【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 Q: H+ o, w$ T& ~我另将歌词附在此。
7 I6 E' v' P# U4 S: }  cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! r7 S. o3 _, VI would probably know how you feel
; `2 L4 u) l5 [7 s7 }Love… just the word love
+ x& P( S  Q  W- b% x' E1 C! DWhy is it so difficult to express?
- y2 b0 N) C* O! ^2 VI want to confess that I love you,
* z; r- d- Y; R+ l( ^. H; q& ]- ~But I never did
0 L6 d/ @. v- ?) ]6 J/ {; qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 c3 U$ @+ ^& ^: X$ Z0 Y: o, _If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ S3 X8 `. f7 |. HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 c+ [. P3 [" fEntrust my love within your heart
1 _: q+ m. K+ `" ]( SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( x  b0 {; I6 ?0 Y% r, |- U  PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 S1 e; R# g9 O; F$ e( g# n  S: TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 R# ]4 A7 o4 _2 ?# c0 nCan I entrust it to you?
' s2 _5 |& ]! r+ m3 @# aEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% w- `2 A; w0 t+ e! A& p<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 p* H4 Y# Y4 Q' }0 B1 d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& ]/ @" W+ I0 b. {6 F* F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 C/ A$ Z6 X) U2 C& B! s* R" _: V5 U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) e; c9 }  G0 Y" I" d9 `7 V8 H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" ]6 E& I; J7 U3 C5 H5 L( t, @" V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 h8 ?4 m+ o- t8 J& f; V) o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 j) W7 @7 u0 r) x3 R<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 K9 e" G. t# n2 T2 m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) b6 f8 b0 X& b, l! u8 }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 A% I6 u9 `) }/ l9 t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 V" [, ]/ |+ z$ @- z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 [( i2 j& N+ ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ A1 y) J  V. N# t6 ~' z% ]; ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 T' q4 h" k1 ^0 R6 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ N$ e$ W2 x0 m9 v<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 f+ H7 w  e  M5 B9 i$ ^4 j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% W# f8 i9 ]* l0 a4 m' }% A<P>但我不会 </P>
2 [8 W6 b8 R) n/ I% F* I! X' W- Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 f; m! Q$ y4 y2 [" J! u' n; }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 i- G  w% ?1 q" n$ ~2 e, f<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ C8 N3 v. n! o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 ?2 I& ]+ W3 ^$ O' D" j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* [1 y4 }8 K6 T" z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 s( }  I5 M) k* D4 T8 P% H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ X7 L! G0 @- H$ `: r4 T2 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 H: y' @' ^. Y) w3 M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 x6 a0 w  ~5 l! H2 E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, ~# H. b) n0 k: r( U+ m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>