【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ I, S7 P/ r6 U0 w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- `3 }4 u& W" ]2 D5 D, U( RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 n0 h4 j( S  N: R  X" ~1 KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ ~6 I; n/ }* l4 {- e4 b  U% g" E& pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 r" T1 k4 o' a4 ]0 YI really want to know just how much you love me
* {7 }8 R7 H& B# j' ^6 J* ]I love you I love you with all my heart
* [8 T- Y6 S* K" v9 U+ G2 a% I. ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ z3 S2 L6 f; ]0 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  @0 X- U& O8 [8 QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 W! L. G+ r; E8 f5 T4 o% o+ M: hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ b  p: R( s" @$ @3 k: x2 r1 wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# f8 C& X' g0 o  YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ y% f+ ?4 Q+ ~9 f* f4 w4 y; \/ I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 {6 ^( y- J. m4 C9 A6 j1 ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. @9 i3 N) B. n; V$ q+ j, B- m1 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ c( G5 ]0 {# b; d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; M6 a$ o5 y2 A+ u4 A0 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# E- [/ Y9 @3 V. N$ s" X. M3 q3 M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  z" N1 L0 r/ R4 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 _. z* t4 T( ^: Y/ l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 i# G6 p1 w  n) {( G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* f1 \9 w/ A0 G7 e8 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 b  z; K& V8 |; }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% b& {( ?6 |$ B. N- G. x5 x  [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 ]! V- d: t+ X3 N4 x1 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 V; e$ e$ A( f% W! m4 W# R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ w5 v6 i) y) J; J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 u, f( L- E2 D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 Z, w' w' x0 W  ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: K) J4 g: ~' e' B0 w( V. I& N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ u  ]* k3 r+ }0 T- q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" E! R; j" {6 o1 i3 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 a! Q3 w8 @0 |6 O3 n% z. W9 ]1 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' a' G0 g5 T( _  {: c- [( X) l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

" t" S9 x& _5 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>