【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
, J$ X0 \9 m! e1 ]; VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% Q. h3 A+ E, F3 mFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! I& [8 |5 T7 y" c: @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" R' i9 s+ O6 b- Z% v7 I. pI would probably know how you feel
" {" a+ C- ~9 j6 s, N/ b: {5 ?Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  a9 d; d9 Z% k0 cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( G8 z# c! n5 k0 t2 oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 V3 g5 _7 C) M5 m- W, |+ k. hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' A: D  N; _& b! T( |; uCan I entrust it to you?
& O+ M+ y- `- E4 J: kEntrust my love within your heart
) [: N! Z0 h3 e" k1 i/ \. k: `0 OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( W" l7 J  Q4 lI want to confess that I love you,
& f; ]; W, b/ sBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# Z$ Z3 i/ G* E0 e. z! |4 _! t! }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 `+ z! F, N7 s  F2 FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, M+ }: L7 `6 Z0 Y$ A+ ?5 h! Q/ M<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: l% |0 f" P' x2 F3 e; h<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; Q7 }  u" S- |5 C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; q' n) _9 }# J# E8 A2 `8 \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- t0 Z9 @# z2 G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 c0 e! z3 a. k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 ]6 z: S+ e. Z( q* e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" k6 S# V/ J" w" C  c0 g( x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 z6 r4 ?' f6 e  i+ A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( S! l2 `/ U4 T' H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 |* |* R: p3 f  s) O+ |1 R- B( ~, B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; m+ u6 k5 l: f# p2 w$ l<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" K; w& a3 W1 c<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ h( G, F2 g1 C( G6 d5 x0 E" b; l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: J+ i$ j9 Y& l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% L; i  G3 B4 N- Z# E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; J6 ~+ @4 e" c3 j8 B4 q& O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 E5 [* N) P0 u) W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ J3 L, r( c6 i% R6 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! W5 M, m. e% g: _" z  m+ I3 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ K& w9 g; u/ K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& \2 w) w8 r# Y# U; [6 a3 K<P>Love… just the word love </P>
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; x% S) [* J  [; B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 O4 x8 {; }6 i. f' X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
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( J" w4 m/ x6 D. D- k, R) }" l0 J2 [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 w" N! \$ T  w. ]2 v% x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 g4 L3 ~% ^2 ?7 X' j! O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" n4 C% Z% ]% _! x! Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ w; m) j9 I2 F$ D) g9 t9 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 o1 b" r, x$ }+ H% [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 P5 E. @  {$ @3 h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: v- T5 x" `! e) h/ H4 g1 Y5 P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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