【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 w* Z" r7 r1 h' n& J) Y  k5 e" Y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; x  ~  a( P3 u3 B" {% gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* _* ~/ a) q. u& YFrom the first moment we met,
5 P# y, q; U, ?8 \$ ZI already loved you with all my heart
1 A8 f% @- y6 {; jWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- a( r8 V3 V7 OI would probably know how you feel
1 K  Z! n8 t* }) \# |5 j0 e2 DLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; y6 {" I! S& D' iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 w+ l& p' S6 T1 iIf today isn’t too late,
5 y6 `( V6 U* ?% a+ u! rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" w) p. `( a; o% E! {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 u+ S! f* J, f5 L4 W$ K2 wBut I never did
$ x, t+ G8 d* C4 VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 b# Q4 V. g; F2 C& z2 V5 oEntrust my love within your heart
) r6 y; t6 G* u/ R# {2 @- }1 BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 ~; Z! ~! S/ r# G, ~) |& W+ X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 A6 C+ v% b' K# @, ^6 ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; N7 y% D4 z9 p1 e  ~# N& ?0 j/ x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 A/ C# m1 t( B# O) D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* R& Z8 L) D$ H+ q5 Y3 g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: \" e* }6 L; }. a* _<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% _$ Q/ |/ D) Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* }, J' n: f# M# ~' L, n: E3 {; j  Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 r6 K. u+ u. o7 ], Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, K! x3 v! H: B& _5 f# m) ?! |/ W+ |% I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  ~' g+ y! Z+ [% S3 Z4 @1 w) L* N& P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& M9 \$ _7 u6 W* z( `4 j  t<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ H# W5 B, R& |: _- a<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  d5 \5 U# P1 ^5 O: T9 R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ i& \4 x) I7 G<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' o2 k7 O7 n; B<P>但我不会</P>
9 L- i- y) T9 y& h3 W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 u3 n) Z- v" Q+ _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( I0 ?2 k4 v, @; q  w: [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- h) Z. m* X8 G) S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% @. Y% R1 k( w  t; U4 ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 j4 g) K$ H! w2 h# y  |5 t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 w8 h0 ^& w/ T7 l$ y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ A% a9 F4 U' Y# l/ m- y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, T4 r; c% r7 p+ }9 g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& k" B' v7 ^; k1 n8 H8 P9 H7 f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. c- T. p4 u0 b- o1 H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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2 \/ Z/ \6 h9 c- g8 }# O3 W" r. E<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; f% C+ X6 }7 O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>