【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 d( {  T" c9 G8 A  d+ d$ R% o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" U' d( S7 Y4 U! l5 T4 b8 Q: IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 B+ k/ a$ Y2 c+ \4 n' n* E1 wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ W  A& p" x- E1 L# x0 p' _  k. b4 |The sky is happy down to its soul
5 z6 a5 H7 I1 J5 ~With the moon kissing it every night
8 }: C( g: p, I# ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 Z. f  K; H( i( jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 c% q) S* f( L- [' DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( b% B5 J9 {& _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, ]4 J1 M3 {: R$ _4 v8 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 w3 |8 X# i4 ]1 P* o+ U/ Y( DI want so much to see inside your heart
- c, j1 {* u8 i) o( ^; X* U2 pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. z' j1 u; L" Y8 T7 H% ]4 z+ }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 h; n! y) m  V- o+ hWith such a tongue as yours,
7 a- O) X, T  r3 _" {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! U/ g0 R2 u9 ^) b. h5 g! Y7 G' D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# ~, d. {% d2 p7 X! \2 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# T9 s, U, l% W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" Q+ G& B( I3 r9 h* Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 h: ]: c0 C6 U$ Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 g, b2 m( z" R9 H: W: D% `- g+ J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" k- |0 m% q  i: U2 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 q, R4 ?+ R& H  u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" H' K8 s# @* g, W: O& p% a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' k3 b2 X. g, y, P# ?' u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. N% V! G- h; b0 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 w5 }  K6 y; D; E9 F# x4 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  B& Y$ M/ F2 d* f' r" h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ M* |' [8 M7 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ l1 R5 t! \0 x  E2 ^2 ]$ d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 _  _; X$ m! \+ L# T! W9 M) v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! }+ B. O. X# k3 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" q! X% c2 H: ?- `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, `, U* V- e( H$ t# C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ z/ J+ s2 k8 i& a; x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. \% i% J8 y8 F$ U" a. h4 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' q5 s2 r: ^7 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 u, e$ z; C# l' d) L: m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, }0 C( l- Z, b0 {6 a" c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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4 `/ Y# {6 G8 A8 I% L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, ~  B" u. L6 \. m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>