【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 b  T+ y. T. `3 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% m$ m: c& I+ j2 v' I9 H4 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ Q8 U6 w1 X  ~6 @) L5 H/ fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 p: h2 ^# W7 p% J! f4 l0 D5 z6 i2 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 H& {0 ]8 T# q2 m9 Z- uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* T, y: h: s1 c3 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& R  l1 K: g, f* _0 zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 q: B! o% [" ?Nothing can compare to my love
# ~2 q. T5 ]  k: ]; @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# G, z6 \2 v+ K$ NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* q- f; M4 U# i" y3 D0 `9 Q0 EI’m still filled with fear
8 _* t/ J. u0 t; B7 a/ f6 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, V  @: i8 k5 A' B1 e% LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 G  n- D% k4 _With such a tongue as yours,
# b. C- L" R8 p0 w0 @% l" W5 \- ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) J/ _, M9 Y4 A$ FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; J! s# W% R5 \% }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 q  z6 b# d/ H/ _# Z3 X9 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 _( N+ ^5 @7 q, @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- A% P0 b2 b1 E. a/ f0 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 M, P7 T# e4 G9 Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& j3 F% q/ z! S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* l4 F  T* q; {' ~' m. S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 `( |( z: t% B9 G5 A) X1 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( N  i8 G$ o0 w6 T1 z! T( Z# I+ ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% r9 F" [/ o6 b# g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 j- x  T4 p# Z4 ^& N5 F$ _8 o8 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* C  L" C) B2 e" g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. ~! F& M" [; h: s$ P- z; q# G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 p0 W9 }) @; A7 H; i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ O4 ~2 y- D) f  X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ r8 [1 X$ x- u( L" [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" c' U6 T. Y# o" `5 j; n  w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" k  b; r* n$ X3 C% }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- N7 z. R% I1 h+ S) U6 V% g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 h/ P" g5 O8 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 |6 K; _1 {! [0 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, h4 l! h/ T6 @/ `& }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) T: n' b& ?8 y4 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% b5 T1 Z; t! Y" o8 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ L! @# n7 _# y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 G% ^( D9 A5 D9 d! X+ N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>