【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" g9 a/ Y1 e) X. T4 m4 ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& J" U9 ~0 i* LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! g2 [1 h6 A  }$ w7 cWith the moon kissing it every night
6 O9 v1 e0 [  g& a) nSeeing the sky content with its love
" ]: t* T1 A( tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ @4 c+ M1 I; ^: TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ E$ Y6 e$ X4 g  N, T# |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 D2 r5 B- Y  N' pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, N# F3 M0 f4 {/ C/ o' w3 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& C' M. v7 p( M" G' a5 EI want so much to see inside your heart
0 q  ^- e& H/ C3 E" II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ T8 r$ X0 I* ~7 P. B, l4 XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! {8 v* W3 E  R8 Z1 w& |* }* hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  `+ l( Y! l- o% I) E1 T; a+ pWith such a tongue as yours,
! B* Z2 C* T9 b+ uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# M3 a0 j. B& w' AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" ?8 p( G& G$ V) J1 A& V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ |( ~, f6 L1 ?  l' \) H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 m/ q. t+ z* P, q, f( i. B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" E+ T7 d! Z$ J5 ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: o. Z8 X) F2 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 n# F% p8 ~( Z9 Y" G+ K. w, F- a0 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 ?+ K2 S$ ~; M& I8 f4 K1 c% J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 m. P, V4 X* c7 Y, P" X& [! r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: r8 v4 u5 E, T0 H" Q9 x  |+ C' C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, G7 t$ h2 _9 L& O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: S6 W1 j7 t0 n0 J4 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, b$ z* @1 i$ _/ Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  K8 B$ P! f5 C; \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: O, `$ x0 `7 m( P, n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. d+ C9 W+ @. R) h$ h0 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  L9 {* F7 k* e# e1 x1 P5 z# `8 W) @. X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  J1 Y+ h/ c" I. f* N% W+ N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 S4 [: X$ {6 X/ G6 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 g  e5 n4 D# a6 E9 x  G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 n' ^( p- k, ]! l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 p. G4 x0 T# q# A2 k0 S$ A2 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" N# M9 t% z0 b/ t! p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 |% \; p) d" a$ k. M4 j* n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% f  t1 q% J' d/ E* C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 p. `0 f8 E3 m  T0 z6 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 P8 s  h0 {6 C+ k& I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  [, R! g# z8 b, u; M3 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 g/ J$ X# E, D2 Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) h4 H/ V6 N" ?6 E8 M/ c& Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; B" A# d& Y2 L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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, W+ e/ q$ W' m+ _" i* s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>