【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
; D& m8 h3 p  CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  P5 O; E" D9 g8 DThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( z% Y: ~% c% c2 ~' CFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) l# }2 W* h5 J  V9 w2 RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 T* b. T0 ~3 H6 G+ v" fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- Q* I: U5 ^# NBut I never did
' Z( K, K. Z' vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 z9 G( K( \& S. F, A/ a. `  OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 o8 B  ?( o& f; R0 u- \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) S5 b/ C, I6 i5 o* F8 \Entrust my love within your heart
) h+ ^; l: E  z* HLove… just the word love
+ v  D* U$ F( `3 gWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& v, R! M+ V8 e4 E; tBut I never did
3 T: |0 [4 z* I' j# r2 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# |( h% p: c+ x( ZIf today isn’t too late,
7 Q6 R5 ^( j* H8 L  J: o0 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# k9 s' v" }6 y4 VCan I entrust it to you?
' D; A0 z6 }* [  A. [! ~+ oEntrust my love within your heart
  K3 g3 b2 Y) U2 w7 UCan I entrust it to you?
/ j3 w% z* ?; T5 J- k" Q$ zEntrust my love within your heart

0 d  D& }6 q( z; [) k! o) R9 z8 p[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. T7 B* K7 O5 q. x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' v5 F2 E# {& v<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 t* |4 |, Q' |) o3 a+ R; P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 L6 o+ A/ [& o; T( E<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# W' B' Q( R# b<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 W& B9 {8 B% d2 {% E& y$ J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& F* S4 P, o5 |8 e. a7 I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 J0 y( L% p0 E( j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 V, Y, Z: p4 ]& \1 S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% l5 x. R: Z) i" B; d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: g3 F* k% }6 Y4 F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- T2 M9 }  E& g2 Q* }/ K' |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 I( j5 S; X8 v5 T7 B! e  h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 O. q4 c, S: \& `% p  m: S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  K8 Q3 ]( p1 E/ K5 ]# {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: N+ B  g2 K+ U% e5 {6 Y8 Z$ B7 j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( o7 D9 S2 B% ^$ C" C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 ?- s) r; L' N7 Q0 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 M! E  X/ u. P) c/ T: }% x/ g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% J: I) O6 q  L1 t1 T8 V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 Z- g- u! _/ a3 p7 |% i<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 J. ?2 w9 d, Q; |+ L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) i, X& Y; E+ P3 n& s+ P  }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; ]) K) F! [5 w$ l: h" W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. a: B. ^6 k5 k8 I! {6 e3 Z$ @<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 ^0 G& ]9 b1 r3 ^0 m3 L: J: `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 z* ?1 r& @' R  H. d. |& N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' J0 x: x6 T# c* k+ j; ]7 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  U) ]% |1 s: }6 t/ u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* f1 x! [) W: W/ y( H5 c* Q' F. `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* L3 Q: S* L$ O6 C( q/ z% g) p% M4 f( M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 `' |/ Z& h% i2 |# m% d  {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 ~3 O6 Y! V9 x  i3 c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" t0 n' o4 T6 c4 \8 l9 e 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" ]) G% [- S$ Q6 v) _& `/ k, J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 `. q$ l, C: x1 ?2 M  s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>