【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 f* m) L# `  G5 H7 ?; i# ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, B0 u( Y1 M' I- a" {! f) GThe sky is happy down to its soul
- s# m- ^& ?9 ?/ K$ x- Q' aWith the moon kissing it every night
  r5 y- j- C! Y' L& d4 Q6 A: VSeeing the sky content with its love
% M! R$ G/ m0 h/ Q2 t* `0 ?, F  |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ O. P0 e2 `) S, AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" Y& o( E) I8 \9 M" lEvery other word you utter is love
/ i% b: F9 e: i. _6 MI really want to know just how much you love me
9 @! b& z* N3 Z4 T, c1 K5 T2 x* `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: b! J1 B' g2 h. b1 LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 C  }; r9 [5 y% L2 E( eI’m still filled with fear
5 V: n, \3 n4 E+ E/ Q* T, o& C/ c( J$ B( HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 l/ j9 w4 F% W8 L5 Z) ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  P7 d1 v9 w2 e& aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 F" w0 G. d5 _7 [# W" TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ D/ c5 l% s2 L2 g/ D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 V) G' g1 s  a1 r3 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! t2 |3 q6 D" C/ O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 t/ g8 S0 {( O& N0 L) c! \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 P; x" p$ s- p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 c; J+ k9 ?: i8 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" b. W9 z2 J# a( k  O4 `& S% [/ A" x- e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ Z+ i* l! `# p( s$ e+ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 x  {7 }0 T  t, `2 Q3 s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  [& H4 d: H/ z5 P* r- h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 Z4 R, ]; x( T' e( k5 f* v8 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 |! W6 H4 V& h6 K9 m; [4 p, B, Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  q) J- B0 u6 j4 C( g2 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 j; s6 F9 w* N0 N3 U, i' E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& l( o  f! v$ Q, e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 r4 o9 }/ ^8 V9 @# Q5 M6 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' ^7 L# {& z$ |/ m/ k. M$ k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  G) V$ T$ N+ e2 h1 @5 K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 L* e% S/ e6 f- a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ A4 u$ |, A& h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, w2 p# N- {7 ?, [: ]( N1 f& u$ Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* n$ f0 y9 J% ^+ \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. e+ Z2 h/ H* X/ ~9 v% x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ g9 C4 S% e* Y% ^! [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 z6 J: x5 d% L4 z/ R. }5 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ r9 J$ Y8 G; \, Y9 n$ h9 X, {+ A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) B( |" a' E& i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" _* }8 {3 r' n, D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>