【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# ~4 W% H/ @% }- u0 C5 Z( ZFrom the first moment we met,
  G, q6 @) G& t2 X% RI already loved you with all my heart
" }7 M, p! H& y& N; `, Z" C* oWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 h) v$ b% @; r- U0 o* V" KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& a3 V+ j% Y" Y! H8 ]  u+ S* iI would probably know how you feel
# D! R; [3 P$ ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& ~. R( v+ f1 h( ]- fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; m+ \( w) ^8 D( rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# i8 l- A5 m7 q: Z, yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 [  S" L! \$ ?. p! a2 U; k* A+ B. QBut I never did
( i% T4 H& ?) X" TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- n0 y# E3 m: a, x7 E6 x% O; b9 [& tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 x% ^* Y* S; fCan I entrust it to you?
2 R$ z# \4 t# \& I5 ~! \Entrust my love within your heart
* O; Y+ D  a8 ?' mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 T6 b9 N* m0 K) [) m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  _4 s% U7 x4 \3 `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 \) C3 p: h; ~* L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, k+ Y' [. R' {2 e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ o" J: w7 k- [9 P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 E7 m9 M$ D9 U. p) S4 F. e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ q2 B+ q! i* ]) s2 v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 z# T* Z% R1 S, A0 {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ t9 ~+ R6 z  Y. F: b# Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- Q* B9 T. j# Y& O/ [5 E2 b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 N  z" m, I6 i) x( z( ^- i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# @1 T, z3 A4 M( ~4 T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, O8 k+ h+ n5 \$ }1 p. H+ {* o$ O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  c! A: Q, j  S# w5 K& B- l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 f3 `3 x5 J9 K$ p1 y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ h4 q" ~7 H; V$ i* p" ]4 n9 w% k<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( N% F$ b) f1 g( n  ~6 Z9 w<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 A' i" P; j2 U# J7 L/ I<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ N, I. D2 a" E6 l* |9 f3 T# q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 r1 m: [4 V& N9 P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ T" s: ^/ {: O- m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ w* a8 }8 E& e* }3 }+ N<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ P4 w. D; K4 j4 i9 ~; w8 A- C 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. E5 [! @  ^1 a6 t! I7 ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 ~( f3 w. ~  M  k1 ?2 U' R, X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  d2 l: e' @9 n0 m1 ^) d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>