【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 ^0 Z+ E. W3 o7 P. k$ LThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# S3 z% a1 C- m2 K" `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& m1 w7 B0 P. e0 y2 c, KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; z& S/ y9 |1 h& m; m  fI would probably know how you feel
8 |7 w) b) b+ D" G: qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" b1 R( `8 L" C6 c2 W7 V/ hBut I never did
7 P; {& D) N5 Z! fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 C* n" Y9 k6 G" e# ~. jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 ^4 }, @$ T& E/ L/ vCan I entrust it to you?
$ E4 j3 t  d4 R/ _/ F! t; C5 @3 _Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ y+ N: d" f4 o3 A2 L- QI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& `# @5 u# G/ A3 l( N1 ], j. j$ w5 ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& m% L: S6 z( ^; vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: ^' I* g" a) ]9 t  w& c3 ?( x# VCan I entrust it to you?
$ t: o% n3 @6 J( ]Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ r. \  N( h1 y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 H7 G5 Z0 }" h$ ], w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: N# |6 _0 b* @) }+ |8 t/ P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 L# `- _* }  S/ G3 `$ s2 N0 c5 F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 w8 a( o! v2 R. P8 y2 b. E% [% }<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 i' s6 W3 t" S; r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% P  |! \  w, j# F/ S9 [<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; E1 f; p2 D. @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 B* S3 k; R7 @$ l) @5 y7 N2 v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 D6 b% j/ F3 v6 A: ]0 |/ {7 F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ M  W* V5 X& o% c- R( |  ^) ~" S<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ I7 [0 D# N/ p# V, K% P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: b5 u% M7 f$ g- s4 O7 h6 z! Y% o4 _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 E  {6 v6 N' g1 P5 F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% x7 H, Y4 X( ?( I8 c1 G<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# y3 K) A; `9 u2 N. u! U! C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' A6 ~* R& n  Q  |& U3 m$ Z, l$ _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 o( r% q' F% p+ u" E" i<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 D  L6 A' Z/ p8 \8 T! ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, a: _# u3 N0 }* L5 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; g4 |+ O* C* A" ~9 J7 w1 t" x: j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; y1 h; \- u2 `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ z" @4 y0 V" m1 V0 G3 D<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 @: S+ F* r" `, h9 }2 I. P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 z0 I2 o* ~' A, B<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% x: u7 A1 u/ g+ j: }; M3 t1 J4 o% O<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ S( s, L9 J/ R0 `& {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ l) z& l! Z" I! b  B! `0 i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! V3 j: A% f9 C5 [/ m& I, L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! z" A3 _& a1 |0 i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" c0 Q7 z& r/ w* a( B" m# `, `9 z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 t. b) z+ Y( U0 Q7 W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& J1 B# R: }! }0 _0 `8 i3 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! I* s" X3 ^4 f/ b* j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 U$ |" O# J: r<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
, ~  D6 [7 `/ L( y0 p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

: l# G" K, ?: C这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 N) y3 B- P: _; f! ~$ ^" m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>