【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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" Q) U) t, [6 f. c1 u- p5 d/ E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 x# Q" s$ V( T+ z- n. ?We meet and talk everyday,
" _! }2 p$ y" Z  \But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 {- R; n! x1 h; OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 @$ b+ j5 ?, p, b& X% L8 I3 u# GLove… just the word love
" V% n5 |& X4 s) [7 W' TWhy is it so difficult to express?
, q/ |. _, p+ q" D  e+ H2 N8 mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; b2 Q6 }3 M8 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 e1 b+ X4 d$ I5 I3 i7 n( OIf today isn’t too late,
! @7 _- n2 V! B" CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) V" C' N; `, YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) J/ d9 \# L+ V5 r3 G. wBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ Z- z1 E3 ?  \. a: ?If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; Z( |6 P% ^8 U1 a% s& b. jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) o0 o. D+ I( Q; P5 i3 I4 G) ]Entrust my love within your heart
6 z7 a' y+ k* ?  l$ e: S0 FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 j. t2 \2 @6 f4 e7 E0 t; {( }$ Z; e<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' j+ K$ c, `* }5 {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. n/ m) B+ D' k+ i  ]! z. |2 L, ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, g3 Y! P: i8 I; [7 s<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: `9 \( X8 W5 G0 d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& X+ |6 a2 x1 s" G<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ {( M, D2 w, M+ M<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! q0 J! Y  Z, u7 E; ?) {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 b) a" s6 o* a) E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 g+ F" U1 i8 M; j8 x" g9 A: f  J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! C( {2 u1 m9 S/ G$ p. ~6 w% I<P>但我不会</P>
$ I( V: c% u/ ]' k# u: _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 h9 @, O5 i; X( l2 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  j6 E8 N3 J5 L4 Z% E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% Y0 y3 R( g  e/ E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- p3 M6 C# V* }* T9 ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# @# q; B9 e" i: g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 g) a4 S1 }1 H) c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 y% `5 m/ i' m. L- t<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 w) [# C+ R& `% o2 v<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) x: Q7 W! M' }  U6 \* P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% O9 \$ H8 T/ u* I8 I- c' [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 W/ |/ {3 |) _4 G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: ^' a! N  u  s1 q; h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" {) _! S9 Z4 X4 s, f( B3 K9 X9 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>