【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 z  p" ~* E7 \  _/ h6 Z$ h歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( p9 t$ r7 S! a! fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 h5 q5 O7 o+ CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! ^! m. t+ U% u, nThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 I+ B9 q1 [  ^, t2 ?2 [) h9 tWith the moon kissing it every night
, x2 w9 {5 Z7 iSeeing the sky content with its love
/ F1 {0 L7 ?; ]' U, NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% b# v( D8 d( H. m& s7 nI really want to know just how much you love me
+ P1 K" K" r9 F$ z4 Y; t* |0 ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) c3 M' U1 M( M! bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 W9 m8 L$ \5 f6 O: e$ F0 W2 w. J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! N; ^6 M3 b. t# `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* A! b# S; J' b% f2 l! v! K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( c- {( S' ~4 Q& S# O6 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 m& T, ]4 [" p/ ?6 m' `. L, E3 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* R2 u4 N0 m& U! [8 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 U* T) q, [# G. w+ `) z! v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ s8 V6 A3 @6 C' K1 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 `6 v3 N5 U# q. P) M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# Z8 Q" C8 j+ K: O2 b: o9 g7 Y% [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% Q4 P/ d. p( D6 O6 A6 h& c' g# m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) X: {3 _6 |0 h; J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ V1 @0 Q( }0 E  b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 Y# G3 R: V4 _3 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. g- W' U- z5 y' m+ Y- y& M; }  @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ s  ]3 Z9 ^) v; U2 @1 A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 Y( S7 Z$ D0 a% C$ A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ B6 d7 _4 D" p* }! ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 Y  X/ c8 v; J$ g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. ?7 k3 R5 ?) L" b2 j1 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- `" ~& t7 d9 t' R1 y<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 a9 J4 R# P7 z2 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# Z# v6 `- N& u. w; U3 Z- G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" |! y9 k8 e7 H/ K2 R' |; A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* m8 }6 I8 @" k' v9 ~- V' K6 t  p# q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# y+ ], P* G; e* G7 f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 ?; ]4 n( c" O+ _$ t& X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! x# i. [7 b$ i; V! `+ K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 u& C% q5 k, N2 D/ K# B/ o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

2 J) ~8 e% O8 U0 V3 i: d3 v/ k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* A3 j6 I9 v$ N  C3 I; b+ o1 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>