【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 b' q$ ?2 n, G9 |9 K5 t! f歌词我附在后面。
6 q( o$ R. \, z0 A4 v+ P% T: wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  {: S0 C5 ~6 C" N. {) X' y# |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# {* l  n: p: y1 L6 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 P( z; g% z8 g5 C1 ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ s2 U. t& Y4 _0 ]9 p5 m0 o+ s$ GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, v; v- J" P% \# T. z- J5 kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* X/ b, o/ H9 M. M, T/ `! YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 P, O$ U$ f* h  R4 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  B9 ?2 G: o* W2 K4 t2 w0 ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 j& q% _% T- O5 R9 s/ ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ M$ ~; ?* q) B7 iWith such a tongue as yours,
2 |+ j$ p: y" P' P" l1 HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, y) v: g7 B: m. h2 |6 ^7 U, pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 ~7 Q3 s8 V5 Z9 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' p9 D5 q! _0 b( d2 \& d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 o- B3 Q1 |( }: _. J+ C; t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" b) L% ^; t6 D. j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 A9 ~' b4 Y% B  M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ G( C: N7 o0 e* x* @* T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( D5 q, o9 j7 `) f/ n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 y# y, q/ l0 h" [% U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: o8 P, W3 Z# J: ^3 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" d. e! u" Q/ N  k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; ^' M* U  j8 ?3 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' T9 _3 l" Z, H2 A$ c" Y: c$ D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 m/ a6 T( v! A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: g% E" |' z! t  b! ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% O1 X( ~: m; Z) i1 ^# u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 _% t" _* J1 e  f- `* ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 r7 Y5 t; c# e4 \3 |. P# z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 d/ ]5 @- G9 O) X  B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  W1 v! u3 [7 E) }+ Q  P4 m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ l  U# M! t8 n. C( a2 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>