【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- e8 I* A/ N+ HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 }9 g; @; _) E6 ?& S1 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. n! Z- h+ r% o. x- {' T! i- ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 K- J* E, W+ D3 T  g2 Q6 m' f( ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) G9 D! ]+ H& T/ g  B% ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* l! P! P3 Z) U8 P+ Q& i' pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# |# Z5 K4 \' lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' V( U0 v& I" mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: z! e' M+ l, ?9 GI regret not dying
4 ~# S2 v; `5 d7 K$ G1 k$ j- R' gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# E2 b. Y6 i1 n6 cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" [8 _1 B5 A3 p  Q5 s' MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' }* s) I9 A; @1 S- N! r! gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! D! [+ \1 L  {. [1 r' f% |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* x2 o: R+ e9 v& d9 z4 a3 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( f" G5 K0 j- _: V/ e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! y  p6 L  [2 b  ]  {2 Q6 {- y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) u) r  F( |5 ?- L: z6 s! G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ x; x- a4 X* w6 W8 \& }" U: R* }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 z: M- F5 ^  ?) Z9 y# q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 M! v% p+ t6 X4 R$ c5 A9 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! A* Z) t7 ~% i6 M/ O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ N- m" G+ t1 }8 t( k: }; J3 Q" r3 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* ], N4 R. L8 [7 f4 W: z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 m, M2 Y8 r! N/ b# o3 g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# m5 v" _  S" P4 ]8 d* H- R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  f& q! {. m9 ^( I+ ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 z0 `' x' H! g- Q1 y: Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* J: n+ m: {# O7 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- E) b' K% u2 D" l7 F- R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ T" `! @  ~3 b5 ?. e! Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 j  K4 d9 d7 |0 j8 W3 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 q% G" G( L1 g: Q/ {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ g" ]3 ^! e( i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 H% u" A: Z. y$ r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# y3 h2 M/ v5 h: S8 Y! b  c3 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& Q3 g) D6 f! O5 `7 ?2 S0 ?: n4 E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 f$ h2 _/ [- ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 ]- u+ c# U2 _4 `5 l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 c! y3 n( ^; r$ f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ V0 w% y4 u9 f8 I$ g) Z" R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" T6 F1 B+ y' o4 a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 {7 p9 X& v; q9 Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. B% ?2 d" R: v$ [$ N+ X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 R( C# w2 Q3 Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 D4 w: s. c2 R- d  s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>