【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" e. n* B) n8 o" pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* v* y7 w& H. D6 L9 b( gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# j* A$ X- V' {! R, q& x" F$ @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. _! W: e) N. P* |  z: O) oI really want to know just how much you love me
% m. R2 P4 B" _4 H! [; OI love you I love you with all my heart
' G. h& P4 f+ {  m' ^4 \+ uNothing can compare to my love
  t. ~- w$ _! V5 c' A  rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 O/ @6 r% G' `: v  sI want so much to see inside your heart
1 s' J5 o+ L0 I; |, {1 JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 T  H  n+ b- L- \, IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! j5 f8 _( F, m4 R$ n; h4 _+ ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- h: h6 g  V' ^. g) i- z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ w5 v2 o8 }# D/ T- w# i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, k# s1 o  c3 V, O' A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: x- Q8 r2 |  }3 V- A. |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. t* f% ~+ ?/ I- E1 r) b& z: P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' R# t1 o: M; j: w2 R; H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 q1 B5 Y  Z! a  e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: @; ~0 W) T+ A7 F: t' r. M* n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 {" f& G" P1 `$ e; Y& n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" d) m, ]2 _3 V6 d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 M; s- U( s( H( x- T5 F4 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 h6 n/ _3 R. H/ N$ S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( h, {" X, {4 T' E5 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" t: W( L/ D& [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ x: a: V3 _' q, Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 Q- j2 Q1 j( q' u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 C! `0 p) e& t3 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( t" f, C1 m: b! D( e: ]  i5 Q, |0 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, C% f  R% ~# p7 y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' W" u6 _1 w1 P" r* P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: }8 K2 I2 y; b+ [+ H: r; i/ a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ j# P! l/ ?# f2 T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 o1 P8 i- R& S( D4 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

8 I1 b5 J8 b- W2 k/ J( b" b, Y' _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>