【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. y* B/ Y$ o3 |3 r. j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. ~$ }; E* m$ Q# |Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ L& A" N/ Q' S+ p" r' B! `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) a1 M! v" r! T- B0 G- JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% }, x8 M: M4 p( @! p5 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
  t: b) `$ ]; YWith the moon kissing it every night
) _& o' m2 A8 T. f3 d/ `3 V! P9 aSeeing the sky content with its love
; _4 Q; E' s- c! g8 N/ {- I1 C: j7 X3 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' a, s) Q8 u. N1 {3 EYou needn’t fear anything
- r  h/ R( Z  u5 n! E5 GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ }( x( x9 w# f9 B2 ZEvery other word you utter is love
$ Z$ }8 k- f* p4 J5 YI really want to know just how much you love me
6 S: z  Y0 ?" sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* j' W$ d/ N7 ?; M$ v) I6 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ S- N6 ~4 d6 h* T7 ~9 RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  i  D( s8 q' p4 Z/ ^) P% ?I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( ~+ a& |# F* a, v# EWith such a tongue as yours,
, S4 \4 S: M  Y* q! b0 j* wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- Z) ^0 J9 V8 \% b% R3 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 j3 l) ~1 O. ?7 k; r& }7 b8 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' {  l* G+ Q- ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 T0 C1 J! [, g# v  o4 g2 B/ `1 k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" G8 P# s# ]$ Z1 e9 {, L7 b, s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 t3 J! T% n* L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- w2 C; W+ e- R* z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) F  g; @/ Z+ m+ V+ Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ g. U( _" I2 w& h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% ~: d( Y7 t' ?) D7 T. M3 x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# b* H0 }+ j& @/ K, o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 p% N; m1 w$ C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& m0 p& Q$ U, t- @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 T: e; I# D) \2 b. ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( \7 r! p% X7 y& E1 E) ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" _2 n2 n7 h0 \% \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' ^4 ?* V1 k. o2 [9 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- ?# |# L2 Y& l& {0 B: @# p' ?* K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 [  V6 p7 _/ |" \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ T+ H: g) X" S5 l3 v) J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- ^1 I! T/ [/ x+ K6 l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ Z( g2 Y. q; X+ a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ s! r  M# G: u2 N) |# B5 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% b7 @0 I" K+ }2 j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. t2 F4 `+ N& L* T5 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# P9 e6 n; c( F+ E" N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 ]& c9 T9 e" ^# ]4 _2 M0 k- v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  Z4 X7 x+ W& ]) L" E. u' i3 \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
4 U6 W! c* U: M* ~
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>