【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 h  b4 F3 o6 p, bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  l' k6 @7 o3 A: N. M6 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 ?7 W5 f# f& AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* `; Z  j: |7 x  T8 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
' B8 ?) E$ I+ C; Y" ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& V' R# w+ g, s# eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 h6 H1 }! ^6 DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 W9 g' P, y! N% J" E, dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; b; G; |! s) ?. ~. \5 F7 pI want so much to see inside your heart
' z7 }; z& H1 {- G3 [5 s0 u" pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) v( ?8 t; U' Y2 R9 z/ vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. X1 n* L: d4 BWith such a tongue as yours,
  C; X+ [- o; C! g4 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# i* ]: j; `* a. O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( v3 W( \0 B% k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: N% U% r+ G- `0 m8 ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 I  w4 ~  v3 O+ p3 ~$ F  N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 r' ^' ]7 u) c4 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# x7 K4 L( u5 ?) q( }2 S# w: |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 j% t; G/ [& H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 J/ Z! O' R1 X- C! D5 C- l: ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, [  ~$ L! k3 N: f" v/ f/ @9 j# Z$ _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 \/ k4 T+ R( y, m0 ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 x$ R, P# E& G; g2 i# a' _' r% c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ P9 X" L8 S/ R5 p  n/ D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 {9 `# Y: j- c8 e. @" b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  A( A+ h3 ~3 r. f4 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 n4 a& ?0 b7 b4 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 g: [" E1 e2 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 j4 {  Q9 s3 T! \$ j8 {) g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. T* k, D) l: }' h0 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. d' ^/ R* B: t. z; P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! S: x- B7 s. H5 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: k) G/ G7 B" d5 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' `# y  T& W& x7 Z( {: T8 Q# A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- K& I0 S2 T; w1 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" b) \* ?$ J. E$ o) \: [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 |2 F6 T1 v4 d9 C" j+ b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 G7 g. |3 J2 e/ ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>