【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 W* c0 j2 n7 ]2 m( Y2 c9 F! ~# HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 a# B& W% f8 \# b" u, R2 E# `Making the sky glitter like gold,
. Y) T3 `; K+ K! AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 O2 x5 s% O  C& sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  A! D' h) Z) Z5 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
  p, S- ~- D+ U. VWith the moon kissing it every night
% F# M2 B* j( R& gSeeing the sky content with its love
! \3 J# i2 S2 e, J: t( yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 \3 ]' ?4 u( w' g! R6 P1 Q- aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) _: K) W, x  ], K& zI really want to know just how much you love me
  v3 ~4 i3 _) M: ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 U5 v# _7 w) D3 z* C# PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ Q5 p! i) K. L  n  H9 V1 n2 PI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" `' q+ l. H% Z3 w) pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- o6 ^8 b6 ^: c0 d& _I regret not dying
4 S- g- i8 e7 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' k0 c. }2 ^7 J4 zWith such a tongue as yours,
% l, K& u! J6 F' B" \( b$ HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ F0 a1 x% M; T/ G2 Y5 U) f  ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: I+ y, K0 H* V4 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 p4 i& u4 s2 d$ g- x6 G* \) z, V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- `' T9 y3 E: D& O6 q8 t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 b! D: p. z; y' f3 k' d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 J1 Q8 w4 p- w0 f# _- H) t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' T4 e. n+ k2 n2 c. G2 _. a% G% Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. n$ M9 [  j, y. @) K: E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" V2 Q( p. p+ r# H" T7 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- J* b5 w$ i2 x" V: ~$ i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 Q- {( ]2 |. R* J. K; Z9 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 u: Z7 \+ a- n0 G/ d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: {2 V8 u7 M5 p& L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 M* Z1 n( d( {# A0 {6 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, _- ^3 @; {1 |# {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 I4 K& Y4 W" d9 b) J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% ]- m$ ]) R! l) ~! ~3 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. S. q; W" l9 P, z5 }. h+ e  M5 }/ M4 T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, ?% a8 `" z. }3 U! G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# q$ |: D( j. N. v4 l: v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: m# K1 A( \7 H5 r, t. p' w& y5 e. W, J<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# E# S1 o# L7 k8 m+ v/ v, Z. \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 J+ g: L8 S- p. n& r* ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. x! u* {+ d% a1 ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# p& W2 a  r! U7 y/ k! Q- {7 b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% Y' \$ `& _7 H+ G0 L7 G$ Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 K" x+ q/ N- c我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>