【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 E& l7 \4 a4 f8 z% ~: Q" bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( q7 D4 \5 R. ?6 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  M/ \6 g( k2 t8 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 I. Z6 u8 d. e8 e4 A: c- t7 E4 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 j1 f  X6 X! b3 B( W* |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, D9 ^2 m' j2 K' M$ mYou needn’t fear anything
9 K$ H. [) {* U) V/ |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) w% x) L' g4 H" L; k+ ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) @8 b( }" e2 ]2 m) o1 _8 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 m* T2 d! \5 E; h( _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* R' m# m# y# T9 Y6 s7 VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 p" N. J* M8 u0 X) XI’m still filled with fear
, [/ S0 J- l% n+ m) G) s: ~) mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' K; l0 V& X! M, ^" gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 x' B' e, e: p+ TWith such a tongue as yours,
+ D  X- ?5 J3 ]1 ?/ m9 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) [4 z" U7 w% l; \8 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 }0 W6 Y" L" O9 e& k3 \) L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 Q2 W9 C  i9 y6 R1 @8 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* u* D& x" R4 z7 t7 }8 Q! O' i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. B. `! K4 u+ |6 G8 M) Y; G) U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; g$ u0 M- F( X0 x7 j% [3 U$ F& F% H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 i) j5 \2 P. O/ ?0 A$ ?# I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! S/ ^( j% h/ Y- P8 O( n" W9 l9 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 M8 ?$ O. s! S- q$ g8 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 N3 W5 x0 P" K; [( F( B9 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 M: s% T3 r5 w, q4 `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ w% ?8 C8 `  T- H* G& U# ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: t3 ?/ Y. N( p% [, \6 S+ p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) j; M/ t, S& T5 o, W( O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. e5 O/ T' P  t$ ^% u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) I) m1 E% G% n- Y) m8 v( w1 T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ^8 D. H3 R( q2 S3 ^$ @6 a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 _* q! z* C3 ]' T/ E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 ^0 ]1 k; T' t, I( v# _8 d0 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ C# @: W8 p/ x& _5 a* u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 r, W( S7 C% a! O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( r3 o$ I* f* {0 M; e* n! T8 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 M( W% ?3 H8 e9 I- M( |! Q$ r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 z9 b0 i. p  J) }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  X+ U+ P! ~+ D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, ~" d5 u+ P# J# @6 @7 L$ H' v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, G7 i5 a/ _* H2 u" d  a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>