【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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1 E3 p, @+ @( n) V: [+ j. P我另将歌词附在此。
/ W5 x  s, E/ ~( Q3 ]The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 o7 p4 x5 i3 Q: x& S) RThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 q: }( T. n1 B  \' bFrom the first moment we met,
/ a1 |1 `; X* Z) ?; ~0 u% @I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ h+ ?5 A4 i  m) p! X% N1 Z, B. d# d- ZI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ `$ ]4 j. R7 ^+ Z! T8 Z2 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* P: P( H% L5 V" W# _' ]: nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! ?& Y9 y1 d4 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 d' c  c6 Z+ T( \- u" @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. i5 M& @: T2 ]5 i# f# E9 \; yCan I entrust it to you?
5 a' [. ^/ u# SEntrust my love within your heart
0 s& W( e, i3 K; P; d2 FLove… just the word love
' \! o; G# d5 c2 j0 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ q. [% H# f& c5 [; H. MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  v9 ^1 O2 a7 x" \* U. bCan I entrust it to you?
* I! e3 q  p" W" u5 ^# pEntrust my love within your heart
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4 Q5 B; T/ |2 P0 _) \3 V[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, ?' V1 c) t) Y: D4 ?<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 c3 I' f* w" j5 Z9 _/ A8 z# _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. x$ O0 C9 b: ]& T% `+ h# w! [, R* V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 O8 S, b+ u# [! u9 \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) w4 @2 n$ n3 i<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ P# N! g" ~* s) o<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  _; i. I, b* F6 Y* o& o<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 `0 t# \% a: F2 ?! i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 z: k' u8 `3 n. F" J5 |4 |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 C: \6 o9 O/ z3 e$ ^* R<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* ?0 F0 A2 c$ Z# X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 n: }: t+ N# h# R1 w<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 i% o( N5 G& l/ `9 {<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" E# y% p! F# ?% j1 {5 e<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* W2 f6 a7 }+ {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; K1 i% K" H% u7 R4 R1 @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, j$ E2 q  U, H8 i. _, l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 g8 K3 i) J9 B8 v% ]; x2 y1 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# l* s! t+ R1 y3 w8 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ B( d' P' Y  s6 ~$ {+ Q: j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 A5 E3 P% S& N5 x' O5 `2 |# \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 i; e9 j) Q4 k% Q, m3 N$ {) |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 M' N0 @! s- X9 m# c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# @- l5 Y; @' r! Z0 g# P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ v+ h) A8 y' U0 g% h' y/ l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! }9 d# z& p& m; u6 ^3 t# O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 x, j: p! Z2 B$ J( m: E6 p; O2 C/ b<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 v; R6 U: R& V5 _<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ |$ e$ T( t/ G% _3 A* W& t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 E0 S3 _7 ?7 w& x% Z4 ^$ _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! Y- w- k, N3 w& y+ |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. ]: V' [/ f1 W- E, {) @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ m( W; Y' P$ v1 f1 F& Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

, d/ }* }# f4 d7 z( j/ B这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) [0 l+ U/ L3 E8 w4 O( e这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ G$ J; ^1 j6 a: c* W+ x- {! ^<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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