【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 J2 d) E2 [7 }我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 C% ~! ]( s6 n4 I$ RI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 r5 e2 {- c$ d6 p5 {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ e% z7 u% \; Q+ v% l) C3 UI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* j. j# j: c7 a, u9 ~0 d- [2 J, X$ PBut I never did
) c* N# y: s' q- A) cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% x/ {. B+ j% A) Q9 M) sIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 L$ \; `- I: A/ }1 s, b0 u0 U# [Entrust my love within your heart
7 i2 W2 {9 Y" {8 K# h1 e6 P. e3 xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& F- V/ G$ Y, q8 J& qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 D6 r/ \3 p: X! `6 i( XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. E3 L% ]6 n# h, N' GIf today isn’t too late,
2 U9 g% Z: n5 E  ]* E. d+ jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  t% y/ h" s! v, S! T; |1 o6 u/ pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 a" Q) w$ C% H  \: n8 ]( k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 ~% X; v6 ]( J; Y$ i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# o( }5 }% W+ ?7 t: e<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 w9 N4 k/ R" M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 T: D0 M' i3 ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! S% ~2 g4 D% J/ y, ?* t<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ l$ L$ I( G5 v* Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) T# R0 [# Y- v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# ]) W5 G) O" s! ]$ Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- i& y6 _1 _5 Y7 i5 O" p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% b& T( b* @6 i- V. j+ D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* H9 b6 i" V8 B" D4 |0 ~: C: t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' M2 i: f% e# ^4 g* C9 \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' f& G, p' F$ ]2 b3 D3 ]9 j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( d) j! Q* ?* u0 ^* V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ g; ^. q% ?/ X7 }& L/ N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 }. l1 W6 G$ J, x, ?0 ^* [7 H* P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" y2 J+ l6 \% ]# j& g( ]" `<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( _- a- y6 e& c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% t# y6 O/ _3 ~3 o* U. s  e<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. N7 N! W. w/ o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ P* a- f- z2 K/ t<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# M* I7 u) P2 i2 c7 W2 [2 Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 Z* I, J9 _" Y0 @! V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 q5 }" `6 `0 k( k, r1 u+ o/ F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  }4 l2 |+ p5 s- f* D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* P# ^+ M3 d7 M7 ^3 f5 k1 W- x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ i& i; ?& ^$ u% p& m! K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 y( ^4 x$ T5 O7 Y) F  f 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 }1 C+ m* Q/ t: h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>