【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 s8 k( A- j* g( v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# }9 U& j* F: f' a( I, W  PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" q& Q: a; P' J  M+ r9 R! Z: ^1 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ K1 q: d3 E2 h6 D' W. fSeeing the sky content with its love
0 w! Z- L0 K1 P/ A5 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 J9 D4 n7 w4 i2 N5 `/ C& ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( T6 ?- b/ F0 p; lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; C. c) e) E! W$ W! WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, q- w, j* E/ V) u, `I’m still filled with fear
6 @2 X( V( Z/ x, c/ r  R3 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 e/ T6 _; z' v: |8 Z1 O2 a* ]8 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 ~1 D* _' f- m6 b6 ?& ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) Q( v* `; I! F9 X" m6 k6 sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; G& N9 N5 ~& |3 N$ T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 H* u3 B# `% i6 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" |; G" g. z" \8 C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 C6 Z, D: M; j6 E( q. V1 R9 ~% y/ K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 E+ Y' F$ [4 f# i$ ^+ B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( o9 h4 E# H" ?, }( B* _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! O) G6 j, s1 W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 D2 k+ f& s7 }5 P4 e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# T3 w5 O4 j2 j  M4 I" N9 P/ Y" a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 `  a) e8 o& k. o5 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 q% B! [9 N4 E7 C( f/ \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- @0 D  x& j9 r" m4 {" @, [% ?; t, h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; _, o; h7 J7 w! Z9 k5 e! T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 w6 |! n/ V4 ?- P1 |/ N+ c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. e3 F* d5 S$ C5 \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ p4 H' \8 f( @7 F7 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  h) e* ~& B9 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; p$ `' X4 h# g+ c+ k# _6 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" J+ e( ]" V( H, v: B, g5 p! [5 d% v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. F$ g# w; G- H  O1 W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" U- ~# i# i4 n7 s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* x+ U% R$ f$ y4 p' ]  }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 v, P+ Q; ]1 u, e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: C* @5 d% ~! i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 z. G/ x# g, N1 u+ F) e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
6 }6 f- E* e0 e+ `- ~6 H
* {9 E0 I0 _7 U* ]. D$ v5 H我请你剖开它
% v# H+ M/ u5 v8 h7 h! q8 j
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  x: @1 T! W9 G' g2 A" |7 `) Y* Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>