【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: N  M1 [4 d; ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 _5 F2 g& I# G2 m3 r( TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 s, Z  \5 [# A4 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; [  y% D7 }6 \8 k7 O6 e6 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 g( [3 \8 ~- C4 M5 Y+ KYou needn’t fear anything
+ E" {6 _# N* G- B; WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# r8 e0 i$ Q& U, z8 T  V' H/ N- OI really want to know just how much you love me
# [+ k: ]( H% D; s& w! M( [' AI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- }2 u& m* I1 t, m; r1 y9 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! w# n' u; v1 }: }" Q$ wI want so much to see inside your heart
" W' W; j! D" w- x8 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- K; w5 v: ~6 z% W+ u; bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) {* E. y8 F4 h/ ?+ H( GI regret not dying
% ?) y9 T2 q4 \+ e2 W+ xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' V4 [2 U" ?) P3 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: @+ ^( ?+ Y' lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ K; q5 P! a  p$ ^' m; c3 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& M) _# S% R- H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! @! S2 u* s* P$ c) [. F  h4 p5 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' L7 C: V4 z8 s- i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# m' W* n7 n, a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! J. R* q* g' D4 D9 c" x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" u1 d4 Z& Q1 }4 k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- I3 ]% C: C% \2 y; X3 b0 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ U0 U% ?) @! x4 A3 t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 T  I, [+ S- e- T9 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. `; [) Z6 H7 ]% g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ d# M3 Z1 z  c6 m* Q( h* s3 k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Z# [- J7 M  R+ t: D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 W: }# k0 ~- E! _* e; E* h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ W; E7 G/ ]& W. [" i0 i3 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& o+ P# s9 e7 A* L& w" |5 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ y$ \% T* R$ Q" i" C/ x, q7 \9 M7 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% Y) O2 [* S( A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ {3 S8 Q0 ?3 b4 {& N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
, Z8 d6 x: k7 F  T# F
  B: Y* x6 T, z6 j& ~# x7 F我请你剖开它
" y! T  d" t. A. s) e  t
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" p+ T4 B; i$ R) f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>