【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* o, Y: Y8 x1 a. L$ n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" U0 F" A1 z! \' W. Y2 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! {8 x0 q2 K; v. l, X! kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: B! z) [  V9 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% `$ V8 H& x3 o" nEvery other word you utter is love
7 ^  z5 B& G# R( qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# |* K3 W! [3 }* ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: \9 T0 T- S1 ^' u- UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# y% ^& U( F9 sI want so much to see inside your heart
# s; q( ~( l# YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 @+ Z5 l+ r/ J5 ZI’m still filled with fear
0 X! J/ V$ Z0 Z( AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 h# ~( u" ^6 JI regret not dying
+ y2 e- Z1 ?9 j6 q( |' QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 b/ G; D( ^* [( L9 S0 f- D* `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 D2 b: S- c8 w% U9 A2 f4 T; N/ mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 t+ u" d5 K- g7 i) o& I8 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 T* h6 r; f( B* d$ O9 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" \6 R! l7 z% l/ E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. g- s0 h2 J. ]- \% _3 m- q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 M: W) R8 A2 ?2 P+ b8 g% Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 V8 J) X+ o/ z' ]1 B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* l' q2 S! n9 S8 Y, V& a' o% @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) ]. e9 s  B& Z: T* b7 J+ H) Z9 W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 Z* Q7 h* G* {7 s/ o% T. o$ E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 t% f& H* Z7 F) a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! l) U- D. H% }' t( T5 d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 f9 _8 g. n" Z+ ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 O1 g: }/ V! t4 }  d0 |; S# e+ q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 K& k+ A1 k& M! j* S9 a8 Z! }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" @/ M8 O8 X$ ?0 K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: }: a! c; @3 t$ y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  X, P7 e4 a. _# ?- f( C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# r* ~! G4 i7 a. M' p7 T+ s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" N2 O9 {* O& b  J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 g# E% q- q. y" K$ C( F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) b0 B! M- }5 ]* m+ A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 @5 f, r/ A# e9 ^4 n) t$ s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ ?5 U, O) w& B9 T2 Y  Y; D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  W4 `1 T2 {7 K4 \8 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 Y' Z+ D0 S9 \2 k6 W$ ~6 k5 a- _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 T" z6 `7 G& y2 C- ?# c7 Y/ E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>