【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# ?5 [/ F/ [. S+ \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 l5 m$ b- V+ D' b% [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, I' H2 k, b. }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ k& z$ X. X  JThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 ^( _( s8 A- _: f" \, k8 UWith the moon kissing it every night
' Q% F  j! P- TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 }  {  E. C5 o5 i2 tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. ?: k% h: V2 j* e  K& B* i' lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: w9 e3 z& Y. p7 @6 z, ^; A* d6 wNothing can compare to my love
0 E; i. V7 z7 ^6 s$ kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; w! T& j; w" K' p  L' [: P1 II want so much to see inside your heart
+ v" B& J" W" w$ \- I9 sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! ?' N, a( x8 P" mI’m still filled with fear
3 U# m& ]$ i+ c: ?1 }: d  w. sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 x* a0 Y7 }$ g$ a1 j; F% GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( M; U4 }* j/ l5 S' t/ vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) p+ a9 T: L. \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 F/ i( h, m) q; W- I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# K; G* p- s+ @3 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# b" }) z) j9 Q9 ~, v. f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 f# Y8 P) P7 X+ I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- v. G# Y/ }" }$ n% K1 |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ E" {; ^( t# {8 M% @5 z: L# p7 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& b8 F4 ~5 e7 s  f9 i' t3 d<P>你无需担心</P>
1 m, k" J/ F* C8 x$ a4 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ T" w2 E9 N/ U0 Q; j( q5 G; X: ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  r8 f' K& }0 j4 y2 f9 j( a  _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; R6 i5 A- ]3 e. X( |. G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( U% r8 s" _: `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 X- }0 U; k' j! u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 @2 i# G& s( ], ?6 ^6 u, G/ e; y% I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 A: K! Z2 B9 V5 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 b5 }: Y7 l% j7 ?% h: d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, K4 G$ E; _" t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 y/ f/ l( b( q- r) y& M2 o0 ^2 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 r3 I( `6 m8 k! a+ O/ b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. `/ E! u  U8 g( G: \# ?; S7 j9 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ D! d& h) B% J/ o3 V( a5 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( N8 H) |# b" q, ]* F* j! z- E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, m7 W8 S/ s7 w! I# t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* S, v9 s, {4 n* G* S我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>