【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% {% g1 t2 n* o) Q6 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ X- g& E. z2 w! U, u" O, |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; q$ T1 I0 S- x' _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ v' h4 b2 _$ d: k* s, G# [! v, nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# e9 x5 E0 i! J, F: qSeeing the sky content with its love
, w% I/ V4 Y6 h! d$ \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 T9 @( e8 h) Q9 p: nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! L9 }$ r, a1 B/ H) P+ B$ p. FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! Y4 s6 I3 p/ m. HNothing can compare to my love
5 B' L, [2 U. O! |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# z1 b( O6 B0 f% b; W5 M" x/ g0 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: _9 f8 `$ [' F" l" eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% U5 [& a2 n9 `& F1 x7 gI’m still filled with fear
$ S# r: L/ G) r& f0 _( rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* u/ W( N  N9 Z8 d2 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: M1 z& d* R. C) X6 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# W. y; |# d! l, t9 L+ k5 m$ X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( d4 @+ C5 x( T2 R+ `, s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 J$ a1 j4 L/ |% T9 d6 J+ ?" t9 R; r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" y& j# c9 C6 a& A9 R9 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% l* T8 v6 f0 M! Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) F: p9 i& }8 t. T' ]1 x0 h0 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 h% D4 N' ^/ v3 w# O  T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! M8 B. H, l  u# r: ^: k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 g- ^3 F, H/ r2 b7 b# y: M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! A/ p' M" b- y$ y+ [0 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ a+ m( X% D( p: w/ d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; L  L) l0 L. w  H4 U3 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) f7 V( n; ]8 X4 f; H6 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 X2 R; c- L. ?) y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" W% P- L4 K- S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- R1 k( T/ [$ r2 I& z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 e% B9 X8 Z; i& c% R9 l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. j! p4 @' v  y' {* x6 x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- T# r. h. ^: b0 M. A3 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
- O) @" c: K$ w) h5 V( T! S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* H  k) `9 {/ o5 a1 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* [$ l5 |) V! e1 D# X: s4 \% D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 I3 P- Z  d  I: }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- O8 |, q+ H7 c5 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 T1 Y3 V1 Z' l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" n! v; |# e7 X我请你剖开它

' @0 }( _" B1 r/ \" X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>