【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, s& E6 }+ q0 b8 P: w0 c  ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; _4 i7 ~# J8 y5 t0 q# t. EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ n! V, N: `# q! u! s1 U( [4 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  a" {" R2 b3 P  T$ L3 z* vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. U1 M/ a, e" C8 S2 q! QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 Y3 `, v% u$ S, yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* _4 X  {7 b' l' ~/ a  w- VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 U, A; R0 M; D: T$ d2 n) xWith such a tongue as yours,
6 y( s; f, w0 M' \) Z( FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- x# `( l  K1 h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& T$ L7 S) a' e5 ?" ]/ z' M- W0 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 A* c3 ^& \' w, V, e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ ?* X% v" H& w$ k0 \# w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 t  y- Q1 s) m) D3 w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! r/ {$ x& E" l; X, L5 j4 B8 _' q<P>你无需担心</P>
% ?9 V  b: q1 Y8 ?$ h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ `+ X( c( [5 C* }3 V9 z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  L# D- m1 X1 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 r+ j" l) m8 Q6 u- y4 L& X) H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. q* Y/ @  N: }( ~* j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- Z$ w4 n4 g+ n- g0 }6 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* v5 ?& f4 B) q: l( G$ \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) v/ [3 w5 `' M8 ]1 m- _; x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 f& v% V/ f# }2 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% b- b0 _5 M+ X9 Y, }- S$ h0 q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. Q# J" g- Q2 ^, m' f  X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ o0 w4 j+ v1 r# Y$ l( c9 C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; ?6 u7 [# x" S) L: b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 `( ^' B+ _6 s9 Z& L2 e. R* n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: s+ W; o0 [, H! A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# E. {  C! U+ D' g- ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! |3 U  {" F& }/ g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, f7 F1 B, b8 T. f. H  y* Z$ w& F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 n7 m7 p* q( N: v$ ]9 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, k# G/ h. H1 m# i- R0 n9 W+ x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, e  |8 X- g' e0 O  l- @' {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 Y; x* B" b. d- t% d) W% V( i- Z我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 c" F; Y9 [, C$ M* m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>