【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* G1 u2 j: ]' S歌词我附在后面。
! y. x% R% ^; u! r( P) z: v8 ?7 M; ?: LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. }* ~) ~& L% q9 b5 x. w; q# w/ R2 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ z2 ?& s/ }. J, G  s4 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 o4 A& G3 q( E9 |2 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& L# E# a7 G& U  i8 L4 sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  D) [3 x: }9 {9 Y& J4 C0 ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 |7 r0 u, T9 B4 V9 aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! _* f6 l+ u: y& @* t' {4 dEvery other word you utter is love
0 ~9 V3 G4 T! H: U2 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# @. o2 M4 {( P" \5 CNothing can compare to my love
# j/ a0 _; m; v$ T% \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; f7 d* q  B9 c0 q. {4 e$ CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ @& G4 m& U: W" r8 L6 |) PI’m still filled with fear
' O! ^: m. h6 V) r0 q) UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' |+ d9 X2 r  z; T  xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 c! d7 M/ `$ JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) l  Y! {9 n8 W3 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 N' ]+ P& H' w2 O+ [% V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! j; p8 F6 K3 m) N; T2 U3 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# h) Q7 J5 h+ |2 \; U0 m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% n' o3 @" ~0 A2 ]! Y3 R1 A( V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. N4 E$ r  Y( A( ~! |0 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 Z, t, i5 S- p, s+ M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. E( W3 o" b' Q9 ^' p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& Z/ j9 S0 B# ~2 {0 r  W2 W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, a# ?% w( T# l5 e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# Q" [! X( d8 s; [: {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 I/ J; i2 `9 G! X( n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# v9 e8 |/ x: V% s/ O' c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 t6 I, P" O* N+ X+ Q1 o7 t; Y' K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 e+ U2 z9 ~4 I( d# T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& P, c+ W) g0 y& y; b2 p$ ~) Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( k  K- A1 ~8 q/ v! C7 B; ?6 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' X0 L8 _. r9 L1 F6 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" B$ U* F- O/ o+ q2 `" Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 t$ e& H: }' g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# s8 i5 p% S% z, J% W8 D* Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ O6 S6 B; m/ q5 a" _- k7 [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, W+ T' t# x' b; |* r$ n1 {2 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  c6 k- k* Z6 ^, J0 K  t# l' @4 x  }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 v4 q0 O2 F+ C# b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; ]  o' B1 I) m( @' K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>