【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, O+ \4 ~+ P0 }# h" @# r5 _我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: s. N1 z) R- `/ v, rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 B, G; i! |' \4 p1 uFrom the first moment we met,
' r3 O0 s$ D. y# S$ q  H' s3 J* fI already loved you with all my heart
: y+ }! F6 G- T- u5 i9 QWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ X( F7 w0 m5 F4 hI want to confess that I love you,
6 \0 a- e3 a' @0 k9 uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 E: y4 }' X$ w& t4 TIf today isn’t too late,
+ i/ U! V" G7 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ d0 O* O" C5 ~, j7 H3 _) R; mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 v$ \. Y) t. j$ G) |: h( t7 }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( X! J! \2 _! u$ II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 s& r& |$ U9 H( q1 M8 T  MCan I entrust it to you?
, O4 y3 `( ^5 E9 ^) SEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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9 S% M4 \1 N4 ]; b; \- @! s! |[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( u. j+ \6 z1 l2 C" ?9 D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" d0 l3 b2 |0 L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ x+ G. v, j9 u7 T+ |. ^8 s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- p; F; P% d+ s4 L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 {9 f! ^) c. m  I4 i0 {  I<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) t4 Q0 N5 D9 D& h5 H1 h<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% {$ H! H4 q( t+ F8 {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 u0 W9 i3 _3 z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" q: N4 r" D8 A& Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# [4 ~3 K$ P# ?: Z8 \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 A5 R# A" k- ?2 B3 e: P2 f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ p- S: _% x  U% c$ f6 {2 c2 V6 V<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ i0 v/ X8 _' X9 u% \<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ |, [& s3 O7 Y+ t7 E" `/ l# R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 j5 u: A. z6 Q! P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) R) k8 E. g# w3 A& ]4 {$ V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ U9 j5 I- O& s! R+ Q& u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ U% U1 ]  H* z2 N9 Z8 x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 E% o; r6 ?( D+ j  v2 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ ?% @( \6 e6 Y4 q8 B2 e: N5 ]" d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 Q: r# K3 q! p* T  q2 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# P# k1 O* [! I2 D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 `3 w- c: F! `' D: i$ }$ T( y- h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% c$ O* O& T4 e# M<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ |8 z5 }. g: ?/ k1 ~$ k2 L6 z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 e% p0 M; P( k; R. T3 x<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ n- X) C0 {' C: F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' ~/ I- {' }! ~, G2 }+ X7 K* [$ h 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 u+ d5 D5 B7 n; k" M8 T2 p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: W/ @; i: ^! R<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) S5 @4 o9 V* w( \4 d! t: e2 S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>