【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 |4 s0 r% n9 E  OThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, L8 R5 B( r0 h& p; wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  G% o3 p8 f4 w0 b; q( xI already loved you with all my heart
5 I' ^" K- v+ D; l8 XWe meet and talk everyday,
( o9 T& Z  ^8 o8 v" jBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) I, U  _- d! L4 T/ A- k9 MI would probably know how you feel
- U) c, F$ h, Z1 I4 I6 h/ QLove… just the word love
6 N, V' |  Y9 v6 Q4 _( WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; f- x7 W# ]. [6 h$ B; {# sIf today isn’t too late,
! h7 t' g) f, F' lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 n5 n0 Y$ c0 E" o0 d7 D* RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' a  k% P* J; t5 Z& J. G" M! }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) P6 r1 T! E/ q" o* ^7 `: a0 YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  N+ `* h/ y4 v5 c- d3 f! s, mEntrust my love within your heart
( T$ t4 P% e2 f+ W8 ^3 N) _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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$ K/ g& s6 `) F9 l, O[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' Z2 P/ U6 F+ W9 S<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: b, Z' K" T2 p' I1 V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. Y3 ?: Z$ W+ t" O  `9 ~2 B+ X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ c2 ]4 F+ y: {, Z; l<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 p' \, x+ F" h2 x& j7 b* o' h/ V6 T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 U5 {; s# E4 T, {5 Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 I* G! ?! R+ @/ T: l+ X( R# p- |5 r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; c9 v" D" T' [( f4 w9 U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" U/ r: g4 m. R3 t& }5 i" r, k5 Z- B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. `! H& z. R8 y8 ~2 S1 |$ J/ a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 ?  O5 C' {( Q' e0 {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 i+ [* s: y$ C8 e9 k1 Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ O* ]. g+ v4 i8 @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 v: G- J, x, T4 ]4 L: v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 D$ l# W9 @% z0 k" ?  r5 z9 {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ q, S  k3 J7 @8 _/ \7 [<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& ~* @, [0 v1 L* w* d0 W; f<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
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<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- w1 e9 b. g8 R$ [+ t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) l# i1 N: S4 `7 j" T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  {! l$ R0 y: |4 ~- h% ]& e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ G# U, f* ?/ J- i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, e. n. ~/ j, G% G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 k5 Q& B( E% A" F9 b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 U& z7 N  F$ D8 g9 M! Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 P  v2 a, y2 \3 q- `8 [<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! Q. [7 ?( {5 F' l; Y8 N) p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>