【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" f) j' I4 |1 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, k, U# Y+ f6 l6 ?. |/ y& w0 \1 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. ]% u8 Z+ d. OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 J) g1 i9 M' hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 n# M  ?5 g% z1 ZEvery other word you utter is love
2 B" ~' k+ |, nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 S9 I, H# v* QNothing can compare to my love
: B; L& g0 K- @) `: I  vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( U1 d; H3 \/ {/ gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( V' M8 E! d6 Y+ d& `3 }# nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ R6 ~+ l) P: c  w% uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, _/ l3 ^8 ]3 H/ s1 S2 \2 ^6 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. Y% r1 L5 e( [, N; z# m' U6 pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# q9 H" z/ j* @" X5 D+ V. c. z7 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! @. ~% t/ E% T* O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, D9 h! F( ^7 p* Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ \9 `# N+ i  L4 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: C+ t/ T( i1 l  s# J; _1 j% \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  Z6 Y; X& G( k8 S# R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, L: p9 T8 t. ]- n- I' T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ ]9 j1 W5 z7 V* u& U$ [3 N) k- W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" O$ l/ G- c* Q$ c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ `) w. }0 I% v- w8 S, d% M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' c$ w: [- n2 Z7 K6 b6 K8 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' a9 s2 d% N' f, j1 a4 h) A5 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 R0 I5 K4 [7 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; p) }+ p1 j! ~, \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 N0 V# x! F0 l; i, f" X' W$ n4 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ [" }- R& A/ P5 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. H3 N4 ]1 F' _) X" Q, j1 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 v% U4 z0 V; @  `' w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 Q0 F! u/ \6 Q! Q; A' M" a3 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; W& f9 {* N) y' h5 ?! G, {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: W8 R2 U" g+ f' V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 n  x% P/ }, ]" z& y, C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 `& I( @* v5 [3 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ @2 G$ u# n; U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# z$ O. Q  L4 h- i+ _& N5 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 e; C4 t  M' z: W. z/ u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; f4 z7 Q3 x4 S$ @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>