【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ X- ~* a% u1 s: eWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ d, z6 v& L3 m/ W3 GI would probably know how you feel
6 U$ d) l$ R$ Z3 uLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! @9 ~7 P8 h% |& o( ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 j& g' Y5 ]: BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 q$ ]! R8 }/ Q( z) j+ y2 jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! ~7 M, k. d8 r9 O+ kCan I entrust it to you?
" k0 Z" D; b* l  ]* JEntrust my love within your heart
* i& a) r, T- }& Y2 H" J! Z& ^Love… just the word love
1 \) t2 K' a. p7 [: JWhy is it so difficult to express?
: t+ F$ X! Y4 t" t/ ]) `  W/ ^1 `; GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ K# v$ v7 Y! Q' x9 Z* _If today isn’t too late,
: r1 I; n1 W/ f! N) |0 Y9 u; |- mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 y* k4 k; [1 b8 G! M$ WEntrust my love within your heart
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$ w( y# u. p9 s4 }2 F0 L$ h( e% i$ B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 V3 Q5 L5 a, {5 f7 R* _4 R<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) ^" R2 ^5 m/ Y  Y1 {! C! ]; r2 p<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. m/ v0 A& t% r$ ^7 l<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 k0 X* k- Y+ d! ]# j, i( Q7 }5 Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 G: {, u3 ], C$ G3 T8 z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; O7 \$ P" a9 y% g$ W7 @" F& t! X* p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 t0 T/ {( Z( @6 s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 X; m: T+ a8 a' L) u4 `3 X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 S* n3 C( C4 j0 p8 }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; L! w6 U1 p# S( ?$ p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% t  x$ D, a# W% W: b0 F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 F% n) @) B, E. k9 A9 J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ z6 X' a" y; K+ l* J3 M. ]; s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 ]! {4 g- Y2 }% U) C8 Z) K3 u  C, Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- m* _7 S* y$ t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 T2 N5 }8 D  ?8 \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# l/ Y# j# X$ c/ F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 x0 X" u4 F4 s, W/ U6 q2 V' j<P>But I never did </P>
: R( e" J9 w7 e7 O( W$ n8 R<P>但我不会 </P>
7 d* T. n- |* @8 W* G7 K; v<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 k7 I9 _0 n1 j7 P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( L9 r$ X2 T& V6 G/ G. r: l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ p3 b( @" X$ L. Z9 j2 t  A1 a<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; [; |& ~% s( m  b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; z/ z0 E3 x* G; U7 ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- L8 f/ n. ^6 Z/ y( F# N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& H+ e8 M9 s( J3 }5 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 J) Y9 ]3 K# f! N: @这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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