【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ G; d1 f2 _# g6 v5 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 S3 w6 U. ~# x9 E; p! W2 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
: `1 k: r9 e; ~' ?2 o& J% nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 B# p* }$ c6 D# w$ _% H) ^; UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 y" T- P: m! X6 L  i  QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ r4 C6 P& s2 F) tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* q+ l3 g/ e1 L# ?: B; g; `) ZNothing can compare to my love
- l! r- I. _9 \6 {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' R& T! g% k) K/ y2 X" ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 [. [2 b( c* d" X! c" IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* D" F# z5 s; x( f" t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 J8 D, S' L2 i1 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! m  [/ z4 n8 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; T1 h9 t9 z# ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& A, n' W* J% m# l& m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 z+ |1 T9 y7 p& K  R4 R1 o1 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 F& c/ a  {0 J; J- v( H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) N) I' J' k% q" _# a5 v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 |/ v( a/ t5 B; [- \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ y4 j' v0 h1 G. l! t7 y' }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 O9 `8 v/ h2 }" f* d) V! _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 x6 m( t& ?: e7 I7 W7 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, O9 m; @1 q& A& x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 z2 E  I. a5 S3 S- D9 I- G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' M/ f' ~1 ?4 ~3 a1 q- s1 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; ]/ C. f+ g" i) `( l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ i/ q6 {) v2 u% Z8 E! V/ ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 N4 ]& x! F  {* w. R# _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 @3 y8 M  c  \" w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; e1 `3 X" _) g% c; @! o5 h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 @; S; {1 y2 }2 O! D$ i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. J' V+ j3 l- H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% C  Y* Y5 P  C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- w3 s, K: |! Z9 V: M, Q3 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; x& i- ?8 t3 q. h) l3 `9 ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 V& |) B" {/ x6 y2 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 ^5 K7 d: x$ E+ f+ N- o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* W/ m/ o/ A7 T0 w我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 M' Y* m1 L1 p1 O: N; ]6 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>