【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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; t, v# h  ?9 p# I! g我另将歌词附在此。
# E! V8 l' v( l# n: aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) H# z. S$ Q! I7 R1 ~From the first moment we met,
% R) M; f; O$ jI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 Q2 Y: N, x- \4 l) F4 JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ d+ R5 [$ B5 Y1 g  E9 Y5 q/ aI would probably know how you feel
2 U4 y+ B6 W+ y- |( c/ W2 mLove… just the word love
! p% B/ h( H; `2 U+ GWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 y' |, m4 s5 c/ KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( v/ t4 u6 D& r1 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" V3 ?4 t+ t. ^9 X2 I" U. |. PIf today isn’t too late,
8 U' z. u& C7 R% R4 Q3 b! y5 \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 _- N1 Q& {8 u! h9 |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 `% e* u5 S# |7 V# lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

* e% d; B( h1 z' ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, }( j& ]; J$ l8 Z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: m: A. b# }# w2 C: i) N<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! ^  j# V9 T5 x1 U# O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: C4 D& ]2 k! {: \: F* b; @7 U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" z, @: f; `" Y  D9 k) h& A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 X  _4 t+ L+ \3 F! V" K: a- R<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 c# u) l$ c. d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 u& a4 @+ I6 O1 @8 n5 N* S1 V. v8 \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- p) ]6 b9 ?- ~<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 n2 L) s, @; [" W5 Q( P<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 K& t+ W. u7 Z" L<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* N( u. k8 j" j1 R4 ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 C3 q& G) |; a5 a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 A1 Y3 ?1 q0 K& X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ P+ w( J! V$ o4 H' }7 |. M<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( W- Y9 ^( B9 c' v8 b" L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- J* l9 k3 L% Y' l2 O1 h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" b: C. J5 }- O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ }- D' l. c7 ]' Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. b8 Q7 u: Y; c0 @* D* `6 u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. ~2 ?% j. B3 s0 \1 W+ C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* W' v% e3 k$ b) O4 H4 r1 m- c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 j. @% [" v, }2 [/ K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. T7 O4 T: N4 x* N7 e# N<P>But I never did </P>
/ p7 c) [1 r" G& E5 l) z/ }<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- v: M7 N. T. D; q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ r( Q1 n. {; B, |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 \7 M' V3 D; D3 H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; l: X7 @5 r% b5 F1 X# f5 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( K. J  _) U+ o8 f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. k; q  _3 N' F9 H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* J% o1 S& i$ G0 v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 A; K  m6 a) G' p, N& N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 ?" }3 C: N: F! Q+ S& X 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
3 B: H# M9 m6 n) f" y7 i' G
: ~4 J6 [- {- C; g; c" Z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 k7 z- c# F5 |: c<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 ~* `4 p7 R) P; r: `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>