【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 O* L  f6 ?3 H) x+ XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ w7 X& a$ R) ]: B8 ~The sky is happy down to its soul
/ a3 W6 H' ^. E, g/ SWith the moon kissing it every night
9 A5 K+ a* d0 v' @, ?& wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& y! y. v4 E, f7 E2 @* e- oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, o1 H3 @7 [& cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; j2 @2 \; _6 e4 nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& ?, m6 i2 O1 E: ]! @- F; sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ _4 h. S" h% |& e7 r( I* c/ wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 D2 ~7 ~% N0 e: M; Y- lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, N. J3 }9 O; Q+ M, wI regret not dying
2 _* J, F  V# ]( M# XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 k2 \! s& y# A  z, V+ @& |0 WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 `$ P5 M3 ]2 n' n4 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& n7 N* f+ s3 g$ Q2 }7 r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( p7 ~# Q% Z0 w# Z. Z. I( k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 A7 f, `' n& Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 K9 m+ T0 q7 ^  }& |3 o1 Y5 |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( I: u8 R$ r( D! b' D/ ^* D" B$ `0 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 y. y3 D/ H! Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# o* M. e$ m- R& E! B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 G& A5 x  K/ @$ q$ }  R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% v( z. @2 ^' h) U) m8 ], p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  r8 P7 E/ _3 s2 H* Y, V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" t9 \; D. B3 T: y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ ^) d, V5 D2 O/ p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: K4 w- ]/ M) U& k1 d3 Y! N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ s: S' C2 i) h/ b9 c: H; X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 f) C8 o5 Z  X8 _. e8 T; Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ h  T: m6 b! Q  ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ l. m/ Y3 X+ H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( \: ?; s( k/ Z) {; I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; D9 b# A. @" `  c: H7 |0 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 n5 o% f/ b6 v. @6 f- L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 h0 K4 w2 M2 b, o6 G1 m+ e: ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 N  d0 b& E- y' n6 H2 ?# O& g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- K$ M2 v1 D) U& n% p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: s7 N7 R. _* g3 ]& `7 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 W- K' D/ P) s5 y" J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* I9 k5 H: B+ F! D我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>