【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 u) Z* s0 D8 r/ J0 cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  v3 ~6 F8 R* m( P9 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  [& A5 b  U( I8 DSeeing the sky content with its love
3 q! i" i' i5 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, C% _& Y' N* V1 D/ E# ]" }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 H2 d: c. Q+ y) K- nEvery other word you utter is love
3 x5 n" X- k. @2 U  s  c' A' jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" `  n1 I* p% B# \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 z  I, S7 p4 _* }9 i4 n% h* ]; I4 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# J- H6 e! L, O) }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 L1 T" E, l) a: O0 O/ W0 {. ?I’m still filled with fear
7 @" v" O3 E7 Q2 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 J$ Y8 f+ R# H& [7 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 q* G0 f5 {% DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 o2 `+ j2 L% z2 I9 o7 {! vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ F- h) @* z; r4 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ q$ I+ a! j7 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% }2 A2 x" m8 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; e+ b$ M' y1 P& z2 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% b& N' u* ^  {4 S7 D$ q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 k" U; ?  I# R8 d" E3 @$ a4 u1 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- [: c$ `- x& c% ]! f& A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' G9 z1 g1 _; c* r  {! R9 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 D( M; n9 D8 ]3 J, L3 V2 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ |% }* u4 @5 D( j8 H/ w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 e) O- l6 f3 U( a7 C" ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' M9 I$ N' |: {& g; K5 _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ L5 b3 B8 j1 e# N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 J; q1 Z7 O5 L& y8 S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 o4 n+ K' v) e3 z; c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ [1 r; h0 |) {& z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ o7 l: y0 E. y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 S3 L+ A6 \4 K9 N# K$ i3 k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& T* ]2 C2 ~  A8 J" Q& c. K/ ]  X3 }( v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ }6 j. k; X1 y4 I1 B/ K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 g1 l7 b1 Z' l1 U& Z5 c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- F( V2 l8 s) ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
* g. {# b0 P3 m" g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( a8 O/ i9 o" D8 y- T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  B1 Y- [  g. |* [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: F) T9 Q3 G/ M6 t: J, U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 k: L( U8 d  m9 _: {8 v: g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 j1 k! z0 L  N0 V! Y! W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 b3 T+ R! V7 \/ f- A2 c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>