【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: w9 o" [0 ?- h1 J0 k" P& lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 z, ?+ t- w: `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, L  ]* U- T# v0 sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' B  ^/ z5 n6 s! L1 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 k: U, u$ M1 F0 \" |( YI want so much to see inside your heart
: s* ?! W0 C2 k( iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 b7 o7 D) H3 p: s# dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# c$ @- T* [4 }! O% [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 [3 R# a) d8 c. v! T2 X" j. d5 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 y% L* {0 @2 l, F! w# Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& J1 G3 Q/ H# U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) m( Q$ U/ q! w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; L4 ~4 D2 G  _. Z9 ?; v3 r2 d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 J( X" X6 M$ A( }7 w7 E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 m0 m  i1 H' w' ?% _# ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  m; G+ _1 \. A' z0 d0 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 p8 F) C3 _" L3 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& {0 M; |% O1 e8 e8 ]8 [# V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  O4 J" F8 e) x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- l. A. k) x. a2 j; ?& ?<P>你无需担心</P>
$ l: A7 M' t* i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. c" T4 ]" d: K9 y& i, L3 R5 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. t! D4 i$ r5 d( w8 E$ @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, }) }" j0 J! x( a& |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ t+ f/ Y$ t. \' |$ P' X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- q( J- Y& D; \( x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% @% h, [  Q( t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 ~8 U, ]; F/ j$ m* S. S, B0 t5 J, \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 o4 P+ b4 f. W  P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& }, L0 }& S# U! {8 Y  r7 ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% y3 F+ n# u! K  O+ k- q; m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 d' J" v1 v& r# B! l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* `! s7 y/ w8 `8 a& D! K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: M1 l2 r# ]/ \! N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 y* Y( {" P3 _; n9 }1 k$ o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ S( X- c$ X* P3 A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" M9 ]4 A6 I8 a0 c% h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& z' D+ `7 D% n. n- _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 G( D" }5 X, S6 y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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5 [. E- E5 F/ h0 s7 B" | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( R9 L% `0 ?4 y6 r  F2 l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>