【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# h- P/ ^& j4 u/ B- P  G我另将歌词附在此。
5 L- k* F% E6 I+ M. L8 @$ AThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# o) l9 Y% ^) g: ^! ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ M% F$ h4 c+ H% |( m. T* BFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 M8 e) S( X+ H! u- f" _0 @  rLove… just the word love
7 g  c' o0 O4 sWhy is it so difficult to express?
, w1 a% y; S# z1 UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. L6 _1 K6 H1 w9 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 Q1 k& e  J9 H% n2 uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  `& w  E3 b6 O6 o& pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. m( M9 z2 N# S: G% H/ LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 _- u) m5 a3 Z: x3 G6 ]2 L: V8 w% q% BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 t3 @) y' x' Y5 R; r& e6 HBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 @8 Y+ v0 z% r" kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 U: J7 ]2 m# [3 i* _7 OCan I entrust it to you?
' m6 h( K+ @# n7 ?Entrust my love within your heart

( Y! z" Z8 w) y) J3 b5 W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% o) T' |) w( m# o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; ~" p% T7 N  `  \$ R' n& E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" }* i# s& x% l, x8 v' D9 d2 K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ k8 G$ |5 _# G- k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# ?: {1 W1 r& m5 H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 q8 _' V- S$ n/ C+ Z# y. N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: O3 G8 X3 O; [' C& O6 B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! l+ }; |0 a6 x( b# w/ P- |$ |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 X: o8 o2 O) r& g* z6 J/ f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' K# C  r% h" t$ V. Y7 [+ o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, B: k0 g* G: |3 t2 ^<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; |' g- ~# b9 Y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 n: Y8 ?7 z3 c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, F: _8 q$ P6 g' t* c  ^/ C% t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* b/ F/ I0 F7 q# H. _: }$ ^1 Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! y! c9 u7 R4 ^9 O7 f" Q9 y( N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 S* V& e" T+ W4 M* O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ I! c: }( U0 z" `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: N9 K' d- y7 ^, y& b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: |, {$ p1 c( b. H7 D4 d8 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, t) ^9 d7 @* [  U# H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* k6 U" p( d, n2 ^0 l! l, p4 l<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- t- E5 M; q2 ^9 W6 w<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 l3 U+ H( C  |, i# T. J' {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; [( _2 z, P$ t& _" L0 P/ C, b<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ d3 N5 T! v$ b5 `' d7 F' b) l( I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 w# H5 C6 Y. v/ I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  x7 e' C- ~. R/ n4 @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( b4 h" ?5 Y# D" W8 a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 v1 v7 ]; e/ d) D  K0 H) k( F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 v2 }/ g; k( h3 d% ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 N9 u4 K* E: Z1 c# ~+ D# @这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>