【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, ?0 V  r* A6 K7 jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 i/ f% D6 e2 D9 J) DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* K6 Y3 q3 C) R1 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ y. b7 F0 _9 o- rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, ^4 Q3 t7 V! r8 F2 P. ^- CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% E# i0 w- n' REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! R1 v: ~  j( VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) L3 O4 h- j- S: wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' ?  d; d5 W# Q' ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. A2 {' a/ ]8 z5 I4 s# {2 e, yI regret not dying
% W3 o" q4 D3 T1 x: QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" \# I: c- A5 Y( o. ?' WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 r8 [8 Y8 v5 H- w& ]9 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: R8 |& ?# _9 o% X* I; O( M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ x" V5 a+ A0 k" [8 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: ~! x; ?2 e& e6 n2 H' m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- D5 u9 [4 d! Q1 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* G0 T& z4 v/ Z4 C" `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 |* m/ W7 ]! y8 |" z4 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 E: H! C* \7 {+ p; a8 s<P>你无需担心</P>
/ F, K8 Q/ S9 l! S/ a- I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 I( k. P. T% ?* E$ Q% d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* h) \; n$ S' V, l9 b' P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 c) l* n/ E8 V& @% }/ Y3 b; w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! C+ f8 W5 N9 M' K: e$ x/ k' l' t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 l6 d3 s5 M4 l* N, t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 J7 \; ~8 F3 E4 Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ m' f: s3 C. T9 O* e- B0 f5 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 H' \( Q8 j, k- E4 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ X  s# q+ q7 p- O; f4 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ h! g; G7 t) V& F+ E- ?) u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 u, S4 w1 z) r5 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 D8 N( Q6 a/ e) d4 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( _9 j# h6 t1 z5 P$ v: z- l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; ~' Z- J6 x- J" F& q7 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: z) [* e( c2 e) v" R% @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 k1 i7 b8 _0 Y9 N. `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: Y& d0 f. f$ Q! ]: z+ k+ n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

0 S# x. R9 [9 f& p9 j" { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>