【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 Y' w) S# ^- g7 w$ g- @0 @我另将歌词附在此。
7 m+ v3 [7 q  p- O  s- r" `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, |0 K* V$ r, A  t" ?2 c/ B' ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# l' i7 \6 W$ A2 \) Z# f9 I1 dWe meet and talk everyday,
* Z; o1 z4 _7 A. g  o0 GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 Y& X* F% ~+ ^) y3 S! _+ X' QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# m( @% A/ |7 O8 L: s0 L7 \/ {I would probably know how you feel
/ d, a1 |: r2 _Love… just the word love
0 M- m+ d- Z+ F. J) F$ UWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. M1 n7 t) x& q6 mBut I never did
' s/ c0 I$ O4 k" FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: Y2 T& Q4 [8 E& ?7 s7 kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  f: w5 R" r: y3 @, uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 c; M  O1 I9 Z! J9 l) W$ AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 r- [* [6 `* e* b/ ~8 R5 AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 h) T# Z7 y; f4 x( WCan I entrust it to you?
7 u5 G$ J9 x5 N* E3 N2 k( ?7 Q# C' JEntrust my love within your heart
8 H9 |0 d6 ~. f7 n, `. _  @Can I entrust it to you?
7 }; j  C6 ~, T3 s; u! h! ^Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; @/ u9 ^7 @! S- `+ l; i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% U3 X" \8 Z% n) }# e* ]3 J  s<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 `5 r6 k; O' V& i# g, a0 O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 W# }+ @9 B* L4 f0 t' U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 D6 k6 g" H. F. S9 x4 W* ]8 O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 m6 f3 g, p. U0 W$ q! R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. x1 s! `9 x) i# g" Y5 p9 Y# W<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 B, Y- w1 N2 G. v$ I0 J* A3 L<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ c1 t1 J5 b4 o0 ~$ V' ^$ X* I<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 y9 ^! G9 `% J% q7 t7 W7 p2 F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: Q4 b) r  L3 Q4 b<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- [" q8 r. V  M- L8 ^" T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 U- v# B0 H4 b6 g; V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 V% J6 ~( [- m3 w& g+ }# q. z; J+ e<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 ]: R5 ^- w/ I7 `  a6 i: [$ M* X<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( @* O6 f* N8 s8 F) K' E+ ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 J- [, R9 t* ?1 K0 W, l) n% z& r/ p# B# S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& r0 ^7 d/ T: |/ f" J& ^4 [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& H% K; w) Q* j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* ^. E! ?/ L) g<P>But I never did </P>
5 P4 @" y4 o. l& W, t6 b<P>但我不会 </P>
' H% k6 G* P! E2 h. N: J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( ]% v1 e' c3 X* P2 @6 A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) \( V9 P1 J; ?- i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 Q% x9 T4 t: C$ W3 b9 K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* O* y) R$ k5 o( ^) l! E- P9 u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! r( `" r  v" h$ `! C; [; f0 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 @+ M, V0 ?- g5 x1 L; ~/ N8 [4 Q2 p 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

& n4 H" d1 P  |- r' H/ R1 {8 B这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. b0 Q- u: x1 |* [( Q% J2 M: O, E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# V4 K4 y% F( f5 c. E9 `# ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>