【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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4 p+ t" S9 R, B& ^8 j1 s5 T5 l# ]我另将歌词附在此。
# o9 D# {3 b$ e& U5 xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; H% K  k/ m; G/ V* k. i( m8 i) ~From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
! L  n  y3 |" f! I: eWe meet and talk everyday,
! M: r0 f; z% T. \; ~3 u2 GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* g4 g0 `, b$ n: P. fI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% a, e/ L3 N6 H' ~3 qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ ]. k# `; n* GEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" B7 }0 {% z9 f# k5 _Why is it so difficult to express?
# b* s$ K+ C  r0 i! E+ eI want to confess that I love you,
* M9 e' \6 w& E: t. FBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 a/ C% J3 x9 W- u  Y0 N2 y- fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  }9 t% C9 @2 w: s/ hEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, Z+ ~% }& Q' ]4 ~. ~$ hEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; i1 l, K/ a& C  Q# D& _- K, [; I<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 M4 F9 Y5 n' q( i( f& T* m0 v$ P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 ?7 N) k8 ^3 E<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 j# c' S( o4 y8 k7 z8 V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 D: q# f. }, q+ f. S6 q  ?: h! ?<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 L& x$ H5 `2 b0 n1 O: H! G9 H, g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* Y+ c% c7 M+ {: |1 J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# T$ f3 ~3 x# D6 ?% A. z1 t<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  q. y/ V7 r: A( t7 R$ o9 e0 _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% d' g& n) Z% @' ^. [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 {8 X8 t2 V: G' \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. D9 X7 p8 b0 d$ X& {# h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 P  p! m# [1 ]6 V9 |2 m" b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ w7 F+ ]4 C% i. R" j<P>但我不会</P>
* c/ {+ o. G2 E5 b$ d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 Q0 B, T% o" t2 |! W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 H+ j! Y2 z% W: E. ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& R$ F9 ]' j4 [1 M" ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) h1 V9 P# |- Y- L) R$ d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! ~& }' Z% |. m+ F7 \2 j) ~$ P0 B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ y7 t3 |  h1 h* l! J& \7 }<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
# U9 _6 ?$ E+ a<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ ~5 D9 O- g1 O3 c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  |7 U4 H, @0 {5 r( q7 W% G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 a  G! g/ k4 U/ G& ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* W/ b9 D: n' C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& z2 G& P" w& u" N# h/ B3 o) {% q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 M0 D: \5 X. ~& f# m$ z 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 ^% t/ e& d' N& @) d+ J<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>