【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ D! C1 A  a/ j% |/ U# ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 j' m" B8 J7 j0 `- k1 GFrom the first moment we met,
3 p, z5 K4 D: Y! }7 gI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
( F& o; o) ^8 p3 y: f+ U0 T/ ?8 {5 tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) w7 m1 V1 k4 q8 ZI would probably know how you feel
4 q; |# {* V) z0 m1 @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 h' q* p9 g* X" |- b0 `8 tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 Z/ v6 [5 H. J- D4 [$ ~* K- y! oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 c! V; B5 ?% `1 PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& ~, \9 N% B, Y8 UEntrust my love within your heart
) I, p* I0 @: uLove… just the word love
1 ]7 R1 s# e( B8 r, v0 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* Q) U' _5 A' P1 sIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 H3 g5 F) o; U' }! h% F. ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) }6 b2 ~/ b: H; k. B% xEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
" A8 m0 {0 u; J6 N" H. @Entrust my love within your heart
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4 \, ~4 \5 H2 h/ `2 N7 D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 X: {, ?- q  @, j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! o; N. H5 Q0 a  h" n' _7 c<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 H8 M6 L7 C" R7 N! ?# e- r<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 [; Q0 s, h( Q1 Q$ s6 h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 h7 O3 h' B. i7 x) s4 p* ]6 @( c  B9 \<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  g1 N3 c5 x6 |9 n/ \4 T. D6 s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 k' q3 L' g6 ~  R  p) p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 p! H1 v0 a5 p! V" X2 J. f5 J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 r/ `7 ?- J( H5 l: E3 \0 u<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" V7 ?9 ~& A. M2 r# W& p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 L8 K; A  S0 Z4 L6 Z# _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ r+ r" @+ @* O3 x0 w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  p" i. h2 N0 r3 _5 H$ m- R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 G* N, \" N8 k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, W  ^1 v: Z8 v4 @& x; y3 B' q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( s, a; ^  e% |' {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% W% \* W. h  C6 i: t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 q& }, W5 n3 f2 \% \3 N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' I- S  y: d: O% j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 b0 T# d' d* X<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
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<P>But I never did </P>
. Q+ l0 _. c- ]: y$ j<P>但我不会 </P>
, ?) q  k9 [  a! x% D, `1 a# k0 K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 d+ C4 m: K$ y; i1 F* C6 F5 y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 P# t" A0 h# s4 y+ L9 R/ ~4 }7 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, f; a  w% V$ H5 `) P$ e- G, w" T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) l+ B8 F+ q( Y" ?1 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& @. _' M3 g5 v+ j' [; f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- \7 I4 V5 A6 j' v* p' S- |3 n4 C<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& m4 l! c: {% k3 {# ?, h- b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>