【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ n0 `: c  k7 f& T. j! nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& B  l2 [/ S. _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 y# F) h/ V  c' UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* b; b! l# K2 V0 E8 w" W% @+ @, iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 s" p$ \/ u/ w% B2 V$ a! D% ^You needn’t fear anything
9 P$ b0 I7 L* b5 L, Q, HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: e: i; u+ O; b, ~& c/ S0 L; m5 _0 `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- ^. n% A6 v9 O. q8 aNothing can compare to my love
' ~' E, r) Z( s) C3 n- c- ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! G+ Y/ u( b0 P( u9 }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* F  [. V0 D# U$ e' o/ s" AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) Q( W9 k" ?) {4 B! eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 @* |8 b$ q* S! u3 _6 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% J' {5 `' M. i: b; M! aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, P4 v  ~( `7 a( GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 {- J0 w) Y) J6 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ }4 N3 x# L3 a% Y8 `0 c( f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 I& c/ H. c! t! k5 [% n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( E) c. a6 e2 y6 ~' M* |7 J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, v1 Z0 W: b* @1 `) c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( z3 q' U' R) k) a/ J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 V, j0 ~( q- [" S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 c) H6 V: t6 w1 W* x: A. }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 f7 \- [, p2 L+ U. E: q3 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 v' H! |' y" F8 r8 w. R1 |0 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 c" e" O$ y7 E' t2 E! F, k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 V! x6 S8 \: G7 u7 d5 L" \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 Y# a2 n. i9 L' a6 c. e5 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& l0 g. g% p8 M' v/ Q( S4 _+ K7 K4 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& P( i% b1 L  t. Q8 F/ Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 J# Y) ^4 l, U7 j; ^/ U" l. y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 c8 y7 M& {+ \8 j9 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 d. G7 u& [  U3 p: T; m% C* c/ G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- W. f9 F2 p; a4 o6 C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 d2 i+ B% d& x6 R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) _# }  x5 b! L) i) O3 ~$ N4 P, z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* Y8 k2 d- S& a2 M* F9 w9 d4 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- t" m) Y& T; U4 d4 w. @, [- V6 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 A7 d0 d. C2 p/ {4 |% l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# H5 T; a  x+ j& S8 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 ~/ s! C! `+ _  N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 }7 E( E6 {) r; A& \# i, K6 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: ^" G' K# I  b0 C% T! Q8 w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>