【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* h& K/ p# @1 k6 a0 ^( XThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, W% G; d1 g* D5 ~+ M; q, D; FWe meet and talk everyday,
& V. k2 w, Y1 G, ]2 {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 \  M9 m9 k4 A8 l" C2 \# ]0 C( oI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ U) Z6 C0 r2 v! C1 t3 S6 a  GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! ^' G. Q; e/ _. O5 AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ U% U- {5 D. U* Z" mCan I entrust it to you?
  L" W( I9 n1 D+ o9 s7 V* _3 QEntrust my love within your heart
. Z: ~2 W7 ]& [7 h& d. s5 mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) m# i! v) \9 l* XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ l" X1 e& K; \7 O  `Entrust my love within your heart
+ m, t4 q& o4 \8 e, f- g$ _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) T4 r: K" C( i$ `6 L[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; t+ H. e( v: l" s  w0 ]<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' F, a7 j2 }2 Q7 u) A" U, I5 R1 ^5 l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# f8 v; Y" s  q( t- J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 |# s9 l  s+ S+ p5 J) c<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 P+ e9 G: i- [: N4 n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* \# R* f  W- N1 t( [! P% y' p, \<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' t# O  Y% t! M1 ~; H4 p0 Q; p' I5 S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: K5 ]. }. V9 A- d<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 V: X! o. J$ N$ i/ X9 b, `1 N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, ]# J$ F9 E! u<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 J7 N# {6 o+ M# p' ~$ h& |<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" ^* U+ d, F6 j8 d( g8 g<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! h) d# M+ T( @# E3 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! k2 p. x& h; ~+ z( |- f% [! }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# o$ c9 Z# y' Q* z, ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 M" r% ]3 t1 ~) w0 W, V& [2 M" c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 k6 {; Z7 {' e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ P4 m; ~( a& h! M. Z- x$ d- D- W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, W# ?+ v3 A  @2 e<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 j& d. @7 n' M! A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
+ V% N: l2 s4 O. {- B$ D2 w<P>但我不会 </P>
  y( c% M5 B6 U% U" T$ f  b+ {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 R, U0 V$ c! R" k- N+ I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! U' I6 p* t0 F+ F* E, y" e& `% I: ]' B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" P. z* a3 e: r# `* u! E+ S7 C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* c; O5 G7 K+ E+ x; [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- E. r1 ?9 ^& H  f1 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% t0 j1 S/ F1 v; c0 L) \$ W5 d" H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" Y7 ]" C  k6 J, H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- h2 I7 `5 ?* p) K+ I" A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>