【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ ^4 F% C% K6 g4 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
  |& g; H  ]- T8 OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ L- l5 e/ d4 F% T: JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 A, t4 e3 k* W2 |, _0 `/ |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ {" @+ i5 K, h9 P5 R+ b! e( [' ~Seeing the sky content with its love
" r7 z, s4 o8 [; J# j9 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: [2 P/ S2 B) M0 v6 L" a) |You needn’t fear anything
+ a! p+ k. r: w- n8 M* DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 y) s, {0 _: S/ R: a9 kI really want to know just how much you love me
% G; @/ _* W$ G- _( x. c* r0 oI love you I love you with all my heart
- W: w7 b3 H( f7 w# E+ KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ `0 S' D# @& V( e$ ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& Z% h; F% K6 ~! {% x$ wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ [. h, [- h% hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 F! G; f: ]' u0 n$ U' b, N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ Q( a! m- |' }6 z! j9 Y; N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 [; K( B0 z( U% O# s5 H9 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 C, w# y3 H: w7 D$ R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 }. i: T2 T1 n7 V! a6 S4 M- @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% d7 ~2 y+ y7 Z& h& L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  B  J9 o8 R0 h. |) b9 g' ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# X, H! Q1 `; T" O9 b+ p- N2 u; n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& Y; [( E3 W" O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 ^8 n, G% ~% f5 Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- Q" ^- a2 `2 w+ K/ C" d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ G9 C: W5 o& B. e  ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 b3 B9 E8 d+ m1 T. ~5 X1 Z' l  N0 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 ?. u. _: C' M/ j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 l; j% E  K- G9 z5 U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 }$ z, \* ~1 L" J% M7 f$ [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# Q6 t* w9 j( M; T+ o" V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 p9 x/ B: F5 @: ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 E" l+ X, \7 n* k6 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) w: Y7 F  L" m" j. P4 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 e8 W3 ]/ e: J" B# J: e% ?# D! H+ F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 x$ y/ m# V" t1 @0 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. L" F# j' B. G" l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 L/ p7 ~# R0 j<P>I regret not dying</P>
  K1 C7 y, ^$ q$ l% @# Z# t" g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 w! f0 k' k& ?* f4 q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 z8 E3 x3 E+ T# j5 W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) k1 p1 |: [) a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* `" |& ], r! s1 M2 @' K4 k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 Y" ]; E0 j  k8 e3 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& a, D2 R% J3 M! r8 E( [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 G4 z& W9 y, B1 b8 M我请你剖开它
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; f# ]* v; t; S7 i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>