【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 E7 s7 j3 ~: N) v' o9 P' \( h( PThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# _% b* p& k- O4 z2 kFrom the first moment we met,
& i0 M) }  W( z' S* ]$ z" {I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
& _0 _. u; l+ f' J- F" `1 H' `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 e% A6 Q+ ~- K5 A; rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; k, A6 ?  Q. u$ B! kEntrust my love within your heart
4 v( S5 c% x2 u4 w% K0 h6 `# t1 P/ ?Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* N: v& V& f1 W; ~1 b7 L$ nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* h8 B3 ^7 ]& t$ E' t3 VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# w, D0 ?& U& b, T3 u1 |Can I entrust it to you?
3 S. Q; [1 L' r4 `Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ s# V- D& K& N/ M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 q2 [3 e3 K4 d  g- d- {& u7 o* D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ G. Y/ m6 H) \2 @1 d$ q0 L/ r7 D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 e+ ?7 g9 L- R1 @5 a1 T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 I9 g- G# Q; ]: J/ S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; q$ \, |+ O0 n" |5 \, `: j<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 [' g4 r- I+ a6 J/ e: N/ }1 k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 k4 b/ r: r+ x/ Z* N# O<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ ?5 O! K1 q8 z% }7 {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 P" x/ R) j' M# x( i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( n2 q) i& D) L9 C& r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ p  ?4 o* i/ r4 ]* r8 E8 X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 |& [, A( c% f) m" }9 q( p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ M. s' L! @5 }- H( B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 P+ S! J% y6 s+ e% o0 k! E$ V+ @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ P) Z" m; v% K/ Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 e# x$ Z  D, `/ P: g4 Y& x$ t( p# c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 C0 L) g# K  H<P>But I never did </P>
2 Z6 B7 t/ S0 G# X<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* P8 ~* q  a# V, ~) }  B; i<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* k: H. h! R6 b- \8 \  Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, Z6 C7 w/ s5 h" b( p# K4 x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' H0 p/ a* r( _# {; {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  Q8 X1 |, I. j' f+ h5 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' @1 k4 a; Q8 I, X, u% a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) ]2 a3 |( F! @( ?2 x, f' k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 a/ {- }+ K- K6 x2 v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- _" q: }: G: r# M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& O( t* `1 @' q2 p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 c" f0 w3 v- G" D6 }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>