【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
) K0 Y1 h" p5 f1 L0 oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 Z& N5 W4 y& s: V( e9 l, z" d, ]1 {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, j# n' r) k7 [& X! E/ a# |4 fI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! i7 s0 A0 [& GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 s" L% C, v3 I! C; T; G! l1 dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 g* C, z) H0 _5 {- i/ N! n! wI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; W/ t  m0 `" \( RWhy is it so difficult to express?
: r9 j9 C6 j/ P6 ~I want to confess that I love you,
3 d2 y3 ~% P5 O1 _, U& w" HBut I never did
3 H- A. X3 o9 t9 @% b, nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- ~5 v7 |: s4 u: \9 i: V7 P2 W  {# iCan I entrust it to you?
4 @: I" n, i: `4 {- ]  A0 \( }" hEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 q2 u, I3 W0 ]& d, x2 S8 T% `Why is it so difficult to express?
3 J/ {8 Y/ O1 ?, Q2 U! M2 {( t! CI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* }% N  x8 H8 q7 z% |/ Y8 pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; O7 S2 `& I6 A5 a# C) B' AEntrust my love within your heart
  e& q1 j' W: a- y  G" B0 @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: q4 B; W# _- H* J" q* p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' L8 `6 L) h$ y( ^/ y7 }' z* ?- W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ E* R0 v. ^: c; ~' U. {5 z' e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 N8 @/ q+ R" |* E* Z1 Z& s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  B2 y1 n  s9 Q0 c: j+ u% Z' a<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 o- I3 m$ x% `9 a* a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# B0 ]0 b( S% h# _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. `7 V& U1 b: V. }- P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 H/ U; u# I% \6 l: J3 i. d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; ]% S# y0 p: L: X4 o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 }8 f( l  e) B( ^4 ?- T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 z  K' @9 e7 D<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! ^  L! V' ^9 w, o0 y4 r# L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( h, |+ ~# b9 b8 u' q- I; R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- S' A$ r+ k  L2 Z- l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 ?' n& o* c+ |& Z/ |6 D$ b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 |9 Y. ^6 k' v  N' V4 w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  B/ C6 q' {: e9 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# R4 X& ^! h& }' c+ K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& y6 O) A9 n/ k3 s, k1 Z4 F! G<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ d$ ^6 {6 f/ |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, V! y6 J' P2 g( J9 g5 p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 ^1 F* _. W% t1 ?) ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, r7 t' A* i; w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
& \9 s9 w' ]$ t4 E  {<P>但我不会 </P>
$ I! [, [8 D" R5 i! C<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  m& I& t& _) c/ `$ G& Y$ d/ Z1 M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- M' _& u8 H1 h3 w" \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ r. u* A$ [( e8 d# ?- A1 p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ u  X( c& N+ x) [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# d& J: `. D- n. h/ D/ Y# z; k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# Q5 c) d) i: {4 `6 A1 j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 p3 z+ p6 r9 Q% W* ^4 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' t( L8 ^$ [- Y7 E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ `6 e& O8 k) p+ d# u0 w这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 L$ V+ m" J1 X; l/ [5 f! g这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>