【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 y# g) e7 }3 q& |From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  }$ z! O) o% s# fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
( ?1 v7 v& K- W; d, A9 ~2 aWhy is it so difficult to express?
, n& Q2 d8 E2 p2 \9 uI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% A6 N% t4 P* X2 t% _3 zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  |+ F8 G& |1 L9 h) M( V$ [4 AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. N5 @* F9 W2 C& OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" ?/ C* S6 `* qI want to confess that I love you,
) u" ]. I: R6 [% cBut I never did
, W- T% I+ `2 U! q/ m3 i) L! ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& s8 {: L+ V# Z1 G7 L0 \. vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 q. ?6 j, k* D1 v( r; `1 rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 Z  Z! {" ~" d* {2 H6 lEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- r6 w) e. b2 L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" s/ }6 t4 v( b! q9 I1 U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; o4 D* g3 y% l) o/ R4 e+ M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 y  ~) Z6 @: ]. U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. y& B0 \0 d# `3 m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 l2 `- |- W- N! \+ m. _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, I# M+ X  @% u, y3 y5 ~- |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: X2 |, G) L8 p/ ]- {# R( `9 w  N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 s; [) E  T4 g2 d& A' a/ w<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 k( e& f1 d6 w) a<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 G7 S' d7 o& U7 d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: B. X& `, X. D' r) q( R' a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' n/ J; ?0 T; u1 C2 T* Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 w8 [( [% a4 u& R1 F4 f5 q9 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" W0 n& H: u2 H1 v7 o- P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* W0 o0 \; h( C$ F6 i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ w- [$ q' H! C) G4 l# P1 M<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' }& Q8 Z! \; C" k<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, A* b# n  x* h( `( R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' s0 ~" p& t) V% Q; C+ x5 t9 Y<P>But I never did </P>
+ B  n9 N0 c- Y* t, b( U<P>但我不会 </P>
5 |9 c3 M* V+ {) A2 A<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% }0 Z. t* A% ~! @  }% A* C" c2 K7 j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 m; g+ t6 X6 a6 m. L7 p/ k2 Q+ x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- x2 r5 o# P& W7 e; P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 X0 J/ p, _" E7 l# f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 J  P" [  ]4 g. s, V! h) ^6 T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 V+ L: `. K. m, K% E, Z: y2 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! I* @9 Q- X! c2 {! D5 K7 @+ ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* c0 [2 b7 E5 m' @* x 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  I. r" k8 D$ N7 C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>