【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 N4 T) u- s  M; p- d- N* C$ O6 k6 DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  v; t0 f- M9 x7 j& m$ FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& U# O1 \0 t# @. eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 F. r$ v3 r, _8 F4 w* \If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ G( i6 a/ w+ @3 @- QI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" S1 O% t8 I" p: D9 nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 T7 K: D% S7 r1 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) r. l# f8 m$ zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ M. j/ x) M# a, O4 H( k. VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 Z3 \& ?9 d' i4 S% g, TLove… just the word love
; X9 c& G" Z9 B) J, PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 ~5 |8 }/ j! I" ]If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 r1 z  z. ]4 H" `2 XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 m* p% W0 z( i! d! {Can I entrust it to you?
% w' ?8 I( G4 x1 O/ p. H2 \Entrust my love within your heart

7 E* N& N8 o( K1 V2 v$ d& _8 x0 i1 s[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ k0 |! N4 C( G5 q: g( A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( m8 y; w8 Y4 Y2 B1 V: f* p<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 r, F$ D9 ?4 |! A5 x8 O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ i6 B4 v% G* f) I9 q# x. p<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" f" M* x* [$ O  G8 E<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) Z% e' r# f; D3 V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 p/ c! z6 i; X& Q% t, p3 _<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. a, ]( F; V% z7 o# q" ?0 A9 H+ z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 ?0 S  _- {" d<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: P& m  K( y' m6 }0 w8 }6 v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 V0 V5 p. L  s2 h7 ]" I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ G: g0 H$ Z9 \& i" _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 b( O& N' c  V* @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 g' L3 A; }# ~) S( `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! B1 a. u- g9 `<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( ]0 m+ d9 U7 T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, S( ?3 [9 m& e, A) x; b; ]0 R- S+ y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 Q1 Y( i3 I- ^0 m2 K. Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  Q9 T) [3 Y8 r7 J- q1 {5 x3 b% A$ _# j<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 p; k" R4 H% r! Q1 l0 c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! l4 ~" c; @/ A0 Q, _/ N9 B<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* D; m4 c; u/ A<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ q3 L  W4 W, |$ W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- o: T' L( q% `% N; s7 w) O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 o( O( o6 T0 s: N0 B4 _1 t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, s9 F: u  g0 _( i+ ?& b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) {) k$ `4 U- _1 q8 Y6 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 j( x/ P, a2 c& c% s/ W# F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 i9 `5 M% P: T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 U% S  w3 v+ [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; Z* a  t  g" Y$ j$ ]8 U<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 Q" K+ G( r( \6 a$ |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ o' `7 U5 j7 ~4 V0 T" S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>