【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 n; A# f. L/ f; [5 K$ GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ P: j1 w6 s. Q" {( I  h" `+ h: EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 h* Q% i# `- Y( [- JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ B( M$ W& M7 k: a' y6 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 l6 P" C4 Q9 h+ V7 y- n  }+ X* y4 C6 DSeeing the sky content with its love
: C5 I: }8 i: W/ [. z$ x$ Q% Q. IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; ^* u) N$ Q  B; k+ H* mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ ]8 a: o# c- P% ]! OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 |, f2 J3 v, `& l6 z  I7 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  f2 z9 i, n! H4 p$ P; XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) a5 j7 Z" y# d; I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 f+ k, {: D  d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& H% i+ h' z3 o$ F2 w$ i9 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, c7 d$ p5 h6 g$ N, `* L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& l' D! m6 K0 C( w4 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 _* Y, o/ W7 s( D9 z$ q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* n* r* b. |5 n9 H$ E4 K: T: h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( c1 _4 d8 B' W9 {- T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* x4 L+ J  `4 A# D. R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! f; ~& s( A3 w4 }1 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 c8 N( p; O' b! T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ u, M. c0 ?; B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: W) |% P' E; c# v8 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ n0 U1 m- V( u" R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 Q! k4 l  L5 j- O1 Q1 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 G% @# X  f+ U5 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 X, |! \# D8 ~' B1 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- @7 p5 a+ {2 ]  a0 Y) s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 B( `' C+ W) j: B3 j0 e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ j4 B9 w- p$ R# E* n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: J; P3 V' A0 e! S4 B# U  K6 A1 z  n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 T/ G7 X& x7 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
" @0 v5 I/ u1 N3 A+ k( ^& _$ v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. T6 P0 L: v+ a0 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 O* }1 J" L5 ^5 i% I3 r. s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 {/ M% r. h+ E0 @# Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 {) _; {# }: a6 C8 }9 c* |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, D" h8 \6 d# p4 ]  j, G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
+ d) t/ V8 T0 j: S4 Y  v. e
, F' }, {! e! W) B我请你剖开它

& G! m/ L9 H1 @. p  h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>