【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ H  y; Q9 x6 n8 h+ G5 _$ f- ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 U% ^, H5 v! ^/ X1 W* r4 JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* w- O+ a8 t) d. qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 i3 ?! P3 I6 _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: `* P5 D9 T, F! g% X/ [3 aYou needn’t fear anything
- B8 I5 X4 X; F9 p: QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 w; s2 N  r; w' g- a6 k" z- ~8 qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 M4 Y% {8 c3 wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 E) l. s" O7 MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  W8 y. o/ R+ n0 x; m' GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 d+ f5 W* g7 k6 n) u# {: N7 R7 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: f4 _5 O% w; rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( ]0 H/ j: ~( F# @2 w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; K  U% U5 G1 L9 H! E; v: W; i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! [1 e! R# y1 C* f: i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- c+ z# W; Z# N) A% `: b+ p, n  l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- C6 O/ W* m2 f# g' W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 i; c: \" k5 p  y  t! l; m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ B3 N4 h3 E" Q1 Z1 \5 x: w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- y' h- |. O) |9 i- N& {: u7 j0 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 l, a! h9 e5 O5 D  F, p( I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 k# n$ @5 u" `+ |* W/ W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 o$ x- f# k8 g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ [' |/ G3 A0 w, F. C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 S3 }9 E& y- x5 s6 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 R$ d7 ?# e7 i% k4 A- o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 _" J, r# M4 w' Z) ^# P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: S! W4 L' s! h0 j& b: K( G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" g+ B6 A8 q8 I# s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 o) M/ t+ c; G1 O7 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 h3 q+ m0 Y" J4 I5 \$ y& P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 v" b3 I* i5 v  y$ q$ [; B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. L+ ?$ M9 B4 ]1 n- m! G% j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, ?1 ]3 ^3 b) K+ p( p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 f% o- C1 S- G1 h% F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( @4 S) R; |4 e+ v& j0 T: z( C+ p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. D6 I# K, g" [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; C0 \5 }" I+ G6 I7 f! L5 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# i! {5 e4 i4 v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>