【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
$ q& T3 `, T% ^  a% PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 }7 @: L! b) c+ p, h: GThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ D" M6 F  a, n: a: F$ @+ tI already loved you with all my heart
' e( \7 Y/ `0 e- S, I; [5 OWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. w/ V$ |4 m  z6 r0 vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ ^/ A  v0 m6 t3 NLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ F$ d3 J! c, GI want to confess that I love you,
/ Z! R& ~+ m  l+ x* D5 tBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 _. H/ `' v( k# r* Z/ YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% d3 i0 ?6 A* JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 u& v% s$ u7 f- s4 ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' S# i- L. j" S- s" o2 ~. |But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# ~4 P! D( s/ BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 Z5 i  s% C; A. v; N. mCan I entrust it to you?
/ ]7 L; H2 k6 N( U* ~$ ]5 b& M6 dEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 U3 E4 p% E) ~. h; e: h. K% [. e<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ e9 R8 l: {3 g- c. O' v6 a* Y; t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; T* [" G0 p3 J# W/ U& g% {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, O$ {$ `1 M* X* R5 E1 V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ J* v8 ~1 q$ J* a3 |3 H- P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 C; |: W) [+ K6 x1 a4 O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, S$ r) Z9 M: ]! O8 a2 I% |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 E# R! H5 X% Y5 _+ x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# [1 t$ b  [2 F( U8 o( u<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: Z% j: W3 X( s  \0 [5 x6 E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 d; i, w3 ]/ [$ j4 ^$ f  S<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 B& I6 \5 R8 `. G, ]( j: I$ N9 V, s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# x+ I9 f7 U7 z  ?* q' ?# F/ S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 Y* j5 z! I" E" }1 M8 z5 g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% _1 m% a9 R7 R9 X! }<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 t( x( j  W$ j0 r1 K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, C8 ^1 o. u" J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" X  D+ ~( w% t. e<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' M# O1 q  ]: h2 d8 E4 P  e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" ?( Y. D) }: T9 w( o8 V* o8 a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 Q' K4 _- Y' I3 V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# U6 X) S! t# l2 y2 N/ X0 [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 I% a) B# ]; o5 Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 y% ?: B1 |* F2 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# w8 q3 S$ F( n, [! i9 w7 B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ M/ p! P! y& [; {0 r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>