【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 x! X, _$ P4 a2 @" F8 m, w8 l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 {+ [- a& k' x  y1 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# e: n8 T0 l9 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* C8 R3 U  J! S- }Seeing the sky content with its love
  X' D$ d& d% i* e. CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ y1 N) I3 Z! r5 O* s$ PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: \; A& _4 U  y2 o% j/ H1 XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ d6 |: n5 z: w# B% T' c+ UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% [2 e) @9 b/ }/ C7 E8 {( \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! `' f0 j. n5 }# b" x3 P# P' K2 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 w+ P9 J1 t( o9 ^2 YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. T1 s% }0 ~" |# }1 M; MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 ]% ]. G) y$ J5 b1 Q) tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. c1 `9 w$ S9 m) u. sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 }  a1 f7 t  I) J" H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# K; h  Q1 y4 F& _+ w9 a7 h& H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  s/ _, ^1 F6 s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. E( ?( O1 l; R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) J8 A$ d; }$ l- l" V# |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& W- N% o0 l- E0 u8 P* [0 z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 T0 ^. @8 J: D; ^4 d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 e" p6 ]% z7 K7 v# c. n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 D4 q! J$ u/ @; q! o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 a% g$ E% V. y, E. v5 G- q& f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) {* k; u- v1 {! I3 M7 H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* O% j; Q1 T1 u5 c; o2 @: A; }$ e4 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ K& S& J7 `$ `7 D) C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 V) j9 ~/ R  c" P% U, j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 m* @/ d5 g: J' g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 {6 |7 A  r2 ^* j6 o6 n) }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: P, u. w9 {6 @9 m# K& h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: u% B9 l+ b' e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* j( S# `7 G6 L7 ~' e/ W9 ]1 a+ m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 ]& Z' L" ~2 R) x. t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 G4 P$ |3 n/ x; d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* i+ p% a* z1 t% o/ T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  u0 L8 [- t# [( X5 v0 ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 J' _' V4 W- A' Z+ v9 F. N- {1 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' i( N' Z2 v; a9 x5 Y% v, [. ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" h. T" g, ~9 ~/ z& ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ j! y1 N: B; J1 H9 ^" O/ ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* f! L6 S; W+ J( x4 |8 g7 o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, b/ i2 F' U8 |$ z* N* E) P) O我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>