【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% @5 a6 P' f, |$ _+ XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. ]' |* K% l- j  Q6 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# H4 G6 Z9 S0 p; u( L2 q- ~5 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
, Y: M2 x( Z, T8 b; i6 bWith the moon kissing it every night
$ M8 z( n; c  E7 O* R5 T+ t; bSeeing the sky content with its love
: }3 l: b4 h7 R0 E* d1 \+ N! uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 `0 [; z7 q# ^& @% wI really want to know just how much you love me
% T- W/ v( X8 N/ B+ TI love you I love you with all my heart
2 n8 l# G3 f$ I$ I& V" ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ s- v' x1 C6 iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ ]8 `- @3 T6 a/ ?* ?/ R; \: `1 fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 r) ^1 O+ E; M. a% |  L; H4 vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 ^* q, ?, N9 `# ~4 O1 X2 k* v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 G0 Y, n  r7 j/ G* U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 h* l; L# r& c- T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) O2 M0 P* e: Z6 W) P$ |  M( ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 }! u3 E& R# O/ D3 v/ P, K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& O& z. y6 ~9 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* E6 _. U, x! b& S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 ]( F9 c2 D, d$ E/ ~7 L2 L1 y" C$ X# Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 D5 f- {' y* c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ d2 V" U4 X' L' I! J6 e& g- \* K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) b; @# g" g! _$ P) L) M' e  U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 T+ ]7 ^8 B% E! r) P3 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# J, [4 {! I; u7 O/ O, s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! R; L/ i8 A8 o( M# X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, d' Q0 B0 ^8 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- w# |# M1 H- ?' C+ @3 ?/ {7 {5 Q+ n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 E" v+ U* G8 _6 j. t+ S; Y$ J0 R. y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  ?" v& a1 i, X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 U3 g; C, ~( R: M( l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 Q# k0 O; _! c+ M, r1 p: F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 b5 l- f  U7 @+ O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ U& h+ \; b9 E, ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 F' V2 N0 k8 W3 |4 [- p+ ?% `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& b3 Z; t; m' x. i# H1 Q- ^+ A* H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ J; v4 L9 `1 }1 H# ~9 Z$ w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" k& o& d! X; _# h& X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ h: n+ E2 w$ L& I/ S, S4 k( T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- U5 S. m( `" x7 B& G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 Q+ b* i) S. `# |! H; y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# A' X! S# i) [; s! M: J3 {. p# i6 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 i; b' c/ e$ c) F6 c. U; j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" N9 _! t/ ?/ p3 A2 C/ y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>