【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 h- m6 ^9 B( j我另将歌词附在此。
. z' _- _0 O9 Q) g) VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. s4 W$ @3 h& {' m( KFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 V# q: J3 i4 k! ]" N4 ]$ YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# q/ H9 ?5 p6 [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 d" h# v2 p, q4 C5 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. \7 O) l) `3 r2 [$ e, f2 Z; l  rCan I entrust it to you?
. f! Y* O* ?. P+ [4 V% d0 Q  k  qEntrust my love within your heart
3 B8 Q7 K, W4 |) k+ X1 O. `" FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 ^. g( D  s- v( ^Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

5 V% K" y7 t, f& H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 P" t- d0 a; j. y& T' X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; P2 Z6 @3 Q4 j4 s4 @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 T  {) P  F; F- p<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 E: D9 ~# V" x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 b1 g; X) ]6 W! @2 Q4 @  ]<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 h5 o0 o' t( ?: V' U  Q, {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  s3 d! |+ X( _9 A7 u6 I" a$ o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# J" Y0 Y8 Z; c; v: v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; E7 [6 M5 D0 D$ w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 c" {, O# Q. E1 h9 {& L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" Y+ ~3 M7 b* R& {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 F3 {: k7 ?3 S3 y( ]' u$ k3 P<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ |/ ~; d2 H- _8 _% u6 r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' s: M- q: g& ?: }" i( F* p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- n  O' y4 }) i8 H( a$ U2 y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: [" m; @. J7 Y$ d4 Y$ |; U* n- U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( S3 ~# ~3 f# T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ Y5 N& v$ R$ d. I& I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 a2 `8 m; _7 q: P5 I/ \$ ]9 z& a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ `  {7 R5 q- e. O; d. V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- W0 \( h- k. A. Z+ l. `" l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% Z! E. b* j2 A( H* ^+ D' H<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 v/ H# r% h$ I0 d% W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) d, C4 n4 J" Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. K9 e. h' S9 Q! W$ A  z, |$ }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
, t# [+ j' P# g8 b<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 l6 M6 ?$ Q: N$ o2 b$ g2 R! w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 s7 [: C; h( A; ?# v4 {# {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  N7 X. C0 h5 u- j0 ]! m, d. M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) A& Q# d8 Q" X" ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, D( k( f% \+ ]4 f/ D0 F3 Q( e: \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  n* a- k* t9 `# K# |9 A<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 s9 q3 j% K2 S2 n: T0 q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 Z" d* t# X  X7 V<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>