【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' A& L5 x- F% c1 A2 U" W1 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% G0 F, P3 M  n4 [. nYou needn’t fear anything
9 L* E, d& r) ~7 q9 GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" a8 I; c' Y- ~3 p& k9 ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 [4 K; W2 f* Y' |* B$ w. XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  I/ a4 b: @9 l/ a# B0 `  NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) W8 G, x. @7 s5 ^' lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 ~& Y" s% S/ d1 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! l' E4 K( r# iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& p/ V) U; y/ N. t' M: R7 zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 i# E) M6 I; U+ K! B. w9 {& TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 F: W7 N! q2 J( ~. T8 P; v& u* v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 k/ v3 N: P5 Y9 A, x5 J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  T1 n# H- q4 J" j; _7 ]1 n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 [4 _# ~0 ^1 r  B+ i1 E1 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& v0 ^: `3 q1 k4 w$ X5 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- x3 @7 z0 F0 i& x0 U" H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( y( U8 e$ B3 Z  z- f0 k! c# X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 a3 j& ^; f, M0 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# l0 ]2 @- I8 _  @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& ?4 L( W! c+ o1 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ ]* i: j+ }: O+ P. M8 X0 C& B2 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ `1 g1 Q3 V8 p% r  w8 P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; V: z2 P/ m& |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" Z; K1 ?/ G  m9 q' X( f4 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- i- f: t% _2 W4 u% \( j9 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. J* G& l4 A! j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) i: z5 g6 K: t; }$ c" n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" q: X- e7 `2 x4 h+ d( k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; P2 d4 h; `9 _1 h& @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 B& A8 t& S) P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- K# K+ V% n  x% Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 D  t, u8 |/ a" O( V' ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# Q" a+ _6 s9 h: }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ o6 A/ F# b  Q; \+ A" p我请你剖开它

0 y/ r% L$ u& A0 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>