【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 y% q1 b5 h' m8 h/ `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! p# C7 ^8 q0 b& w, Q$ `( @0 @: qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 V, }- Z, D, {. F- @8 A! f% TSeeing the sky content with its love
! D; ]" Q8 l0 p5 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) H4 R5 ]2 T. w7 fEvery other word you utter is love
+ x9 G0 ^6 }+ Y  Y0 O% q1 A& o7 sI really want to know just how much you love me
9 M4 z. \: X& Y' x/ E; J3 UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" F( k- V9 l1 k: MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 y" i! O6 ~* I, B5 g4 x2 U1 PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) {4 \, W, n' A7 LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 J! _8 x9 ~3 R, t9 mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; p9 l" e% }- ~6 w9 A. k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 O* g! {- J% l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; @  }. O! g9 v1 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 _( M, T) {1 Q  E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' [7 D1 S5 a' `0 Z5 D- w5 W+ `4 A, R8 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- [1 N; g9 S/ U9 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 j* k# h  ?. D) [& X; Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' l' U/ l, N/ C6 Z8 E; c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 Y( w: q: S7 h+ S. R4 I' l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" I/ X( T. A8 V  U* b( \9 n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. S+ T3 ~3 {8 \0 m& \+ [4 ^# [* l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' |) ~1 j, Z, e<P>你无需担心</P>
2 K* m0 f' E8 g2 N6 G5 a2 {8 M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 w: d2 }4 b5 V* D4 o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# ?1 i* x( o! Z5 V: d$ `4 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ U$ @( D- N2 R- w! v/ O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. w6 A% t- i) ~4 @/ ], R* X7 J) R, L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 `% J, O) T- R: n4 D- m! M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 Q9 D+ K- f. z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  }5 p& I: p. ^% K! ]! \& z, B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 H- w  @' a6 t9 a6 k; L2 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' x, ?* t2 Z; i8 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  G) F9 e. C& `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 f) V3 G  O" p- ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 Z# l6 S% m% \, \. D6 R% V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 M/ R( D0 y1 w, M  d+ [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( U4 J7 K7 v/ ]- O) b/ V* w0 o& ]+ A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ W7 s& ~' w) g5 b' S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' n9 p/ j9 Y& D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ a- u0 L9 E/ E$ b5 a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" O& Q; W7 A3 N' P, L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ C! Y! u) p! k- J' p' V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>