【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ d5 b: y; X4 `2 b2 q$ I歌词我附在后面。
5 e) o6 _6 g7 X8 ~( kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ a) ~! y/ X, WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! M( r, a' i: k( s; t* g3 [/ jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) e/ E- b: ]. t8 m6 Q5 p9 E- gWith the moon kissing it every night
) I/ h( K* K/ U% a) C; J. OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 b  Z/ K  o. \4 `& ^' YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% t, h" v5 A' S4 j; ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. w6 N1 s: s" N! \- Q5 }I want so much to see inside your heart
' u; w5 x$ \  ^7 q8 `1 s. XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 K9 ]- D% e; `( h. }With such a tongue as yours,
' N" C# }% l5 v! nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 S/ O0 a7 E! r4 b4 sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ m2 g# J+ p  H2 D2 P0 r0 e; i/ ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# i5 ~6 f/ n/ ~' T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; Q. w/ W5 _4 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: G& s$ G/ l0 D9 S! f: {+ W! K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 z' ]- \! C: Q6 i) o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 r5 T& `0 I( t7 _- s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" P' r2 t2 D4 [. ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 S' V9 j6 {2 ]* P; G0 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! K, A* ?. [7 g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: X* R$ K( b- @6 z! e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 N* v+ `; o; r* ]5 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, s" C3 `6 Z/ d; r# [9 \$ T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" L0 s8 F0 t) E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& B2 e4 P& Q( Y+ O7 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: u) u5 b" B* [2 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' |6 @- m, V" [9 Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# s, Z4 r  d0 i9 g1 b2 `4 A; Y' C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 a% u% U% k  y, D+ ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. t( i" y# `( ?4 _0 T7 q+ B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* m; _3 J' \' {! o! t5 N- {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* p0 _7 N6 e5 P2 u+ }& A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  F4 F( I. `' S( L0 d8 j, r# k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ s. d2 d2 Q, Z" b# |8 G5 H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; |7 ?# ~. \: P) c+ A/ S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! b' v$ m5 e* N7 V9 f9 ~- [6 C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# N( `% o. z5 N% V0 S, p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>