【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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& l* }- q/ |1 h# t3 i9 n; A我另将歌词附在此。
% {5 r0 T2 H0 L2 ~The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 J' ]( O; b& PFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# N8 a$ k9 Z1 F$ m' M& v) A( QWe meet and talk everyday,
( ]; V4 o1 y! }% E/ ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# b! e6 {' Y( G- F! `0 XI want to confess that I love you,
4 A0 V- V2 Z' R5 J6 uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) E% b# M. q. L; z. X. ~9 jLove… just the word love
- [# ]. B7 ?# w, G& QWhy is it so difficult to express?
& c5 D1 M8 p9 h% l8 rI want to confess that I love you,
( Q% F, [5 c( {  RBut I never did
; C/ a4 X4 G0 Q0 t# q2 \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 ?, J+ h7 F/ B( v5 \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( f; v( s, f! ~. b8 K+ M) F* fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' d0 `& K7 k8 O* N9 l, J1 qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 B0 Q# a; n/ g4 C5 Z1 H6 RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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: l! V  f# x3 G& ]5 K( b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 k% O. a" I/ R" Q$ R<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( U% t( X! Q5 F" {: o) U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( w. Q- l- T8 f& w% u' a/ r- J% F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, g" t2 V( x- ]- X3 K1 W6 w" H* Q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 Y" d" e2 |% o$ p( a9 Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& ?: k8 {* h' Y& G* U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, }* Z) Y4 h6 ~, E0 E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 K2 H2 j) e" f9 w/ P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# p# T5 T2 ?& c; V2 X3 z& B4 ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 \- n  I, w, K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- J  q2 [! V6 a! U; j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 I% w2 S2 w/ |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; r% H* T* H0 Q8 c* q9 q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. u+ ?& }2 B0 ?* D* ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 p. \0 J% w6 x+ S+ o. V6 P5 n! n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 @& Z2 @: e) y/ ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- W) q( j$ L3 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% ]! f) z' X$ B# b9 k5 p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 g4 l2 N% Y& g9 i/ r<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 a2 d% @& ?- [' s" I% G: I<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 T8 A) q0 ^( p& |8 P+ Y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 O4 S2 S* L% `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 m% p1 t4 M# X% i' k7 j- l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, m, h  _& W5 V, ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% N' B' ]& ^# r0 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 D; x1 D! k" a% S# r- d- p! y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  T* A& H4 w: z4 r$ J- _<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& m4 X* O4 `9 l# ?/ W 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; e3 U' `' B8 L4 T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>