【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% @' d' K. ]' l, S; m/ Z! P* Y" ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% N6 ?/ G+ X! Q( s7 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ y" e! c7 j4 M7 V" A% b% k" rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. P1 q2 d& G" v, |Seeing the sky content with its love
, ~) w; v0 B7 \+ zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  ^2 e+ N/ {% Q3 R- DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% J7 ?, C; ?* ^I really want to know just how much you love me
4 d; d, j" v) M. a5 D. CI love you I love you with all my heart
! e2 w1 s) M9 ^+ c0 o. vNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; {" b/ B$ \1 @* r. gI regret not dying
& b( _8 V& g: E7 `4 G  KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 \" M( t% a8 ]( ]7 ^% IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  w1 |* Q. F" c, ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; Z  M& A' E# ?1 T4 r/ U- S5 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 b" C0 [2 R4 i8 [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 @7 ]! d( k" j" c7 \- y6 |4 f1 `) _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 w6 k6 n; O+ B3 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" {$ [# k( ]. y. t* }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 M. T7 A/ @1 ]' W; S3 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ P: h( h% s2 W- ^* H* a$ m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ ?- c1 ]* M" _8 q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 q8 s$ J1 ?  y/ E9 Y( i" I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 W6 V- @7 c1 E% [; J4 i4 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* A) v2 D! y1 e* T' {6 ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! K" ^7 |4 ]8 l! o8 c2 l. R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 k& f# g3 h+ A# d2 y1 z+ ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  }" n! u7 {& D+ N3 U! \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- I) y) I* H5 a+ H" P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" W; F: r+ {: V% K# [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# R$ C) i6 s: j2 B0 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; @* Y- f0 q2 Y, I2 u* H) ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- t4 y2 }; N! J$ U* O6 ~. i! h" _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& c' U( b( i1 s* x<P>I regret not dying</P>
: B. I& h1 A) ], Y' L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& `) A$ S' f9 h" f$ A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& ~& z" I! ?+ w9 X& R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 ]9 g! E# x# |5 L6 P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 y! }$ W2 _, T/ n/ B2 B) G; f* ~! r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 s* D; s5 ^' F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 Q/ O! f" j% ]8 K6 Y' j7 B% ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>