【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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- S4 j, p& {2 _8 j7 ^我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
$ X7 n5 a/ _* [6 c; }( L  tI already loved you with all my heart
+ y. |) ^$ f2 d* @, X8 R" J0 vWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 u7 J/ \* W: f- h# bI would probably know how you feel
: B& N. }, ?/ B; c: H6 g& H: NLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 L5 y3 _3 @/ X! X, [: p4 d6 T1 kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  _, f# u* _3 T$ b3 y. V& `3 @2 I, GCan I entrust it to you?
% C3 J9 A4 X$ W$ n5 tEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& d& M9 d  \1 \- KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' {8 q5 F1 k6 ?: [; W0 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 f: ^8 T$ m4 [' P1 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 _0 A9 n% r1 C0 x# cEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 _7 h# e) h, n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' U" b. ^, d" z0 a$ F* z! y* W<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  M: U4 n1 _( @' O; }<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( l  b1 q7 z; F% s$ C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 Y" D$ f' @5 g8 e5 L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. W' v1 e1 {; N7 W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: }" J6 \5 x' k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. l  }- \2 t" w! p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. x$ b) I$ [; J1 K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 s- k8 H9 s/ W- @<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ R( G# Q$ u8 X6 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 u/ g4 t( k, z& u$ X. y* _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, J  e+ d  d# Y1 a# t& J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- j  N+ }# a8 C$ {( p  V+ K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  I6 X( d0 N3 E3 l% P8 i9 Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 u+ J% Q/ R, S+ D5 K0 u. Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: {' k4 h- r- b9 M<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ l( P" m4 N2 f; ]7 L5 d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% N# G$ X' X  ]7 m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# [) W7 Y# B0 Q0 U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: \' E* z2 d. ?$ k+ @5 {: M6 N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% s( `& B- W3 P4 {# M- B! s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 _) s/ O0 }8 Y' A% n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 [/ @; L' b2 J5 [; {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 g/ d9 M! M' E0 q+ F+ L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# Q9 Z# `- c) H1 J/ X( w# Y  k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ S, @. y9 d3 V! x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 G+ b9 A) O2 r) {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>