【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 j, o5 w4 D) BThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. ~! C& a5 q! II already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 `- B$ J  Y$ L5 ?: H9 i, A  B  OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# Q% E, z5 f7 G1 cI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 r5 {! ]2 P5 ^5 T( j$ UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( N- X5 E4 T  z% Q. q* yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& M; ?2 l  D5 D2 j9 f2 Z- @( XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 r; i4 G6 ?6 M2 QI want to confess that I love you,
- E( }) |2 l3 D4 b( X5 t7 C8 QBut I never did
; _+ f& K, O5 T* aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ h" c0 p; F0 b) EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ g( n7 J* ^% tEntrust my love within your heart
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2 S* L6 }4 H5 c8 I* L" n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* D& p+ x! X/ j5 h; h) s<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# ^! B& f2 N1 t0 _) S) \) O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! _3 b. j1 s$ ?8 X, K; e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# z1 Y& f' A- k1 Q2 {/ [  Q/ q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 }) n) n3 |% W$ @( I8 P) r<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, d- V, n1 A; \- M( h7 F% M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 h- J$ Y2 S0 }7 s% J8 B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 T& F/ O! P1 ^5 P! }* b5 C<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- q2 F& q3 A6 I: h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' R4 M% ?4 Q# V8 i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 O+ h! f% T+ k, n# u. H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% c) G+ y- T( A9 K0 Y  z9 A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( Y( M# b1 H' m4 ^1 {" q: c<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ r  B5 }5 `( S) h( [5 s8 B( i# G8 t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 ^$ _* @0 J& @; U3 Q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% W, Y2 ^/ d( z, ?1 ]; r9 r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: @1 P( q# _& R1 H% V4 u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" x4 t4 V& ?' n$ d6 |% l# x& s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ Q7 K; D  L9 s0 `2 h" X+ v4 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 [4 Z' b1 E0 {' x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% T: j1 @1 Q: V* n, B' [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 N' Y9 ^* C2 ]5 w$ a* C" T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' @# a! U$ j0 m4 @) H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 V$ v; J/ o+ X* J+ z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 a( l4 v( I( ]8 i; Y+ k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 b1 c0 I& l% B7 T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- t3 ^/ V6 R4 f' x* d$ A<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* _8 O3 j0 _  f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  R+ G$ x3 c+ d: b7 X0 `8 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* \) V3 `3 [6 Z3 g) g$ B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  K* I! v; j' x! H* [$ O2 C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 K: F4 x3 i' _( Z/ e1 T' G0 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  l0 h1 Y) o2 C1 ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: Q  p+ w; Y( ~% }. ?- n<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>