【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ T3 S1 \7 m- r2 A- N3 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- G: H+ B2 h3 \( `+ e7 |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' T: Q3 q, Y+ c. TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  d+ L8 i, j2 H, U0 R* @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) V. @1 n; D2 C+ cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& e$ C8 V5 z! V# H2 m  w" VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  i9 R7 U4 ]9 ~) LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* w( [) X" ~5 JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- T6 t3 c: }% N+ x# G0 P6 S+ DI regret not dying
( R: l4 n% O. {# e" JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 N% |0 F( W4 w5 H4 sWith such a tongue as yours,
7 A% r& ^+ M/ Q4 J/ S! D! pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) u( f! d+ j! P, o; R7 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' H+ D* z1 F3 F# n" c5 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) ]; o# T3 Z) H1 S7 |3 a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! O" k; K0 Z: B0 P' P* A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 S; T: D) {/ K/ o& M+ ^+ V" o+ q/ I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- D6 L% C2 Y& y% `+ p5 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. R3 O! S- n! ~( n* Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 o  J8 j. w6 I! D9 b6 \. m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ q  p6 u# g3 R! v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# _. b4 v" c% q7 O3 u; C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ D, a  M$ ^' F! m% C+ \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 k' ~2 S" d$ n6 d" V' i! C# X/ i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! K2 s- n% D( e- }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ L- Y* Q' r1 E) o' |: B6 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 ^% d) Z6 X& J- [# K0 j3 e0 L* `2 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 D% w7 F- _; G2 w* {3 H8 _, n1 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# U% J( |7 R. {+ o  f9 D  S: P/ @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ B. \) u+ g6 b0 N" J9 I5 ^# s- \! d$ |4 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) t& x5 b( h( ~' t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 _! A. c/ A  X% v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 b$ s4 P: F& c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 B) d( \# x) ?$ w0 Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' y- w' D0 c# @) r( [( Z1 T  W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 J0 R' \0 J1 i7 W* y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' j% Y( t2 Y4 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 R; R% C0 U3 a% P" Z8 o+ u0 Z  J8 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 W9 c# }& L/ }( w  e2 R* `% j6 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! J$ [* x7 H$ D( R* ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- A6 [( \6 a; c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; K% [, G( Q8 z4 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 {- N7 Y: N! ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 M- Q. i# e- v/ k- }) M0 k$ E" C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>