【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ f2 ]- {* Y0 B- u4 \6 [# G/ p) q# Z歌词我附在后面。
4 D* W2 F4 d' V2 r& r" {* l- YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) |7 y% Y3 k5 R' F/ s  S9 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ j4 M- N4 t+ X- p: CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, u/ ^+ D8 P# i; IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* J& c, ^' M3 i' qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 h9 U9 e/ H) h( L% p5 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. }! c: w1 v5 b; }9 tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; P9 R6 M7 F( y; m& n/ {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# t  A( @0 d- A4 J7 X7 _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 G1 \0 \  O8 V9 V8 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ l2 W1 G, ]# |" n+ w- L6 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" i/ f2 f6 L1 P/ T& M8 m) @: X. p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* R+ a) R2 @% I1 N0 _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. h  X3 W6 ~% b9 S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 }" {3 y) K) R# W; n4 ~! p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; ~, k. x, A9 z7 G1 Q! n' x' v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ A8 Z8 B; ?0 s( A- v% H* K' ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* n! A6 b4 r: F9 d1 A( d7 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 ]0 `4 E; d6 }2 t$ B- Y3 r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; T1 P5 x, O' z; D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) ^/ O4 q5 l  \4 B7 m5 S  V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 r! s% z1 g  ]$ h$ q& p. E3 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# i- C% S2 ?6 Z- ^  p/ A3 {4 P+ t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# N  l8 H1 z# A! A) J: f8 k3 Q/ }1 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 o8 A$ f9 o( B' R- l: _+ K' u. m8 M: h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! m3 _6 O( Y- R$ x) u: F: l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! x0 N; ~7 L; ^% R% }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 c/ ?8 L" |* G4 G( F. ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ ~: |8 ]2 M( D6 Q7 C. J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' A0 y6 M1 W& a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  v7 O' Y4 }- K& \7 z8 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! k- b0 d+ _' S6 e+ B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 u( t" E% z) @- ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, E( e9 d, S( I9 ^% I3 }4 f% f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- a4 i* h8 d) d# c, V6 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 }/ c) ~& s! O) a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 o' w+ B" R8 v8 |4 p3 a8 x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. v/ R7 p6 I/ U+ S我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>