' w' V- C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ U  a1 o5 ~8 w5 w# T* Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. m6 ~+ K' ~' o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 z$ N% y: @5 d5 ~9 w& D. {% G  W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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* {5 a6 j& d% H+ D& U# A5 a5 T% V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 `4 G% y4 h2 f0 {) D2 V<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>