【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- A1 i' |4 u2 @, K# a: o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 y5 v! m  }$ s( r) _" wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 T7 S( c+ y, y+ V( ^+ eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 x6 a5 z$ Q( |The sky is happy down to its soul
/ D6 o" V: {( P3 A* YWith the moon kissing it every night
8 {* M" j' F. Y  O* g) @& Y8 WSeeing the sky content with its love
! _7 ]6 _+ o% H" v7 K# ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 i+ n! S  A) Z; A9 z% x. p/ ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, M: a3 Y8 }' [# J1 a0 CNothing can compare to my love
1 y# I4 u0 y& j  WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ T5 n6 z7 U$ r9 e; b# uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ f% ]# K, M) M- X$ @3 u* L1 xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 h3 B1 J" }# X) h* E: d, II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& Q0 T9 \3 X% X# R% P& bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* H, H6 X/ @6 b( d' _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ Q3 ]1 d1 D: b) z  l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 O; ~# j; @% k3 z: c* s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) O$ O9 h9 P! a6 y% @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 `# Z8 I1 m* j) h9 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: \6 @8 ?8 T! W, f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% b; b, d9 x. C8 m, f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 X7 ]5 h* @7 q) o; M3 x3 G0 W<P>你无需担心</P>
9 `6 u4 R9 \& o) b3 t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( L8 B/ v5 e( S3 C: ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! d/ ^' y& c! T! }: e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 r& ?% N2 a" {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 Y* J! Z" z- }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 `. |8 c6 N) f7 L- n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 M5 L6 m2 O6 i0 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 l- V7 X1 l% W1 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 W1 |6 g0 f) u: a7 f5 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- x. g! @4 X3 N0 \! A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& X, \0 J/ `+ {5 B6 I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- n+ ~4 f+ x8 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) }1 C- M' T- q* k$ U+ S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# Y! z; I. z2 e, i8 Z  l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 F7 z4 a7 w, f7 \! f7 A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" [% d3 a" w3 L7 P# S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 g, V1 H1 ]% Q4 r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>