【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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- b: I. a# }6 Z: _1 x% v0 o/ p我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" Y7 K+ Q6 q: j+ A  b& _2 j, kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
5 q) R9 d; B8 _! iI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 D8 t5 W; t. n, Q, x5 k+ {% h' aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% v  `* _( d$ u. v( GLove… just the word love
& \; T0 T9 A8 E! ~( ?2 wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 Z0 L" Z5 s! o/ D& K$ zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 T8 f! n0 O# R) o9 CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! d7 \4 ~8 J$ f. T5 M3 xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 w3 q. V$ C6 e7 c$ _$ K0 P: j! dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( d9 O# Y) e+ M* MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 ?/ ]" _; ?# M  v5 P  O  H. oIf today isn’t too late,
' f1 ^0 f7 P5 T! r7 ~& II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ g2 U+ o, P0 o9 G$ TCan I entrust it to you?
# P) T2 c# w. C" V* U! UEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 x) r- f  ~# H
[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- a" }4 a3 c0 T% R
<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% y6 b' D7 a5 V8 F' a* Z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# g# W9 x/ `' M! K4 l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% H' M4 I, Y! Z) G7 ^9 `<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 t  b: b" S, @+ v9 x<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ o$ @4 |- |9 \7 I" o" `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 l9 _( Y2 h; J: N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 _5 c; i1 |/ `1 \. e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) {- l6 }! E( X- ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, K" j0 @3 W; B2 q- ^% D7 |+ P3 A<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" R4 q; ]' i5 f' z+ R& x6 a$ j% ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 p, t4 N7 z! T+ O$ Q: W/ c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 l- [# A" c6 d" E' Z' R1 E<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! S5 V7 g2 T: p  Q- Z! [: j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 u) {+ {2 y% o$ `/ O<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( f4 l2 R6 H1 E<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" N7 k8 H8 i, n+ ?- \' M% I* w- p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; E1 F# C; L& f' Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! q- g4 H3 z5 k& N9 h; D. n$ }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 a1 Z, L& k! N' j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 Q- v0 r% p4 |& S" R3 e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 m/ R+ R* `! l, Y" b  t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 G! T5 m8 Q. R3 A. m0 Z+ K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 u+ v" Q2 q5 z+ V" y/ i2 H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. n2 e* h* v0 H5 ^0 {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 q% |1 l6 F" Z# n- e! _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 v* }5 _& K( X) C5 H! g" e6 m% k+ U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" N+ u* X$ R9 b8 _6 N<P>But I never did </P>
: b1 ~% [* f/ ]9 l% V1 H<P>但我不会 </P>
  a2 W9 W' v3 g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 c+ `9 Y2 {, n$ _3 R' l; K$ N0 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( ]) @0 ^. A8 C2 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  k: D6 |: o1 \5 ^, `1 C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% k5 {" G0 I2 o! ~7 [# W; h" B) W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) }( |- I, P- e; a. y% [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, t6 e' J, _6 D& L0 `+ @. J, q
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
4 A+ U8 w# V/ f& v2 r: k8 ?* g& z
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  ~/ C4 T$ J+ D3 D
% G9 P1 `  e' X. P! O5 J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

7 g: ?& y9 W. t- p! G
1 u" R. G. N/ N<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>