【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ @) c% a/ Y# O- T我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 B3 M8 N2 }! f+ `" {3 }- i9 TThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 R7 E; h, Q" Y4 t7 A; @; ^% LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& \; T# n/ z5 E6 lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 p2 e' |0 O* H! e* b+ v. p+ OI would probably know how you feel
: Y# \9 @  y8 b$ j+ ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  |5 ?9 F# C$ Z' J7 }. QI want to confess that I love you,
) u. g$ [" S; m3 i5 {9 UBut I never did
0 p5 z# `; g9 kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: Q) X" F0 {3 |( }If today isn’t too late,
0 k( _# j9 F2 |) _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 p2 S, A" G# D9 @6 p1 C" N: I/ AEntrust my love within your heart
! {7 W, Y+ w6 ]' n: u4 R! \Love… just the word love
+ }/ ]  o. t6 h) L" }Why is it so difficult to express?
7 ~0 o+ A& t! nI want to confess that I love you,
* _  K( S0 R9 A  K0 z9 Y% Z$ sBut I never did
8 J( P1 I/ F( z( dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# M& Y# ~) B9 K7 |4 r0 mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( B5 y$ X$ X4 d- H0 @' J' tEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

  _0 @- N, I. @0 v<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( F3 s2 Q1 v  q5 {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 A3 M0 m' `+ Q" J' ^, R<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* w! J5 s1 p6 t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ s+ ^0 T1 f: @9 P7 w/ `/ y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  w; d" [8 M% H- L* ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) Y$ C/ w: a& }5 y' F4 u) v! E<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: O; M0 [" d! o1 c" t<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! [9 w4 H1 T& B<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ O$ R" e% i+ o6 W8 {  m1 O' E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* P2 G+ L" M6 r<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 p: N0 R/ W7 f9 i7 v, v5 E; K% m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 w+ R" S/ f1 P8 X- W/ ]( @( g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% F, n: W* b7 a' I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ f$ m: F8 P9 \7 N4 o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 @* D& b# ^4 C# m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ |3 D) V- L- L. |4 O, M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 v  D( K$ h+ w' B6 n* k& ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# K8 s3 l' I" A( X4 B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 h, J* O/ R" _- U' h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 A! P; J0 x2 M5 j) `0 U* P$ w. y' H0 V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, E0 _9 U% L/ O+ E<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 g6 k5 R  p3 K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" D1 C* K" w5 B$ U<P>But I never did </P>
) j' y( \0 a9 J5 C# S<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 x  l7 a6 {3 s) u( U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ {- |8 [$ n" V0 W0 p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 [! L" M6 j* Q: D: s+ w/ B9 X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; L, c+ Q1 _6 I0 A# Z! t& G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" ~: d) i% G* L* C; ]  L) t. ]1 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# u" ~  f- w. J) h* Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& d, V' [  V; N* }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( Y1 [5 v) Q7 R2 o3 K( q) l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ h& `" l( j- O2 d 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) ]) t5 a! J2 C* F# h$ [( w7 p" o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ g! c' X% m- n! ^$ ?  `9 x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>