【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ L- M% \; @% r6 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 `( X/ G  O( FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 N+ z6 _, O% F. b3 \/ R8 LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 W8 b( S/ Q7 ~% m) C! mI love you I love you with all my heart
8 C) {; s+ J* f6 P; WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 l2 O" R. Y" O/ S. r0 W1 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' n3 S5 i8 o% Q8 [1 ], eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! D2 ]. v' J$ k  z% L; \+ c0 t3 f0 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 o! ?" [; c1 ~, T: r" ~4 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. V. m* {6 x# O0 h& `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& {0 D4 J( E1 {* ^) t7 o) O; T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& N! I" y4 C+ ]+ Q, `4 B: W+ \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ _  N# ^4 w; C) r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- A$ l+ E7 w! i+ j' |2 y8 r7 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 ]& N/ p$ W/ Z" v% I) S1 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- y+ T4 y; p. j4 _1 q, {; J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- `7 ^8 H; ^% E' S$ b. Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 u4 G5 _; z' w, Z  u# d/ P( i3 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' O. {* {5 y! H, P& c, ]- q! n2 A1 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) G' Q/ s: ^: Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, b7 t2 W& z- U' P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 s# p, Q- V: h  s7 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# j9 h4 ?+ ^* X& j' @8 l  ^4 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 s& M# y: i: B- E7 ?3 a2 I5 d# g0 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* U$ O" y4 |& G  B  f! U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" |# ^: X- x" Q% r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* e" I, K- P9 G3 a# g  Z; V9 [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( h- e; w/ l- G( u& w- _3 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: c6 Q/ w' G5 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: n; N0 p7 T; h" `/ E( ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* y0 @; H" E# K) S" e0 C. B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% y0 Z- k5 v3 I. p5 U+ g* h! D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 E! g& O4 n+ ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 r2 ~* [* F7 j% \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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' G1 M+ O! L; Z- a0 p8 n. Y! m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>