【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' w" j" c6 B9 ^  G: Z+ V, F& Q4 D' f; H3 mFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 r+ x# y9 f! ^% E2 F* SI would probably know how you feel
5 v4 {7 k1 q" M* G. |Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: w6 v9 k) e  A' k! t9 G  lBut I never did
2 @, |/ ]3 }1 \8 d2 U) b6 NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 P0 V! w9 [" C) e$ C& C# lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( U5 a/ ^# r  T+ O5 ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 F  a/ ^2 o6 ]& YEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
) J2 g, J6 D6 b* G2 lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: N# m3 {9 B- e- K. a# `/ H; F  DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  Q8 X3 ]; p' m- z! x- AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 j: t' h& P# Y* J4 @Can I entrust it to you?
* N1 @2 F6 ~6 mEntrust my love within your heart

/ w; l; R+ W/ E6 t+ t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 ~( A6 q8 V' m" F: x3 Q  I. Z7 h<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 E6 K  `0 u3 z5 H+ z0 l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ L5 ?; f9 G; K; I2 j1 Y  i0 d/ m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& E: y* h+ u! P6 \' V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 m2 j5 l  s, E% P1 u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% Z; j  x$ ~( I1 b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 a- t7 N' Q1 F% j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- |, h+ v& i+ \8 x: [! ^$ G+ t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) e: t: T+ I. T  x/ m' S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ N, o3 W6 S. d) p5 O<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 r& m% G% c; M) l8 S. J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" d+ c/ l; m, {6 t: |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# f" k+ j4 {/ p% s/ M9 A+ ]  u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& }2 u1 g/ Z! `" k7 n' @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ a* N. ^7 d8 j, ^6 W( F! y1 Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 Z- \1 r. }  t5 g( M# J, ]6 Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 q+ S# k" t, T) M( t! |" H0 ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 F3 K% J. E  M# k<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) F8 @8 v4 s% ^# [$ w<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 ^0 Z* m3 O4 Q1 F<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' G. I* y/ A  `  O- B9 O$ d$ A- h# y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ B' n* N1 }( r( _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( |* f" Y8 h4 ~! }- H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 c* A  r/ g, C4 P: |9 I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. z# ~) k# N/ z$ D6 M3 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# A1 f7 j& O+ I4 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ ?# }. V; G% g6 T4 }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 m+ h5 U) x: h5 l# d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  W. [4 @8 m) B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' R' u* l0 N0 r6 v+ P<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 R+ l& p- r! C0 E( R# r1 K6 u( U( k这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: F6 I& N6 k  D* i% ?! d7 ]这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>