【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ g3 u  s2 i3 [& _+ l% f  U3 DFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# n1 b! q% i1 m0 E5 N  r1 NWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' f2 t5 @) B& R% j3 Q( f/ {- ZIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; Y8 R6 ?$ A# _  E9 HI would probably know how you feel
# I+ R- |" b3 d/ B# _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ j9 |4 f5 o4 k- D& qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" M7 F, P. \% t; I8 _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. {6 M) }; e: R) q8 T$ {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 w2 t7 \! T% Z1 c4 \1 uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, X# P% c, a' G8 a  Q7 LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! L4 s+ C' O% E8 P; H+ {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 t. D4 o; ^! `" OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 F, J. F" a0 e# B9 d1 w<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* h: K. a( s1 m) R5 R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' h, g1 j' l8 m$ i8 I<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: B1 P) W  b0 m+ q! W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% L2 }# D7 h& c- w9 U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 e/ O- v! h- \4 u, Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' a2 _' L! `: F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 \, U, W. Q6 `0 B! [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  l2 c1 o: j! V: A- S( m+ z" W<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ E) p; A. a+ H<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, e' O4 j# _1 x* c- V6 x) P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 w3 V) o- f! L) x, |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 p4 q; T3 P+ L# _% @  U, C<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 B' }3 _# X! L! s" n' u. G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 M0 n6 l# H& H! B. m: h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, ~  v0 V& m# @/ U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 v1 ~7 S# s% d5 A2 E9 F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; K+ N  X1 p! `: f' `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ `. P+ M. L( l- F2 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 p4 Y5 X2 \/ p- Y8 a* J( x. l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 F, P3 C0 K# c: x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 u+ G5 M5 o4 S! [( _3 V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 w2 z6 c' i, p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 \* [+ g& [8 u) q' e3 S* ?<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 ~2 A4 n5 @1 y; ?+ C$ A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ I2 k2 Y+ z. B* g" J- E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, l* U: i! n' {8 L* c! H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, y1 j) k6 {7 A& r0 g# Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- Q6 ?8 _: Z" Z& y5 I' y! {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- F6 v) l! s% k3 Y1 Q/ }$ T( \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ f( o+ [4 N' g8 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 E! l  v2 B8 q7 l<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! g/ K% N! B& z. f# `3 a% ~ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 b: C# [7 [  T2 k* b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>