【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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& e; l* P0 N* m6 F9 o- D+ Y$ H$ O  u. y我另将歌词附在此。
3 m7 }0 |, M, S, G) U0 P4 u. aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
; W: d$ l8 i6 k" q* c9 hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 J3 r: N, G+ ]1 a: i  L- BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ k: U8 `0 Q6 c0 [: ^+ H+ ~I would probably know how you feel
9 w6 d- }$ x% f3 qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) z) M: J+ {7 j7 R1 wBut I never did
+ L4 J8 N9 F* r# fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; v' t- S% f; e  Q. G% _If today isn’t too late,
+ l: d5 S+ ]! z+ S, X3 l2 tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ Y$ s. T" G) O7 d6 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' ?3 A" i7 _# F2 OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) G3 M: |8 A9 N, s6 f9 \Love… just the word love
8 f, U0 k% m# I) l7 s3 l+ j+ oWhy is it so difficult to express?
! I; ?! y/ j; Z, ]3 k! k7 _2 BI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! z5 j5 `4 Q# J8 f4 H( }* l# EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 ?" n( p# @# Z8 z0 iEntrust my love within your heart
, }9 u7 u2 A0 LCan I entrust it to you?
- a. g7 h6 r+ p+ ^; uEntrust my love within your heart

6 l! |1 k5 G# {4 ?* p0 s% Z7 s; P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% E" _/ a9 [3 p4 Y" x# h" P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 V' K. {3 S! x' K( T1 h! |<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& O8 d3 [2 }+ {& _( a6 g<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 z- k0 \' z# v2 ~0 R& R; C' V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- x2 m6 l6 ?( X4 H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 b# b7 e* l  C4 r. Y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 a& J/ D" F. Y0 ^  o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 k5 O! b* M3 \1 z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 A# A" f" H! P8 v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 ~* M2 {7 T1 C  |& F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- U- G) o9 y$ o- ]2 h<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' `' k/ A9 p$ W$ v  |' y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 a  ?! A2 h9 T  r- F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ S0 N! `# E& c  |' |( h; \<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( ~9 L! D6 y6 R/ E1 B9 ^! N: F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ T1 s& u1 ?" _1 ?<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# ]& X9 n& A2 \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: L6 s( d# b* p& \) K2 g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: m% k" I  E- k" u6 Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 o# k4 k" F" [6 |6 y% w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) Y2 B( a# y* p3 [( A) H- d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 }$ F% U) Y4 ~5 s/ @7 Q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ L+ _$ `! c. T+ i; n1 Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' {+ Q" k, ?" X# w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( e$ M. r5 x2 k3 B1 F<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
; X. T/ }/ t: E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- Q- s. u3 j. O) T# Y. _6 B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 Q! A& V2 ?% r2 ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 G# R9 p- j4 n5 K! P0 N+ c8 j1 X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) o% J& i" u. s' R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 g& |# m  t5 I( V* O$ e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. i: @9 c5 ~/ q( K( Q  L% M: G; w9 _2 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 E. Z; H1 X; [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
5 `7 {4 p* w0 d' K4 {, s3 j. L
' t; l9 w& U  b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% S$ }+ g( Q: t9 N
这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>