【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' a/ ~2 k1 J- D$ E/ Y. o$ Z" Z& tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ G7 _, ]2 o+ Q* rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 g$ o" o  d. v2 |- z* K$ gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* p& [( w* {% W. U( L. n, \; |+ p1 T. kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 H5 {/ a* m1 O+ p# K$ z( |. rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  _, x1 Q: k( ~$ T, C5 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# s3 c7 L& v0 H* S3 z3 DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 g1 i% b. w2 qI’m still filled with fear
# Z* Q+ z$ r6 vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% T. l+ m% A; R* vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 s8 @( k% T  [! Q0 r8 _5 H% oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' S2 D$ n+ M) ]: u% q' {7 }7 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  A2 O9 o1 q3 I) {2 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 r0 u6 o. c" ]' @6 a' ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  |' B7 o; ~# z; P6 ^' h( M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) q/ P  z: W6 W) `0 W0 t3 k# J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  ?& l) }5 s  G& S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 n: n9 B" \# g/ N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 C) ^% T" L& s3 o0 W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" r, V" s) V% [3 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 d* G: o) C0 [3 m. n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% Y; {8 H9 R6 F4 ^/ o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- N% j+ a7 ]( \; F- a0 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 o3 A  t+ Y* X: |5 z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 ]9 Z: W- {! H: e  z% h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  U' W2 y. c5 j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( a% D5 V2 r( h: }; p7 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 t. N/ \2 a6 R! j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 C8 v6 G- P4 R3 b$ O8 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ r# [7 ^6 D3 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 k# d- k5 J/ T5 X7 j7 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ W# h9 n/ l& r- h; Z% X7 Z' Q: }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: w) p+ {. D5 U7 K( ?3 K- C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 q( U' f" w$ ~$ [6 G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' J1 S" ]- j1 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 {# c' w8 U! n2 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! o7 S; J6 P! o4 A# X7 A9 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% _2 y: e) J* P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 U+ f) k0 I% k/ P& a6 p* V# r' S<P>I regret not dying</P>
: j1 s/ I( y, |3 j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# j% G) a: j7 h5 O  H- x2 F4 H1 i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- j* g2 ?- b) @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; ]0 o+ \6 [* i5 R& A, M  P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) L0 C( J% x* h* m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 Q6 ?/ j4 j/ |3 S) Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 G# \+ g! _8 @8 H3 g  D, Y, u0 e我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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