【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* H1 X! U' _; p  X4 |- S7 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  l. h$ t/ }9 ]  f# n; }" h# L6 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; f; W! O' v/ ?# b* H& {0 OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 s& J  g; `! ]! ]$ P1 g. wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 r) [# ^  t6 T3 W2 AI really want to know just how much you love me
! T& u2 L. u. _2 B/ I) X" s" sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ A9 N! e2 }( U5 L# NI want so much to see inside your heart
$ C. v8 K9 e+ P0 }" m6 TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 d9 m! A, ^: |/ ^1 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, `, C, i% ^. ?7 Y+ G1 x- [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ Z5 L3 Z- k; o2 U1 }3 s. f  C) H# XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; n1 K. P' q; g, P  w/ [; bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 Z) P' A# Z, Y- ]' U' ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! I2 Q6 c: r0 [# p2 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 q; [5 Z5 E: J+ K. F9 J/ A* @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 _9 |$ Y. W  W4 o5 M  O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, v) `; Z0 m2 b, E7 j: t7 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ ^: o* i* b) {  I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ Z' W" ]) p- H$ C2 s: a( z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. v2 K9 r/ T* f' u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ l$ W- \7 s3 l! Z4 i. |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, y% X* M7 r/ q  Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 @" c  ^0 x0 o/ r( J+ ^/ y% s" z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" D! O+ ]! m" _$ |1 \# R- d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 Q" k# Y- o( e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 n9 h% B* J: z, Q: K: T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 _/ h* b3 I6 Z6 j2 N1 H1 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 X7 A8 E1 R; b) |& C; d7 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- s4 ^, T& X( Z, k: L3 B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 J4 }  `& j8 V0 }  m$ a" N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' k0 h/ t+ z% O- c9 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. }5 l% Z8 n& _. {/ G$ ?  f# L4 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  X; A' s, M! X0 [$ \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( o5 e. L- j" Q% u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 \4 |& s; p; R8 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 U) m( F: f( P8 B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! r- m% n/ H' G; j<P>I regret not dying</P>
, R, A( W( ~% o0 [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: J: l, x- @4 X" O, K- H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; \$ o0 J' S! l, x4 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; {6 T" z9 d' C2 D9 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% V8 _* w3 M. y- [+ V$ w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& n, p0 u/ Z; g5 l* |# M- b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ Y# _; J* f1 d9 s/ s& E; r' A& V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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! G) Z, h9 A2 C3 M; l- B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>