【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 e1 [* `8 `8 s: Q  W歌词我附在后面。
. X& R& F; Y3 v% G" L* u& s* }. nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* s, b. i& J% P9 i4 _+ gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ ^2 q+ P% e5 I- w  E' U. @5 t. mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 I- W* E# t* ]0 }) U( S; @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 A: s- u. v2 t+ wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ k" j& Y: L/ O- LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 c2 p: l. \& u1 `( @' qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 R: {- S5 B6 @2 H, v& OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! ^" M( Y' A$ W# m; aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, p3 g6 R. a# l9 h4 V) H# OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! `) N, l, M/ ~* uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! n' }: ~: J% A1 T/ L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* C* j/ x: @6 U9 T/ T( Z+ {  ~0 f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* o' V2 C  b/ B) k5 J; p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* K  D6 W6 h, |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 W" D+ D7 h6 M$ V- z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# `2 H# {7 V. V/ ?. G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: Y( S2 b; D) n5 Q+ g  h- O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ L* a1 W- r9 Y7 e$ o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 ~; j  P4 w# q  T+ Z( v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# @  P5 R! ~* s) C* ]5 H5 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 T, f7 o  {0 M; v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* `% K& I. [- }. y* w: X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. ]6 {' ?. p% w$ b$ N) z& s( a4 y5 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% \2 k) H9 B  o7 P6 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 H/ s% q# E% L, z! `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: \3 ^; t/ g% D6 C" H3 H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& I* @! _! C" d7 v7 I" }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, |! t" l9 N- Q+ |, p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, P( N# l, ?$ T- B% H# t/ G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 w! {$ u/ m; F3 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. @, L  t9 y/ a3 I0 T' b5 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ R/ f1 ~5 G" e5 K3 e5 J  J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 r0 ^2 c1 f$ K8 b, N; L8 j6 c1 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  c* i: \. e$ o0 V0 y7 s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; p% m7 K0 K% m% K1 ^: e. [" X4 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% c6 P- y/ |' b& M( G% W* @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: C0 e+ r$ g  F! p. G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, B; N+ ?* Y2 Q0 e3 w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- a3 N: K7 W0 }2 b  H( ~# r+ R+ I) e我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>