【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 D: g; z+ D! l7 N* @The sky is happy down to its soul
/ S8 Q+ e8 Z8 T9 ?' V3 Y. I5 ]* u6 ~With the moon kissing it every night
# ?4 F! T3 O0 WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 R& ~  a; v6 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% z/ N; j: K) i2 L' IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 h  v4 s% D" P/ B8 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' f" C1 D( c$ L8 }2 o7 y. c* G; IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 R5 R) w4 x4 V1 q% |0 L! u5 oI regret not dying
8 y4 O. j& q% z+ mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 S/ f7 Y# i3 d1 gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 i) q; V! W4 f7 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 v' i7 e! k* s* u6 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* Q) H7 P1 ~5 U8 I7 d$ x; V2 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; l3 L  I& P! e2 N1 F% S4 p& k& [$ F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 @  w6 l8 ~& _8 ]2 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 b$ o3 s% c( {: x. ~6 k  q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  s& w/ S/ m8 W  g3 F9 Z% M( \0 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, a8 c3 |2 B4 f  ^0 a/ v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- X5 ]  _( F5 @5 I) b) I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; v$ N/ c/ I0 z# t0 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, d+ w+ P7 ^* d9 d- z2 q9 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
, K: h$ J- U, z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 `4 J0 Q, i% \% C* T1 }: \  i6 ^9 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& p! q! ^. e4 f: U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- u  u( P6 c( t0 F, Z! x+ ~5 C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 L9 g" O9 Y! V, e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; v8 T" I; l6 j' ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- }# }. F9 G8 W+ u0 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 n' d1 i7 b  g1 k3 v0 S( q6 L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* f9 c3 d$ [% D- U5 I5 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 E# A* K' V/ H, ~0 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& K. p' q( P) P3 i- c% j+ |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 m' \$ I+ M2 X7 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( r- M; X6 f" o- H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) E6 z+ K' J$ T2 q# V8 c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- u0 e1 x0 ]8 O6 M" j<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 G6 ~  M/ I5 a$ D1 [) I  u0 L8 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# [0 v$ y& j9 N& g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  Q) ^1 c+ [  q; I& e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 Y, M% ^8 C# G; e6 }, C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

) S! d, `0 M8 V9 m* \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 h0 c) }( p2 a. w$ {. q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>