【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. ?" N7 q; E# I3 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ s- q2 ~/ d: ]The sky is happy down to its soul
6 n+ c# E+ ?, C9 {- DWith the moon kissing it every night
: ^- G/ |5 t! Z8 {, b7 c- T( i* iSeeing the sky content with its love
/ D4 i2 |2 s1 d) n  H7 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% {7 j1 q2 f& l; P. E. s9 zEvery other word you utter is love
! @' x! o, }, C) |$ X2 gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' y) W" f  i' v/ JNothing can compare to my love
* F4 L* f; W; I; d, y' KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 N. e" X; o; f7 G5 o: K! L7 OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 p" R: h! }- w+ z' NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 x. J' i3 Z+ y* M- _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ ~# J6 _6 J: DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 @# p: I3 y0 R0 I$ Q+ kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( @1 C) N7 k" p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 E. Q) r+ P) H# I+ q3 [7 X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( P; K* f4 Q, ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: K# g. n1 [# `0 ^" ?& {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% C7 c9 L+ c  E3 y. f( t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 ~4 z& K1 I4 P) B% Y" h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ N; `! P% ]2 r( K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 L  [2 q+ @' f4 t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 Z! D# N/ ~# S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; }! I8 R) ]4 G! Q: G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 W8 Q6 F5 L& v' N  M/ J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# i# J$ i, W  }" K- K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 m& l; L+ k8 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 m: F! Y; _# S3 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 Q1 Z6 ^' v8 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- O5 d, a- {/ m4 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ O3 D' F* i) W& e9 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ x6 T, Y8 U' W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! @3 T, U/ m* u$ i  J4 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 c' s' z: _. q) x' B1 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  n3 y% w) ~& i0 N: B' c0 s* G/ o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 _  @0 N0 r$ \- r4 X; `1 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 y+ v. R  }$ u8 U% w, [; Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' f$ @2 ?: D. V; B. X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ @1 c! l7 a2 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- P3 N$ @6 i3 h, d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 q2 A/ d8 ?& D5 M: u2 @! U/ y6 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 ^0 t! k2 H. f3 E9 A6 Y+ b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 V7 T8 L# U' f: L/ S! P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 O" k, }! Z  Z. u) q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ C. Y/ F" U( o+ N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% g; i5 F4 G3 _; u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! |( J5 l0 l! Y* C2 |6 u9 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>