【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( s! A  A1 O. o* {8 E/ bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! I: i; v9 d2 p- f/ j! m1 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* L: B/ T% {4 W, d0 {8 U* sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 e" i, T1 P) _( ?& Y/ K. vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( |! X3 _4 }- PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  s/ z! J6 R' |+ C; J8 }I really want to know just how much you love me
( h* X) M4 x2 w6 yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ H. I9 T( R- X/ W* e9 p% VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 C: p4 P1 a% `, fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  j- i8 @4 {$ n# |- Q; K9 |/ hI’m still filled with fear
" E( o+ A; m6 T2 zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 l4 R, ^2 w. KI regret not dying
0 c* D* N5 m( S% A" AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& a% E6 |8 f8 ]- E$ t2 \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 ~/ h/ N, a5 _' |: BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; C' F* Q. ?, M  A) O5 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 ^5 \, [5 j# J& y4 s8 N" [8 [) f& _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 [/ t; S: v! u- v' @) n0 I5 P: K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& `5 w$ U& ?0 ^7 H" Z/ {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# O9 \% ?( k9 w' L  g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& H2 g- E' C- q8 f# M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- f4 }9 s7 K3 E" f) M' A& D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& t2 v& R8 [! v6 H. U  x3 U% m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" t* L3 Z) ^; |4 C- J" r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( T: ?+ w5 v: b<P>你无需担心</P>
7 A2 ~6 F2 A- r" ~( v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: x2 W! K. v6 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; N9 D% s* K( _) h1 E6 ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' p7 ~9 `3 X8 K: h5 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 |* W6 |# B% O# {$ p+ k5 ]! H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) J. s( `+ a6 ^  {5 ^" M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, a/ s; f7 V2 {4 n# |- L; `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: g8 [5 N1 c% B% Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 ^4 ~( X: [) c- z8 L) m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& N" l! Z4 S, k5 x4 _! l. M6 P- J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 y) i; o& t" G$ n  w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. b1 N6 E" U) \9 g6 F$ O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! k8 m! {% @. }* m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ Y8 ^8 ~' V$ ~( y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 S0 l. I. t# d6 G0 [) i. _4 `: g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# s2 S4 g1 T+ s4 f5 \9 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 p7 k; ~( D2 x4 q' n$ y9 J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" t/ q  x8 T7 p! L* p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 M5 j6 A! H' X, f/ t我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>