【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 @& x4 Q5 o1 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ ^8 K9 s% Y" t5 K4 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 {. W( f' }: C: LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% P! @( k' i5 y' G5 E* p+ MYou needn’t fear anything
& U$ T. n6 l0 y" @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. }2 b1 B" F" V6 c8 E7 D9 T9 L3 FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  w& E) u# A. UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" E2 Q; ]6 T3 s# [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  y6 |& D$ \# F: c" wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# f$ q5 p' _4 n  o* y2 PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 `- c, K9 b4 w) O$ h9 v  ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 [; I# l1 I1 K  ^) }! k# G. L! S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' m8 g  Y' l/ N/ V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 i" _' }! j+ H% [/ y, e+ C  m8 O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% [5 a  z& j, L6 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 _+ @% y: Q7 _9 z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 a7 a" f& L5 y* p9 p& }1 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! a; l# {, e4 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 o2 i+ A& H: \' t# K1 j8 f) W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( `8 X7 p7 |' F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% S5 F- K- b* }. c<P>你无需担心</P>
( b; ?5 O" |2 m0 v- P" A0 T% [! X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 ^- O- g' A! Y$ {9 y! F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ y! Y$ w& d3 |; u+ T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 Z  R) \6 f& E, y+ o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; K% C" V  S% ~+ P$ P) Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 ~: n& u! B: |' d2 n" s# i; b* K5 q& x* A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: b* Y4 p+ p( x* U! ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 c* o0 t* G5 B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* o+ x( d/ D8 `/ e2 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# C* S. M6 ]- f; c+ k" {$ o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- e9 Q) }& F7 H) ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, V/ E8 b6 C9 Q; l+ y' ~  U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( a. M) w6 t$ T5 R6 L8 g+ L5 J- i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* p" U; u$ @: {: J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 h, r! k$ d& H5 Q: i<P>I regret not dying</P>
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, I8 g+ p8 o" ~' c6 I8 A1 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 }# f. i. m) q2 R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' J* t$ o& C# w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 v" y+ e/ M7 V4 O& ^  l0 L; b8 E& x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 H6 q7 I% Y9 V: s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 b- r5 k/ ?9 L& c' q. E# m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. h8 s& t! l4 y1 X4 |% Y0 H) x我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>