【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 l' h4 ?, K( c0 I& c" M5 {, h( s2 A) q4 p歌词我附在后面。
" t0 s* C8 m% |- z; b/ MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& [7 V3 q: \1 j" x% d/ @' cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) B3 @. r. X5 W, r' i! P' zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 ~, {% a. N3 Q# F% zSeeing the sky content with its love
0 a/ B/ K: `4 X, N* E, MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) N- V6 O; M/ HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 }0 M% e5 P) y0 \, zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 {, E6 z* M. u$ P7 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) f1 y1 Z; m( b5 y: h  TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& Q" ?# F" Y. `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) W: H6 w! X6 m* M. q. l( _0 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ Y9 h; [, K: V# f- z$ z' ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 @8 W4 W& v4 \/ K* A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, n4 Z# ]% \. _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( y( J2 W, B& h7 y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& H! x" G' M9 @2 g* s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 |( u4 U/ @: G6 I' I  g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: T( c" u" K2 j( s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( y- p% U  K" f  C- F" T  `2 Q; Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 {, l. a. X/ N2 Y- y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 c) t) S+ ^% L. ?6 P( B. ]& e<P>你无需担心</P>
& ^" h# {# V, i# q; s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% x! H! I1 B. s& G, Y) [) z0 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& f8 K. b, V' C% I  b* }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 w" I% M* h% n3 E$ {! X: [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( S# w" r+ O' {+ x- K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- w4 Y! D; y2 }* ^# l2 S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 _" c- X' A% m+ M! |4 k" ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ F3 F1 Z( A" C' T5 L* S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, \2 l" t/ w) E5 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 U- {2 J" w: G6 G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& H, W1 C5 f7 y% T& k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ |  k4 P$ l4 g2 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 n' n$ K+ P( D* |6 w" N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 ?* Y) |1 k9 @' w0 k3 S. x3 e7 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: a, D3 `2 ^+ D3 ]; F- g- v0 a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 i' ?6 i2 Y5 f1 M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 O6 k& @: j% X7 U$ K/ l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>