【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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6 {$ s, |( T: M! `# U我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! ~/ C+ }# q5 u1 o( e8 `" |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; n, ^8 }0 y% v$ [, `* zI already loved you with all my heart
" D4 W; P! c+ Y2 FWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 s" d* V9 _" p2 q* x1 VIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. a; v4 m& s3 w4 @9 XI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, L) _6 E  [2 ]: \5 q0 @, O( DI want to confess that I love you,
! d3 Z% c( z, L( ^# Z3 m. i2 q1 yBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ y5 \6 _  K- a" X) g% eIf today isn’t too late,
. z6 I; {! p+ K* d! D2 kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' n$ ~1 V" t& D: j" ?Can I entrust it to you?
" ^4 _/ E( A# PEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& a, V0 o2 ]# p2 n" t+ KWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 K, a/ T& h" d& d5 rI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 Y5 M6 e$ s' R4 z. B$ X/ wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 R; d& `  ?  JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. k+ ]+ ^% z) nEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% x: D& m& M4 l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% [% `* s& N* a& H! O1 ~( J# H* H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; ?: @: V; |* P; u2 ~- z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# N4 p- I8 N+ p9 f! I2 `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ u* o, r8 w8 j( y9 H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ q, }, g8 l0 l3 ?% [4 X<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ h! a+ Z9 V# a7 m6 v/ U7 h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ @0 J1 q3 V0 O, i0 @<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: q% Y2 S* E+ R; `% I' I) i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 C. J$ W/ k: b* ^! B1 U/ D<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& ?- k1 X9 D" \  G5 Q7 h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' X, k4 J, n' h4 x/ y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 `# \1 v% a; c! s* f% i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  h' _+ D. l' H5 |: L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- v, F4 u/ [: h9 n: B8 X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) ]+ h- F; Y6 a2 A- J% w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 _, C' i! K9 _$ q9 U<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 j1 A9 u% t0 f<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' R; q: ~7 R3 B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 G( Q3 G0 J6 e8 G) p<P>但我不会 </P>
0 Q0 z# B* _# |5 A8 o( V% H- Z( L' v7 x<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) e' V$ `+ R- `$ A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 z8 b# V0 Y8 I0 z5 W# y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( n$ E( M3 H. I  @! c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 h6 v# D  m3 V# t; @! X7 ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! n) ~5 Q7 N) i* R% Q* v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% V2 k& ~4 D- Q* H( `: N3 J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' b2 k+ V3 U, W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 e  z8 S! x) }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* E6 X, g5 `/ l+ L7 |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>