【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 h5 V+ ~+ o; e* Y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 \. ]6 W* a" v! J0 z& JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 h. g' d7 o6 |We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 S; c$ g: v: I: X8 \I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% ?+ O1 l" J& r0 g2 T) l9 C4 a$ B+ [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ S% i+ P- k+ t! ^) H) W1 |* DIf today isn’t too late,
+ B8 B$ o6 g) ?, G9 R1 j4 dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' g' Q7 n6 [. i) [( VCan I entrust it to you?
! Q! C3 `7 d4 l9 y; ?Entrust my love within your heart
- q2 F0 p  Y8 [6 fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) Y1 `0 U1 f1 m! X5 L( OIf today isn’t too late,
1 i. a8 D8 ^' M. rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% {% U) Y( v9 U2 J: F5 l/ Y8 w; zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. A9 y0 q! S0 T: t7 z/ c' g8 FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& W  N( y9 s: c3 I<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& D! f. d+ ]( D- E6 i<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  y4 n7 L2 m4 s/ _<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# A/ G: }! G  Q4 L% A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& G! W: B, j4 L0 n6 v& p5 {<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 @* M; c6 U9 r+ _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 X5 t0 b0 M1 i+ b/ z( y. |# ?<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ w; |' k! h0 P' B8 z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 G* U( S2 P% i) G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 S, E* s+ ^* G# B0 ?" G& X  R, ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' r% V: Q$ F1 ?  S9 H# E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 x& @/ s9 N, O! P<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) x8 Y. d5 ~& j! N3 r<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ \+ g  I7 _8 M  X/ L" ~<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ m3 P4 B/ D$ `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! [* W, C5 ]7 J7 z" W* r/ y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, K3 c; h  K( h3 e; E, K1 f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( I" X# o8 N. J* Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 F' U9 n  n9 q; l2 W! U. \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# J7 _; s0 E5 ~/ `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 e9 F$ e. G1 V/ u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( _9 c  n* `4 |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ h) q# w/ o0 y  i: f' G<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# e# e) J: ~* F4 `& N1 p<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 @* A% F: v' D5 U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 y3 f0 s( w9 C; Q. ~5 S! h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- y8 w9 U6 {1 q  ~5 y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 p* ]+ h/ `: i$ k; A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( B+ G6 u6 y' Y9 H8 x/ W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, P0 H. j+ `+ e; }% ]- d$ c+ I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# P2 r! _' g8 e, w0 }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ Z- u; w. X9 {* M& n5 h<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ E5 G6 @! s$ {# ?<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ D) Y) z8 E3 a* Z% J- H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 }  n1 T! H7 [6 O# w. U: b) N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) \/ b  m. ?+ `2 Y" {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>