【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. |& c7 Q$ T( p/ c歌词我附在后面。
5 d. K) c# c) f# @6 DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 m0 C4 k+ G0 |! w2 [# _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" u7 ?: Q; @: z; X% d8 g4 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  U* d  r% V# [% rThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 x% n+ W3 t* Y( r( X# m2 TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ d. L2 W2 g( R* yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 U# @4 ~4 E  t3 M" z9 R! P5 ~6 P6 oI love you I love you with all my heart
6 L. ?5 D! C) tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& l7 l; H; u/ {, T( t. ]0 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# j  {2 A4 F; \: h! i' o! E  GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 R- b+ |$ ^' o  b/ t) B. E# BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) O) r7 G2 b2 y3 E7 P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 k6 {4 Q5 c# d% P* B% n* P! X: n1 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* D5 [+ |2 t  t* G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 \% O# d  O7 T  p/ }. X  K/ t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  {+ P! n% J" w6 Q" F, |; h  o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 |1 l: l: D2 t. S9 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ |; Z% j3 B; _. Y# Q* T# M: C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- Y7 {9 f( R: W% R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ r. R  z4 x3 N7 D" z5 Z# Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) S! D( M% |8 w2 k# `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 f5 j3 ~% f) V0 s1 ?- |<P>你无需担心</P>
# L& `( K- {' b" V& l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 s9 k3 B/ L; q: t) {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) b% R  o$ T4 C1 t5 M' y. l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" d6 W5 O; z. w% m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 U8 H7 o$ s* d" J2 `$ {/ H# |9 S% c/ K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 f) D; F: _1 @5 A4 X, t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! m) ?$ w& J# }% D+ Z/ Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. I/ F2 O. S/ N, `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 [  @2 z. [: j4 X( m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# W$ l+ U+ |3 @, f3 i2 }& d* Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( v) o6 v/ R# d0 Q! @! `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! U+ g! y$ {  F" j4 V& ^/ j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ s! L" w8 _1 \* w2 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: I2 u. j# [7 m/ ]) i8 E; A9 Z2 I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" `* j+ ?' Q0 x% k; S# O3 [: Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>