【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, [9 F9 t4 P5 i4 l4 U4 y  @/ n我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% A! r/ L. r- uI already loved you with all my heart
6 A0 q0 I; x( _- vWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 b' j" q5 u& WLove… just the word love
. \/ t" f; S# T$ f" s. XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( r$ y9 o1 @' b1 R# u( E( q+ UIf today isn’t too late,
  O& `8 [& r. j3 \  @4 k/ nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 [! q! g& v- W, c. n& b5 \0 RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( z9 H: p( L7 m9 @$ l4 S+ q5 ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 @! ~$ u7 G. }5 eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ M# @9 q$ _7 GIf today isn’t too late,
" F) @3 ?6 n/ E3 A( V- D' @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 i4 m* s* E6 R! F) j: FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 z/ Z& L  f( A- k7 f  ^7 UEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' I6 s: J: f% d. t; Q: G2 U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( I- `5 U; b2 t" U3 h* o# x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ L, u1 }$ F# ?* V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% R/ E! D8 ]6 e# r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ r! r! c8 C& Q# B( @5 R0 T" q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! ]8 |$ |6 m2 ]: |# m0 ]+ m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# e2 z. o/ `4 w6 Z+ ]/ e% l, Y" N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% `# s# _0 ]4 K+ U0 c  ^, E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  }5 }, ]! J3 W$ J7 }9 ], F: M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 R+ n* c7 |! |: I  Q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' E3 ~6 ]+ _/ a/ i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 O8 {4 f' }0 D% v7 J- D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 w3 \) F7 ]4 n# h. ?9 q. B<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ B$ ~3 X* h! a4 C# w" C% _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 Y/ t) {* z" r<P>但我不会</P>
1 @2 J4 a9 G' |% h7 m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ [, ^9 \7 i3 C1 a# t5 f% z  {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, k: O# k* f! m; I<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 ?; R) Q  a: j1 A) f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 U, r, u1 K3 M2 d6 @) Q0 D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 H  p2 M; l% Z6 q$ ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, _( G, X  Z8 m6 z, R1 T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# Z! _' g; r% [; ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 N4 h7 ~/ D& z$ A7 @<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: A+ U. i# s3 ~0 X6 `<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: c8 d; J7 }2 o3 y7 m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 ~. Q3 k+ A: d6 p* ]& M3 A<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 Y/ }0 {, K% L4 e! E. o" z2 C# [- P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- z  s) Q4 B5 O( P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 h2 F% I% a9 H6 T. [* z# t* x  j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. X+ V* e- y" w$ K% S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ F; m" ^8 }; a" U& d& M<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, x9 e& X2 R8 G' F2 N, |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& z$ N/ o  T- g- v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 B) U5 x: y( N: c5 X; C这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 }4 ~! e% _4 y; P8 y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>