【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
( `& m( \3 q; c, e, [% rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ t- g+ H9 l8 `& \' XThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( j/ V6 ~* V! u6 gWe meet and talk everyday,
; G) Z( r3 b) @7 BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
. s" q+ D& k% V: C( i* |) h( P/ RLove… just the word love
1 w4 `' l+ E4 D$ YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 f0 Y& j" j- @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# N3 V! S5 [# D- r9 h, DEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* X3 s2 t, d1 p$ }& O4 vWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ ~4 i/ v* `9 QBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ p8 ?4 e8 F  N( N$ k/ Q* RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( i8 I0 ]& o$ y7 }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( P# Q, s  i( l! n. b5 @( x6 RCan I entrust it to you?
/ t0 Y# O9 S. L9 V7 `& |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 V9 @1 z( y- ~/ K# V0 BEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( k1 @) r; L5 e( @& Y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) o7 p  b' J% g/ e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: U0 v- k9 R0 I+ A& a: d$ @" h- z9 m7 \<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' T9 M7 |# T0 z$ x9 t5 ?" g<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) V( g9 e2 Z: G2 E<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( Y, l% t+ l" r% z( ~0 a. v/ t2 i/ F<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" Q8 H4 v5 x& C; A- Y4 ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) S5 U8 m1 N! Z) K; h" C9 I<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- N' h& L/ }! S" c, D  v4 F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, d/ X0 G, @# Z& b, E<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! a9 c( O3 ^0 o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# ~; x) o4 ^1 H; m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' r( a$ K( f3 C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( s4 l: R5 T# g' h8 I5 M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, X6 _& w, x+ t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 u( ~+ N9 p( X# D# t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 H1 \. q4 ^" s+ P3 E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 D5 J$ t8 d2 H0 n1 s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- o! j7 S: }0 ]6 g+ b6 h) b3 j  S1 H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ \8 R4 `" |5 `# {7 \; h5 g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( e+ ~3 j# r! {- S: ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" P5 V  s. J6 d4 F4 t<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- d. U; o% p8 x* S; H% n9 {% F  M' W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: R; e6 j2 Z; S  v5 t# l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 X3 A; x% B! J! y% K7 w# D+ G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: O' A5 S& K8 n! a8 @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" ^" J" E/ J* [4 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 x8 Z6 Q+ K8 h% U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# B  c9 X) ^! u, n* ^/ c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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7 t) q8 J' M& d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 q) p4 L+ o) Z! [" ]: @! ]这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ H9 p2 f9 ^2 ?<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>