【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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$ [6 i$ s! s+ x9 ^+ T! s" X我另将歌词附在此。
8 o6 a. B7 I3 ?; f- [$ HThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 n/ i0 G0 l8 S( j4 R  FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 a7 L6 T3 H  oFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% a- d5 a" L2 k( L6 l$ o7 BWe meet and talk everyday,
# l# K- l" y  [1 k% J9 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" X" }% ?( L! W& ~0 }+ CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. q% P1 W$ h1 f( ?+ cI would probably know how you feel
3 p7 O6 X  k. @* Y: A8 P7 ^Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 [! g2 b( `- x' [; T! H  dI want to confess that I love you,
/ i1 s+ f( V2 }% |  J0 FBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 l0 {$ e, ]1 N) DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) T- b. }/ _3 b5 A7 pCan I entrust it to you?
. S4 X$ q* ]! E5 ~8 f" D* KEntrust my love within your heart
& s3 v, U+ r7 ^Love… just the word love
0 \- D  K# ^: I4 {( Z- u  {Why is it so difficult to express?
( A5 L$ W7 R9 e. }. PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 J' o, d8 Z+ o9 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: H& v/ Y8 v  ]4 s$ iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- p6 e/ `5 C+ t, a5 P2 `) x+ h* OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 a3 k. ]5 F0 T3 y! t3 T& PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% Q$ d: R0 `' N; iCan I entrust it to you?
8 p! U1 ]( }& a8 v& d2 m: ^4 uEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. ~3 A3 M( W2 H! ~, C5 x# d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 f! D! g9 [) E4 x/ l/ B' p6 K<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, i/ M( }* d! C& `4 `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 t) a% O6 v' O% n! S6 M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. H# o) k* |0 g' @+ c  N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& R# R5 Y: }+ @8 u5 \# L. f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" _% C% U0 e2 ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 H* H6 B+ s" V+ F: h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( w. U1 i" A8 t$ L# s: Y5 h) N<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. C) _1 \' B1 ]' I% t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) a& @7 N/ K0 l, @5 E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ W& ]# p/ M- N+ z% V; [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ d5 l: C! P/ R! X8 ]/ g: a<P>但我不会</P>
* V5 W7 P. D% }8 s7 |% P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, Q! N' m( L) ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 Q, }) S& m- N6 @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. Y. y. U3 K6 S5 i3 b) b# t9 X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 I% y3 ~; |* ~9 S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; o3 u! Y' D3 @' {3 v1 U- }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 J+ z; b1 u) U* E/ J+ R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, A0 `6 _$ m( k( q% n) ]% O<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 N' }7 F# a4 C# n' f<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# |+ [2 P, O3 t( O" C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ O+ K# b! d$ T; U/ ~, ]. g* H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 C1 u; t1 ]& S$ \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* U/ z3 o. d4 M8 }- e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 s8 e) J& [  d9 I; ~% h" j/ L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 |0 O7 H* k6 z% }2 a<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 \  U, l& Y% f5 F* q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>