【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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& I" x& ~2 i( Z# O1 K/ I我另将歌词附在此。
0 G% |6 L9 V$ q, G8 wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. [* H$ ~+ `( K# EFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# O. U, y) O6 q! ^9 W2 L  f5 kWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 v9 c4 S) i4 o9 CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ b8 X  i! ]: {6 FWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ I8 i: D* C8 f2 ]9 I: mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( N( y. K/ F. ]% A# A% FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# z5 ^% p* n6 Q$ e9 _+ [/ oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; Q2 S2 N% {# Y+ XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- z' F) N9 z2 L; `* V5 f/ C1 HIf today isn’t too late,
/ ?$ J* o/ f$ Y' ~0 ^/ EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 ]- j' R4 a- R- j4 n! }* u' U$ R5 Z9 dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* I2 R: E! R* |# D" E2 D. C) N3 xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- \: x+ j2 [% g<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' B. w+ `# @7 j, k: y2 Y3 U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! U8 f; o+ z( ^7 j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# I8 y$ E4 d/ ?' g) M2 C6 Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 N- }* h% i6 q& M& k4 A+ m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ R8 N; V: ?7 |; ]<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ x: H+ v  t( G<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 {5 _5 q9 d0 i7 M0 v4 O1 P% ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 F/ [. ^. r/ M% l1 q2 c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( L+ n4 _/ c" \+ k1 j3 P/ x0 G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" g, Y' x6 X8 [4 j2 ?: ^! o; b- `- A3 E<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 D1 ]: t& Y. A0 j<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( ]2 l- v- u( ?/ e4 X( e<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 Q- d( N6 B1 m0 ]( P" U% _: {! b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 W: b6 i3 f: ]; R! i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% K2 s  n. \, k% b6 }0 H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* C1 t1 a; n6 n4 P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ Q% n( ]4 K2 m% H* E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' G0 w: c2 s0 `% u  o' ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 z# J2 ]' F) X<P>But I never did </P>
5 [- a* v3 J" N2 {<P>但我不会 </P>
. m- A& L4 s9 m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* C7 t; y5 P0 N<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ R7 [) H: j: Q; D6 v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ [# t( j, F: F<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# t' a, r0 i$ I* H) h9 W2 @  w- u3 [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' x; h* u0 q. V# T0 V% _1 v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. j7 l3 q/ G7 j# ^7 A( E' x3 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, \" C( O4 L: d# P% {1 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& ]* t2 q8 |6 k/ o/ `3 y$ o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 G5 \1 _$ w. Y; h<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- C, w9 l; m% _+ f4 D5 i 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, r' ~; f+ N) @1 T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>