【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' _7 ?! d) t6 K: VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- {6 M& g0 r& `# B- zI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; j, D, n# S6 o. U" s3 w, IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* Q  w1 l# S1 {( t3 _Love… just the word love
6 A. _% y/ C! ]* v& z9 s" ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- k+ J3 [- \! Q$ w& [: [, w7 w1 POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% M, u) G: ^% W+ zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 K9 t' ~1 J" K. P: g  E$ JEntrust my love within your heart
3 N+ p% q0 c' S) |Love… just the word love
1 X) a* y3 a9 p. [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 C2 y1 ^! F6 L& m+ n: AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, j8 K' m# ]5 A# H( uIf today isn’t too late,
* P; G( ~. F' Y8 QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 p" d0 l7 X' X) p" hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 t8 h. X9 m, v7 S( QEntrust my love within your heart
+ a, r# _2 X: c3 C% N2 L: T1 TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# {5 p2 F+ o2 j8 D% w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. O9 g7 b- y' ^<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( Q! @% B, N1 g6 |0 W<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& i8 }" o3 l! q4 \<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 y- A* A+ A. g1 Q( v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 f/ C4 Z2 j- i/ z. L2 U$ y3 a; L, w<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ g$ T* V* y' |2 M# G6 _9 n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ C3 m  |0 J" v; G$ V2 Y7 v8 x: K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 ?* i2 m9 M5 o% r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ G6 R" Q8 ^+ E" |* H* {# C<P>但我不会</P>
9 D* v3 w" O4 T( v<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 Q0 [  Q" k, O7 K9 r& |8 A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% a9 w/ @( j$ E3 K  F2 }8 D) F! q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# A9 i3 _) p" a$ \: s" s1 ~# `1 i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, }# t: ^& O: N% Q0 L8 l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( a9 C" P# V8 e6 v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: X! ~4 }8 k  t+ w7 O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ {8 Q* e4 f  l3 E8 h8 n0 r9 d<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 M: c, d$ X8 A8 c& K& n, Y2 }  ]9 x<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# G0 T. _3 v# E6 F$ R0 M; K, ]3 A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 x& o, O  L5 H# d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- t/ d+ I9 E, i+ m# B3 N$ F& ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& u$ ], ?" C. g$ D$ }$ I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

- j, i" @" r8 G3 r! B/ q* V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' B3 m, n3 B" E0 l! F3 X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 ?4 K# x; A) J$ ?. ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>