【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 }+ T% N; N: y( s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! m+ i: r& {7 u! ^+ J- \& ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' s! u+ W  u# J, R6 TWith the moon kissing it every night
0 O8 P# I& y: i/ `Seeing the sky content with its love
/ x# ], _2 v9 i/ N8 ?! B0 h1 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 @% ~3 M, m3 v: RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. R! W! n% i5 M; [& K& D  k' BEvery other word you utter is love
; h+ }/ M2 @1 {5 {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# t+ g  `% x" E/ O9 [  @5 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; _3 A0 y) O; w8 f% x% g: hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. J# \+ U7 T+ |# d2 K$ \I want so much to see inside your heart
) p1 ^# H! g  l4 n& NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 b% V! m$ W* ]) bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 ~1 h) s( m: F! rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% r7 |4 i7 A# x+ G: k9 c/ A0 uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: e4 }( h% _0 T4 n) N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  o! p. j% f7 p* d$ ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 h, c5 P5 I6 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 @: c4 A2 R. j/ f. v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ b" e& i- \, I0 E& x) @% f' @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! J9 V7 S5 S* ]& g0 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ }  z. B) M  d9 t8 _; e9 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* }) m- W- v/ y3 {" m9 S: |8 F3 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ t7 N- N! a# f# I2 V& q6 C* u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# b9 q  o9 i- I& e$ K# V0 x6 L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# |4 P# ^  }( K4 @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! M, b, t1 E; P3 i2 k9 ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% K' }$ Z9 ^, b# P/ L4 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 W) X$ W+ s8 }8 f  L- z- l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 a$ y2 \6 D7 L9 D, m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( V/ F% @& t! O6 Q$ g) q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 t" Q* l. |9 ~, c4 s- v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& W7 I; b" \2 }2 J5 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  f2 K3 B: l4 Q5 z! h! J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! {" w; r! o0 E! Y0 @0 [. l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 p8 g% `; }. G$ \; L) y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 z: i- _8 u7 S2 k1 e7 b. B+ T* u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% c* y& {* a6 K% V1 B( z) H( R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# m- f% x1 A7 p# r. i3 r4 C& H* P; e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>