【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 u+ u$ E$ }( |; q3 @5 J$ f2 m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& d7 v) o7 H7 V( L& V1 u8 ^1 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( [8 n5 Z! l9 r. C3 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( v/ w* e4 {  E) M" _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  H1 ]: ~' }$ L2 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 i9 h2 r- Z( T! {/ y; ]8 WYou needn’t fear anything
# K3 b9 u7 B" t( W3 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! C6 ?. z9 Y" \; SNothing can compare to my love
* \7 L6 f- t. \6 K/ pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ D- f) e5 V# g5 oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- a) ~9 A3 S+ q4 T% cI want so much to see inside your heart
# S6 K4 S- ?& \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ p7 R% ]2 f8 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- o4 o* K8 H" Q; O4 _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& }4 _6 J% t1 F( z+ S2 S: P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  w2 Y0 a- b. J" s6 [7 o* c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: x$ e  z" d$ ?+ g6 h. r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  d, @9 g6 [3 s: t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 Z8 L9 m3 _+ t2 C' |" ~1 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% _" A4 k- l1 P+ z1 v. s. A5 h) V8 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 a, \6 X% A+ R! \9 T, Q/ f- L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 C* J" F. \: m/ S& ^  x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 R0 L( a3 v: X, h) ~<P>你无需担心</P>
0 P' L4 i( w1 p: Z1 I5 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 b$ \6 e$ _6 C" A4 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 V' e: ^6 ^4 _9 W0 p5 i3 C5 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ F- }2 Y  z% N8 ^$ F8 S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ e; r1 ^. P! F& i9 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; S; ?# V8 s7 |7 Z4 ?% E# l: p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 H: A1 j! a- n+ P5 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 m- I7 k% }& ]- O- A$ I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 O& H9 B5 {; s, }% T$ F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 r& J2 }% F6 `0 p" h/ ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 h4 i4 S; G- s" M9 w& B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% s6 [2 M: f% Q$ U  i6 S0 ~- T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 S  a& Z+ \* E$ V* Z1 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ K" r5 O4 i' T/ P6 Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 c- M6 k8 m4 A7 E6 R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% x7 T% O8 I# ]) m% o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 U$ G$ e" K7 G1 b3 x, K* P( |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

% H0 D3 i% m9 C$ b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 _7 g, t- {. ~3 _/ ^9 n* E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>