【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 q, }0 y5 m: k6 W0 M/ ]From the first moment we met,
" n* g9 C0 S. m- i% yI already loved you with all my heart
; V: A* W+ _* @We meet and talk everyday,
# Z+ o1 _+ H: p) w& q9 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  n6 Q# D( M6 J$ b# Q: `Love… just the word love
. K' m* a# |( o6 t  p+ ?Why is it so difficult to express?
6 C* B8 z1 U) ]. f! N2 @; `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ c" q9 z; u- L+ I$ i2 J! W; GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) M, J1 Y$ P, I% X) eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 T1 o' I- ]* M1 X* g& T/ JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 _5 Q  @; l- q  O4 @) O. ^. T! nEntrust my love within your heart
8 |6 ?0 n, T. wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* r- p; M0 b; {# \3 TI want to confess that I love you,
; a+ @, J$ l5 O' ^) A% u% ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- W/ T, ?0 B4 e2 p, H; zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 H8 ?5 D3 o+ D" kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ A2 M8 o6 y8 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

1 ]3 T; ], ?$ H4 A6 f" q0 z  h/ N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* ~9 L* e8 W, n+ [3 m<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 c: N, n6 D9 u! W% g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 H, E4 W3 S2 V9 n<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 m4 H1 C: F3 [" n" D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 _$ B0 l: b# L3 Y( j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ m# C8 g( A% G1 p$ B4 S<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- Y5 V5 O% S9 I2 V/ ?+ ^<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' Z, }! W7 Y9 ?# X: V" o8 J* `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& |! C5 v$ r; E/ P9 P5 T7 d" o" o2 Z: v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 |! R5 C7 K/ s! z' }+ e<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: {) ?, H8 r3 x- D<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ t' ~3 e# j8 V- y7 N: \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 K. a! n) U8 R6 }7 Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 K1 ~$ k' x+ j& W<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; ~/ L5 \2 ~  |2 P  _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* c+ x/ [& N1 m9 w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" E9 ~. d  w6 r' U/ |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& J3 Q% N& C2 `4 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 q0 c0 j9 w2 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. O& h1 y, E/ T" P! F, ]9 U+ \  }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 T: k8 Q, i8 Q6 b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 g7 U# w. `' N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, y% P6 v5 |+ r<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 y- z% b  z/ F; s: {0 E& s9 X9 S<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 Z; r: ?+ F8 g+ i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& T; D, ^$ [* Z3 [. D6 R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 X& w9 [8 A% F1 B/ D8 _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ x  X% y$ g. F! e! F$ f9 l- M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 d. c* }5 b$ T& }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

0 h7 d! w% b( j3 H这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  w. Y" p! t+ K7 Q3 l. M这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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6 K" a9 S7 N( g3 z, F& c! O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 E, A' h2 R9 f<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>