【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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4 P- P( b4 s$ s$ V& M6 k- V/ x, v" h3 s我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 o5 R1 Y; P5 f( ~I already loved you with all my heart
. H- G, f3 c, hWe meet and talk everyday,
; k, [  g; A" t! [) R% YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" O$ h2 r! A. p& I0 _4 tLove… just the word love
. h2 P+ z7 N8 H! e; X& BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 i  X& |" R3 E4 c  B) JBut I never did
  y* v1 X9 Q; a+ QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# o; G6 ^" R, G, f" V7 y, e) q/ Z4 AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 f; f5 Y0 v4 t, ICan I entrust it to you?
6 Z, g! A/ M( G, _6 \: MEntrust my love within your heart
& o* z& N4 g. Z- mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 x- Q  I  a( `9 N$ L# ABut I never did
7 G7 B% l3 e8 m8 x  f  eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" @3 X% t& _0 u# eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- g+ L# c4 P6 M& ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ U, S/ u- l& aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ g) f2 h$ }( VEntrust my love within your heart

' J' u  A* z8 h/ q# P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 i: @1 a8 ^4 g4 |- W0 R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# F. x4 z& o4 J, F! w6 X0 S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 g" K" U: x+ x: W- E6 x( B<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 U2 M1 M0 q$ v2 \<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 S% v: m$ ]: B. S<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& p5 w7 Y8 P9 @4 d' H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 F& q3 {. a& i  a<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 ]2 y" ?4 w6 n; I. T  y5 A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 B5 B- b- v3 a, _3 `# L& }2 B<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: C4 B( h$ [* t6 r<P>但我不会</P>
$ I1 t- v0 s9 Z' s<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 l7 L: c1 L* c7 \" U& @# ]& M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* L. I2 h! y! A  i# z2 \1 G9 i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( b$ e& u) z* V% X3 P1 X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ f- o9 X3 R! M9 B+ O. F<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 l$ F) Y# H0 t  z% o<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  h" [! X( R" d+ g* r9 q: H<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; H5 V$ Z# E- n. }  l" u% h% a<P>但我不会 </P>
+ p0 E4 m. Y6 U% A4 Z& E# }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, w/ |- Q8 T( G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- }8 I: _( D- `! u9 X9 z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 Z. v; b8 _. d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 E: m% c2 e; u% L4 A( f% R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# h. s& n- J4 w  m, F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: w- e& q9 h! d  J# I. C$ \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& O& `5 X! u' ]7 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! K4 A% y) w1 s8 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 r0 K; G5 v( y+ H% f# N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 c4 O# O: U$ |5 ]- K2 ?. e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) F4 I, Q' ~: T/ u3 f- K) [1 C/ Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 ?; D) n: T1 E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 M& I3 B! g6 @4 N 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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+ Q6 r" D& j3 ~% y& E4 d! O这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. y0 ~( M9 K) d' z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% F4 [+ M" N( R5 m' u0 f<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>