【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, Y/ d! |$ H/ E- nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( B+ l) v' m# }8 F! AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 R' L- G! c* r7 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 w3 V. c- X, g  `" n, ?7 lWith the moon kissing it every night
7 q; w1 ]& D  \: t/ r9 B8 O2 \Seeing the sky content with its love
* a! @% F& U2 D, {& t, AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 l8 \% ?0 X  b: t, NEvery other word you utter is love
/ Z  P  ]" B- Q1 P  d5 n; V( e9 YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! t: x5 R6 N4 u: I) kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 r& `% s. e2 d2 vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- m% K- m+ W3 V* \) R1 H0 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; j, E4 S" A9 M% @2 e8 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" t2 x& d1 b! Y; r: PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& ]$ m( D) `" `- g- c- `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 I8 i3 m( f0 {7 T' g& @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* t* ?+ ], X$ i  o, O' y1 s) w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 ]( s: i- |+ u8 k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# }* ^3 p# Y  p4 \+ B+ |6 O: i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& k$ U5 G% h$ x" ~* ^$ h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# r6 ?8 P0 Q, A7 {2 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 d4 M' }/ t7 q# J3 Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ x0 j# h% {& U) m) ~/ C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 c& Q$ c7 a3 V, x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& W# ^# W$ K* G2 V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! L9 z3 w  ]! K5 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* X- [/ h  ?( v7 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! t1 L9 d. K' k8 u- z% k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 k( N+ B3 o1 g( `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# f' }$ p$ S+ F1 p$ L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 {: p* h' X$ `* [* G: L0 c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: v7 ?) e" Y3 _1 r6 ^, m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: F4 J$ C- f% f$ a5 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 R5 f2 W  [/ b2 ?; K# S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' o* j- H' P! R0 X( c) }8 v+ y0 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* X2 q& L  ^# R# g7 I/ D<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 ?$ I: E, U3 U. Z" L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. c4 J1 ^" k: O6 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  O! x$ p1 ^; o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# k$ V7 ]; O7 \' r* R5 H$ G  J, ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ {+ P) t" L2 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 f4 s: C& s# g' ?0 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 |3 b. H. Z# R我请你剖开它

; U  h9 G! Q$ y' N3 i5 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" P' y1 R) W- ~# r$ s; P) A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>