【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# k# z* |$ R! g. E- uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; @+ f7 ], G- Y) S6 o3 m( A0 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ W- B- g* v5 z/ u5 B( M$ |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! b. t! t/ f0 y, e1 h- O1 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* f7 w; G) e+ ]% CSeeing the sky content with its love
5 q' r3 P& y* F* X0 JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ H2 x$ i7 l5 b% ^9 R! X; u6 \, qEvery other word you utter is love
# ~# ]: R/ X( w- @' p6 `( BI really want to know just how much you love me
* q) f' J, ~$ F( o1 f4 s7 lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 x* c1 F2 c5 ]$ yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 Z* n5 P) X$ a7 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ [; G: K! P  n5 _9 z/ C0 pI’m still filled with fear
' [! l+ j' `; B' F- _( VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 ]$ |9 @: H: L2 _+ O8 [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 e9 z4 |/ z$ ?+ RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% z* g' e' @3 L7 H2 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 K. E1 A2 Q( K2 w  U3 a: T6 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 B1 V: a7 H* h) }, g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& K% ~* z+ M; f. |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# h. G! E( H- D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# B0 v6 F. H7 B5 h: a8 m$ J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* I( y+ @8 q# _2 j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( w8 E* t4 G/ K# v' X; p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% I6 L. x+ i+ H' y0 c' w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ Y) |5 V2 U) z6 J/ k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 i7 b$ Y  x7 T8 x* m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 @  n& ^1 s% }/ Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* X7 R/ f# L! h' V, ]( G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, T) B/ B) I2 ?! Y3 A& O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! u5 \; b% d( H) J) Z4 d<P>你无需担心</P>
1 ]* a: ?. B& q1 o  X/ Z( k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, G2 h. D+ F4 x! j$ I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 {, e8 `0 x1 F) ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" f8 M9 o4 F& ?9 ^9 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. b/ l% z  V, v1 U" v- F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% V. ]) g2 M5 {; c3 B- D7 G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" v# t% F! z" A4 Q, Q  _/ t8 J' v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 r' R+ X" `( m# c% g( i9 }8 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ a( x+ V# V$ N6 S; Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" }: }: a  @1 @0 z* \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 @: ^, G" W$ G( S; A+ H$ H' `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 ?+ ~4 C) s+ G/ L% f0 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. \7 N" Q/ {* ~1 q: G4 h) `7 a- `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 x* t8 g0 T3 \: n4 }& c4 y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* K# N1 K+ h, }: {, v6 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* C$ V9 V' h3 o- z7 K: }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  c$ ?9 m* N$ X. s7 S" P我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>