【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
9 E; `4 d( N6 N7 ^  zThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 g3 P# i: L% X" F6 y5 OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 v9 ?4 t  y: h4 X3 s' \) Z+ NI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ w: n, ?: V! u! JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 h% V$ c1 e" w+ R" J0 BI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ Z( L7 i0 ?: s1 S: k! q: sIf today isn’t too late,
' O2 q* f' P, _; Z0 @# a+ G7 D+ DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, Y- U2 _2 H$ W  q9 G, I7 Z; iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 i5 `% q2 v) X, Q3 q5 Q! L5 G1 {- BEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* f' }* \% x4 x1 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ @8 j* y+ [  V( ^# HBut I never did
9 G2 K& ?- N. t# m3 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 F, [1 n  u  |6 }7 eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ g1 G+ w" {7 g: [Can I entrust it to you?
' P4 {  Y9 R0 b- q9 J' @Entrust my love within your heart
! X4 u( b% @9 B" {" q# nCan I entrust it to you?
5 ~" p4 u( z7 }# v0 CEntrust my love within your heart

( E& S. a; H/ x% y) B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% R  v3 X0 ?# I4 ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# Z# F) x9 a7 d  y" Z: ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: _$ r9 X5 Q2 L% M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 F3 j4 W  t- [% s; n9 ^/ r# O( X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- f' K% ~1 E0 U/ S- f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, a+ Z4 j& S* {8 R& s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 c- R/ J& C3 j/ W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# _2 R8 g+ b3 u( ]! V5 T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& W& g8 i: Q# R4 U# k6 i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ K3 D7 o6 F# Q9 a% ^% H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( ]/ o! J6 m5 B( ^/ g<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 c/ \6 t3 \: j6 \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, J) R9 U& C  c; l<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. U5 o* d; V" V' u4 g7 h<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) g% i& [# P" J7 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. S/ w# v% R. d6 B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* {5 U  [/ f5 v$ y" ?9 S( r. I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 H$ i- s$ k2 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 N3 f+ q2 ]& C. w& n" I3 V) M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* `' t$ M/ O3 T( T3 s8 }" R6 y9 v<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( B* o. O3 K8 Q9 l% `  V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 V; i, B. c/ y/ A) {. S5 y! X<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 n+ E0 J3 P# g+ b! K" m, K<P>But I never did </P>
: T; K$ ?$ R1 k7 F( n5 e- ~<P>但我不会 </P>
4 q+ L+ G3 D! H# P" S. V6 ?( ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 ^6 O& |# G) o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 k5 e( b& A$ Q6 z6 E2 m1 T$ }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ o+ \* Q0 v; K* K( s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 i( q) S9 H7 n/ d* V$ z5 i' w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# o* {, h8 K* z+ F5 g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. U# C; i( V1 I+ e7 C# K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, `( C$ h: ^6 ?8 l7 E5 K" B, A<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>