【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) b8 h  Y: K& M, O8 C8 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 \0 L% P( ~1 V. d2 w; t$ SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& Q% S- Z7 f9 j, a4 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 G/ M9 R# ]* U9 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% Q5 H4 v, s  K6 D+ z! z! uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ E, L+ v9 z* Q$ NEvery other word you utter is love
6 D& n, f( _6 T5 u" K; OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& Z- N7 o" |+ H, ]3 _9 vNothing can compare to my love
/ ^7 e. U) M7 d& aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ \) l3 @! ~6 x8 h, k, r% G* K$ m- A9 wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! n6 i) ?$ M4 t. L; [' T! p% H# ^) HI’m still filled with fear
5 f: A+ V2 e. ~4 g; m. Q# g2 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" w, a* ]) F: r3 m9 k5 nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 d5 k. I: O$ f5 M0 q* [2 w; ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# b5 n8 ]9 n3 d; y' N  E) ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- e8 P  F) v) m$ m& M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 D( Q/ b7 l% d2 T+ Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 O* b- ~6 X+ w, `- Y" `$ _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. O& |: Y8 e: L) T7 X* F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ n3 a2 ]1 ?: k$ n: O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 z5 R9 `7 B; T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 v4 y/ A5 n% o# M- g+ S6 @6 D4 b5 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# w, z* ?6 V5 W/ b<P>你无需担心</P>
2 J- \+ \5 V! p4 m6 s# h. k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# X' E9 s6 ?1 o% j% `0 Z7 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" N/ N2 q, @' A# A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 f6 Y0 ^5 ?3 i: x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" F* U. M. r# D' @+ {9 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 ~- I) n6 O* j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 o& F9 K  {7 v8 |" F+ y% e9 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' W% y# h( F' U5 G* G; @" [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& L& ]5 m4 T( K/ ^/ s: A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 ?0 L; z' z/ T# }& p# r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( S( F. W' Q+ r( n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- \, d- k9 g) I( d5 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' b5 }# \2 ^* O; _- b$ R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, P* E: L; v' c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  Y  u* i+ C# s3 U% L" ?- f4 W; q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 V% ]( k5 ]2 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; E. x, w. X2 p5 }* L* G0 I8 K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 e7 |8 l, w! q, z9 S/ I0 a' b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( U, U6 G& G. z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& @! d3 c  ~' S/ [% f我请你剖开它
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8 j: U  g9 n% Q$ b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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