【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 L0 B6 o$ i! E8 L# _I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 ?% D: T  i) x; Z( m! p- [But I never did
% ~( k8 N5 J# H5 Y$ r8 }& xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ c0 z; M" x' n  j! j  SIf today isn’t too late,
. z6 q; q8 {6 _' A7 X" m* hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 l2 y/ e" z8 w4 sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ u1 c, N* d) X: dEntrust my love within your heart
. N' u: a6 t% z$ c; }1 a7 y) {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! C4 {) D( l0 T7 B. [$ `I want to confess that I love you,
6 A% v$ @& K  k, e+ zBut I never did
6 Q1 M, Y2 |$ e6 m3 h# ]8 O% V$ X: xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 z$ s2 t0 D9 F3 @. o  dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ `7 B& _5 B8 o2 B. hCan I entrust it to you?
! T1 J' ~/ ~) ^! z: S" cEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# i8 ~6 W1 O1 p" V1 S/ P" E7 _  a* l/ c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 J4 _. z% _- o* _- N<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' {9 \" }. L% _  n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 l7 N9 h3 f7 w6 A9 ?' s1 s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 a5 x7 F9 W5 [4 P2 W$ f' W. |2 d<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# l- B, K% p7 t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 h4 L* r4 ]- N: d- j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' Z" @& {8 W8 n: x' @" p" R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, A) Q( W+ K5 [5 {3 i<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) W# D0 o5 u# _! x' n6 M8 @$ X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! W$ `/ `/ g4 V) h1 v' P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! |6 k8 o) e% A) H: l1 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& l8 }& L/ W9 ~- v+ _( o, r% i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. m% L; W7 f+ i. ~( U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 A. d" S: C4 ^/ w+ q0 k, N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 h6 q) y: T+ u2 P* s! r$ o<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- E* @. F1 M* z' u<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& H$ X. n. Z5 \4 P3 k, k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! |  ^# w# v/ b# C; P+ M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ D0 X+ p- u6 s" A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 p8 H; w  I  E" _5 U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# F& I' q* C4 Y" Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% [; ~& `8 H, t  n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- \& i) o8 R$ M6 V* q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 G5 {3 d3 [, K8 v: i$ m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 ?" L% p) ]3 a! n: N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: R: e% T+ C( C$ K8 q* |# N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( I9 G5 ]( M: J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ H+ E! S& ^3 _0 Q/ S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>