【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% y5 z. y4 s0 }( iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. G- Q9 N- [# j$ i9 f% m/ M5 zSeeing the sky content with its love
: W2 L$ A" s; @; z# `" O- `! |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. S0 g4 Y9 M' |/ i8 F  x  DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ E5 E$ i3 [9 iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 b5 U4 h2 K4 K3 K. dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! ], ~& n; f: A3 \1 R) m3 O5 J0 pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ P5 B! ~# r# M+ V7 |I want so much to see inside your heart
0 h/ |5 _. p8 |# Z: L* H* C) `+ T) WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& y/ K" b% ~* o. @  `* ~; u# F/ l6 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 C( l! }6 _7 MI regret not dying
% _) M( e( Q2 a8 T+ \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 ], z1 ]" z& T. x$ t  m3 ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 j9 M4 l6 K  W9 G/ f+ U8 \- T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! k6 a% s- N: P* i: g1 ?" d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* e) W7 q5 L5 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 p/ s5 N2 X4 ]- M' Z" j, C; A3 O% s/ E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 K! ~& y$ q/ z+ Z" I4 P' Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ y; f, \- s2 O8 |9 }3 F4 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; T* a& o  k' D, |  J0 R% b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) P+ B+ S% d, }! P2 x. d, u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ D9 I0 N, R" l8 Q' ]( M& _6 f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 f4 C6 d4 M8 _% ~+ d: c, c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& W3 `9 t, C" Y  r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" l: b5 Z) N. x3 F+ ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; t1 W. y* q$ |# \- y7 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; `0 @% i( y: u, G, t7 C" B: n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: C2 R: j$ W4 x: i$ x3 S1 \( o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( f/ {" ?- ]* n" o% E9 @: w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. W, }- w. x  |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 ]9 O4 S1 {: B8 A7 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 w& e3 Y! c  C. f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 [- G2 B2 W' _$ \* {1 K$ @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, l% i; r( i" F, r) b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 ~2 F% I+ Q. C- I5 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ n9 ^0 N6 L# d9 a# a, T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- R% g, b  k; i" K1 X) o  K4 k5 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. Y2 K# J- a  H<P>I regret not dying</P>
* X* Z3 @9 |9 l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  A6 p( [/ e, q  s0 J2 `2 M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: p( q" ]0 V) T' k2 ^$ g4 m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! [* x0 F: o# s. d, s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 ^' X& u7 @# C3 x6 H. b9 S6 B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& k5 {2 J* q/ }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" E1 Z( I- t2 L  Y2 J9 j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>