【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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3 I+ Y0 |& Y) O( P* r3 _我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 y; m7 l5 ~: ]+ `1 B* O5 OFrom the first moment we met,
$ m) }6 {* l5 K8 {6 KI already loved you with all my heart
' @* t+ g1 h% d# V% FWe meet and talk everyday,
6 u1 q. d2 J0 m/ E7 ZBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 U7 N  A/ `0 Q! uIf today isn’t too late,
( p( b' ?: m6 s/ _% I4 oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; \# g) ~, G; e9 A5 n; oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ m# N+ u( X7 r. ~  WCan I entrust it to you?
6 h5 z# {4 @% D6 BEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% Z, P$ _4 j( l8 g- d* LWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 K$ G- K8 U' u0 n5 j4 L% ^$ b) BI want to confess that I love you,
& O4 z7 g( B  G! l* KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' e5 r  m. I8 p2 DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# P- b- ]0 L) E- H1 o9 l! e3 P$ eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: K* W- y* m, d9 zEntrust my love within your heart

* u( ^' F5 ?) B. a$ Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 a  e) o  s7 w$ W+ {6 Y/ |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' l3 |. h. z& d. I+ D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! I8 Y  @# F4 `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 M5 _. m% B" j( ?* c" Y, v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% y" |3 ^3 q: h. \. g, g5 j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 [3 V: E2 J. C  s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ H2 Z7 d5 z) W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. ?- f. ^' R+ K  g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% j. i* W' A: }" C/ H6 E$ m- _( I" I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( Q: c& u, C8 L& C8 `4 y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 r" |  _- D+ l; j+ c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; {, W3 A% i. |! h/ b# O2 L, ~<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 d( N# N, S: P; A7 p! W$ l<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  E! A- e0 h8 q: m8 Z& a<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* U. H' s$ E0 ^- g0 K- v- i# _2 s<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 N6 s4 g2 N, P# x7 ]8 v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) z+ C1 m, A9 z$ |4 d- I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! E3 D' E4 R* Q4 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! Y) w! c$ E& ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' k$ U' [1 |1 \* K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- }( C, R' o; P/ H# u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ m# q: c/ N) h8 a- _- z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ J* K7 c& f' _' p! u  k<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ y1 g# W) L" H. c' h<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ m$ c2 G" @$ y# a7 D6 W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ F  I' p) G( X7 J& e. u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, w" [: Q. @1 m5 m8 p) r. {& W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* i& \, E* f. T6 }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 P3 L- Z/ e! b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. h5 r8 L  L, r! ]6 E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# S. f1 C6 {- g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 ?) w8 ?6 A6 b2 v# h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ @, q$ Q/ c! k, R. H* L- h/ v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 C0 ^/ k/ W. h, i+ U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>