【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
$ N  C; ^$ Y3 X, l+ ~The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! j  f8 I% u/ {. j5 c+ L" KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 C, g. G! z  f, r  |& [. V! K6 `# c9 gFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 d: k* k3 f: L8 ZWe meet and talk everyday,
, N* O% l% V" `  r6 d- T! w- FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ ^/ r0 l3 }  r7 RI want to confess that I love you,
3 N( A, y8 H% {4 ~/ v  v2 ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! H: j# L7 _3 f: r6 }+ NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: [1 ^) Q$ H, A( aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, O5 m& J4 P$ K, zIf today isn’t too late,
4 n( M2 \0 |1 J7 S: XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& A! X2 T8 D, s4 [5 S% LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) j  H2 a: U9 a4 p, f" ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( o0 Z) h) d6 p  q* Y) f2 q: A# G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ w9 ^% L/ a: F4 S( M<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 I: W/ I% D" U6 t9 k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  I  G& e4 Q3 A8 i0 @& y+ v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) M5 T5 `$ m; H8 l' k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ l2 s7 {0 J' r3 r6 v. B<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ R# {9 B2 H6 |9 n: \<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% E" b# ^* ~- ^' [1 `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 H4 M0 Q5 b) @! ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 L3 p  k5 b; d5 |- G' z- d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 |3 o$ J+ I: Z; B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ m8 Y) M4 X% i3 ?- g' M6 `  t" @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- y1 D  g& _3 X6 t, H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& O- B: a9 \! f, x7 n/ O( b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( y, ^& X4 k5 ^5 c* L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ u' K1 t6 W# f) ?' }: x# `<P>但我不会</P>
: I+ d' r# }( j# _- Y" g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 u) u3 E6 r+ m1 Z2 b; W<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 s: o9 D. {) U) m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# ]" [. {: [& {! j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  B# m# y- ~" ^/ Q) x5 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ |/ F. \( ]9 ^" M( k. c7 {  y4 \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) X" V" i, w5 R/ j" _# v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 n) p7 v4 d/ P) u7 K% z5 A  W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, H8 X! v8 c0 w1 R. h9 v<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 D2 E! H/ [) J+ a; H! X<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 n% [* ^) M7 T7 _' ?<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 ^/ i$ L5 x* f( v) H0 M; a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 B4 s3 ~7 _# u8 T1 V9 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" l; E1 ]2 x9 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' i. m4 Z) c; w/ X/ @这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& X$ j( r+ R. Y5 }6 _5 \* x8 Y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>