【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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  b6 N& w% w* U0 A我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) k* R  N3 y+ U4 M# b4 uFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 |. n6 U' Q; z# D' Q2 ?# LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* R8 C/ c5 G1 P1 r* BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 a6 a. w  G$ w4 ]9 }" ]0 E% {I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 D- o) n$ S  t7 W2 A$ JBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 s3 H4 r9 A4 h: Y0 v4 oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. X  }. n# h  o( N+ X5 aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 l7 D/ b$ c9 |9 Y- \( w$ {Can I entrust it to you?
! J5 ?6 _1 w/ e& X/ f' uEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ V- n1 L# C6 J' h. P  X2 {But I never did
, u. G/ m2 @/ tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 u; z1 I5 z$ N2 o+ pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 y" a* G! [% X4 D# a3 u$ lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 A1 Z6 x# ?) G% Q. j' a. V; cCan I entrust it to you?
. l$ e# n2 C- Y; U; T4 E2 XEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ l- T, ?/ {) N$ I& v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& \9 ]$ \" M, e* e<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- C$ W8 c) w0 u( ]  y# A% L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; d" i  S3 z$ G8 U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, z# k3 h: c) z, x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 W: ^* {/ Z/ Y5 n) i' |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 I4 k% |5 w4 v6 F, _$ p( e<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' Y" v3 J+ U. M! R<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 l* {6 \  t* j# p( \$ b* d" G/ N<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 Y# F/ P. w; r1 X# }# G<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 Z5 x0 R$ ]3 [( H/ y  l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' t7 B4 M- X: \/ v2 e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* q9 y; k7 M" o/ y) d' b3 _/ M  \9 d( P<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: r9 D0 ^+ y/ O) y, f) Y$ Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* n, X6 `8 R/ L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 H: z8 F% K7 J( e# f$ k' A. c3 q, X3 G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  \) p, n4 [* d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! T' M, A( r# h  s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 G/ T& d" @1 c6 B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ e1 x: G% f0 D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 W+ J* A( w4 [) R; Q! x<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! q2 C/ `+ S1 Y<P>But I never did </P>
) G# n# A0 z6 v, G' K1 M<P>但我不会 </P>
- m* H) M+ V1 C4 j9 S  U2 }8 ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* {, Z  o8 v. {3 g<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# V. w; a% N& I* r, P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 f2 b2 J0 u2 r. V1 v4 H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ `( p& ?' k) u2 A( g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. _$ g6 u/ h& W! p8 Z: v# ^) W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# ~( ]/ i+ ~; M$ n+ `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& z* D( W; h* b2 y% L! C<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ a% R( X, ^; O; c: p- T% j 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! d- ~3 d& x. l6 Z/ q& c) X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 |5 G0 L1 f- D! R- Y/ x: |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

  Y* m3 W) q/ g5 X, |! c( s( x+ n<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 W' P  H& T% q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 J/ Y! ]2 R. n- N9 q) A1 H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>