【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 Y/ u7 v5 T/ ]8 W* S0 l' wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% _! g, V- j  ~( S5 s; k" ?The sky is happy down to its soul
8 `/ F  F; d; ?/ nWith the moon kissing it every night
! m9 A& T; a) G8 w' RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 `4 n" q8 Y: O( k% s$ U1 S, A3 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 r% i& @& ?: L" m3 \Every other word you utter is love
: C/ x8 _8 [8 _3 aI really want to know just how much you love me
7 E9 }1 ?( V- F& @" II love you I love you with all my heart
2 c0 ?2 v) b3 K% j9 zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) @/ ?& A. ]4 g& V' l9 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 o+ K* z  u# F, l/ AI regret not dying
2 P; K* W! j' ^+ S* ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# _" k% \% @  x& Q& i( A. IWith such a tongue as yours,
2 w3 v2 R  C2 ?' q, `) f; `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( G- h  j, P4 V. G  g, a; B; h3 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* ^6 i5 X0 a0 D! {2 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 R0 o6 ~! A8 l  j6 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- P! G6 v! q' k+ b( E4 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 w7 M4 Z9 s& J/ R3 u# Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; h4 c' q& o. Z5 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ w( a( m* o* ]: r( T- i$ l3 J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# j" P7 B1 x: L. y7 q$ \5 r" a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 x8 _! K' F3 I, ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 c8 Y; R; _! J# \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ C% G! D. h# r/ c- X( L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 e# p7 q4 U9 [) q$ D# B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! A: H2 r- s+ c8 B% r9 n& F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! t4 i' R: {& F0 P+ \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 s6 M3 p- j& ]7 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 b: l- [# ]; H2 n$ b7 H( F+ C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  s0 f1 O$ x# Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; W  i% M+ _# {8 ?% Q/ j" m  O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. g, D6 m; O3 r% U* K+ c8 M( O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% M  R' c% l# I4 q7 [* l6 v3 f) p+ ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) m/ [% V1 ?' s, F9 x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- R) H& _6 M6 y$ ]% a3 G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 _6 \& d% _: ^: H9 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  L! Y% f  g9 d0 u* c' o" }0 S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ x0 k, T) s7 [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( F  T# b2 g0 j3 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% }. O2 n- j+ s- m" o, R3 z- }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. ^7 J3 b, p! h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 h& F8 Y+ R' ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( h! a# o# v) z, ?% z: c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 k8 x/ c/ l  r/ X3 _" V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' i! N% I/ m4 {3 \8 `: P' L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 C- J# A+ |2 J( Q4 I+ u* M/ [$ N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  i: \1 S3 g1 {% \3 `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
( U! Z. F' M# ~' f
我请你剖开它
  u7 Q% n" i" m2 c$ p0 N
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>