【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 E  b/ g6 G( _6 H我另将歌词附在此。
" g4 P$ _+ M! c. K5 [7 |& u1 `; `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
9 R& V& i' @$ ~: |I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! f7 Y3 `* P8 ^; V# b. xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! Q' w- F( m! X+ T6 }$ G. cLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& Q7 K, l; h1 i( Y; DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& }# o8 m1 B! v; M: @6 o7 q5 Z& B& iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 n/ v: y7 g0 H# X2 L/ iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ m# m$ D! f( iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 `6 ]) c  I5 }0 O  A; FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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" b: H* i- Z1 X/ X) d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# u3 R* n& z- f9 `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& a' B# C9 v0 w2 E6 g7 h+ @* w& R5 f<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 `3 t& |( c- K9 ^$ z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% g5 i% S7 y  R5 Y) }2 r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 ]6 X0 r; s4 n  s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 y% u7 @' n. t  w9 d4 o* g4 K! v<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 a, J5 J0 T7 v2 i+ G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ z- z. r" X& v' W6 @* P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ N( ~' }) J# c; n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  n1 B0 o( g0 d. A- C+ n4 ^4 W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; m. k$ @, J$ M' L0 k. k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ ?, a. s2 q" H* r' p) R7 e; b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" f; P  R8 B  q7 I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' e3 j; E2 D9 b. `0 T" W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. U8 i7 |! D( L- |3 v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& x7 `4 U6 F$ h8 Y: f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) ^- Y- ^) u$ Q8 |3 B8 D# K& F* R- x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& Q# q" n, m8 U2 W; C* j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 Z1 y# g7 y9 ?" v  q4 K. E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 m" H: a! B# A$ `; e" z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; M5 o$ V: e: {$ E! D$ J; m: N4 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 r& K( |6 i+ ]" J' T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, ?  [% u7 z& g" M5 A. b. \" Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* [- G, U$ v- m( l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  m% o6 o, G# }/ E; h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; H) @2 k' p3 u0 G5 K<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  E1 \; ?% `6 W4 e  O4 `5 J, @; U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  v. `7 K6 R8 w& F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. T, L) \8 Y. z9 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* x4 Z. N+ t. i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 @2 J+ i- C. `( X) a. S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( h# {" \. M+ ], x( J, @3 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 B3 b# Y( k* J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 @- z2 \% U# s% H: ?  x$ Q4 p, Z! i<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 q6 z/ y3 e8 c2 `0 N5 `. i这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 s4 z2 i& d  s) k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>