【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, C4 M, B0 j, \$ z2 J" HThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
! \& J9 n, X1 `1 QI already loved you with all my heart
% q/ k' \4 G; g+ M3 U2 e; UWe meet and talk everyday,
2 B& L& o2 {3 }$ KBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 G8 t" N. G9 JI would probably know how you feel
, d; E7 T4 U1 O: e# l) C6 ~7 DLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 y, O4 L2 P" b- e; cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 y3 g" ^) {8 v7 c8 i; q0 CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; L% K- M$ G9 I) hLove… just the word love
9 d& p" x& @! G0 |( \Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; @, M: u* q' _5 |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ S' A6 K3 P" d# YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& o) g$ I9 A2 L& x1 }: w/ ]/ ?Can I entrust it to you?
8 Z7 c0 c( B5 q# W; rEntrust my love within your heart
+ q0 s* L4 ^9 G6 b1 y6 k$ kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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+ F! D9 Y9 L  d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& J7 a8 ~5 I9 r- J1 S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 @6 p0 w* t7 j. e6 O. M2 }, T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! F) j  i. T6 ~7 |4 V+ C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 f8 K6 R' n- a1 y- n) q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ X; Y; p% E3 [& C$ T3 L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 j% D8 p0 f2 ]1 c<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 F* Q) W. W+ a0 Q; k# E- F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: n% F. Q, I8 q; c0 m8 \<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) m, @' G4 T& |7 n7 z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ _6 b. o) H0 k/ u: Y2 ^7 d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ \3 F" G- \" u5 w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- D: ?. o3 M: i/ ^% y# `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 F6 h- j  z( O, T( z1 l( L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 @' R6 T: {; E- N3 Y( W9 m6 X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" I* V$ z  }/ _9 N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 c9 l5 \6 ?$ o; k6 H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  |5 e" [( W/ g% j: Y, t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; k- M, j0 ]5 x$ a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( U2 m% @8 e4 x  i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 O- M: n' z$ K; \1 d<P>But I never did </P>
: M% \7 B/ R' q<P>但我不会 </P>
; m* N  S/ q- E0 H8 m# ^2 m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 C8 J8 k4 g2 k2 _& j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% |8 ]& o: T: |# L" q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 G9 e' _8 e; V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ l2 ~7 {+ N. K% z2 a! |  @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( b  P: T5 Z, l& K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ R1 X# l; B* S2 l7 j这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 \  `: f% g' W. d  U<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>