【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: @+ ]: \' o5 t$ W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ w  i8 S/ }  e) P* ?$ HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ d: s: w4 F- f- _. P/ P, ~* eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. S+ _" n/ E! r; ^4 vSeeing the sky content with its love
5 |& N: T& v. R4 p! U* l2 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 P) X5 N; N$ |& n+ z7 }' _I really want to know just how much you love me
" g) Y' Y% Y5 w1 Z5 h) R4 II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ K! n' u4 R9 j/ hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& l  f1 T, _' C& z& g0 ~/ H; yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  {& f& O$ ?9 R, N; _I’m still filled with fear
: B3 }, l6 n0 x5 y; HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% N5 ]- ^' G7 J3 c$ [# W8 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 r' q) G/ w+ Z9 [- y9 F* F- t/ R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( ]3 i. K+ Z- t$ O1 T) u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' e4 Z3 z9 q# ]6 `" a0 f- R/ y$ }( H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# k' ^1 l- E5 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. N! a$ |! R" z- _2 Q" s( p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ X% v9 d8 J2 ^) G! [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ R+ {- J& w  u' f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% l- O" O# }+ L* j+ H: K/ ]2 ]% |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: l( d& \; H- x4 @' l7 W' s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( m) B- q2 G' ~3 B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* S8 a6 K7 T- j7 r8 j0 ?5 Q9 w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 {; V7 p1 j2 W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ~$ [( A# C/ J7 W' q* e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) o! M/ [4 K) x! J7 \8 O% m  [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) k/ }$ ~: N6 |' N4 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 P8 _+ }, V* ~+ A$ M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 J# }5 \# E+ a. p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 c$ z; w6 X) J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' f1 y( ^6 a, s; e, d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  s( Y9 R1 O" |9 m# ]# P+ J4 g  N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  Z( K( [# K* V1 g6 I. V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 t3 C& j! {' ^5 [: }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, q$ V# q0 y1 l5 l3 ~3 O8 G6 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! \- d" h8 G, w( v" F: @' ]4 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ G! j5 H' ^* X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 ]7 U! K6 A* {. N. Z# }我请你剖开它
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: N/ E) ^) e8 V0 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; A. {  |% L' U3 D4 N7 O, d3 J* e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>