【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
) z. o6 F9 a1 h1 rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- U! {6 A; W9 Q: WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# V) s% a+ v+ J) a4 j6 q* kI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# _5 E2 Q* Q) O( u$ |2 EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 r+ S5 M( ^$ K8 C; w! v, a- }4 Y& HI would probably know how you feel
* F' I5 `# {9 f  G, MLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" Z4 r4 W$ x" _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 E, z# a6 `. gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ X* m2 e. N- ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& ~" ?1 O+ A- S& VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' d% ^; F( g9 g7 l) l" a0 iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ i) y  W3 H2 y, WCan I entrust it to you?
1 y3 g% z  V/ z* c: O  M9 QEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 M, \+ Z0 r/ S! G- v* I<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' [; _! ]+ F. }$ o: G9 M' A. E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' L3 e. k$ Q$ b9 G$ D& f& J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( N' E3 K* t) R' U; N<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ c; y; f2 Q5 z3 M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 F' u& ^1 G5 b1 F, U2 j! F: \, U7 n<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 I# S8 v7 {: n/ h- X0 M" K1 \5 E: N9 R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  T9 h1 q; L7 V4 T0 |8 H' E% Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; R  s) t+ L, _  \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 g1 U" q0 Q9 T9 b+ D' r6 y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' }! X( t& F( ?% n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( O. a3 z  p# P3 p4 M) h! K$ Q7 L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# v* [4 i! P7 }0 m+ E# k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ a, k* H1 R/ E* J9 w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, Q+ \- f- Y" j9 s7 g: x  `1 ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 M8 @+ b0 {( V- ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% l9 G' C5 [; c8 Z. M8 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' t% p/ b6 w7 d* A, s8 ?$ {' k+ g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 ?1 f/ W" s, g. f3 k* n& X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 A8 g  J4 b1 ~& o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 s( D: R$ s1 ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( D, U) ~; O7 t0 w, i5 X2 l5 Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. K- X1 ?+ G- J  b$ Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. T1 ]5 \+ L* \& g& o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 Y0 G, V; O5 u$ P* u! c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% l! f. ?4 R1 T" c6 w( f7 V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" m, h2 r: m$ _- k! d# u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 |3 [/ F7 ~& n, I' p: E4 s8 @  u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, y& s. }) z  d- P; s; B; @/ d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 J0 n# S& x; ?6 y; `2 Z7 _' v! @  O: p7 B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) v0 j$ ^  q6 X2 J9 u, u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ }( i! E) x6 {' L# f<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ D7 Q9 I" q) j' V2 d<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 @6 Q& n- f' \6 T; ~2 P9 }" f9 o<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>