【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ M6 R6 X5 ^6 m# |The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 t$ _; a& t$ X; mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; X) g  _, a: G* o$ Y% |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- U7 x0 i& ~. l1 K  G6 A( rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 t" ~# c% B1 @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ g* L' U9 g7 Y! E0 k; Q: eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ Y- ]% C4 C( qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& d3 j7 {4 d$ S, i2 [0 D4 [I’m still filled with fear
( {/ g2 ~) {" x6 ?7 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 f: f6 v7 n6 I' k& E7 ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ i, p# O) ?) L: uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' c: o- m" i. H3 D) V4 Y% I5 MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 [7 `- U& q2 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 T2 P8 t2 l+ t) l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: J3 R7 ]+ t3 h, X2 b# i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* k6 U$ Z2 O* W0 `/ o$ @8 r9 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 I/ ~) C, [2 W0 e6 k0 U8 e# q( c- X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  C3 v& n2 g, X/ M+ d) }- n! S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 Z+ d; k, X8 e$ b6 i* y! O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ u" N! s# C$ H  N6 P/ N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: \2 x2 m+ k8 `$ D# y. u5 ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ w9 s& B& z) U, B* e. T! t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, F4 L- M5 A2 z$ e, z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& R8 o( J+ V4 m4 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 _( g1 \% U1 N6 h6 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" E: j# L- l3 y5 @* y+ c2 j<P>你无需担心</P>
# c) [1 b  T( e  [: M6 s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; L' Q- l7 F. g" V% J6 [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% l/ X- B7 l4 s9 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" V! d" f. p6 @) d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 j5 s! i! r! \: Z1 G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ b2 I1 R. V* U3 F2 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. Y3 B4 O2 D4 {( ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 `7 o2 L' }& |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& O- q6 D0 `. v- }7 e8 g0 |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ m( l8 l, e3 l% k( i# `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ H& P. V+ P) u. E2 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; @! z% d: C7 x) r( a; D/ y* p* y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 N; C( B* }) S% ?3 x4 k5 D我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>