【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' k3 H# {  @/ t4 o" y; ]$ ^歌词我附在后面。
2 x+ Y/ r( h! F0 T+ d6 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 D' Q5 P8 F9 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" A& ^0 Z# j4 S2 t( F9 A" V7 f8 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ u/ m( J2 O- q& g0 T# z9 nWith the moon kissing it every night
2 ]4 z, i; Y* g& K( I, qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 v0 @4 t6 @1 e  iYou needn’t fear anything
, i9 @4 u# b6 k5 {  D# D% B# HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: N& _- P8 A. s) }! t% y7 BEvery other word you utter is love
3 Z% b1 Q6 I/ VI really want to know just how much you love me
. j& x# K% `8 I# ]9 fI love you I love you with all my heart
3 m8 L9 o$ E5 d7 p: w5 ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# @! P" O6 [0 |3 [# eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) _: ~  }/ Q& Y; TI want so much to see inside your heart
& e) y$ \5 l& D( {5 @+ GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 }+ d" m5 j6 c5 M" m# @4 [I’m still filled with fear
6 _' i. D% O( w2 y$ |+ j* w/ I1 A4 b: uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ E4 C0 v4 [- q) E& QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" k, p/ p4 W0 }2 Q6 P% o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 Q) ]& A( d2 T: e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* c6 M( f; F4 `9 h& B7 Y3 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 n* r3 V: e$ ?) R, Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 ]8 x. i% K* ]! p4 X6 H: Y" J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, z% k' K$ K1 ~' F! L/ C/ c4 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ n" W& I4 O$ l9 s+ [9 N<P>你无需担心</P>
8 j( o9 p' z; G9 j. j6 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& P# r; y$ d5 D3 g# G5 N% i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: [8 g8 g! s  D' O& U/ N7 E6 u! g: m9 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, Q/ H: U' `( A; ]7 w7 i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 ^$ M( T: V) @  j* Y8 _" F7 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* q4 O4 O! t9 g) }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 B7 b* q  R, ]$ i9 |4 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" j& r* w! l9 o$ p/ N' S! b& M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* K7 m& N' H  s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! e) K) o! j  C3 K9 v- @2 ~/ \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, f- ]% ~2 _8 D- U3 Q, k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ g+ A- s0 [% ]0 r( l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 w6 u3 P! X1 F1 x; Q0 I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' {! F6 f+ J0 }& F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ q4 J& y7 w1 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
$ U7 k* E: T) O3 V. y5 H; I
6 v( m' r% E$ G4 j5 I9 s我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, r. s( q, l: b3 C5 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>