【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- P9 M2 c) F% ]- t  s3 W9 L$ AFrom the first moment we met,
) D/ m9 k0 @  I# x) s' |7 kI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' b1 o) F2 A# I: T4 dI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ N' H- U8 F- B2 {6 q+ dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 ?+ C, G2 N9 a% QEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& Y$ N) }" G2 k5 GWhy is it so difficult to express?
* o3 l# k3 B. k% t) _2 UI want to confess that I love you,
! L  s! K9 J6 y/ J) T2 ^: bBut I never did
$ N* S7 {3 P( e6 uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% S# y3 }0 m/ F. ]9 L. W' jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- G6 X/ }9 |! E1 _( }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 j/ x; ~8 a. h; w6 g+ Y, hCan I entrust it to you?
0 h4 c% m% X7 {: V$ S' _Entrust my love within your heart
. B5 s6 C2 v6 L2 D5 sCan I entrust it to you?
8 {1 R8 a0 c) g8 R2 V* SEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 G3 H7 {1 ]) p) k0 q/ F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 h1 n' _9 o: a. A& m. Q- H9 k: u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, i7 a; d" D& j1 Z/ K+ p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ m: o1 ~" D8 U6 P. U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- Q; D4 p* D  s/ e<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& |  a3 c+ ^! p2 Q# q! i9 F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 D1 l( B4 z' m8 j8 L) Z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. p- H( Y  L- G! V: y% P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 o' Y  J& i0 A. g5 O' c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 [- o  F7 C; {6 G( U7 U, E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 \/ |) |" i/ _1 E: Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, A' W' P+ B3 P, t! V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- q: E  m2 F' O; }& O" E0 n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: l+ ^- a' @$ R# J* z1 g<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" G8 q* M/ a: P& c9 k, `/ L, S<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ ~" F. z7 H1 U: Z% e* V& [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 U  f3 E+ R: C( E6 @$ v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 k' @9 w: d0 Z" F& V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* U. U+ y  `* s/ r3 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ ?! E8 W( q8 a+ [4 ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# Z& O) f3 C  O9 t9 i1 ~* O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# d3 F) i! s7 H2 a& P" q% N/ ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, f  p3 f. @" N5 h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, |* J. w- Q9 q  f! K<P>But I never did </P>
* |2 ~& {* |) Q1 [7 \9 U! m<P>但我不会 </P>
* [9 W: S! [  V% l) _. f! [! _( n+ _<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 J) Z+ c; `  p$ f& o; s1 s2 U& g<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- N! E; h3 n% ~8 y/ i" f/ R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% T& j  v* P" R* Q- x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 h: S8 J& N. L- z: r. Z/ F9 t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ \/ h0 o1 t+ S) Z4 M/ l" c& ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 o2 {/ Z4 O8 a* Z8 g5 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& L0 ^" w3 \+ w; B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% g/ A; v& y2 D5 x* {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# s7 m6 o. m' V& S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>