【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
: D+ X& }& l4 |/ v" T! D5 l3 [* LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 _+ e7 U# ]) p( D: r  o7 u" v6 o9 |2 zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 M: g5 C8 e; ]" y* ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- \* ^2 D( _* K7 {, {I would probably know how you feel
- T4 N4 H& \5 m! o1 d8 uLove… just the word love
  p/ J0 i# L' C8 c& e  ^4 \5 VWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 X- F0 H5 r6 d! X% N0 @$ q1 CI want to confess that I love you,
6 z2 ?6 I3 _( _0 mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" E: w3 d: i( b8 kIf today isn’t too late,
- i. Y! Z$ J$ }# J* {+ r5 AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 S, l% E. F; X0 w+ M. T& PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 y+ M: [* y+ C, b+ M" {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 J. |$ b& K. ^7 S$ z" Y; B# N) TLove… just the word love
: }* M5 g5 ?5 ]2 rWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 W' M( ]  U- \" C% ]3 ^0 G/ ^I want to confess that I love you,
) L  O" _+ n/ g" jBut I never did
5 g& D/ C3 e6 I* l- D+ \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 A/ i% x/ _8 H( S8 oIf today isn’t too late,
& }* v; A$ m2 BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ O2 C  ]6 G) l7 R  |3 n: @! n" o0 aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) `6 a" b5 x  u' ]3 y! vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) g) B, `0 ^% i7 D% E4 w) r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

) b. c$ `( Y: |9 g; b. ^8 g<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 ^. K% }# J3 V" F* P+ w# w1 O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) W2 X* O9 |; }& Z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' o* c- n: H2 b% y- U# N: `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* J7 N7 @& m/ N<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 n( c, v5 \1 [$ e* f& q, ^" w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 f& Y1 U( }+ a1 u3 w) f8 j<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- J( D3 y8 _% _* T$ m$ H3 n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, j, H2 A, _' o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: h" l0 \- Z/ J* Y* \) [0 Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 U5 B6 m1 ?  Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 L* E8 O  |  G1 z3 W& n' |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ n; x0 Z9 R8 ^( Y" m8 f<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 ?9 X/ t  ]3 U) b' J. W$ r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: H5 l# E% g4 o4 n. F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 t, G- P: }7 u  \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; M' R$ ~' i, Q9 q! [, _. E<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ y% {" J' f  V$ }. y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- b3 s% N( U8 x% V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" v3 A' Q* V( Y% W. q1 l" o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 n1 P# P' @- F# l0 ?" i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 q) T1 x; l4 p, H+ N& R4 U7 i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' J, l; v% g) \5 r/ r& C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 J0 {, i4 e2 c8 S9 j: G" D! }& |<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  K1 E7 ]* J3 {* s8 ^7 K. G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ `% H" Z( r8 s5 m: \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ m# n; f) F4 ?$ z; w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 r5 o! r! u$ v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ u6 N/ w0 p; n7 U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ P0 E" r+ @  d. y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 F+ a, e" J; ~' U, ~3 t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; c" {+ F0 r, S$ Y6 r0 n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 w) o- |4 k$ Z: o: i1 X/ g" z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 D0 _& r) ^- Z& I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. P2 E1 L' B$ {4 C7 T<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" V# a0 x8 V: |, c  ~5 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 }  B% u% k2 F9 e; D6 L/ Z0 n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>