【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 T3 G- D1 x9 i1 B; H/ X! J2 F. J: C歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ w$ C* B  t# oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ y0 S( R% K, T1 x# x5 K9 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% z) h0 B8 U7 Z1 I1 ]9 v1 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
% G& `/ X# I. I7 qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 ]9 T1 ], i$ {* K5 N  zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 P2 {8 U( I0 e% B/ L" k+ C4 RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( A* K2 s" Q- oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: i6 z  b# `6 r. K: R, }- E' q' MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 E2 |/ x3 _9 _; @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ O& J8 ^: X6 O: r$ \/ GI regret not dying
" W. c3 I9 r& U* r4 y3 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 x4 G/ b$ O/ ^$ s! ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* u! Q) f! a1 I" @5 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: q: c0 v" r: w% x) z4 H1 S# Z; U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 j0 b' b6 x$ ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ w3 ]8 s) ~' H! P2 G' p( M+ n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* [7 T1 w, [0 R; e7 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  K6 m: A/ _; a$ B9 u& K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 q" x9 |/ Z1 A  Y% ^2 O$ _+ j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 _9 q6 [  F8 S5 G6 ~) n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ X- Z' i0 U. T8 x9 U4 i! A: _' e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ P/ A6 E. i1 [4 K! c$ v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% F- d& {7 D. o# L) M1 s2 Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 i- {' K& k' Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% K) \1 v( I3 Z9 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 [) V3 I2 _% ]8 K4 t: V5 @7 y1 l0 Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" A9 u1 U  F+ w, m: x' s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& H9 J) l, B* D7 _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 W! w; ~8 u4 z- H1 n3 K% u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: y1 A* h; W( \/ ]% `4 T; o/ K+ E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& A4 q+ |- U/ Z( m  N2 `9 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  v3 }" j5 W4 n* U% l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 ^# d) n  |- _- ~' G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ o2 ^8 u; c$ q2 m1 u7 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( ?- U- u, b& G) e" [* J4 \. [; N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 X6 g% K4 {* t& a3 z0 Y  @0 W. r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 d3 M/ v  j$ G1 A8 W+ |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 Q- z$ Y7 V# B* w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ ^; V" S% k% X. R" C& |9 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# V8 u8 T0 W; |. @3 r5 n' [5 Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

' [- d; k% n" Q8 E! n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ K& f; A' q' u) I7 z2 n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>