【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
* W# j, I# a- LI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. W. |% K! `% P! j  F/ kI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ e# Y4 L5 w3 R8 ?4 |! oWhy is it so difficult to express?
) M# G* _; n. U2 _I want to confess that I love you,
/ Z0 y0 V1 p0 [5 Y- J% ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ X3 z) ?: w. I: _* e6 r* L: ZIf today isn’t too late,
1 {' s/ W3 J+ J! p1 R4 m8 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' ]" K  o2 @# f( r6 n) v1 K$ oEntrust my love within your heart
/ G/ j3 K6 d0 H; X: X, e3 ^8 u1 PLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  ?6 B: Y# m4 z/ YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) s* f6 P+ n, Z6 KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 D3 C) p) _& h, Q1 ?7 rCan I entrust it to you?
' c' b% z( M# @( z4 M# lEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: p# a5 k+ P. N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, t: |9 I6 v* w% H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% E* g* V- _+ Z7 z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- W8 d7 w$ Q6 e1 _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' P: K4 S) a/ L$ r<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" U% Y. _+ U. m7 }<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 q3 ^0 X, V$ {- x8 B1 S: v' e<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; R3 d( b& z$ O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! G% ?9 \: U% [2 K2 e+ Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 ?7 U( k" }4 i* W0 n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' {4 M1 @5 S$ @! b* s( z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 H3 {2 B, D* y. i: R4 K) z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' T3 r% U2 D+ x* t4 `6 l; P4 N<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 q& ~; |' h# i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: y$ M9 J! c! ]3 s  q& n- W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% G6 n& w. G1 G5 F, E7 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 m, X( j. f. K7 w9 g0 |% p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 Y9 B0 h! J  C6 h* d! N1 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 D0 _6 l7 {/ Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ P; `/ R1 D- Q1 b3 q5 M& W3 S5 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" D+ Z3 _0 ?6 e3 \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) ~% P0 p& y# E5 r& G- T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. j" z( n( C% i- w' Z6 j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( x: o; a- q3 Y9 S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 L2 t2 P* B$ n0 L- e( Q' t/ J<P>但我不会 </P>
- ]/ e' a9 N% r2 p$ E0 ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* [) M9 c0 }- X2 j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 n+ f+ l  L& Z9 ~8 v' K& S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; |$ Y" `6 c9 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ e* _0 O7 h* O7 g! C' a2 Z9 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 R# ?, Q9 r# Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" e: O  ?7 s8 g9 P4 j( r$ k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 Y' \& Z. ~( F, m- v+ V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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' d* D; W- B6 e0 {# ~9 b2 a<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" j: V3 q  ?' n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>