【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& u) c. B3 r* u1 X7 `) {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 m) s9 G, m- U0 \& F% a+ gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 w8 o2 r  b1 G- ?0 [4 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 Y% v' u3 h) H9 d1 ]Seeing the sky content with its love
' z) E- }! p# o" I6 _8 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 ]2 l# y# b1 K+ `9 q, e# yYou needn’t fear anything
) d- t; f7 u" ?4 o- h# i, {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- X0 O# e; p8 w4 [Every other word you utter is love
0 g5 y; [! H7 @+ V) bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 u& T1 Q( g7 c5 E5 A) }5 C% wNothing can compare to my love
. c( F( x6 P0 ?$ qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 }! o/ e& ]8 eI want so much to see inside your heart
0 h0 _" M8 n- k9 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 Z* G# F) e4 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ x9 M; x! u* O, `2 xI regret not dying
: W$ G6 A5 v) m6 C5 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. _: Y+ Y5 }1 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  x: ?( j: c2 K& L2 j. RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 h( \. O5 @- M/ l, Z" N) H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) q! q& }: }( }/ ~2 C' [8 W/ R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ b. f- j/ M: p' z' H- W$ Q1 D; s# j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! V$ u0 w6 {4 x; N3 ~3 ~) B- V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 n& W; d9 c4 \2 M6 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  T' I- x% N. Z+ D! G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 f8 {" I! g# l" _8 D- @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 |  E! W3 b' h7 @! Y( r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ Q- r' W" U3 }. {8 T! v: ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 J/ u6 x! i! p( @3 L( L4 B/ [" u9 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 ~: T4 L7 S+ F; G' a) X& z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  w9 P% f( `3 L9 b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' Q$ {( I5 L; @$ Y" o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( E0 _2 V. o' g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- V0 v7 W7 E0 r1 z. R) D' ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' [* u. S, N9 p' ?* ~: D9 Q) q9 [/ ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& h5 Z  S5 P; H0 S- }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ A  f6 ]: p* Z! e) l! W7 ]6 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( b6 P# ?/ W9 i* Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 r6 w6 ~$ H+ s7 ~8 a9 p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. F+ \" [" E; u5 e4 q8 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. D, }$ Z3 J' G9 d+ }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  b( x- Z* E: F% N8 |; \我请你剖开它
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8 @) M+ R5 z3 ~8 Q; @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ B$ ]4 ~+ t$ F2 ]: j, T' C+ X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>