【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: d' h" [. K+ kFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! M5 N7 d4 I, k6 z8 e4 iI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* K2 P# \6 h) ]6 u) aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( Z, J8 j" c8 O/ }: V5 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) L; L/ V6 h% f$ O. nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* i; |" c- u% a5 b7 ~/ n* RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. G" u1 l7 X( S( NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( I  T5 O3 p. x$ hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" \/ K4 T5 f( b. W6 Y3 k$ CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  H, U! E2 V/ x# W3 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. d. z( p7 ~- y  gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; r( b) Z1 x' Q; C( X; `" B$ o( d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( U( s1 z. S; r# m. w" P! `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  Q- F: R4 E# i<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' W8 m, m- }. S7 m5 ~<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, ?& y+ ^  t( C; d2 M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' u) S8 C/ `. A' Q3 O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 z2 v$ V2 O( m* z5 A<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( Y9 V1 l2 f, `6 ~4 |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# K% v2 V2 @) Z) B<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' ^9 s* A% H1 m  s" }+ I2 N$ l! ?. F<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- O" o* L8 \- v* k' V! D! ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: ]$ T5 G8 ^. ~6 U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( o3 Q/ c! m/ y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ m$ D2 m5 Q, d2 a4 l) Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 K; Y5 S5 V& y4 o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 H2 E* c' _: L6 F; v; o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 z, ?9 c5 y0 T, z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 Y- T) S. d8 U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# j3 r% v) _6 L. W' O0 K5 A9 L0 D<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& k- m9 w7 v+ {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 _# m0 c( b; @/ j, J  e! V<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* m! j2 J# u# |7 {5 c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ ?/ d) |+ M; G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' X3 m. k# }2 _0 ~- [  X9 ]- W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ H- y, e% ?9 c% y# ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 y* l& Y& y' u9 d3 e$ g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 {$ U' ?/ [$ |# E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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7 i$ k# K" {- \: _7 j+ K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ a  @, t: [/ L这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 q  @. a; T# h( l" N8 v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>