【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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( H* u' @$ N; d6 `+ x4 k9 c我另将歌词附在此。
) U' V/ [; @; _& T0 t4 `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, @$ m; {3 e+ J- q( I) e2 |& MFrom the first moment we met,
& C" G( n0 |5 KI already loved you with all my heart
2 h9 F3 v  }" TWe meet and talk everyday,
, [& h0 P* `" O9 \+ W4 uBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 l- A# G  P+ F9 SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" E/ o, Z# a- Y+ }" R# `Why is it so difficult to express?
4 B0 `7 x& O$ s0 Q. wI want to confess that I love you,
! h  M$ h+ b% z4 ~: X' v- IBut I never did
2 f5 u: B5 C+ b8 ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 g, [2 _% j5 b+ a/ Z2 CIf today isn’t too late,
" ]9 s) s* L4 X. ^1 [8 K  GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, \/ }7 S  n/ ?* WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# s; e% r% ^+ H4 H$ r3 _" |Can I entrust it to you?
+ l: X9 U" u4 W. G1 j: Y8 Z. KEntrust my love within your heart
1 o+ l# a( D, T; P& U$ O% P+ FLove… just the word love
* ~3 a9 t& g5 W; D, Q* LWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; h6 [/ P) G$ c( R; l3 u( W! MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# U6 x& g* K" E! i0 DEntrust my love within your heart
4 q5 q% o* y+ ZCan I entrust it to you?
5 q7 t2 `" J% V& eEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; o( {' I+ X( m* A- Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" g/ _- e' u( i8 e5 o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- `. O2 h- w5 @" L$ \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! b. L% C2 ~4 ~3 _& Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ h+ X6 p8 s2 ^<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( e! [/ y, ]3 W) B3 ^5 T% s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& g: Y' B$ \6 T+ T<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ K: m2 V7 E4 h% x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- K( n" R9 Z& M' R) t/ r* }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 a6 h* M) k" ^  i# u& X1 {" w<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ p: U  f$ }# @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 p' G* y+ L: k' S1 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ b6 ^0 K/ }2 I4 p( H% z" B: |, s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) D* s2 a$ a' C+ P/ V<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 H, m/ d. W4 Q9 A, b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 E8 _, O+ b+ C' m  z<P>But I never did </P>
# _' v# o9 q6 t5 N; E<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& a; Q# @* [  ?/ C8 n* p& ?! A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 Z* c/ L4 j/ Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, d! I2 Y1 J* d4 @8 w7 W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# V/ C$ e7 Q0 h7 S6 v! v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 r2 h& c/ @+ M; {( s6 i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 i# s/ W% r- Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# k3 v/ N2 o/ T8 @4 x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  l- x  X/ D# A  U2 j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ u1 S# }4 g6 I9 n<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 t1 b: d, \1 q' \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>