【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ q% a* @4 }- [8 kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ F* V- \' W( M& ~" \( M% HI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
; ?' _2 V( L6 m# BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' g! Y( i3 E1 j0 l7 V/ h* ?Love… just the word love
, \+ G7 U+ Y( J- V; b( a. k+ }! uWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 c  X( h, z0 c/ c7 nI want to confess that I love you,
" N- J( a4 R; TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 j# e/ Z$ G1 \% Y$ {4 p" W& ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) n) B* w5 K' F) bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 `4 a3 Q" \" H6 e) X' g& ILove… just the word love
: d- t! D' ^. e5 N4 a8 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
. K: m" w0 \3 Y1 CI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( W/ B0 |# p$ D  BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 w) n" M1 x' ^/ q# J4 g+ m% t4 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; @+ W4 W6 z# D4 fCan I entrust it to you?
, h1 @  Z/ p1 ~+ EEntrust my love within your heart
' Y* w4 x" B) H* JCan I entrust it to you?
0 g0 \2 d  S( `* ]; e3 S( KEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 n* N. a3 y: W; C# t. t<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 o, E9 z2 ?2 ?5 W* e9 V8 y% ?. o2 C/ M<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, g$ ~  a9 F& C3 E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 u- q8 B3 O. a8 x+ `" r0 d; v  x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 {) f2 @) m9 T0 M& {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 V  I9 i9 w6 t8 t9 B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 w/ r7 y2 j- e' [0 {<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 g1 R/ _" U& \0 ]6 B( k# Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 F* J) K4 o" B<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ Q; j7 o  Y. y+ C7 X$ Q: p1 K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% y$ ]- P* r8 _! R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% W& r0 h* T! k& N3 q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* t/ B$ D: `/ i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( A: v- a, C$ n4 w8 Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# _; z" H* F4 ~4 x, J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" J7 Z+ e* F: t: S9 o  I1 s" H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' f8 R; L' X# x  C# P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% w* B) k$ @% u& N# C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 @6 p0 u  S) z4 s* g9 G<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# x5 `8 m5 l) N6 `/ ]& ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  |. p  E, Q# s. [) W/ Z" c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; v2 r1 c! L7 B# R. Z5 ]9 K- B<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 [! [8 ^& O$ d- F- [+ z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" i- C& ?; D& c7 j+ G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 ^& O' S; }: ^. B: _+ m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% D) k' f( W5 a- R, n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: ^* n- F3 }6 ~" c, a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 K6 i* S* w/ {+ \1 V, i6 W1 _7 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# l& S% u. K& a' ]/ x+ b* G' [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 R. k3 q; N# J0 _' E4 f. _- b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 ?+ ^+ C5 \' ^! H: Y! h. f这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- A* ^* x# }3 P8 v/ v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 q7 X" n6 V  I, t8 w4 V+ @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>