【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# w  ^7 {2 ~$ R* UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! X# e* e9 h6 p) z, K2 o) V1 OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; V6 B  ?5 o3 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 k- M( |0 q# @3 t7 EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( Z8 D, V0 |8 a' o" p, kEvery other word you utter is love
$ M2 D+ F' t8 H  y0 f: SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ i  N' m( y/ x1 j: ~( {) jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" r" @$ s2 S" ?* K( S: y/ s' L- h- ]I’m still filled with fear
, J3 i- ^8 @5 ?2 w# B- n2 n3 [  eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ _3 g: Z3 J2 a1 y" d: MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( ?# O) B) {% E4 j& [+ N' yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 d  z0 g( Q! E/ w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- ]5 U2 Y/ V3 ?& j$ E7 k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% a* s  _2 f2 W( c' h; I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 C& C4 {" ^1 M! P3 ~1 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' P8 }& [( c) B- R2 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 ~6 P5 |/ q) Y, K5 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 g/ t9 V4 X* ~) l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 {% Z* M% h8 R. z- O9 w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% l- S" C. i5 ~- }; @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% b8 ~& w' w" t- o5 J3 v8 ]0 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 c8 D1 [/ j) `- ?1 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ y% V& n- _  d! k/ G! ]; ?, w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 k7 n' P" D' j  }1 u: p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) Q- X% s5 p3 j. E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' g  w. h5 \, U8 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 e; q4 e9 x1 R5 e) x: ^# [1 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) B/ [8 D1 r" }# W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 W: }  `1 j5 o# B( @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" T8 I8 a4 A, ^# i% U' a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  R9 A4 x" L. G9 ~. [' N. X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% g+ W. u. }+ b* o3 N( G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 K. K7 r" n7 Q" C- m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. k: Z; B/ a" f( j- h$ c4 K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 v: x: D; S" M6 T+ M/ q* L; z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& g' ?3 M: Y/ ^; y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% n8 v3 ?/ C  L1 a* u/ G' D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& ^( m7 ]8 }+ {& B2 k: w% R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( b7 L  P6 a' ?6 |9 n7 P# D. D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. K$ O  \, P2 y" ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( @1 w, ]5 P  y8 E6 X. `& Q2 l# [: `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. d# k2 _" ^" y, }) I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; A9 L  z. k& I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 O2 [/ ^3 b- G2 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>