【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ j( a9 R. \, W+ F: \+ BThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 O3 Z! U9 R0 F7 r% ?3 X7 K! HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) C9 N% Y1 V- h& V3 p1 ^6 HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- ~7 z8 ~& n& h, w. _I would probably know how you feel
% w# l/ t' m" D4 qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 s( f, R0 g( I- z! u8 K2 wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& m( y& `  t. p9 ?2 n3 ]; M# D3 MEntrust my love within your heart
/ Z: Y' |( [- g/ I' sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 n0 F6 m8 B- Y9 LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  A) p8 @; n9 K& F$ J0 x9 ?2 lEntrust my love within your heart
) L- _( Q& w/ P5 {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) @0 f8 \$ C4 \7 Q7 f<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 J  C; ]5 O3 A. k/ b, O' F, \! r8 ]<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! `7 w1 l- ]3 a' |5 R) ]: `5 R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ ^" [# J$ [  d' Q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% o4 ^% \# R1 j) X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* n; A' q8 b* |" Y* B( h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; ]7 x. @3 `! R+ Q* i' G6 |<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ L' B1 x+ T$ q5 j0 L<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# O  [% L5 A! m: }0 ~( T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ V2 J6 u* _9 g/ A) X& n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 Y; p( \" d& D; p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' o+ h0 [, i7 T% ~1 [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 r# s" r' t0 c% d3 l<P>但我不会</P>
, ^1 U/ O2 A1 t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ m1 r" d* ]1 n% m- N4 g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" e/ H7 Z$ o2 n7 e# O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( H1 [( y5 ]) b1 i( v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 B& `' K+ G, F7 N4 H& V9 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 n+ V2 ]+ h$ t' c( \& \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 N7 F3 q% j7 r) z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ ]' u6 l& _6 G6 D# e! f; j3 t. q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ W0 p  \& K5 x4 [+ q3 R1 N' G<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( ?9 S# @2 S) j% n# e- Z- L" k4 W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 h1 c& A- p1 d- B6 p& D<P>但我不会 </P>
5 {, A$ f; j* C  ]; _<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! R* M- Y9 v( Y! M: U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) [' [! G) w& y  R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 C! ~0 C6 z6 d( `, \. r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, F; y6 r1 m# G6 _, q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  S% z$ F8 ^) C' |8 j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 f8 @! y7 F' Q3 K+ u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 ?  y2 x3 N( T5 C) y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 \9 e5 O9 c: K' c5 M  b) U& m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>