【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ p. E+ j( C5 iFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 x+ ]# w( ]7 y" v5 a  LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% g- ^5 s4 N. m5 V% |! XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* b% v0 j- x/ Y: }( X- RBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; J- V% j8 z9 n9 a! b5 |7 xIf today isn’t too late,
. y% T1 l) H) N+ {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! T2 X$ k# V* p" O# w; V: v0 aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 Z2 c1 J$ i5 P/ P2 s( J+ C. zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  N, p: `: b# S2 {/ ]. r2 OEntrust my love within your heart
* p5 R. O: f/ q% v) f- RCan I entrust it to you?
! e. d. z1 c' W; \2 }0 m! jEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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! K6 y' w8 c" Z! n/ y( o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& K% C8 _; c8 J/ f) [! P* c/ `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 k: u4 k# b/ R' @6 o; J+ }<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 X0 t! w& f" N/ w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ n9 j  @) ]4 r+ Y: O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' J; e, T. T: g+ z- S9 C) }  A/ }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- H9 L8 M) l) v0 v. r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& K( c, c" Y1 {$ ~5 X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* i7 x( ^2 p4 N; q2 m! D/ u( `4 t% j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- ?# a2 Q8 r$ V5 Q9 [5 k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 L3 c9 B9 V3 o1 ^# H3 I<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 b! y& @! B' L: z; C<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 U! R9 S& w, {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' j  T1 D1 K9 P) |0 `. `9 _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 T1 i5 E5 d: G3 b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 ~# u8 r2 h) m8 Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* D  ~' Q) F( m3 _2 y( E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% k9 v: Y* B+ l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: O9 R: `. T$ K, x/ n, }9 L+ y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- t& i' X' C9 o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 I* Y: t6 o  a# S2 R1 A; k<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  c" v1 ]3 p. F: }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* C8 f# p7 ?0 s1 F% T5 a<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& z1 `" S& s; x  u5 N& L$ A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 P( f$ o0 y# w- A9 }% Y% Z. U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% S& [& J- L. x+ t" b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 {2 T- o2 N. h8 F; Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 a" [  L" w9 R& R7 k& C* X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" h/ l% S# q( f/ I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* i8 h2 s" t/ V9 h<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" u) _. u# c: s" b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 ]/ Q# j8 p4 v8 [8 M<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>