【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% a# `. ^  Z9 i/ W, Y. cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 c% w4 d" e3 \- e3 _: [. SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' r8 T0 x9 w; R4 }' {- rSeeing the sky content with its love
3 q7 q6 N$ \. |: qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# }3 L7 K/ C' S- g) T4 W* I; W! aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) ]" h. t( m+ Z* Y' lEvery other word you utter is love
. U1 s! D) a" A! g! ]! E, ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. F" A$ q6 m; C  V* B% c4 E- ?9 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 U$ f* m, w" a" iI regret not dying
0 p7 T# U1 _; ]5 BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( @5 z) Z# L0 [  q9 ^- }% ]! PWith such a tongue as yours,
* P8 G8 g9 i  P* WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' T$ e% V& o4 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ x( S+ T7 x* @! _* f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* \5 \9 R5 j8 b& f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 G3 _$ N% r( A- Y  G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) O# @! t9 m  U: d$ n! v. j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& g% X& H- L" v" f$ G. b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 L6 W( A1 _. L  w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- ~; y$ x  _  N6 K8 r; F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 ]) n/ f+ Z, @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 B3 [, U1 G& w<P>你无需担心</P>
$ ?# `6 n" y/ r' |4 ~! e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 A6 Z, ?2 e- G. q3 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; K+ r- _' q+ {. G/ f3 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- }- y0 u: W/ k2 I, `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 B  C% J2 g& E8 Y) r+ r  w* Y. g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( `& d+ y4 F( q- a, A7 N0 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; ~$ ]' h$ X& Y6 k, S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. }" {7 r  L4 n0 ]1 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: B' i0 m, R1 N( A5 K. n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- h, F. S$ b+ l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 Q9 b5 h0 b! N$ X3 M% X8 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
. T- U! \) N+ Y& T. u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 F# L7 k5 O% d: X5 }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 a' G' S! Y+ q2 h) G, I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 P+ Q( E2 W+ E4 d, G  i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 X* `+ y* }5 z8 @: \( c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 e) E$ t' U) |. L" [) ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& v! t9 @0 g  e0 _. |- z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>