【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 b2 `3 f  l6 E/ \! p1 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: P: }( w' ?9 p5 s; U9 I" SThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ D) R) r& x0 L4 z9 o' t  LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# }5 D8 _6 [% F, OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  x5 i5 p3 S3 q. D; e% y$ y( K2 hYou needn’t fear anything
2 W9 P* a" b5 S" M: H( _" G* Y& pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& L+ O' d, c" a' w; p- ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 K8 g) ^& l% y. ?$ W: u: ^5 FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* f2 @) ?; N( U7 bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' K8 O5 a) X* n( i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  w3 m$ X! b2 q7 ?) U1 ?; _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- ~" I0 R2 m" R0 ~6 d& X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 e; U# d) N+ f, e8 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 B& \6 T7 e, p1 t9 o; a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* b8 H8 T+ D# _8 W* q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* \( M( a; D% a; Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ @1 L3 b$ a" Y% ?' ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ O6 g% P% Q. f* c+ H<P>你无需担心</P>
+ k7 L! V" p; B# L* _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ c, k, }: z7 q0 \3 z; f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 Q6 |6 G# X, J9 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 g& E; V( Z- J  @. Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! u7 T1 ~: f2 v- Q  q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 p- j$ d9 x8 S$ n% r. i1 H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, p' }. i+ C0 p7 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. R& [9 F9 O* l/ ~. I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: t9 n3 k8 P4 }' g0 \+ b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ F' ^2 N6 I( P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 v5 X# H7 m* m  N) v0 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! _0 X2 G0 z) Q4 Q3 L" ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# k* X" u  `% N1 O/ M6 h; X. \<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 d' |; h# V  U; F/ m$ @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" d3 ]4 l0 y- N# G( t4 Z1 m# D( u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ o' r. A1 B% N/ v' T7 l( U9 V5 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, Q! N( K" Y  G3 f) M" h/ b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( h( J# b1 m3 p1 y# c9 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* s! l8 T% v- r7 [: R/ `; ~% C6 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 D% O6 W+ ^/ {/ C, W! Y6 D8 L. U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, Z. i4 h+ w1 j, L# \8 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 S9 x4 I4 j4 t  u- @; |" z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>