【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- M( m# E# S9 K( K0 U, {. DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( q: y1 p: ^' n( W4 M7 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 M) v, I' t6 P; eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! C5 w" o3 j( Y/ D2 d- ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 w6 \" i' ?8 J5 M; y0 c7 Z, |9 pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 Q) B" h- g: V5 j! ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( p& W  o$ U2 a* F: gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, f7 S# t% D% e7 U3 r+ Z6 mI’m still filled with fear
' g& C' f2 g1 ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% O! j( [! w8 G4 o1 Q9 x8 n4 o' zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 @2 Z6 ]  z5 _With such a tongue as yours,
' `& w2 e$ O( F* I5 h. r6 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 |/ w% m$ {6 [& W( K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. O2 ]& P% ?9 J  x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 M4 q$ ?  B4 m( s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 M5 Y2 L$ t+ d5 U# D7 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 p; e* i+ ]0 }2 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" \: Q' y) G' w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: H; Y* c6 ]& N1 Y4 b" \% b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- F7 H: _9 I5 O8 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ Y1 H- o" l) e0 \! `# x6 |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  A4 N) a8 ]8 Y! G4 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  `# t6 _& V* c  C6 O' J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 F8 Z' N3 p* w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! h) a% M( v9 j/ n/ s5 l4 l5 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. I( Q: J# o8 I3 p+ h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- J* n" m( ^, l* c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& j9 T# Y4 b6 _: W$ W. u3 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 n( M3 a! P- P/ k- B7 u+ ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 r$ U) h+ l$ w- ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* p: t- L8 L. d7 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. Z8 f: ^  V- Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# E- Q, j7 U/ t7 [, [& `/ l6 J% W6 @  Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# z5 Q0 {% R+ i: m2 J! F2 S/ f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! G7 U: i- _2 g/ |0 j: t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 ^5 Q7 T& l8 m+ e& q2 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' D) J7 Q( j/ N; A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& R! a7 \6 A& F/ t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 G' B$ C5 v. \! G/ H( E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 x5 s- o6 o7 H5 X4 m4 |  r! S% q" K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ N5 _( H$ n8 C1 x: V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; M# g* `. D! a$ O; L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 x0 d5 t1 o# P! k6 g9 C# {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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0 L& u6 F( L0 S9 m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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