【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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1 {6 ~/ F: g/ f$ Y我另将歌词附在此。
! t  h. Z. U4 k* NThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; ?6 z7 W6 Q. m6 B$ t" _& _2 l) t( E) N2 cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ c$ b& f5 m. d) M8 M! eI already loved you with all my heart
2 m6 O, y2 ]5 n' P% D0 R5 \5 oWe meet and talk everyday,
* o+ s3 h, C+ e" U' ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: M3 P$ m, A% y4 v$ mI would probably know how you feel
1 L* ]! B; S  d+ JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 ]! w4 X3 ]6 e3 `3 a! j/ G' OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 M- H. x! A6 l" \If today isn’t too late,
# c0 \6 G4 S9 [# V6 MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 J& i! }9 k  a- i3 A/ Q. uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  j1 N: `& q( J5 WBut I never did
  k) ^8 D' H1 AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ B, [2 H. j8 o, I: vEntrust my love within your heart
. O$ u  w- B1 mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 }3 u$ Q' m% E
; ]" @% A% v6 w7 f4 U; y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  }& {2 b* _2 a, |<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  D. A, B2 a5 G1 w, y8 o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* a$ x: k# d/ X. B: v  M3 Z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 |8 d3 p3 V* z) I<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, Y; P* |- j0 S4 [" v7 e- g; j<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  `+ X% X% v7 v  b' k, g0 L1 A' t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: y6 t+ h" m. y' U# b1 v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& O% R, P1 _- O! \# p2 t, y1 L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! A, _% M0 u  V- L9 t7 |; }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( W' t* z4 G1 t2 {( e<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& y; D' y- c: Q- L8 L. w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 g, m( _/ ^2 g0 S1 {- P  A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( @2 F+ _3 y+ h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* g& _5 a- ^$ H. j, E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- X  \( w- W1 u6 {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- |/ _8 d& s: S$ J5 P& F2 w# V5 W( \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ Z# t3 s% ~* K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 [3 }# `# y" R8 x<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- P; _8 o+ j  a) B7 n0 \& P# x<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# |% N/ I9 k+ @* T<P>But I never did </P>
! R7 k* S7 A$ R" H7 {) @' O' Y! w# l. Q) M<P>但我不会 </P>
5 b! C, ?' ]1 V; k9 H! i<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 {, o+ c' T6 ~$ y8 d3 }5 u2 v6 n; }! f<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 f: j" o3 \0 ~' J  q( E2 G8 F% q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; v3 p  |" f) s& x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# Q' P2 b3 D( O# N& W( i' Z" o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& t6 ^2 J( [! `- Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" t. z. I1 M8 O4 P$ g* r) E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 s" K. N8 U$ j<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) \7 N( L! ~: o* e. T  u1 ^这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ D) f: {, k# ?( g' E
这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 L( ^: ^: R! H: W! B) J9 j  y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ O& D. R; f+ x6 J8 D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>