【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
3 r) p, M0 b+ B) J7 @/ GThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" D; J- L( j5 XThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% H0 }: @- d- t  q9 P8 w+ vWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
6 C2 u: o2 k( k3 `8 ]2 RLove… just the word love
( J; ~5 x! O' J/ }6 N2 C; uWhy is it so difficult to express?
) O) g' e# s7 S& W' y2 |. wI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! V* y, l5 d. y5 k, PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" ]: B$ r. {; q* {! I3 \( YCan I entrust it to you?
8 U( [/ }! V: k: M; @Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" Q4 b5 z( `' a; L8 oI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ B7 A2 s/ \  ^- I' v: YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* A( [8 D- l$ u% y1 vIf today isn’t too late,
$ S' Y* D6 s9 m& SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 R* o9 f* e. v' ?, {+ VCan I entrust it to you?
+ {) o- z6 J7 q, @. D" H7 h: YEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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$ F4 U5 ?5 u: F) N% b5 G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( M8 z2 W  s; I, g5 a' Z) }( x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 w0 A  b5 Q- Z" T! q, @<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& J; M2 A* R! w9 W$ D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ I  m/ s9 r9 y, P<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 ]/ u1 _; i' l" s/ L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 E6 G7 ]6 o/ F) |  R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* X: U  p$ h( H; d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 n+ e0 `, d% n: d2 j. ~: B<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, `5 a% _" t5 j+ p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% H) z2 S& x" O  @  B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" Q! e; q: ]+ H5 N, g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ S2 L2 y6 \1 X4 e. `5 i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ L4 Y' j( u% N" g+ B! D* t; x<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; L* e1 I! i! C- h: w; V  f8 x0 ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* j' l3 _/ e  E* X6 y$ s, ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# b6 |  B- ?. _" V, y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 z! t% o8 a! V0 E+ i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: A" O1 ?+ a. n/ a- D: Q/ o, M# I<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 Q/ ^* m( o, a1 r9 E<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* ?( m' F+ Q6 i) t' v* ?* K/ r<P>But I never did </P>
% k0 p# ?" P6 H( C  v4 {4 a, ~1 B<P>但我不会 </P>
, P; L, _8 _& Z, M9 T8 g$ z  A" Y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. e" A; p( ~% x& H& f! Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 d0 h  k% Q5 E6 U! A<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" M/ N( N# Z' [* H  G. S) j5 r& t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 k1 Q: G1 n% G" G& H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 Z6 W, s& p' M0 i* ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( o% r, ]( z) G$ `- I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) }& _& t9 R$ S; F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 `' O( ~! N) V0 V2 P) J9 f# c& @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! @2 J" f! i1 H4 F  m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( o1 ^3 t& |8 f1 a<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: M6 z  n: Z$ |<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>