【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" v( k3 G4 k+ P1 V& UFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 E4 U2 [2 [6 x( ~: ZBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# _6 z7 N) X% ?# h8 S, rI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 O. ^- f' z" U  v( A2 iI want to confess that I love you,
# ~4 r. C  H" N8 pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# W  A1 Y2 H' c  w) d. `9 gIf today isn’t too late,
$ f" q0 l2 o- L; T' m+ bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. B4 C' w& [1 n4 DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- Z5 Y" I$ L7 i5 X4 QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 p# Z6 R- O' {. p) Q6 PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 q/ F3 v2 Y" C# M/ P& n7 DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. \5 B" x# O2 Q( MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 X& g: X5 @2 r* sEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 L2 Q! C; W+ r. D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* X% @! I( d; ]! ?% p( m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; h" p0 j3 Q% G9 E  p- ~8 x<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! }! ~: G" W; ^2 Y) H8 B+ ]( o) f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 o% h1 [+ K( P; `' T$ o<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# A$ Z( Y. Q  T" C8 |, \% Y: C<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. U4 t! O+ X, t3 H8 O# G<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# Z2 Y/ i: S/ b/ c- s<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* K2 ]( O1 {9 V/ U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 t0 i) C2 X4 g# d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, S% r3 H& y  Q5 b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ w- z- i: T' ~) ^3 S3 z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" N5 g# Z' O' Z( K. V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! g. t+ O% U3 R) G7 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& c6 ]" T; e; p9 [+ y$ w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# t. P. b* N& u& i* p/ w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- L4 |0 N! p& `7 i: A; C# |<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  Z9 t- \8 B& \! l. ^7 F6 X# F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 H6 x- N7 m9 o( U; b" A7 T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 }5 s; s) s; g- H- l3 S1 `' Z% o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! `" s* N) w/ }) h9 y0 v* J& g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& V4 Q9 W$ N9 ~0 k  N* {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 f, s' s% Q) Z7 j' M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 H) O8 P* Y1 w3 G2 X1 m8 p5 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 G: [9 J8 X) I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! D( |' r) Z+ y! I- z2 P; L3 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; I/ p' F( [. j/ _& _4 k$ |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) g; X7 p9 u) @9 z5 F1 v4 W<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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' Q1 Y# O- \/ N$ a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, T5 m* G/ K- w* u7 X( a  W0 O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>