【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* `  |6 B: j8 Q7 n; y  i歌词我附在后面。
, c0 D0 p# U' J0 P% K+ rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' I( ]( G+ N; {3 x5 h5 w! |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 k4 a! e6 X0 t2 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
* j3 \* |$ l' X' ^4 @0 i/ }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 H# k0 Y8 e, y, C% a; O+ `! _1 JYou needn’t fear anything
( A5 T& [0 z7 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' a* Y* e: K3 j1 |Every other word you utter is love
+ [5 R6 T: \! tI really want to know just how much you love me
$ A/ v# c1 p8 u8 v: kI love you I love you with all my heart
9 K, M$ H/ C: H  F. ?Nothing can compare to my love
3 E# O% C% T9 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. q9 H/ U* }1 T8 W. e3 t5 yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 \2 N$ e8 t4 Z: |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, |4 K1 Z/ T' m# iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# o. o! m; U0 ^4 n* O5 m& _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ Z$ N9 f* k; s1 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 t7 Y& |! c7 T3 @# K1 ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- K7 w( ?6 |, Q3 P+ l2 U3 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% f) I- K: F/ \( E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 @7 R+ }; y# f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 z/ ~$ m; e' M; H4 E, H; _% v" K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) V  v$ e5 `; n- y5 v6 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ U* q) k, I$ O& }- L# w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 [! U3 b) e$ ?7 M# `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 _/ r( Q/ i/ o  V# O* \<P>你无需担心</P>
! w( I! k" O/ n3 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 m/ `; e' j. _; v$ C% d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 M5 `8 ?7 p. j9 b, f- `/ _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. ?$ X( U# f% i3 g  O* G, C1 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" D: W" P& `8 b- }$ D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 ^  n. ~. l, r$ Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 H  j7 G# Q4 f3 ?$ e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; ?; ?! b3 _/ I- D! |% D0 m+ _1 I  b; S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ ]: d1 E2 k6 {# f9 Z1 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  m7 c: v  c1 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: b. p8 p+ ]0 E0 J/ F! y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) y1 T) J8 R) F0 h! T/ U' q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" @. e& C& m4 ?1 [0 Z8 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ |' G8 {4 x% k  y! ]1 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 Q6 h) K2 a4 _, b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' E7 R, d" Z+ n$ X( D& B0 H0 D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ X7 m2 I' T6 v6 `  z# J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' i  H( J! N5 V' Y: T6 C. u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! o2 h( x  s1 U, ?8 e5 V7 K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 O# F9 E& C/ P7 O; E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 J% @. h% n1 \4 N* l# \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ h- F* O* `& m! i7 N- w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ j) j8 A, _' Q- J, U( \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>