【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 Y, m# `# e4 j% ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- p1 H0 O: v9 j. \. aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# f# ^- V5 K+ c+ S9 n  cWith the moon kissing it every night
; q8 v$ Y* w* nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" F: m* D3 w' S) r" k( vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 a2 r( G, `6 \0 {! t; lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 n4 ]# n' ?& |& P' U9 @I love you I love you with all my heart
, A: s  R: K3 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 s: T; w# Y( T+ ^' l6 J- E5 u: XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ z0 [9 O& P, ~2 r" B* MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ t/ [. k6 O0 F# u+ X7 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 B# A4 F9 T! N+ x6 C& P, z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 y8 d5 U0 P  c5 L1 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 `; C& S  b  p7 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. L8 j1 {" o0 N' T1 @$ h  E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 m7 g8 w0 ]5 c/ @1 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% _- l$ _, _# ^) s, l; x) ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# w' }2 t1 P' U3 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ H2 j# F0 a6 E; a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 b. f' e' \0 m3 `& r  a  F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' D7 |* r7 @! j  Q1 N, s$ A) J/ k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 u2 b+ t# d* r3 V' W, }  V. [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 ~! F/ J2 I+ B* Z4 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 N- u7 L( r( C; h' v- z( P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 r; {/ O6 y' @  S2 N9 A( D4 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% P7 f* `5 O( G) R: R$ ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 o0 C  t/ c: T8 S) C/ R8 T) L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 o  q, b) M- F% P- P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% D+ J) y% [" ?9 W& ?2 m" ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. Z# n1 t+ f1 }+ f3 R: w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, q  `, u: _9 K4 k! W8 W8 C; |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 J8 y9 ~$ X4 ?8 ^% |3 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 E- s2 U- R4 Q7 w8 c7 q! Z  T! I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ x+ z2 K& A3 E% s2 ?  H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, g+ N& F/ d- p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 V* j/ R' `& [( M* I8 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 s* V  G) ]+ ]& o6 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  q5 L9 C: R; I9 C4 L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ e' s3 p' e# u4 [3 D9 F  C1 }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>