【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; V8 e" Z* U+ H! a3 ^0 B0 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 G0 }: z7 k* b2 HWith the moon kissing it every night
. o) I) `" X0 K$ D) F$ }Seeing the sky content with its love
, x2 c4 W: C/ O6 ^# r8 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& u; Y5 r/ }- i, h( E' hEvery other word you utter is love
4 n3 c+ c. Q3 {, n  M6 A: c* dI really want to know just how much you love me
1 h5 p1 F; h% n4 g0 ]6 aI love you I love you with all my heart
. C5 F: z: i  E& R2 }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 |* v5 q% B1 J8 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 D; E: i4 i3 G4 }; Q' J0 t2 I& KWith such a tongue as yours,
3 ?7 @% x* r) L9 S" pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 ?( Q3 W; Z, N! oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 `4 B" `) m1 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ H- }2 U' w0 U2 V0 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# [4 i+ v( T7 L/ {8 B% E/ S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 M1 w2 M: t2 D5 x5 b% z. e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 Z+ B, T6 T! b, V7 @% @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 r2 \! ]3 ~6 A& w; e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( t$ P: ]& w4 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 G+ n; g4 ^4 U- u; F5 j* h/ J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ z4 Q. n; s( E* f& b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: _+ h, V  r% q5 ^- R- x. d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 P7 U) K6 P) E- ~7 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; v* g' P+ i* E0 S! Q; W& J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. U+ r8 x( D8 B; A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 R% z- E* m7 Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! ^/ |1 U4 u- |' t1 `  n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 _0 u0 ~# V8 F& J; P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: K3 H1 o  d9 o7 o. ~0 o! B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 D3 s! a/ F  x; L7 y- w- p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 \9 T0 C7 g6 H% V3 y3 R8 q% h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( t& d/ J% R" J1 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- ~2 p( T* p! A4 B) k/ U5 B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, E( B5 n7 T* |  S* P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& J* W. y8 ~2 }0 C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% n- F2 R" q$ g- @, i& X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>