【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( T* S( @* m$ V3 q3 DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# P' n( b( W) F( DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( S9 }7 n+ N, \" }! [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 M: i% y. l0 ~. v5 [* U  MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- p( {" @& d3 |+ o8 MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* [# f5 ]& O- OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 [' y9 h. Z! K+ @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 i9 z, i& z# P7 k. ]2 J1 H* EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* t0 P% C) W1 N; m/ W  \6 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
) q: P. b/ Q) K" }8 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! U  y. O% E) q# s8 d! a. ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" L3 l9 e0 Z' Q# a  e/ M. W* hWith such a tongue as yours,
; h& Y5 \6 _" P5 q; cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 T1 F& q& `& }# ~! D/ |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 }) B: d+ k6 N; [0 F- G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* \! _" ?, o. M6 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 V  H5 N+ ~  S6 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. ]) C8 j  R6 Z4 r3 f( r" V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ T6 J0 k4 O6 o. ^1 {# p) q' d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. E0 I) D6 h: x( s# ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 C3 ~: s- `' z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 Y5 j0 V* O; a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; n! `3 M" C$ T# r; S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* b# E- i% a8 _, y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 _4 p( I, d' D- |# E( x. |, F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' q9 N. h# g5 p" |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' @* a( k9 ?- D" H/ b; s) @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 _: l4 k3 Z. K- g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ ?3 E- s2 H/ C* `/ d/ |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% d: I* N8 g! P0 q/ l<P>I regret not dying</P>
( S# x) b5 x; d% R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! R3 s# ^  G) ]: q$ ^$ Q$ B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* w0 _- k1 H" m. T) x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ y% N3 w  M0 A: i! N# Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 V7 \: t+ u3 ~; l1 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# a* h3 h/ ]. g& q7 ]( U0 g' h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 p: u% j$ l) {6 q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" s/ z3 N5 |. v; L0 j4 ?) s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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2 I; s$ P: e7 ]! x. @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 ?7 N  e( O* @7 U1 \$ ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>