【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 v+ M( n2 K* i7 D9 }歌词我附在后面。
# Y( A% C" X& f3 ?! j8 A8 c0 ~5 LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( Z: M/ v, i! [$ E3 O" l' s7 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 W7 j. H$ _0 D$ n2 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' w+ D; |$ H2 C. ?3 l' yWith the moon kissing it every night
1 A! o+ g2 v4 N. v  ~. BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 t2 Y3 H& T  f5 KYou needn’t fear anything
/ }) f( Z0 S# ]+ nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, e% E4 ~+ T4 o) v7 L& UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, Y& }( W6 n6 y9 g8 T0 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 K" u$ S8 ]1 [# |  x- b" JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 A6 A3 V' {& y: F) dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 b* h/ g3 G9 B* A3 ^With such a tongue as yours,
. o: `5 r; J' L7 gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( H7 I, J; _- C. L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, ^9 {0 V0 ?. p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ j" Y- n3 o3 |1 V5 Y( S( h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- W2 T. c# Q- \0 N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* T- c8 _, o8 B) U; ^+ Z" ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ s* g) E  J! Z; A; n/ D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! f; }; ~; g8 @2 }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, D$ d3 _" J) y! j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, l! `: A5 ]9 f! G& r6 t1 u7 j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 w, T. c2 f3 d. Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 a" _: }9 x3 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( Z& ~3 n8 [8 w- l0 }; X1 }" v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- K* r) Z1 V! E3 E0 `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! s: V" U6 L, y% i% y0 I) T+ y" N# l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! B- A) I$ s. q3 c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# u$ U. z1 Y1 D* Q7 C6 P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 \$ N* H& h& n9 K0 S$ Q+ U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' i6 b- J# a+ Y  A# R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: |! l: d$ L+ ?( m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 _+ d  n" C2 E2 F; g3 G) U' W( M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* z; q* U6 n( g" P/ s; C5 C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' [+ X1 e1 ~' A2 ~4 x6 g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 ?' J0 w8 F$ G; W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 t/ |2 k3 C. X+ Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 ]0 W3 c* l" c( ?. C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 j6 z" d3 f( u: Y7 J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: I8 J1 t: a3 c" G9 |6 g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 L5 p! ~8 l4 R- L" j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; ?7 ]. d2 x0 h! `3 { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 b  s7 @+ K4 x3 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>