【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 @' {* Y, \/ @2 {. S, @2 }: D我另将歌词附在此。
0 e. O8 B% f) s9 P; I. SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
) Q5 _$ |2 @. N  I! uI already loved you with all my heart
0 }5 l- R. D2 Z& f- rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
3 C8 i" G- m+ @) _Why is it so difficult to express?
; U9 @1 v/ b# P9 ]1 e& lI want to confess that I love you,
# w# o, f+ V9 ~- i6 ~6 S8 RBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 [" k; D4 D. m  {7 ~: D2 fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 ^' z% X/ }% ^, j  b) Z1 ^/ rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; T7 @9 q  O. Q( V% k3 k4 _Can I entrust it to you?
3 t9 d& g  ?2 k( {- cEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% X- n2 Q: |/ JI want to confess that I love you,
1 |% a9 K7 D6 Q" l3 \1 [, r- {But I never did
0 t1 b7 N4 ~2 XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 D( c3 l  v0 s% Y: s" y7 tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* Z! a! ^( _4 L6 N! C0 p& dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* O' ~5 H4 u( W- l" B) wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 }2 ~& b4 G! M6 b<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* k& x/ U0 B, G$ v5 L3 G<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. j3 r, \1 {4 q! U" c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ _. o' w5 E6 B7 q7 g<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! v7 _! t' O% |: F- f<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, H$ [- o/ h" x<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  Q) H$ a6 b6 ?4 u2 I2 {0 p9 |3 c/ N* ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 Q" p% r  F1 d& E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, A; \9 t% v  v" W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( i+ t9 f( I" `" \- Y% T4 g<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& Z4 o# t3 J$ ]$ j1 C<P>但我不会</P>
7 f9 a( u, f: W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 e5 }. ?( K. ~$ J4 a& A<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* v# j& Y2 `% m( ^1 r8 }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ G/ t9 t; ?5 {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 F0 [( T8 c  u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ d7 d0 [8 x4 k# W; E' S5 ~: V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: L: [. Y& I+ x' d7 Z% t9 S0 [& @<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 G  M1 k3 {: R( P<P>But I never did </P>
6 S( ~9 r* s3 t$ E' |% A; n<P>但我不会 </P>
0 i% s1 _& r. L2 g3 X, i  _! X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. c* c" d# n( f; K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; `3 _: D/ j0 d5 s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( g& B# `' j& r" k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" R+ b, A* h* P6 ?' I: }+ v4 q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 M0 `) |3 G9 c- _3 q+ l2 o3 L+ b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ i: C  _4 \  A! z0 _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. c- W8 C! @  i9 c6 u6 A# B+ e- d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' _& n' l4 F9 `7 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% `8 I# N% q9 [2 `, w/ l* \3 |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 U% R5 N0 v' H! B2 H) u5 R& T 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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: ^" ]5 f  p% p' b* S* F& M这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 U- {6 N* U" r% h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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