【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( \% V* u0 @2 d& a2 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% j% q. l3 ?' c+ Z1 r4 W, PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( r3 m( V. n6 j' gThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 X. G* c( }" n  F5 |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  V& _5 \6 j" H! F% YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 f* |0 @/ H! Z$ \  N: {6 D( D' BYou needn’t fear anything
; z  i% K  {* S" x! TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" k& V+ e( ?; y( q$ AI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: G& ]& q6 G8 SI want so much to see inside your heart
+ b" m) i5 ?  K# p/ y. w2 H0 S* LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# S7 \/ t; J" ]" VI’m still filled with fear
0 _8 Q( z# K/ Q8 v6 ^  pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: X0 z& R/ ]; v$ I+ ~2 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% P9 a4 G  M2 u* ZWith such a tongue as yours,
; ?* R7 L& h7 F- qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 @5 \  ^( K# _" {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( h8 `! O- V2 Q5 z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 E# B  d4 c5 L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; L# Q: q# y0 |0 q2 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! p( A( u8 W' R' P& Q1 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 U! j+ ]1 \2 p9 H$ {, C4 o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' \0 \) @5 Z0 i; K$ G$ L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 u$ s- U6 W7 [! D  `' ?9 x0 a. M! S- {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 V" P2 D$ {+ Z1 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ `6 X0 S$ T3 W6 E) \5 k& K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 H, o: J# J; y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 y6 S7 o" {$ Q5 |) `1 b) ?2 Q  \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 T  q, l$ E3 S+ {- X7 x0 y* ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' q9 f% Q7 a3 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# }  y. k! ^/ @5 m( ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# P- I$ j* f1 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, v; y- m/ U: _$ s2 r5 B" @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. ^* R( f( Z" P5 [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& }- J- D$ n; Z5 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 {9 C9 Q4 C) l. \3 Y: f- |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ @5 t, [, u6 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  N# b3 i4 X) i) K+ ~5 c/ j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, e, ?/ H: m+ D; ?, U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" C; Z9 d& A/ O  l( U: j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 W7 {! p1 ~0 h% ]: S8 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% m: C( }4 ?- l7 w# _3 E我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* A( O# i8 U8 n7 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>