【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! Q/ i) w, Z! Z7 B0 Q3 l/ iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ @- P' P2 O1 a$ P- W+ ?/ WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! Z# a1 d" M. m* d7 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 C& ^( y2 E8 i4 [# VThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ E, H* ]/ ?& ^) X: i, `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: z0 u8 k' o& w5 XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 |  A: s3 ~. \' G; E3 ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 h- o( V1 u) }0 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" P" F4 g% b. F$ r% U1 ^7 e9 {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: S' j5 x$ F5 W. `/ ]: |7 T0 r6 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 i; |9 ]1 d2 v& s& KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. _1 |6 H  H  r! y( X" N+ [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& }# J, N" D9 [' t, ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 M+ w5 a0 l- U: _0 R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 \7 g9 Z0 \  q. Y/ d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# R# \+ X$ z+ p5 I$ Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ _& L" l: I7 U  W) J, X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, J2 i, a# P5 z0 t1 F' L; n6 U$ q# R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 W5 x* S3 d# d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% |7 x+ L, L2 a1 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 i0 P/ o( A, m/ h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 T/ e" p( k- H0 u$ v- ^; P9 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 [" b4 V. I) W. t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 r3 f7 X' W) ?: i  V8 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 ?! o8 M# X$ A: F/ |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 P5 f! u% _. x8 {/ T" ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ L; Y3 L, `* F2 g% U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& T0 c9 J1 \8 K3 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; F2 ?! `+ l0 r+ f/ n( M4 `; z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! s( F4 S' l- k7 V9 [# \  _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ e0 R* {( n. _$ t2 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
: P, C5 U9 w+ d- b+ t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" m/ T  n. L+ R! S" X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; s4 ]4 l& w& f/ B2 Z5 |) h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 D3 F. p4 |3 ]# Z8 F; R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) a* \. ?8 |; d6 {+ {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 X3 e$ e9 I4 P# q. F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 _' c, D& Z" H+ W9 |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) X& |  f7 j' W4 i) L2 _7 g0 A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( A& ^8 V- l) J) h6 L2 _7 ^我请你剖开它

# P7 z' E0 T+ q$ c% W( \4 B. K) Y# E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>