【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 r# f8 ^# A0 \% ]; [% z1 }) _我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" I- `7 ~2 S9 DFrom the first moment we met,
& D' H! ~+ b  T  r: T8 \I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) k6 H7 [) J8 w( O8 O! _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" L$ f* ?. c0 V; A% a! FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ b9 t  ^9 e9 _0 B1 B* W* OI would probably know how you feel
+ O- w! h& s. b. {. t  sLove… just the word love
0 ?: U! c, |8 u8 f# v0 l; U1 i4 UWhy is it so difficult to express?
& V9 |  }9 L& {4 D+ wI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: s' N* J# M+ |9 v6 f0 SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 a4 V) A/ {) W/ e" S$ _. V& kLove… just the word love
8 _& j* y- K- L: d5 q& K6 a1 M. I+ |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, k' Y. H+ h0 G1 q/ f5 h; _' sIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, v3 a7 S2 I) ?6 x3 l) I( n! \1 Q) }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- \7 ]: l/ _+ O3 VEntrust my love within your heart
; c! F3 k& b, C0 ^2 VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) G2 D9 K) r" v! Z  y: x% w# m9 i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 ^5 U& `  F7 t& D4 O+ D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 U, ]. l' R; r1 O: ]9 ]  k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" C) s# y6 e; V9 P, U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 e8 I/ l+ C- J, I8 ^. S) b<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. x8 A5 i# P: v( N7 B$ B) f* W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% f6 E3 m$ [6 m/ B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: Y( K& Q- B8 T4 D) u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! \$ M1 @0 r% O0 d0 z6 |) w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, r. b/ U1 @1 Z5 ~# g- X) b3 i# Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: J% [# R1 i# ^1 N" e2 A<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 N4 a0 ^% l4 q' c8 i! A( I# r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 k8 g, f: M, L3 [3 x9 k<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ [' n1 S% Z, L% G* i4 U<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 ]$ U7 K9 R6 [; J1 o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: D8 L; w, Y% P, Q* f& e0 K5 W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 ]! O7 M" t7 o8 {/ X0 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; h. c# O; X; v3 H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% D) L4 u0 I2 R8 r* Q) @, L+ W<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 p( e; c9 r2 V( f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ W0 e* I, B6 K( B3 p) \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% J1 d5 p% z& x. l' y5 v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% X6 f0 [# Z% |; z- P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 w2 K1 P# J( Y- z$ r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 }  w& N2 J1 g! N+ G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" f( m6 I7 L2 ~, Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! X: e& B3 d# J: a$ `5 o+ l9 y1 i  ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ T1 C' |7 r$ ?' `5 B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, v$ r1 o7 S: W/ Z+ E6 e7 Z3 ]" a 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ `& L  K& c( R, D6 b# g这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>