【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
5 z9 L& I; z! j, v! J5 uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: ^* A- m+ v7 m) M4 R9 _% J* ]: RI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 i* v) j. p. t& KBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; \- }/ \- _$ W& P, kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) v; B+ Z7 q, L& hI would probably know how you feel
& v' J' N$ p3 O0 T0 }; PLove… just the word love
8 e, `* N3 G6 n4 F1 {! F, _Why is it so difficult to express?
% X4 g' q. P0 v( x! o+ HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, Q, ^4 i/ h% _) C7 Q/ J- `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 k7 h' z5 P  A% g& R  {7 aEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% @  w) E5 R/ E7 g+ HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 [8 z* X  Y0 T; @7 R" n2 L- ?% K, r) ?1 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# Z# d- W% ~4 r+ I" WEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
  c2 ^4 U$ _# l( \. ]9 vEntrust my love within your heart

, e& I8 S+ B7 d5 V* n' ~- w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. c- L- Z- k; ^; N4 l* w, W' i8 q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 y( T7 |4 A& Y  U) n  A1 T$ M<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 S5 x: n% {! S9 L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 e3 m% {& t3 @8 a0 k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) m5 {. z" i/ ^. K9 f5 U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& P4 C0 l6 X7 F# n2 ]. S% g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) ?" O' f" j  t( ^8 \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 y3 N# y- a, |: A* a$ x- i2 z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  v0 w% `+ N( A9 `$ q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 ?. t+ P# L. w) c  P+ ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 f7 D' L! d$ [2 t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' C+ r0 y! b$ p% u, w. }<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 V  J8 t+ K" K0 E. j& ]3 [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 X9 A! E" o( E; n$ `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- k" K9 N% t8 U4 c0 Q) b7 k& C% s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 O: a5 |% q' w' M# B1 f3 A) v<P>但我不会</P>
' e7 z; T. {* u2 ^* V  f5 R1 ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& ?; d+ `5 [# `7 B$ o5 o, S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ |$ @6 f) k+ B% r5 P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 a  ^3 h5 B! G7 W' K- G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- b3 T% y  f2 L- j, x7 r7 B% k3 K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 U1 S" M) l. U7 S1 ?6 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 F& x1 I( w$ ^$ A" j5 C. R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 \( ~8 m  a0 l+ _6 j8 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 J3 ~* a+ X" V7 g0 _1 ^<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 r) w$ b0 k2 O( ~& D& q: w7 a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 U; Z! Q7 N5 E9 w5 q) Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ _* ^) `2 S0 K- u7 t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
' B9 x0 x0 j! B- t<P>但我不会 </P>
  U* z# Z5 k! n4 X, R3 ]5 ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- R+ @+ W3 U5 @7 K  C7 T9 b6 Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 E6 @3 K/ _9 `) e8 q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 @0 A+ F& J* {& `" h9 `* I! y) o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 o% ~1 Z( b7 ~, E1 l4 h' [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, a# m; q& D0 |5 Z7 I' a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 G9 n( R( o0 C0 ^; I0 A. G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; O# D! N  o- Q2 R$ O$ R$ q( M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) C1 X- W  g* }" T1 H! t<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 }6 @- w: R$ T6 P<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>