【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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* \. q1 ]8 O5 y" @6 }" N) v7 m我另将歌词附在此。
& |( n" z5 S- C) ^  UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* M3 m- R/ d0 g7 S1 ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
9 f; h  N5 S4 y+ \3 u* Z9 l$ CWe meet and talk everyday,
0 z- t. D5 u- o7 h6 E% o# g+ d7 TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ w9 @5 G! D7 ?% {0 P" `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, S; ~' F& f9 U2 o$ s% DI would probably know how you feel
# v) R% {7 z& Q8 R: QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 _1 O2 h, t+ [" a; D# [$ i- wI want to confess that I love you,
# u  P% _& a/ r2 L6 BBut I never did
; _9 b' ~& K6 TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 g$ h, d, }- o4 h/ NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ r( P/ |- C2 \# s5 zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" ~4 \" H. K- r, s; Y$ s# Z9 ZLove… just the word love
2 a* Q1 O  w3 X, mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  {; z+ ]0 }8 c- T+ rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 P- Y: G0 N' s! }; \+ G8 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 q+ u1 A- j, f% A/ }Entrust my love within your heart
: g) y  o" j. q& J' w$ z, q; G7 \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& X- ?( R6 j+ s$ M: z( o1 U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 B8 s5 |( e! x2 g0 {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# M3 p1 q6 f) c4 J1 X( O0 |0 `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 k1 d) a7 T, P<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# v, f: e. W% X<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, b: y, g' ~3 G; y. k( e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 [/ K$ D" a# Q  E<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 p. T: Y) J! n4 B" B# |; f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ n6 W0 \; p) e  p/ d<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, u7 F, _! k8 T% x" j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. ~/ X$ U" \* }* |9 j+ q! x: {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 s) o, t. \* @; }$ ^+ ?3 H* f' q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, c3 g9 g: C/ ^$ ^! e% D1 `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 P" x+ h0 f5 P: H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ P/ D8 j, L& N+ i3 n, S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, C8 {+ S* D" ~, E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' W7 F3 O7 }9 K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- K, _  z  [: i0 ]" L$ }0 _<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
, q7 Z2 Z  B$ e; g4 ~( V<P>但我不会 </P>
7 a+ {# ?. L* H, q3 P8 u<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ b) |, Q' ~9 N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 r7 w' v. n" @1 b! Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. M" |) M; R. \4 E" m7 M. B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 S3 L3 H% \+ u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& m* g5 j; _; \5 _0 b$ _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ N3 Q6 T) ^* Y# r6 G* A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 `0 P/ G3 l! N- E- S3 u+ S, m 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 s" l) N7 J$ p9 X7 C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# s, F; A: ]3 z: d" M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>