【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 a, B3 ^4 Z* Z$ ~# k歌词我附在后面。
& [# B( E9 u+ @# Z. N) ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; g2 u9 N) H' Z7 y8 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: @& b4 u" D. p, U  L% B. YWith the moon kissing it every night
& e9 h6 l+ `+ Z2 a, T( p3 zSeeing the sky content with its love
7 A( g, V+ d8 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) J% C; Y* l" X$ o& O: JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& I1 K3 o2 o0 x- d+ O; PEvery other word you utter is love
& [/ w: h/ B) ^+ |- K1 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 j! m9 _1 C4 E5 qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 S( a6 V0 Z. P8 X! t% cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 f  y' k4 |3 r9 c3 j6 n* _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( \, s- L$ ~2 T8 r; tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* M3 n  t8 q, n" ?: p% C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 p; U. F) \* b  w2 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* S& b: C6 U+ Q( S+ K9 r& j# J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 d# A/ w, S$ k: u. p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ e1 A# J( M9 F5 N3 ~6 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ b8 B1 y6 h) o2 ?1 S3 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 b/ h" a0 D2 n1 E9 b1 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 j. f  f6 U; t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: H; \% }$ m  b' ^0 L. u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 y2 _0 r) y7 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: m- T2 x( [9 D- P- a$ C$ t: S8 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, w* J! @+ t  b% O3 k  b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 r) N- Y+ _4 u, m1 b8 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 T+ Q3 F0 }7 \( G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 w. j2 Q% D  F4 r, U" Y( T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" i8 s0 z9 S  V  ~; U( Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 n9 r. k  z; `1 s- l/ W* T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ h& Q! D" w2 H2 r0 s9 @) g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- W( @" ^: K, \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) n1 q( k4 l9 x! f+ @3 V! T* C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ z, T2 I+ \" [2 A% e* Z7 C1 F) @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 h" I* m0 f. ~+ P3 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 k$ o) z; R) J4 t' ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& j4 B0 f0 t7 c, g' Y( C4 v& Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 y$ S- w; P, \: k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! h& f2 _: S& _( j' }$ _5 Z6 m5 j我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  x* C" f2 V+ t4 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>