【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
2 c2 j0 q. a- d& X' I& l( I6 |* wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) w, ~9 e- f; S8 P, O! ?3 }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 j4 z" k7 p8 A$ K7 j9 WI already loved you with all my heart
" @/ ~6 p0 q- I, ?+ z6 X# CWe meet and talk everyday,
! ?* t* C( ^4 \6 G4 ~- M/ Y; nBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& [) N0 t2 [* \9 K1 [" eI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) ~4 t0 c$ E4 F+ o7 x) ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# E5 X+ I3 g+ k5 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 M/ i# F: ]% [2 z) lCan I entrust it to you?
! E' p  g( S, U, p# k$ E9 WEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 t9 `* N- r  C* a$ AI want to confess that I love you,
5 }1 m: }9 A7 XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 d; h! C4 Y0 r0 \. z" \+ VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 Y9 w) E0 f4 W, `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" p  h" X6 y( c+ ^3 S) K4 \0 DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ e& n& }1 o. ]; W% _Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 h0 i1 I5 y& _* g0 q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( N! i7 @* q* E; E7 f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ X$ D: l0 }- n6 F+ q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 P. \: Q  D& G+ n. D$ `& c5 K+ N5 T<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) w  e! r; p3 R# X- z9 I5 G<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" b) W% P2 o5 j5 Y. F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) ]+ ~" W$ T# D4 f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. A9 z9 o8 j( ^* f<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* P2 D, z0 R6 m: ^7 h% ]- o<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. r7 L. v1 W7 }) I5 c" B* `' M( J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% f. W% ]; [( `3 C9 |. T5 s<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  y$ F, A) d: N$ o  c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ c) Q9 T/ S& X/ ?<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 {% E* P; w+ r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ n+ E' h$ z4 ~/ ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 W2 ?1 s( [1 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: {; m3 D4 k5 r1 ~. Q( b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- p5 P( p& Y) i& F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 Z6 Q% `! ?3 T1 e) ?$ h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 w# e3 W; h) @, p- f# p0 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
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$ o3 I8 U# G2 Z+ \<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 o( d, l# F5 U) W1 q, B/ \1 A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  G. ^0 v# C5 `<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ m8 h' H3 ?- S  E* [9 q! T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 U0 c; }8 i7 }& \& l7 j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ y( D: g- m$ M2 ?* f  p, P5 \5 l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 r$ x2 i3 q7 V5 R1 l; s3 M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ `' V9 P" _8 P. ^; w, K5 q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' M8 H$ {5 w4 t- }& g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* R0 ^3 n, u2 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ h. b1 @# y/ f3 s- f) W" d( l5 E% }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 _: O: t. l$ r' b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& j* s, U2 E# w% K  v  x9 a0 _% t<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ `- M7 v3 e% r8 p<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>