【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ C. l/ o4 y2 @. e9 M9 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 ?; g) U, N, zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. J/ X! L" ]1 \6 ?# iThe sky is happy down to its soul
; z- z- R* ?0 R5 FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 Q7 Q2 X! P" B3 \& ?) sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 {' l% m) u) ?: M& zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( s5 G! J) `: J3 n. ]! KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 ^. |; c; G% p& e: l7 `2 rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; V, q) b5 z6 @, g, Z7 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* b( A4 ]/ @5 b6 q9 F+ ^0 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 a0 |$ A. v4 S! H, M' f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 `9 v/ a; f# _( J! R( d& z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. T! w( Z, s: `# H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ ?4 U- ]5 m( V2 g6 \; r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" U. J- M/ g1 S" v' \2 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ [% |3 u& ]$ o7 `  |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 A6 l* R* p" W+ m9 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 g9 [7 q* I5 ^- }, a( x3 R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 [5 O$ S& X# t5 r! ^: ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. p. E6 U9 u8 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ d* n+ U7 V/ g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; B. K% Y. S: [% [- `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# T( X/ s+ G* L. @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 A" ^! U+ R+ Y9 A/ c# B9 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! f/ R' A9 x) B, I1 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; k4 s2 N% O1 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 h9 W2 p) i- J* v( m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ \+ [! a- \+ ~; V0 \. ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 B8 d( f; K5 h. c8 f& |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# R6 e5 `6 S9 T. ^) S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; C" j* {0 G( b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* z& I8 N( B' s# ?2 o) n: E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ Y: e, ]8 v2 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) R4 c/ k1 K; P4 ^# s0 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: d2 `2 z3 s9 H3 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 u! ^! K9 I$ `! s+ B% x% @" S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

4 w5 _6 \/ Z& C3 F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>