【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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* ~2 g& q7 @8 P: G我另将歌词附在此。
  Y5 W* m5 h! q/ [! k5 [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; x4 z7 ~4 m6 h/ D  o3 dI already loved you with all my heart
6 w& w& D! Z# W3 K5 q6 v8 ~We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& N1 S# s5 j3 E' t9 ~# ~I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& `7 B: Z. P0 r( {Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, A9 G* k# I# ]( D+ ]/ z# E+ {, VBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  _0 t8 ]7 G& U- cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ {% ?6 ]( u7 MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! v/ z" ]* W  {. c$ dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! y/ [" D0 `* M- jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 R+ b3 S+ P/ S, t) j/ [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  I) t: a/ n, G* c: r6 a; U2 |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 B  t5 y9 V8 ?9 P) wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

: X& W7 D8 }; X$ F6 V' T[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ t8 r3 S& z0 e5 a1 y2 q/ ]* W- e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 U( E, |( I; P6 x# h1 f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  J% J- ^& |2 M$ ]  \! w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ s( ]3 R. F# s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' Y3 _" ^1 r: V5 Y5 |<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% _8 N8 x& T7 X+ ]6 G: C0 R* b<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% Z) J2 u" X1 c+ Z/ A7 b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 i$ r4 ~, H; Z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' [' V* B3 W& x, j3 U1 a7 c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! x. s6 a& s' K8 [% G<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( N) N* Q  y1 s8 Q! z1 J# b<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ Y* \/ @! f5 E<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' y( V6 i% a, J0 V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 v6 L; e7 o& x# D7 ^! Z3 h+ O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" k$ }; S' K' Q2 l- Q7 Z. J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 i, D; E! [$ E  D( B+ L6 M( U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ C4 ?9 @% o5 Y: P- d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 P( v/ @5 S2 O9 N. H# j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: P, n  U  f7 c* V8 ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 o4 G1 ]% [1 @" G! d3 q, D4 C  V3 m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) R  ^( V5 o) M4 A( a- n<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  a. ]8 D3 p) p* f" x* F9 M# L<P>But I never did </P>
$ Y0 y+ f& J' r5 Z<P>但我不会 </P>
. Z# S: X8 R5 d' A+ [0 e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; x+ c; l- f8 K4 s9 n+ N<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' ^) X: q8 ~9 |* H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 i4 |' N4 K4 S6 ^+ y2 M- C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! Z& Z9 S4 Q0 @, \) E3 U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 p( c6 Q. `& p. @" l- x( Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! V8 X9 v& C; A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' z! X. L4 g, l2 b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; T* F7 S1 {. U! Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; k: D1 O8 Y  _1 B# n 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! l2 l# U! d! l6 g8 x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" F6 K* `( n7 H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>