【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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+ m% D# Z' [6 L我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 T3 h4 ^) j; E& P+ J% w4 UThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  y4 l2 o- ]  f9 c+ {2 B4 _I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) o0 {" {: x( `) VIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 y: Q0 F4 w; C5 ELove… just the word love
: ]5 j2 i" }# M: }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: t3 v- `! }! xBut I never did
' \9 r% o4 F0 s: f! cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* \3 ^4 o7 o6 S! ?If today isn’t too late,
3 H7 o7 p* v3 i; R/ JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 \9 F& D, a9 Y% p+ u5 b9 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) K1 s+ ~9 l$ @" v2 U* P9 gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* V2 i. A0 W8 i  \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 f5 Z" D& N; l/ E0 s4 M3 O. ?2 e: FIf today isn’t too late,
- l+ s2 g' d( v. h% O# B9 rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 Q+ B2 U8 o0 Z8 D: R' p- Y8 ~* g7 PCan I entrust it to you?
- M8 |: z5 g! Q0 o( V0 XEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
  S5 O! m/ l8 bEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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) y% R& Y) @* ~% E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 g% b7 F% t5 ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 h: R" O* z8 M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" c/ f+ L# z2 D' H$ ^6 G0 A  g<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 _: c$ n9 x) e' N" L/ g8 T1 E$ k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 x" T6 z3 r" O% {% @) }3 P<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! n; ]/ q, \- f2 I6 N0 Z8 |<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: b4 k7 q/ X! V# ^1 F4 [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. d: `: d: G, P/ u3 o5 k<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ L  h5 F/ o* ?9 p3 l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: S! R% f; s8 K( |<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: R* d' `7 _) }3 P, x<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ z+ y1 V) B9 x4 l  x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& S( l& |  u" {! {; y# n& a- Y" P7 _<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 v. C- \% @+ ~: u! g2 Z/ D7 o<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ s8 e; `% Y* Q3 @; q2 q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 v# f5 q! L/ g, u, b: c- l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 Q2 x% [0 X, [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 m) j5 ^* ^$ n! p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 @; s) W1 J( L7 Z( `  |2 Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! B6 f2 w% Y; `9 F/ {1 I% I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ i9 L3 e8 P4 C' g2 p* h/ i! R* r9 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ m7 x# @" @3 h& `6 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" A4 M- V3 b7 k+ T9 G# ]* g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% E/ |$ W. s$ |# v<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  T  E; D) B: x- |2 w9 i" v- k<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: N! S8 N% l% d. M4 _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) H1 B( W/ k* h  C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! \# d4 K& v, v% h5 t# _6 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# |" t5 V+ Y% E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' W( V7 T2 X  @  Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 w" E) ?; Q  x: H$ v6 b1 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 U  `- @% q& F) A( U* P" E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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( a/ Y, I% y$ G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. S& X% x, v+ `/ |7 m( s2 c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# H2 i+ q9 }$ _4 i2 P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>