【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
0 N" C. `  O5 Z& g8 Y6 OThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 m% ~6 W/ T$ aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 A) V1 d9 T8 sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. o6 l8 |4 u# r- K1 xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) h2 a! s% X" A, v- V  D, P& j; LI would probably know how you feel
! X/ u+ c" C3 |4 D  W) LLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! X. s& F" ~0 D: P' A' @# LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% s! N# p- p% l; x2 M2 C: CIf today isn’t too late,
" c  g$ f$ D( ^6 l/ D( hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  K; M" N; X8 w8 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' W% S# \0 R5 g$ P9 u/ Z5 PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* r, v2 Q1 ?. c/ C& yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 P. C+ ?- z# ?, I+ G7 g: w3 ]I want to confess that I love you,
$ r) @) M- G" w* sBut I never did
& U- z" M2 W5 i4 W* c6 s" \5 |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 Y; v5 z% Q5 I; r" _9 [If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' }% k; H% h2 q8 H# ^* HCan I entrust it to you?
* Y0 D6 Y5 P4 w; ~' MEntrust my love within your heart
& X9 @; t# Z# \" d6 E, q+ bCan I entrust it to you?
6 r  `$ x/ v6 A8 gEntrust my love within your heart

, e! j' e  {3 u9 H4 H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, Q! V$ Q7 z( A" m: b: y% c) ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' |# }! q1 Z; J1 d9 H  u1 V, ^- {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# |8 H# h9 R( b. J: L' k& W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 Q3 Z, S' W6 f& c, F4 B<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 `- V3 u% P4 R- Y- X<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 x0 j+ Q/ T  K9 h' q& Z# i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: t- h4 v7 G( Y- o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: @# V4 }  ~3 `$ K- e; [<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( f( S! t( Z  O- F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 t0 {4 E- W/ v( r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 }: x. }/ u: h" e4 l9 j: V<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 s' [! m5 b# V* p, S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 \. q+ ], M$ T* S* P0 `& r0 V<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# k5 s/ n4 }3 z& o! C9 x$ g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 i+ ~' L. M- Y4 E1 \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( t: M, B4 ~7 C; R# `' v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( F- l' C# K2 f& V; p$ f<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 n! w- N' f3 D/ Z) p8 Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! O: H+ Y! y1 j6 ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 \3 K$ Z& W3 K7 [2 f- ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 U; Q6 q, @7 I. D. [<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
- l. q. x6 T0 S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* t/ y* D% x. {7 ?- i4 T8 U" [4 ^5 g<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' Y" N0 A6 g& I8 |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 W9 A2 w: e1 |: ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 X0 N( f$ E8 O% N, ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" i7 I. u- u! v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 s/ {4 X' \* F! C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ [8 r5 q3 n5 {; T1 l/ ~8 X4 e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, _) C9 {% C* n) }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ X: H8 O$ E# L* y- H5 c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

1 |% Z6 w5 f* ?% W3 a这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 N; M7 m7 R& B1 I( h<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>