【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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8 b( E8 ~3 x: p+ V: \( s+ T( LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, T) }* i' S+ @+ S2 x2 n  JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 k; n& S. u5 h1 U4 JI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 `4 N: |% _  \# CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- o, S4 f$ t3 b* g! l5 ~. RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: b" Z/ R" U$ H$ g; K' v- B, eLove… just the word love
  |: l! \6 t9 ?% e! [Why is it so difficult to express?
: T8 d" p; l3 [/ FI want to confess that I love you,
# _( b- d% Q. mBut I never did
& K  [7 X, z; j9 aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) C* S& M2 M1 B8 p) C4 fCan I entrust it to you?
# q/ r8 P' Z3 U0 j' m2 u) ]Entrust my love within your heart
8 {5 h6 q. B# Q# Q" `1 \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 C9 z0 _$ D% E" B+ I<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) ?! {7 a9 t$ @! ~4 e8 {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 Q; w2 S7 f7 F+ \& o  W$ H- F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* r3 \3 a$ z5 n- K1 k4 f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 {! S' d2 I9 j+ O, l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 E0 ]8 O' o) ^; p- B( o<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 W+ g3 q, S+ _- e' [" o; s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# V0 t0 Q9 J# ]+ q5 ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 C9 a- `* P4 \<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# y9 u: s! X5 g- h1 l5 X9 V<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) N7 N# u0 K) q+ b& Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* ^$ N/ K' u  j7 X- P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& c( c  e& Y" I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 P" A& C* T% J( @  O5 {* T: X<P>但我不会</P>
5 V3 B/ H' x# T- D& F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 x4 S6 K  O6 C( {6 c, W<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 H3 c# [! ?$ o3 H' E# m. f' j* r6 c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! {( k  f. [: s9 U: O, T2 m. ]: ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; K( k8 D+ G# q+ u$ c8 b8 H! _/ S9 R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 l1 ^# A) O+ P) s9 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. ~# ^) {3 l' Z5 g5 r1 ~0 l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 R, ^7 r7 I! H! g- g9 i' G<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 g& J% O9 q5 p. t( P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& I/ F- e# H8 k0 q9 i<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 f$ X, M5 H* i; l0 o5 i) f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( L0 B& r+ ^" h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: ^3 s% n$ Y$ U; [! I, y1 I! C' G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  @$ m, g; j" E# |" Y3 u9 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ a$ a+ g4 \, V' G/ p+ [; E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  d4 T" i( ]- G1 m4 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 t& ]  T% k( _$ X  |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 [8 X3 n7 ^5 _& r% k9 }/ R1 l<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 _5 \3 I* L8 u- `) Q7 d- Y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% l5 f! V" M) [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>