【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ ?9 d* ~$ G, ~6 E6 s$ sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 n2 A! w7 X! L+ a2 k2 T0 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
& @# D/ M4 _) Q6 v! AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- ]; Z" q8 D; S4 d- ~* yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 Y0 p5 L) j/ O6 i2 A6 ~, ISeeing the sky content with its love
5 n, ]2 u  p& e: DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! H& A; S+ |2 S& d2 |You needn’t fear anything
. q: n- a# G( H* m# b$ t$ y2 ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ s; S( s/ j0 X) I* {' F6 b: R' U9 vEvery other word you utter is love
6 c2 Q' H' b# \! v, y: B% WI really want to know just how much you love me
* m+ ~! X9 n% P( D" P9 B  U' cI love you I love you with all my heart
" N$ U3 y3 h3 d# E$ F, J9 tNothing can compare to my love
$ p2 u; _8 y8 H) x- QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 I- B, A  a8 P# t0 j/ A8 Z' V; UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 P8 W9 v) y  U  f% r) S4 g! h8 {3 u$ a1 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 I% G+ c; c" Q0 O: L! jWith such a tongue as yours,
$ k: q/ f8 k. B6 B9 q& J* l9 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 D& e; `% e! T6 G" sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" F$ i  k. Z( pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
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<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 O9 T  ?, r2 h+ |( t6 Y/ Q3 W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# R( g+ ]4 w7 g8 J- U) O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# ^; c& n7 \0 S' ]3 `( i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) N! u$ h1 X  X  l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( j) a) R+ t* S& v3 `% w6 p0 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 N% i' p) F4 n, O, y7 b$ }1 s. Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 U; s, c; {' v6 z3 f, b* D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  `2 d. k5 S* Y% D& M- F% `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* S% H$ t6 k* p  n) [( Q( U' s( P  z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) @; N% C. D+ ]6 W+ N+ P; r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 n' x6 `2 H3 P& i4 r5 B  E- |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 O" A2 i% S' {& r: ^2 O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 ]3 }* D  E7 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 {9 I* z5 z" v* m: @  f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ v3 l, l) v2 K* b4 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ y' F, @, |, G) T+ F- \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ v% e" U5 D! I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, W. V' [# Y; T) R9 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; [& L: {: H! c9 r. }' i2 B4 f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 F- h8 S+ P0 Z+ {0 J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ b0 M9 J$ e* d; v0 r* S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! x( S4 p. |& ^* M+ S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& z9 [$ a# m- A) i( M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" w6 X  H' z5 Y2 L6 [8 k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; k# O6 ?+ _& y& k* m0 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 Y+ f  W' A) k$ u  y( ]+ {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. n4 a- ^/ u0 C3 Z% f/ {9 I4 j! Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 O6 [3 X" |# ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ w! Q4 S* I5 d4 k) h4 ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>