【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
- q6 j' m0 u- z4 `# m3 |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" ]) S  \' g$ n  I; O: [6 c& _/ gFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  N: H. i7 n" R1 _1 m; IBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 O1 C+ z/ b6 u  \I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% D! g! ^3 m- X" z, PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( [4 G0 Z8 }" W+ ?- u7 w; ~If today isn’t too late,
$ P" a" v* P$ R3 w' m  lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 {- a0 g# J; z0 s# N% P% Z( Q0 YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& d1 ]* F) Y5 A* s- M" DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 K! |2 b3 G; ^' [9 FI want to confess that I love you,
% u( u  T* _9 _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: O. q# O- D1 A$ u9 m. rIf today isn’t too late,
5 n5 Z, B# h6 W, {, M8 f0 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ E5 F  s  j5 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 g) E- A6 n* l8 HEntrust my love within your heart
, [) [7 o" s1 R, JCan I entrust it to you?
' C. v. o) c- q$ ?. {8 _4 SEntrust my love within your heart

# P( f4 s6 J; {  ]+ o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% v1 M# `) K$ |8 g% j<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% G5 z9 z0 C+ U5 b5 j5 O0 _<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 @# {5 H+ X3 U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 ]' r7 c; }! F8 T# y5 Z3 ]<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- ]8 b5 y& x% u3 F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; S% y" ]9 w# u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 Q% C: a. D$ R9 B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. E5 a. Y% M, [<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% q: `( U; R0 ]2 G9 o! Q, h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ u/ g6 C* T: \& Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( O# A2 F! O1 {7 [" z: E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 S7 x8 |  [+ r. t0 e" O<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- i1 ~4 J' t0 b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 u" F$ K1 w5 I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  Y7 Y* d, k' N/ k* y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 k: x# X# ^( D( c7 U* L1 p9 l* {2 ?5 W3 T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: P& o8 S1 ^$ N1 Y0 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 L- q# x9 }* f/ F) E& X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! M6 b& h( d3 O$ k& [<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* k) X# K5 e9 L) `* {+ M  ~8 Y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: |2 ^5 O, k( ^5 x; v+ ?9 y& U: J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( V3 t$ s- n/ A( I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% Y8 t2 `4 q" [$ H& s& J( p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 f" x( x8 Z8 e. H/ A- y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 {8 ?4 ]" o( F8 m) v6 L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 e' `+ y3 [) A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 E' u0 ?' R3 \8 ^# ~  y. w* c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# w& ?1 g: v' @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 l5 m6 M, z+ E! |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  N! G1 C, p/ a& ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 r- B) L9 H: P3 r  h' R; q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>