【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. [) |- k! H) _1 ?/ d* C( ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: g/ e# C( g: }) EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 u# S7 d; Q* r% NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 [" `0 h/ k4 c# ^5 G8 L& q' cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 h. }: _' ?+ l2 kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ a2 G0 C( z) P% i# c, F. aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 v; r4 x, c* m2 }# \2 o3 ]# fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. G" r: h" [$ c. D* X; l; HI’m still filled with fear
+ L6 s, d8 S6 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- K/ a" ]; k6 Q* w. I/ pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 [1 q$ M" ]" @& e/ {" vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# u$ p9 f% I6 e+ H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% J% |1 G. m8 }! R0 v+ u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 v7 A9 n3 I" q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ {- D! W5 K, ^& }, h6 F0 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; ?0 }1 J% m- b8 t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. }1 R' c! ~3 k+ \- b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  b+ U: t3 Y& Q" q0 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ Q/ B; ~9 s; I6 m8 s+ z1 K<P>你无需担心</P>
  y  y2 ^% f1 P+ }# Q, C; L- M: k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- D6 B. J: A. i# _: i' a3 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# J6 X2 W5 B; Q: z# X; p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) Y$ O5 h7 G( c  k/ \$ o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 K0 H) ^/ A& U( |9 i- K0 y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: d/ T$ ~2 k) N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 |' m' T. O$ E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ `" t* Z5 u  O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. T( j6 G8 J1 h# w3 P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ @! ?0 W0 j+ l5 a3 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; L+ m! g' f: ?/ c% \! {/ u  t1 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 L, L9 [: b! h- G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 g, M. }: c6 y& F) @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" }3 F4 q* C) ?+ M" Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 V9 G( M3 w, U4 d8 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ g. F# a7 Y' a, O" O<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ ^( ]) ?' b2 |5 {3 a$ o* W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 Y  I/ ~3 v6 M% u  K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 W* t. h* V  N; h5 [" f; u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) @& Z2 r3 M: [% G- ]6 F8 t4 }; E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 @8 J, F; d) ^( K: l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" d3 }# S$ l& ~& z# h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ z0 U" v- K8 z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* M9 E& S$ j7 a6 ~+ n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>