【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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. R5 L6 c8 u8 w6 S  c我另将歌词附在此。
$ b$ i  J" x6 H& l, ^: W7 l) i* b  p6 oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# z5 l1 z' J; V  M5 b& \- f! TThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- `0 ~" t: M+ N8 Q! W- G/ u& eFrom the first moment we met,
- r' @# n# J- O  YI already loved you with all my heart
4 h$ e, T$ I& S8 l9 b) V- [6 TWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 [0 g& l6 Z: g- |- d  {  r4 j& |9 ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( B, v& [6 S1 x; e) `8 p9 KLove… just the word love
8 b! X" ~( P( _5 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
& c& W0 g) A# S1 [/ m: kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. o/ ]) N+ C: F6 |& _" @/ MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ l$ L6 v% c: cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! |. Z# R& ~1 {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) J7 Z! H" L1 n' i5 \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) G. s, g$ }" Y7 ?( G' M: rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; V' a4 B, z/ B' eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* W9 |- u4 p! {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# o  {  V- a6 i$ Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ N) k" Z1 b, e* G0 l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 C5 c% Q. P! Z. o8 W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! `' K  v4 m6 E7 p1 ~! l$ N+ y' d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 Z3 J+ L9 T4 S& L' \, A0 q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 u/ t! o0 f" @5 L' k+ ?0 L; a<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  F* d4 h& H! B) P: Y1 \. R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- ?& w: \$ s9 k, z: ^1 R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! r. d1 }9 ]5 t" t/ _: L3 S7 E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 F4 k* {6 c5 ]: H- h3 f<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 e" f6 {# O( B' i  P  o<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 H, Q/ o4 f: p+ s9 L<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% C& j4 z) T: F. }& |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  _: M$ k0 l( D- N0 ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 {8 d5 P3 X/ @7 K$ v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 y2 h( u5 W/ |8 k2 ^5 t! [, u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 r! F, p+ X9 R: j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 r  e: F- g% j, Y# K+ ~) v1 s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 i( M" `% G- @9 C<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 p* ?" m1 a) }+ z: a" ]% ]1 g( R( q) Y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& y0 I+ [9 a0 I1 D6 j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 F8 [9 O, l4 C/ k# V- w+ p+ [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 Z7 K: O# F' {: Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" ], T" @/ e" s3 l6 A& @% Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% K. B- q( n* Z+ c9 Q7 o# B9 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" q  F% i0 y  n/ B* k+ s2 a0 i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( I+ y4 C  [' k5 t6 |& F) K& M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. V# R' Y1 o1 i! x  i7 ~( L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) E- h- }& A5 j0 b: S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 {* g7 A, y! t2 X7 J<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>