【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# k3 H9 }2 }( F5 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( E4 }' n; m& j6 T; VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 Q# i/ ~6 O& l, pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 K# [! Z: @2 U$ W7 h2 cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. C" H% \' ^" r$ uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ o$ Z! L. Z4 H7 HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& F( g, f8 `0 u9 r7 r2 h; y- hEvery other word you utter is love
  W8 |0 d- F; v/ DI really want to know just how much you love me
5 B! V$ D7 |. @  W" rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 L" c5 z  e) }0 H' ~" y+ ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 Q" Y$ c4 f* s# II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 [+ f, J; h# X6 D0 L: m9 f5 DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! y: n7 _7 _2 N, P( [: W. ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 o2 }. _) n7 V; X& W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- k& v! T: N) C5 r& x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& h6 U' g9 h, z: M, U) L9 [" L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' c2 s  q9 Y7 X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% x9 q" t. x; D" a<P>你无需担心</P>
( w1 w; P- y# L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 n# a9 K' G. \# f; A2 v9 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  w2 l2 h# F( [( Q' ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; @1 ]5 O' Y; c2 f0 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 D2 L& }: t( t0 u4 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 h+ H2 a, C7 q$ w. k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! r8 ?/ Z5 b% }3 }. W8 g1 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ L& W9 }6 n5 \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  ^0 a/ @" F) A/ S# N# ?0 g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! i7 b% f5 h' r9 R* X4 g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) [. [% k' p" J2 `" ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 F  v, k) S' [7 g% i9 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 I1 f' _* `1 A% h  g% u$ H2 b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! ]0 L) n. w! j: \5 ^9 ?+ v* a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 b/ r* U2 c( E) ]& y9 G3 S5 ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 ~% q" {8 \5 ]' _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' V( x; |6 }6 B3 Z% G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; T$ A( D2 u& d! k+ I7 d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ Q0 D" L3 H; I: W4 r) X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) S0 `9 O& q3 D8 f# m4 I. _- B; O/ q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ M% S/ V( R) u* C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>