【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  [& i! V: C* Y8 O% E7 D7 G歌词我附在后面。
& Q% S. P0 F8 p3 M& _2 t' e2 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" |- ?! j% ~4 H/ L- L+ E/ q; PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- U. q2 Y6 U# _0 Z+ l% CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 P: i+ t; Y, N8 z' BWith the moon kissing it every night
) `' B3 x! |8 l9 F% P) YSeeing the sky content with its love
/ U/ A7 P, M# _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) l5 h# B; n- ]0 REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 g! x1 p3 J! a  n( P, FI love you I love you with all my heart
0 U/ f2 `" q& g) l7 yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# d9 d$ A5 M5 `. K$ MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 @* V0 t% v* T6 H, }0 i0 LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  J8 t' F, Y# YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 t: D( n$ S+ P5 D8 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 t6 ^5 e4 u+ _0 l: u0 o8 }  v- A$ OWith such a tongue as yours,
9 V7 o2 N8 c* r% `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, k$ ?( [. V: XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! X) W& a& c1 ~# }$ C- ^$ N) c: G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. W4 S! j1 V. o" G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 P" U, f% D$ P2 g  @2 I& {: N: L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. |4 S+ P9 Z: y! M3 n& {! f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ Y) W9 C# y* ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# ?* E  G  g0 H5 ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 l3 Y+ X' [/ v4 T1 d" s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 k/ ?7 t' C, v; i  x- e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 H! m) ~1 x4 `* E. g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% v3 `) Y* X$ O7 \. d- `* D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 E8 {& M, ^! u3 i) F! `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 w! \" U$ _/ m* O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- Z1 o+ H- e) ^% Q# ?0 X( o' ]( D2 i6 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: }) U9 P, I* i9 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 D- K  p9 ]: l) W  D3 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* j6 [' _6 ~7 F! U' T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 {# k! m2 L) W/ }8 E* {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 R) x& G7 z1 t5 W& x6 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ ?6 R, E6 I7 I0 x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% S9 y% |; E0 |6 F8 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 H. m9 Y5 c0 x0 c, w5 k; I5 D. ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* d0 G$ K+ R; _0 ]# X& r& x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' l( l; R  g2 X  D3 [# [; k: U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; A. S. j& f) k0 f# f6 F- |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( \# X* p/ E$ a1 T+ g+ E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ b' N- O) e. U+ n+ Y9 Q' b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  e. K2 x  ^1 \/ @8 Q% n: {, u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& ?# J: ^" L( m. `) V; Q我请你剖开它
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2 j3 e% T1 i' P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 `! e/ m: F7 Q3 @4 K7 T  V6 c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>