【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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! ]$ Z: K: v) X3 S  \我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 V  [; ~2 X/ F* }  j$ x) aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" g2 q9 Q% d% x0 H. O) ]! z" D) LI already loved you with all my heart
% I6 H; `3 S1 J1 NWe meet and talk everyday,
- e& D& L# H5 m1 n& {/ B. w( pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 ^& |0 T* w& ~- T8 ^1 k9 BLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 h' u+ K% t# o' e8 t5 ^, ~2 \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ w6 X: ~# E0 c6 fEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: `% x+ B+ U3 I7 t5 R5 h- B6 LI want to confess that I love you,
2 r8 H: x+ q' [But I never did
% f7 }5 R: a" u- d5 ~% O& AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 d) ~6 c% x. M( {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ H+ p( ~& U, U, V; C" d/ h3 f  P2 d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' O8 h  h: d' d4 p  E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# g2 G. `- q  a5 |9 D+ X<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 ^! `7 @% r, r3 a% R<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ _1 m& g! D  \* v! Z8 Y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, h; N& Z1 Q: A$ _7 a+ L; |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 S( {) w1 ]2 R3 \, [! R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 c# m5 ]  l* y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  h+ b6 r3 L& R& ^+ p  Z, N- D* Y1 [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ ]" @6 ~6 C9 ?( z# n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, G" L4 {" x$ R$ ]* {- ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ Y  D/ D: t- ~<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 k2 [& p1 k# l. X7 E' }: A<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, G# r& y! G8 Q- B% J<P>但我不会</P>
& n- w+ }: J- C/ ^& }2 J' {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' z/ X  m" |6 [, g<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; P7 W  ?% C. l( c, s& {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) K# Z5 l" p9 O3 u$ ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 \2 Q0 d. b, S/ h; C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, I, X1 i% q' J. C( x9 {6 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, K  t% n% x9 o- |) e* M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' M) P% Z& C' x) A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( P( Y. p' `7 N& f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) J+ G6 j- q$ R2 K$ b% P4 A4 G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  F" Z8 c' f6 B) h. a  L  q6 n# N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 _1 U* k9 d# c2 P/ |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( j6 k7 |; O% ]8 t. f7 a<P>But I never did </P>
( N; ]. }; {2 ^( Z/ Z/ p1 O; E, P<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- }% D4 L5 g4 P% ~* w( ^) J<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 N: A1 F4 e6 l5 h+ x# C2 L+ N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- Q* j* C4 ^, t7 {. R0 _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ S% e6 _' U5 b% \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& a4 x3 m% x9 q$ g! s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ |7 `/ J  J/ r& g3 @: V/ b# z3 o! v! E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 F1 Q$ o3 l9 J( _" Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ o, T( i- z& Z9 T% u2 V& r<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 {8 \' f3 |4 {6 s% G6 x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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; m" B6 E( h, O( w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: @$ u- _  O; I4 G( `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>