【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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" |! J! O$ n4 P' a4 ^& y) N0 I3 c我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# L$ d# l$ B) J# T0 l: ]From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 _. o: |# X; j, n( r5 XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# M& U) s: \/ U$ {7 P. ]' CI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- H6 F- B# j+ c1 hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 A* ]! f' d+ P# ?4 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ o8 q2 b; z6 J0 u) y4 VIf today isn’t too late,
  P8 d0 Q8 z1 kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 m2 F4 G) B; [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 L! m- T( x8 ?; v" x' n2 GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. H% w. H1 f7 u& P! p  rIf today isn’t too late,
2 q. q# ^1 K" }$ ~7 }5 JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' X2 r0 K+ M6 Q7 E5 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 Z) [9 `' i" a; w  ~Can I entrust it to you?
$ k# f$ a  `3 b- eEntrust my love within your heart
1 C/ H, r# J6 X, Y$ rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ V, j" r( e. O: x! s9 T7 ~, \3 \* F7 h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. q) I' G0 `' n( f<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; E, _  n7 t8 c- a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 W* L9 P. X( S8 ?( Y$ ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  L/ g- P  t& [% H<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 X! w8 r5 V; z& p6 A<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 O# d- P$ o% m2 A<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ S$ N6 d, E2 b+ q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. _& l, ^9 L0 k4 g6 O<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ V1 }: C* ]7 X4 A<P>但我不会</P>
1 `* D; }- Q- K/ L* H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' z( Q+ |6 |& [5 }+ v4 [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" c8 `. h9 g6 l4 }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! G# G  b' f+ }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 O: r. |2 `) w/ N! W+ c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( ?' K( D0 g8 W5 \5 o6 T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  I, ~! l  r2 q' V4 x. j! ]6 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ }, b- b2 G0 {) x<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: r9 u- m( a, F<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* k5 E, R2 M# `/ q% R6 w5 W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: l9 \: ^7 y2 f3 C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 I6 E" j7 E! L4 W& V8 o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 t, e2 d4 l0 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 ^1 m5 q( Z+ ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 c0 o8 i! R. ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& U$ ~" i! `4 ?+ A$ E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* _9 }4 Y! L" G 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 @8 a) N) d4 I6 J* ]这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 ]4 B+ d* k7 Q) h) O8 g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>