【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! F8 p. C- U, R: t* HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. X  G1 |  c( V2 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 ^: |- f* H+ v, M# Z2 ?# OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- o* m1 q8 c- y! s& |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 Z4 |( X, v' ^Seeing the sky content with its love
0 ~  C9 {. q& S  A  nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 }: m& z/ C. [5 T( @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 G$ r- R& t5 ~& v. d  e9 x( UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! A$ ~# I3 g6 [) Y# U1 W% _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# F1 L4 |2 q& ?5 oI’m still filled with fear
4 [7 Z& ]7 G& t  hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 }% x! [  u$ q0 cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 n. k3 h( p/ ]2 H0 oWith such a tongue as yours,
1 n: }- i! U1 {8 ~' A; t4 C6 \- E& @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 b: h* ^! ~5 z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ i( x" W3 J8 n  ?9 ?9 h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: n  B6 f/ d+ u/ z$ R/ c: _, q+ v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 F4 A& [/ i. L( ]( C( A$ Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, Z2 [2 _  L/ g4 e* }: W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" a2 S# }4 _! R& A4 z& Q* {) Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 i- p: p: @5 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' E2 C9 e* B) O% |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ S: g- v) T8 t7 B7 ~1 L6 Q) T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! K6 r3 K/ p2 p- t& C7 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 ?9 J2 G( ~$ o# `( P/ s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ y, u4 h0 t9 O; m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 s& y, T/ Y' [" G  n# M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( P: V1 C. o! r5 \3 J4 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) H$ h" f4 C: B( d' a6 |' Q* \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 [; F/ w( c( C5 B% B/ L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" L3 c( T  D! Q9 R# z" D) h2 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- E% p; Q, w6 a% @( @5 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 S  V$ z( p) X3 u0 V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" e% Z: V4 j8 _4 N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ x9 E( t1 l! R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 X; U0 K/ Z. R2 _8 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! a' X4 q7 {1 x3 i. W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 {0 k1 O" j( m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: v& d2 F: W: {! X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 F* I/ l1 L- Z6 p* _3 ^+ d, a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 v3 r( T' M# h1 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ U4 O2 c2 e1 Q) G% V8 i0 h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 f1 \3 b8 y5 [3 f, p" U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# R: A, U& Q( I0 z; [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( I% \7 t* ?2 O% \1 x6 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 m5 n+ w/ }8 ]( ^" ~0 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( q) J4 w% ~# Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 C" `2 C" P6 W! _+ c/ A9 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>