【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
. m: a! t( d4 P/ F* S, g. FThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 v) C: m7 e& a# T" o% F( u2 DBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- m/ x- U) f+ tLove… just the word love
% m2 W, }7 f' y7 R: V  R3 WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) p  \8 c$ r/ b, A' a( h& yBut I never did
& o7 h+ U" R/ J- s0 J) ^/ }0 COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 w( W' f" O9 ^& W1 jIf today isn’t too late,
# j) M2 e' P5 c3 G( _1 VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; b. q# o% n. ~# c  Z5 Y# vI want to confess that I love you,
& s- y1 d, u  g& G' D, DBut I never did
# v# V& O0 v$ X5 ]# ?% ]. Y" gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 m1 ~' M* t/ z1 i; p" g- fIf today isn’t too late,
! L; I7 E" `$ C8 K7 b  oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 }& u9 t4 x+ ~* ZEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ U7 d( V6 ^( E- W! h<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 G6 E. W& \& M<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% Z; ]2 [( y4 Z' m( l<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 c5 v) \' z6 y3 F- w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 D8 k/ n- I# x9 l6 r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ t% c0 C0 a5 I2 ~' i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 E; p' `5 S% _; _$ U/ m! a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 {: D: g% @  U% E- T+ C# F9 \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 q( [) ?9 }4 V: _! b2 S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 v! t- u/ h, v6 K9 ^2 m9 M<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- m' B  z8 k7 D+ H, K. v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 K5 R" z5 K, n2 a- F<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 J% l9 p+ }# y  Q/ g6 k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 Q! ^$ K+ w3 N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 q6 R, \  F2 F3 J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, V4 k5 P; {7 J! M* d6 s9 F0 |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 N5 j9 m" V: E9 D: ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- m) X+ z1 b- P. o& E! h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 Z% n! Q9 x6 L7 l, p9 y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; O4 F1 A) ]; [! i) u<P>But I never did </P>
) h' V9 p; a; I% O! Z<P>但我不会 </P>
* d) }* W1 f7 K$ s& k0 }. ?6 z+ ]<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 y1 q7 L. N. Q/ e$ U3 v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" \) H. }5 f$ P- \$ n<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 R' ]) n* X& e, \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: Q( G* t3 W8 Q! J: t9 E' x4 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- P2 H* Y3 H3 W7 k- e5 \3 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" Z; n, v* r. i, `( K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 f3 k8 A3 g( _. k; O7 H, Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* [) K7 r* ]. g. |- [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( a9 N" @' u$ Q# I/ D$ W) m; m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. B3 y* j0 N7 {* ^, T7 d<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ ]8 Y/ B) R; e( _4 D8 F, w0 I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>