【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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4 t9 V; P: M0 I2 V) v6 m/ X我另将歌词附在此。
5 n7 S! t. V4 [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ p# g- c3 U# S" J' a, y  R" yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 F# \1 G0 ~! Q# V! A3 kBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ P/ u7 w# C" n$ e6 h* X+ X  `Love… just the word love
9 J! g2 t/ `; n+ W* Y; T0 \Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 i4 j3 u" H& F; u( MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- F# ?# [  T  S) H$ P, i* HIf today isn’t too late,
. {( M) T: A7 s& j4 [) _9 QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% C6 [# J. g% h' i9 EEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 C: D  u3 g" V, [( ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ G0 ^$ f% n* @& @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 s6 |8 w6 K$ j% @. n5 t/ UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& u, e5 o, c& y, E4 |9 uCan I entrust it to you?
& S- `0 j9 o; BEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 I, G! l$ G% ^; v! a: b. D. o4 e
! Q! r+ v! L) r& B3 S2 j6 G/ a$ W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 B# n, R1 r, y4 ~5 s# E2 Y. I$ S  ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 j" k. _3 R) P2 e. w4 O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ r; Z: }: L4 \3 @6 V% l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- _& _3 e/ R5 |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: j& D: n/ I1 Z( N$ H! `7 n" h<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 U: `, L( b- t# @2 v. w. i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( K& H8 R! \0 k<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- K( Y. Z% O$ _0 P4 D<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( E: M' y" f4 I& X& ~% t" C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 f3 w4 i, P1 K/ _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( A) V0 \  T) |7 q" v$ V<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) C% N5 t' \3 R+ [3 k: h<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. f4 B: C( N$ n. c; C: t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# J( l5 ]" y0 O  A% z! p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; |: b+ b# y( p! u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) T" X5 H+ K% V& V' S6 m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 g$ g. }! Y9 I1 ?- B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& ]0 p6 L. s# u! Q- T9 U6 q+ w% r& e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  K* v' P: T/ b3 n( n) G: R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 j! X2 l( b* h/ T<P>But I never did </P>
; i  u* u* \3 U! X  |( P<P>但我不会 </P>
9 \  w0 \$ \0 h2 }9 d/ Y' a<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: A, z8 q) x; ]$ O6 |+ \2 G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) j/ p9 C6 h: |+ n& i! m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 b) |  i3 K* R! I- L8 ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 t6 M! N5 o4 j7 ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) X9 F* `7 O7 X# n+ l+ b0 u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 k1 L9 \5 Y8 H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 R! F8 h$ {) |' w# ]: n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 r2 u- J, y8 t% v7 O4 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ [" O+ h2 Q$ F# ]3 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: A9 T" S$ a6 N3 C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! b. A$ m2 p! k) l: H/ Y4 j6 K9 m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ Q. s( r6 [7 k+ n; p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ g% t8 S$ ?7 ~- v8 q* R; s& M! i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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