【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 j6 _* m- H- b7 ^1 vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" |1 x4 P# s( H' g) c& g3 }% I# {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ p! u) W* D2 V! m6 j% p7 ]; \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 L6 n# X2 }. E% A0 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 J: n! n# M5 fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; x8 v" y' t/ k7 q% f9 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 g( ]/ Q8 g5 t8 R( n+ cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, M; Q0 o8 s$ gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ T% q) [. O. ^0 v5 O* C3 cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 c1 e0 u. D" _) D4 u) e& X* }1 D( vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 i* R" X+ }, w4 v# T& M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- v( j. o; K& M7 T" _7 R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! N4 @! E: D1 e& ^1 H' X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ x4 J; O9 u4 F, D- l3 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 M5 y- c8 P2 r! B8 C% l- Y& k- C5 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' K" G- G/ o8 y! X" v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! G8 ?) B( F  {1 G/ X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! r8 g8 G1 G& p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: x/ u0 T9 B$ D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, y# W' h: R7 o6 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; r# z! Q5 V$ ~  Y  g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: }3 ?$ p" k% j' A7 R: i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& w4 l/ X" A" T* z" `) U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 T) W* h$ Z' D5 m& g) O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 U' k3 R  R1 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 V/ w, s: R% h" H6 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; z; b# c" r% R5 {/ L% d9 v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" L  N+ h) r! D# [7 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- j) W! y/ ^$ p+ j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: k  G+ `, C" }0 w3 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# s3 A) m7 r. q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 s3 k  V/ w* H8 T3 m+ \: p. {6 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 |2 R7 O4 N5 m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ s# ~6 o6 M, s) ^1 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* u" a& a2 A4 T  @8 R  V; d6 F, f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ R$ [( N3 Z2 k0 z7 Q  g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ ]9 x5 B. }) U6 t) j9 [& B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; Y4 S9 K8 d& u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! ^( t& n* C# z' l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( K& k# o1 @  A1 h2 e% H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 @8 h4 G$ w6 d9 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ Q6 J9 a' `; U3 x) U2 H; X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: R( p6 q, V& x2 m( L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 G1 G# U) k. a+ I; U# p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! ?* `0 r8 d# A# ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: _4 r0 r( G( [# U7 a+ x3 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  t; X2 D6 i+ T8 E我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>