【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, \( X" Q7 O* H5 V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 T1 K  G0 \/ }9 {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; l4 j! ?& ?; v. \9 `  o' }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* o/ v4 z! U- `5 b7 Z( rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 C# T1 P4 j: l0 t6 Q& c# J; i. sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 W6 ]) t$ q  U) y8 o, z2 fNothing can compare to my love
; c' R2 e( Q3 x& t2 t; f- b$ r; @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& A; L4 h, A* p9 x0 p+ vI regret not dying
7 \2 Q. [5 F: j! }. KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 f+ S5 M& o) w  ^% ~6 u7 {7 C8 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  Y: {% S$ N2 f4 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# A4 o0 G; H1 I# ?. y* i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 `- K7 p9 D; ]- y7 Q$ F  N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  ~' |' ~* Q! U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, \/ f3 a' F* }7 `: @* ?0 Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 @$ A4 D$ W2 e- k: i% C8 H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 m- W( W' M" P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 H6 V4 a$ M) n5 q% w3 s! u' M3 }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 P- g8 D& t3 V; {. t<P>你无需担心</P>
$ h+ f9 F" J! S5 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" `8 [: h# w7 o2 \9 k( v* ]! L& D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ]0 R: ]3 @; d; x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 e" T1 y( Z- M% R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 F+ }, K0 q. X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 m, s& W8 k7 V( z7 n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# H% K8 `- X3 K( V  W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( q6 C6 [8 p2 f7 n. V6 b& n% Q) B' R% T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; C+ _0 x$ f9 ?* }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. e4 j9 A* N8 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ b; X+ o$ U/ A* K- ]8 c* u+ q5 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: S0 j* m9 R5 K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' F- A1 o" l. k# T<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 y, e+ H4 ~  M4 j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 K8 O1 G  H* P1 n7 {% Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 h% |0 G/ P. G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! O& L& l; P# v- d9 x( _: M% p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- f; g7 y2 h. l2 x) ]% \* N: [. J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) a* w! `. J0 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# E: {$ V9 v9 T3 g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>