【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 E) C3 J, F, ~6 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ K: S) h- Z+ R) v! GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- p2 c2 r  @; m5 g& KWith the moon kissing it every night
+ w& W3 t+ o$ r0 u, W6 i  ^# fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  }( f4 O  D7 E5 K5 _  }0 d! w, hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 i4 ]' F1 D- {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 b2 }3 l1 b/ j/ ~* a6 ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% U  b# ?: `$ GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ B4 D# x$ v) t2 y9 B* F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" x5 m' n& R8 c# D! V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% P7 U6 [+ h4 J* K/ d/ i3 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% J8 u& W. g4 l1 B& b7 z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 ?! g0 C4 F; M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 w- ~% {& V& p9 _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 J0 j3 w+ `4 g. h7 k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 D8 u9 k% a) t; X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 Z, X% b; R1 }. Q, Y! E) \  T- V2 Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: B& K  \( ~$ Q4 {, ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; U! d" j  ]9 e" D9 g7 L' [' ]' v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; Z/ s4 K  j2 \. v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; A0 w& T+ V$ g* V! w5 f% `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ D  U! |  s: U2 X% |1 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( O: a' U" ^# z9 H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# m% Y) x3 @+ p1 w4 l2 v& U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 r, A- P1 h5 A+ X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ E; w/ n) m; O% v/ s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 s9 ^) r2 n8 J: Z" y! F8 t7 p; A1 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 d* ~. k& B2 B7 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 W/ m0 D% U" }9 Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 ~' {. @7 j8 O, ?2 a0 M" M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 x4 v/ b; c1 H5 d4 O* ^+ L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; ?4 S8 J' f; F. _% ^: c$ o* N) N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( E. C! Y; M, v; a. k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' H! Z3 ?$ j2 E3 _& `% T9 `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>