【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 K/ m8 ~' Z3 R$ e. S5 I* gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 l: J) n1 `- R$ f. nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* u2 h+ m% i; R1 v. PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 s; M! ?6 N) ]You needn’t fear anything
7 }; J& G7 V* ]  B5 z+ FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  ]2 S. y4 C" H5 k2 dEvery other word you utter is love
7 K; m# c: O& E0 C9 }3 II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) v6 b9 h6 d4 @2 R6 f- N5 wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% @6 Q0 ^* X' ]* u8 ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) U+ V& B. j3 z! DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# w5 [6 C% c# h* O& Q. tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. J* _5 P0 C- D$ p8 B% hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 @2 L& c" Q, @! z. X# L. r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; H' b1 N5 D- O5 g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 C8 W0 ]6 T9 X. D" Z% a& a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) e* t7 G! D% B9 |2 N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, {, e7 B3 _" z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ F3 ~3 D/ x- ]8 E# x9 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) A% S3 F7 c" {$ E5 ]1 p/ H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  Z: D+ c; Y" A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; m2 Z9 R( q% J0 L8 m2 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. N# d- p3 r3 N9 ?" S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 |6 L5 S/ ]1 b( S3 a# a4 l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ z3 a: k' u' u$ q1 s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 ~2 E$ S% K: K/ e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. i/ \. J" |, w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, f. b' Z( p' _/ c: e5 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 _6 k+ V9 ]- g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 E7 Z! F8 u) m- }- U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 \8 o) w  ~* ]" G. w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) n" T: I8 U! p. y- a; w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. F2 h: R$ A9 ^& D# L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* w3 M- F. V+ o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; s# ^9 ~; Q! H; L) e7 z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) L8 s7 g3 O: _$ P/ I: E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 R; f1 ^. r$ c* l" H& T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# {9 V$ f% r1 s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 x. C0 F* s; H) z7 U% n* q" c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>