【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  `0 N2 ]# Q* Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ I$ l4 L0 M- w: c3 t8 S# ^! U- IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 G$ m) ~  O# N' _' RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* ?' o2 e6 h6 HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 J* J! P) o, u: ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, s' @. V$ s( b+ T( w! p2 f4 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. K7 q" `2 W! k& P+ i5 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& T5 P$ s+ s, A2 I0 G2 ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ g6 P% m( e9 E/ eI love you I love you with all my heart
: z% w0 ?" ?8 bNothing can compare to my love
  u' k# O7 V% g) o+ pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 L  L% _  }8 q. o& [/ {* }. FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 Z* B/ _9 J; v0 b  d5 qI’m still filled with fear
* ], F$ R0 h  uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, [. R3 O8 F% J9 h7 wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 z8 y( o8 X3 `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) i0 y, c% e9 Q! O, c" c; WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 d* P- o8 I$ S6 W: e$ a+ ?: jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 m. e6 I+ ~6 W+ J3 H* \. e: Q/ ^3 N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' v5 l+ F4 o0 j0 Z; S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  m; C( q+ g  s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" V9 F0 N9 j8 U, ]2 y1 O, a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( P0 ^; O$ i1 [. |7 P; L: J1 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ N7 K; s0 f' i3 S- M! {2 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 A8 `* X* g. n' z1 G, r. \9 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; k& S0 H( [! _2 m& s& y& f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' I( w2 X$ W: |: o3 g+ A/ B$ Q  e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* v0 j1 X1 i7 |+ w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) |1 Z6 y+ @/ k% [<P>你无需担心</P>
$ p# w4 b* A# t, @$ `. p% Q% J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. Q2 r4 S' r! G! [0 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 X( g2 m; {9 K$ x* ?, [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. F) K! u# H- e( r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# g" N5 m' {9 _' f2 ?% ]9 S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* A# G; T2 G: `/ Y& ~' |9 @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. a  T4 i5 X1 `' A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! v! m0 T' Q0 I% I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* u% p  [4 e+ ^  s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* M7 G/ U, B+ q' u7 Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  h  G/ [4 N2 ~5 `1 K" e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ ]+ v0 D5 D! i! N, g/ L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" [+ K( M9 u  ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) P9 J  A! }" _) K1 {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! E0 ]" c2 N$ D) a& S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 o8 S5 u) q# R; P" Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" ]0 v8 i4 B8 G4 \3 F1 S1 t9 ]" c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 F4 @% R1 K4 x0 s" U7 F( Y7 A* |# v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 d7 y: ?% q$ W. _3 Y" r' N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ g4 N6 `, N7 g1 s7 K1 l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% B% A; V! s6 V1 R6 J) E) u. v8 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  H8 Z: c. B! B; w+ q6 d我请你剖开它

0 S4 r# v8 B# {$ S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- [0 k% e" v3 g% U( H. y1 Z& Y' W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>