【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ ^. h9 a/ l7 y9 MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, u# \0 k7 G% g9 |8 YFrom the first moment we met,
+ J( P- G  \6 z8 x3 GI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  f; f/ ~7 j) X- YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 Q6 ~) I- v3 y5 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: ]2 a0 I3 @7 i3 t  @+ kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; T) o) H) K5 u' C8 _# d7 ?Can I entrust it to you?
4 U7 E1 E5 w1 r7 Z" vEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, L+ S3 b1 A' I9 OWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( b& N6 a7 M: ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 J0 }2 [2 ?: {( G- T. ^$ mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. |) n) }6 L) @$ fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

( V& x) ?; k5 f$ q+ T& I7 X) _7 a# ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" T( s" N9 ~1 d, R% I7 X' A2 Y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: Y, H  f7 K# z3 J2 B; m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, E* E2 o  g' z9 v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* |/ r  f9 F$ a( B" d. b, t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! j. ^. ^: E! w' c- u0 Z  C) X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: t1 R$ z4 M' N' ]% S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 j: P7 J! k( O& Q5 |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 t% m5 R8 T( E) A: N9 e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 |& d( u0 t$ R# F# K) b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* P0 r% K# w* U" F5 g# D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; B% B) [+ w/ c3 R/ L4 |8 u& k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ f# x+ y. U2 p! P% x0 Y  B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; p! z6 e7 Y% T! Y. {. Y* @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 v2 P) w0 {! D7 I: W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: b5 \8 T7 B& \; A" {<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ b+ U8 x6 \2 F' q2 h9 r- M<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 i( a6 k* r0 s0 }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! a7 o+ F# R9 n5 u" f, v<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, g+ A8 z3 V* g- ]<P>But I never did </P>
& u6 {0 q; s! {2 N' b; L* u  V, M<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; l; Y- K7 w+ K. ?! T9 ]! K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 X) r: T( f' q7 E) j. _& [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ o1 C3 `3 _, A( b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' C8 A; A, Q* K% C8 d  Y; \. p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 a$ n$ T% z6 {/ e2 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# A' s0 G; B, ?7 W+ G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 N- Z5 p1 T3 N; R% u# }<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" i% y2 E2 M% x# ?. x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>