【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, n  X; s) u# u1 d5 T; S- @8 F/ g; WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; ?. i9 [. v6 z2 }# U! i" x5 K6 V9 k' xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ Y- k" m. g- mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- i, {- K9 F3 }- p( k! v- c/ tI really want to know just how much you love me
2 E4 R, f' U, b/ t7 Q/ T1 Q0 qI love you I love you with all my heart
, {& |+ Q% m' z0 VNothing can compare to my love
: S5 E! F  |0 J, Z  K8 |) k* H" _( GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( k; @0 i+ s$ ?% H) }" ~+ _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 z( e. t( s# ^( u7 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 C$ e1 f; K  OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" T+ w" o7 ]* t: u6 k* \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* _. ^5 K3 P3 P* W5 }: i( y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 _" R* H1 g  D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 m8 a  Y( H4 l" @  I$ F- @( }+ ?. t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 R. W8 s- l" z; b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' y) L' Q6 }9 _( M: [* [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  c+ f+ m: p! v+ l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ ?: d- T6 O4 J8 e<P>你无需担心</P>
3 b* e: T& E' W: y' @+ Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 a6 q3 G9 G  d" h' W5 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# I7 P% j3 E. \, K1 C8 ~# _( y: y% ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 o+ t5 `& _- e1 f: m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ e9 a2 r8 B5 A) O( r, |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ n: |  i+ @$ i% y( o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 W2 @, R$ X$ M* P& z  }9 H. E; i1 Q- N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ C( R% O9 X2 M, R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 L5 I; [8 c7 W' y9 y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 N# Z  D' R7 x* [+ G1 \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 `$ K! j1 c6 U' r+ B) G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 h$ n! z1 d- A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, D% P0 [8 W0 ^1 e! Z" g: p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. u1 F6 r/ g& y$ a, G) ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 P7 }$ o; G% v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' L/ J# V" O. d0 E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" Y8 V* ~" s2 a3 E% ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- e0 z( U4 H7 v) V8 d1 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 t2 Z1 V7 |. M! ^  L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, O6 |! ?! {. N/ c# _+ C9 V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 D5 L# b3 P* M: ^. T+ {$ N7 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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0 @  d, I1 i9 Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 O* v6 ?9 n) q; C  w% J, H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>