【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% W0 X$ B; K& ~0 k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" p6 r( e. I) U- H  d4 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! q6 B0 G. [7 e  _# K# \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 j% w% s6 x7 D8 b# A+ s6 CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, K: ~9 U7 Y& i+ }6 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 ?: W* Y% x  L/ e! C% I2 l3 OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: _1 s/ \) _. ?; aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 ~3 j) o# [. S8 l$ O( kI’m still filled with fear
$ h, ?6 B. f. L& N) }5 K2 Z2 tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 d* e! f6 \7 Y3 ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( Q; P4 |/ @% N" ?, PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ L1 O% J) M) J  |! A8 t3 q4 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. b; Q& B! ?3 L1 w' O* P. k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) E1 a4 s& ?5 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  Q% h; b' N: ]. r  u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 A0 B- ^, v% Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 H) t4 G2 e$ c) h5 n) L9 W8 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 Q. M- `: U2 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* z2 `' h' C! ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# e; \" S' o% {9 \* y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  z) J2 ^1 G1 p6 A3 F<P>你无需担心</P>
) k: ^" d" m8 K1 m% v2 `  S* C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& U3 G7 j5 z- t$ ~% i: |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 o0 U, D3 D# o& u8 I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# h+ e# P9 ]8 b, m2 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! @6 p/ f% u& h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& R3 X& K  j" t2 S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ q7 l( d: ^( r: E# V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 t3 \8 C8 \$ ]! Y6 _% Y( j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; X3 v/ U. ^4 R* l$ f' F$ y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# w4 v7 ?3 t: [6 f) q) t, m2 E" V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  W$ o+ ~0 C9 U) {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. w+ y# u& u' `: z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( m5 S5 [* n. m7 H$ [: D! T2 R/ g7 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 M# d! r) L! p& n/ k: r. P/ C; c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 o, ?) r8 p9 f5 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: M* t5 W: j! x3 z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, F) n7 n( Z  F/ a" w/ }2 V, }+ q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 t0 B9 B( T5 g& O3 \8 F6 i( c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>