【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
" c5 L5 W: z6 @, y# I: P: ]: d4 vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 G+ [/ x: s: A& J/ jFrom the first moment we met,
% E, t( [( ~; H% vI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. p2 E4 Q: Q1 [  d1 W' TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( }+ k" X9 ?. W- W$ `I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
3 T" O+ W; }8 ^' U3 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
; U6 J, y) o/ J$ B2 d9 W, DI want to confess that I love you,
8 ^1 H% q8 r' OBut I never did
, x- G9 V- r% y# x1 ]4 ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% X& Y; @& D* x- ~7 ^/ XIf today isn’t too late,
$ T2 Y" s6 G# Y: |4 z/ {6 W  wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; ?3 V2 Z9 B4 q2 T( h8 W3 UEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, ^* x9 d( q8 N- F+ n) KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( ^, R& U* @+ ^2 v8 xEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  N% C" A( e% b<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 M$ y( T& j! q1 t3 D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' X( [/ P2 w/ P( @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ j' U; X9 a2 i/ f& N<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 g5 a4 Z" @! w" @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 }% Q8 |' |7 B$ e2 P$ O. T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 Q% J2 N1 D! [$ N5 V, e5 q7 `9 h6 B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 }9 P. @) B( v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- N# j. ]9 y/ w<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 s3 b; ]8 T& }8 ^% @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 ]" U' ^' a5 e4 S* L1 R<P>但我不会</P>
& {2 q; \5 x: S5 P! ^- {3 G0 n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 J5 X* D4 l# _$ Y0 M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, S. m4 w5 g+ X& x1 G+ Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: |  ?) b9 ], ?7 \" x5 D% J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; x3 t0 X3 f( _' r* {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ f6 a% f0 V* a1 `! l<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ J6 V# W6 H& ^/ T! k# V$ d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  H& x5 A; X( a& {) c<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 g6 \7 J6 A  h' J; b<P>但我不会 </P>
& _  _" d! n" V. T- p% v<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- S, s4 d" j& B. c6 N4 R- [( m2 U3 \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; h/ Q" t% N1 k9 Q$ s6 B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 m% A/ e/ F) l' B* H2 |& r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 E/ x3 l! b- d# H4 W. ?! x+ d# p, m. D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% A+ r/ y/ N( u  j+ W, ^  T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ S4 X3 Z, D7 h( {2 h! j1 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& e$ s& ?; @. P! v1 r; `6 R<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 S. J  c2 c" k* c$ v<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  i. m- t5 J+ E- ?1 I( p# I! y5 a 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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- p! f8 h# j5 ^' U这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& ~1 s  \8 f% q! X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 I9 f+ d% ^$ B<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>