【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ v# ?* [2 ?8 TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# n; A7 i" _( A* x4 x% A1 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 p$ `8 ]: `2 x7 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 b. G4 V7 O/ V5 Q" AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% M9 T7 @) M" B& |- T( a  oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 n' g! V1 I. r: F! FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( P9 {" ?) l: {8 uI really want to know just how much you love me
! l* i( q( G7 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
1 ?' ~" u* h2 g; Z9 a+ B' U6 q% }( bNothing can compare to my love
3 C) d7 b+ p% V% A% FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% a, {0 t& @, {2 v# A8 JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 o0 z* b* A) r; P) G! o" ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# l6 f, a& z" `/ j$ c( b0 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ o' n3 P; V0 s% H* N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 v5 G5 G, x2 D% x. U% R. S9 h5 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 M: a9 z8 }% O, n1 E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 V, k9 B" c& u, [, g1 f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ Q. e: O! O$ u' f4 T6 q' j) w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ y8 }# G9 `3 {7 m" G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 u2 t" o6 z( |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! c! @* y" H9 M8 t' n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& z& }- |. W9 k, @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% k. {* H6 }& S& ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 b3 c, V9 n& ?2 x  l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' F, P/ x) m& g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ H7 M+ @# d' n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. z; B7 ]: }* U0 ?& u. c4 Q7 H. H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# s2 u0 r& @9 D( w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: T. v7 h6 a4 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 s( z% Z6 M, Y% p1 S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 l: j3 b% Y: h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' H) g8 Z! g# r- z3 l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. h$ Q9 d4 o( h7 E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ j* ]( M; B& e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 D$ i3 Z% n5 E% {, j, |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. `& }6 b9 m+ C( Y& `1 @. w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 E( E, E+ l, ~8 l2 \6 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 G" z; S) i) S0 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! h/ b( K# Y! J) F5 E: ]! C; a. f; O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

& H3 Z$ u" l2 ?& n2 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 q$ G2 p! U/ P6 R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>