【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( L! x; j& P1 {# e, j# w' E歌词我附在后面。
, G' t% h& S' E: SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 a' i3 Y  L" n6 \& h- ?8 x, WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, r3 D4 ?, ]5 R$ r7 u" t2 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, ]5 l/ @' \* g& }3 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 ^- c0 C6 T0 R- ^4 NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 B5 M3 d4 x% Q1 m" Q+ i) zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 v" j' W+ R, }* RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& M( Z4 |# u7 M# PI regret not dying
( [" n. i) G+ c8 Y9 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 E5 Z2 Z5 C' \) I8 WWith such a tongue as yours,
0 O8 H8 ?( X  G, k* T8 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. H( j1 ^/ T2 c1 L4 R/ a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! _% J, u2 ~* f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: y* @9 @$ H$ Z% f- t2 S* l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 V# t2 T5 a' }+ `$ v. \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 T( K: A8 V$ l: D, S0 D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' O4 A9 [! A. r$ [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ d  q/ R& m% ^' |3 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* U$ p, Y6 q  Q4 E* K7 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" A; ]0 N( t  K# W% T1 r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 a+ [. T5 f% m2 Y' d1 T: h2 C0 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. I' O: E* R! H9 {4 y9 z5 }3 H8 k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 K! _  C8 \/ Z1 g8 J: {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) d. x8 [& f0 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" M0 A* H* x: m3 \6 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- C- R! r! u. M$ s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 g* E# C, ~( _. _. k% x3 k+ m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ S9 u( F, C, w; j9 Y) v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 ^1 \: u, A  U. R6 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' F& m' l( R+ O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 _' B0 K* }! H& \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ I3 H# Y9 c" ]- h* n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 {; `# S1 e# ]6 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 {" R, Q6 \0 @7 L* i0 d, D3 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 w6 ?: y1 z& `& L- c# R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, M" J. T2 `6 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 g% b. |! y2 ?* _1 d  K" I+ n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ C9 o. y" v# x1 G8 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ J9 u" `1 K2 H' r' L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" ^+ E! K; p5 p* P, G! y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. F$ E2 U4 Y' P: |6 h( ]% g4 B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 }& p) @" V# M/ R* R: m7 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 l1 j* b5 P+ A+ v( Q2 [5 ~0 |& ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 A- Y4 P3 }$ U1 I2 A- }$ L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 C6 x! L' d6 i8 c我请你剖开它
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/ |5 N; _7 U% \. A& F$ \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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