【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  z: b- n  `0 e7 hThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& Y- p6 X# I6 Z2 v; v7 j, J8 YI already loved you with all my heart
# s1 v# O" S% p3 B# r3 qWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  c/ I5 i) D- V- F4 PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& g, d, r% O* ]& ]( `+ [I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 }3 i* `# m" O1 C' T) {Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 Q0 O" u- r( s3 G) B; [# UIf today isn’t too late,
; v1 H2 O& H: b' f; ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 i$ D% ^, i9 I: B$ lCan I entrust it to you?
1 U, x, \/ M/ \Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 V0 M' l3 B) c3 x! x5 t3 V9 II want to confess that I love you,
0 u6 ^( d4 Z; @7 ~" [- g( `But I never did
4 l8 g1 o! j4 X& r6 YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 U! j2 J. W0 W( _" v2 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' X$ Q- ?% y/ j$ y. A! {/ n& p( R4 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 L2 P* X5 c4 M4 a/ VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; y9 f& W$ f$ RCan I entrust it to you?
8 y. T5 ~) e2 E* O5 P8 e4 @Entrust my love within your heart
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" v9 F: l+ U2 S0 I+ s) c( W0 S" j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  g9 A" v( x' ]9 [; y" ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ a% z7 h+ f1 a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. B) f$ G& d/ k. X$ B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' V9 s/ j; ?. u, d<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ J' v+ l0 G3 j/ E  j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 f$ @9 r  q+ q; R+ i7 l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 p; N/ F! T" ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 J( G: d6 [* t  c4 ^- `<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 ~0 V! X& J# O6 u! ?: V<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' j  ^+ W( c  v0 m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% F1 M" ]; ?$ }; D" T* Q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 X# r7 |/ W4 r: ^<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  X- w' z8 a6 g+ S: `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ C8 F* O* c$ ^8 F: l0 E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- E$ h$ x; c' H7 Z6 U- N2 l0 O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 e* J4 i2 I, x. I; I; E+ t( b  f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 X# U, s6 }8 e. p4 h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) S0 _9 ^. X1 z' _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 ^7 S8 x, d4 F" T/ P; f$ d8 g<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- E, h' _5 I# h, Q! b. ^6 I( J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ `. j( }5 J- b  u( ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* M  Y5 L1 P" Z& B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) F1 E- W- o( b# t0 V2 k<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ u% ]7 C5 r3 g7 m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: N+ H% O# N: M<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 q) x$ b" u  j6 R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 u) `: L. z$ W. p  ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 |' u; T' J* j; ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& M: c  Y' j6 c  a" I2 P( a& e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 C5 U6 }3 b% @, r7 |! R, X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  d3 _- i8 x+ W  o: ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  o" l4 U% }+ m  M$ s3 ^" y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- ?6 S% Z6 P( J# \, ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 g) l5 A, Q' @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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1 R* h* P1 T1 P+ @* g, A9 a这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( I/ b/ W$ f, R. T! \  U+ d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  k8 b& V' B% e" d$ S1 ]<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 Z0 X& \3 z! M/ c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>