【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
7 o1 Z& y5 D. ^/ {+ o6 TThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ y9 n+ V7 v* S4 ~8 k3 u* z  rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# A' p! L5 q$ H: }$ oIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) D& ~  V. c4 u/ {* g2 ?8 QI would probably know how you feel
8 w  H2 v( d4 O# I& V- ~4 ALove… just the word love
' S% Z1 l$ O& {3 J* S. `& e0 WWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 C) f, H+ ?$ N5 o" v# BI want to confess that I love you,
, f$ l0 ~7 d' Z% zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 `6 m9 O% v: G. _9 uIf today isn’t too late,
% ?6 _) U3 Z5 j1 n2 v( ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 p2 r: l  c' m; ~. A8 kLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 {+ R+ W) v7 LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  n9 M* j8 R& E( `7 m- t: U, J# }6 xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 I0 D+ e8 w6 fEntrust my love within your heart
' u( u6 V8 e, h" C. wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( N1 O0 A1 n% I) w. P<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 G1 i* i! |  R7 I. C# f; j  `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" s; t/ o$ ?: h5 @7 }  L1 H' l5 ~) _8 G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 S3 W7 r* F) |; ?3 d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 U; b0 w6 n4 \+ T<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  A& U% n/ P  [  i<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 x* q3 R8 {! r- R6 f4 C# s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 h- ~: s# v  ~1 b$ Y' Y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; {3 X& U  A8 Z4 K0 H8 f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 j+ O9 p0 A) T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. I3 P! x8 J9 C: g2 d<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( v% Z6 q, u. U+ i) r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& @- O* M& @: _  p6 i( l5 x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 T; B& [7 T. f! H1 Z5 O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- i1 |. c$ ]0 s- a) ~<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# K. Y2 V6 [3 v+ z& P+ m! g6 i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 p. I! u5 w; o2 v! @: r- D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ f) d  m$ q0 i" j+ [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 G- Y8 F4 V; i1 a9 `9 W! m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) V: I9 h% `: x0 r& P4 w' z7 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 }$ V- X2 m& C; v. H# Q) [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 f, k! f! E2 g8 y; b( D7 N<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* j3 t' v3 O8 h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. p) C1 g* F9 l5 n0 j- [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 q7 V6 N: B9 w: M, U% t<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 |. ?2 e& D$ Y" [" M! Q" d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( L7 g6 h5 n) J* R' }& t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: b* q; A# r$ r8 v4 s/ {$ Y  n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) s, K3 G6 C$ p; `7 D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) v5 F7 X' Q5 Q. W% K! z5 |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, H( U+ R) d, \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 H9 L7 O5 v& I6 Z) I( B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 U3 B; l! i% W8 L* M  r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% Q8 P- y, p) c9 z" O* Y3 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" |) ~1 l! `  `' j这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 o$ l# U3 o5 B- F6 x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>