【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 ~4 v# z3 q- I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) d( E( l4 q" C, ~/ UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 F5 V! [% x9 f9 B5 o. ^9 N1 pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' V* a# G) |. i# h5 W, k- qYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, F% m3 P  S0 l* w/ uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- B8 F4 Y, P9 pI love you I love you with all my heart
& z3 s+ ^1 F2 V3 x" i) o7 T9 [Nothing can compare to my love
( @3 r6 P0 u& R; _( v: zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. ~! M5 c) x& q) X2 |) RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& Z, L. g9 |# q( e- n0 J. ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 Z5 K* R+ ?; _3 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 w; n% T2 F  f! a( o) P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 S% R, {2 |  }) s0 O. \8 A' b# ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 w8 G, F% a6 D. B1 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 v9 ~( y% l' W0 S& s+ i( F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ W1 z2 w" E' F/ t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" j9 V: r# z, u% N  A0 B+ M  P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ V1 I$ |0 G: N3 q/ C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' |9 E+ R% h8 C( o( i1 N8 f# E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 R, \, x6 c4 x" |$ ~- ^; C- `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ q3 Z, |+ g- t8 d& g3 y1 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 i" `, x- |! B9 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. V- `! Q) |7 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, e: o) k. ^0 f1 V$ G; O0 }3 c, X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* P: }" y9 i# W( J7 e1 p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) q, G4 }: p5 ?) m! O' ^  t& J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: g9 [; N( v# P% m* ^1 k! T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ x0 _& r, a5 ]8 P2 Y! D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 m9 [3 v7 J# E5 n: c- H4 K$ H; s4 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: S) j% b, k. S+ N: O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 ]% N  `4 c* O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) r0 g4 ^4 k9 G( q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  [7 `% J) u( r7 i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& Y+ P) @' q; @2 b! O2 U' _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  H% x8 J9 f- M" u1 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 t2 H9 Z$ y- A3 K/ D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" d& }& t0 h; Z/ ~' \; M" U; ?! P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 i2 }, t2 Q  n/ M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 M! Y5 h) ~  v% [. n' T. M' @1 s7 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' W; t6 x& u$ E' @" L7 V: I8 t. S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) O- x; U- Y  E# n0 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

# x" \$ Z/ k+ ^9 X/ W1 o$ ]& T, q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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