【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! r7 f& n- D& q5 y. w7 u: B: AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; e- [( Q1 C3 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 {# W6 ?& y7 f0 M# B0 a7 P) {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ {# T* r, s8 e/ k7 V7 D8 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 B2 o6 V& C: P/ [- W1 X/ |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 G1 ?4 i& `% ~6 A, o  SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 `4 }1 l0 }8 M5 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% S5 G. `# @0 [1 wI want so much to see inside your heart
/ V5 L9 z7 w4 y" T1 ~5 x0 L. E  f0 jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 J+ q! B3 R* y8 ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ B$ j7 B& w" g$ k& l/ N- fI regret not dying
- m- L; f" a+ G  V; X8 o1 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 [" d1 c: R$ `/ I' ^With such a tongue as yours,
. R" k& ^2 G' |2 h# d4 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. _$ V8 t  k0 A7 F6 ]! cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, Z2 f2 |7 c; r, z3 \; }3 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  v, z0 V( X" n- ^1 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 g7 @: l& x% {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 `( ^* \9 M3 j' p; F# H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ ^; ?, v# h. g) X- ^6 c% W0 |- K* `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( O( f0 k! V+ j  x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* ^' |# K& k& i" b8 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" q! `) M' L2 X) W% P  v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' w9 h7 h9 w# [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# W$ @7 _+ Q1 T- a$ G' _  O3 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 ]$ Q5 e& W5 l+ a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' l' y. j" M1 W' Z8 u! j3 ]0 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# i! a+ P  f! L4 q0 Y! ~% i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 u9 J, a) G! j- }, d8 w# M1 i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; E( L, a- ^2 E0 c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  ~0 T$ e9 D" R/ A0 Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* W5 G: H5 Q/ S  l4 H2 Z" `! e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- D8 A% {8 x$ e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 X0 Q/ U6 Y6 o7 @% V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& q. [: y" Z$ D2 Z% W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& l# D& d9 d0 ^2 o. T) S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( ]3 D; U/ i) L8 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. C% y5 [$ c% p4 T; }: G/ x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ }% M6 Q4 |) M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* M! u) l) S" W( ~3 r4 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( ]# g; G2 X# R/ p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. W" |2 [1 n! k( C$ x* U/ C' _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 J7 U8 o; L8 v/ w. L. Y# i我请你剖开它
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5 X9 ~: W6 P% M% A3 t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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