【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
- U1 Z, ]& M# x: M0 f

5 k8 n0 K$ Y/ T/ c7 H/ N& B: v" g<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODYzNzI=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
# D! J1 }2 y$ q7 ~- ?" |
' i" S2 J9 b/ p' E9 u% Y- T% J
( h( Z9 X0 Z8 p) ?$ a$ ?7 Z我另将歌词附在此。
9 h* `) e6 w+ ~5 l8 o- \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 t* F0 k  x! \9 o5 eBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; n- X7 Y9 F* h: zI would probably know how you feel
4 p4 U( J9 V# p# ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 l! p/ K3 P2 Y- HBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 X, U5 O' f1 s7 n: g" yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 G$ v) D& p! N3 H2 h/ S* L; q! [" lEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! \5 P$ |- v* J8 [7 n- Q1 hWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 z' s: r# N& nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* D5 P0 L8 B- x8 a- Z6 M& |0 OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 n" H9 O* a( {) G+ [If today isn’t too late,
3 J7 W$ h' R! {, S, l  d! L  lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ U6 e, l) Q5 z" L' W) j) [Can I entrust it to you?
, k( l  }, E" Z0 f+ V# EEntrust my love within your heart
, S% L9 y9 ?+ K% [3 l7 ]: M( UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 u8 V9 W9 A, V5 I7 g
" ?: d9 _0 B6 s5 z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

: v8 [3 ?! ~+ L
2 _9 m9 B. b2 `+ ^+ _7 q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, H3 n6 f+ ~( X* A& ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 Y1 F, ^2 K: B- s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ @3 q2 v- }/ a' J. o<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& Z9 P- v+ ]0 |<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 c, G# z) z- Z3 j  J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ J' ~6 k5 F# B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# b3 G( q- \7 T6 [4 e0 P# g) @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( R: v  @/ M3 H% j; e. f9 o4 _2 z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ L) Q( J) [0 D% N5 j; @5 B/ f<P>但我不会</P>
- d9 j" V! L% D0 ~: W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 t0 b0 l  c* V0 ^6 z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( ~: }7 y  s" t' i7 `1 F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( z! V# C4 b4 b! }) c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ a4 I6 @8 u  S% B) H/ L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 x  O; ]1 r  n% F7 a! Y: Z' N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 W7 x  c; J7 q8 B# {' C& a# ?4 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ Z& J! ~$ n- S& f+ r2 M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 t2 a& S- D& F! U; m4 s" ?<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" h0 M! o" D3 D" R/ e: k9 _* h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- v5 \+ {! G" q' \# n<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ M7 Q' J0 s  W+ _9 e, z) t, M9 E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) ]0 p' l- R0 U# r" P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ n% s$ U0 X  h0 m7 w9 U0 @<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 R9 W( ?/ D% B. R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 w1 t, R! c) [$ v( c$ Z7 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! K9 Z  t$ ^7 p) O$ ^7 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! ?: S: ~# Y' D<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  ]5 @) t9 |3 v* {
6 s+ T' ?0 b* Q5 P$ m  H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

7 u) J7 e! v+ t6 d' o$ O& S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' T$ d  S; C. n9 [" |# C
/ X: U. |% j* M这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

: u, P- r" J- u8 _& \0 \0 ]! p<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

<P>

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>