【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- G$ a9 s# F9 w& J3 _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& E9 M# r( |: ~, ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! [% w2 P) ]' MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ q- l2 @6 s' C( x0 @$ MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ N6 j3 ^; e8 ~5 `& m, LThe sky is happy down to its soul
* v- d9 @2 A$ R  K" c% uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; i* k" Q: c9 \0 L. r3 p0 [You needn’t fear anything
3 G3 P: r. h# C8 Z3 t. vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 k' y8 D; {6 z8 P; V; SEvery other word you utter is love
4 v3 @9 C+ i6 M3 pI really want to know just how much you love me
* F9 G$ S3 V( x! i0 E' J6 A# z( oI love you I love you with all my heart
8 e( ^2 S& q: T% A& GNothing can compare to my love
, w( A4 Y- O$ }5 w1 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# I0 z1 T: U+ {: w% uI want so much to see inside your heart
1 }" B  \, w; @6 C' a9 I3 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 p/ Q( {/ K) H1 y, QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 U: ?- }* ?2 O: J/ P3 X6 EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- d- ]/ u. j9 M" y$ e6 T0 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% z+ f( Z# @0 @  I. L' B( tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 G, F2 Y8 U" @# L& `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 Y$ S) K6 t$ ^) ~: r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: @: J' ?5 R3 b# g+ k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 W; T: u& f0 P8 c0 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 ]7 I) s& ]) N( Z) d4 _% u% t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* K9 z* _4 E. C) K6 ^# T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ P  e& V) i$ `+ F5 [3 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 v% x: }: T/ l/ ]- }% b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- t2 R  ^3 G, Z" r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( p( c2 }0 w2 b" |7 E% c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) J9 g. Z: U! }. ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. z4 z0 U3 j3 i7 w9 k( f/ F( K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% S: k$ @% h% o$ x3 y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 s& [! s  k& y) a; m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 I: J8 x! c  D- j' f+ P9 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) f  F( J' [9 a  e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ E8 I8 v$ t9 F3 E; Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, L+ o4 ~5 @, S4 I$ j3 [! y" V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 ?0 T% Q5 C1 h( g; a, o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 @% a$ ]$ i# m' l7 b# ]: f, {) [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 T, c) u) k+ J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# v' t. j0 a1 E: b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 c& K( K$ v0 q. ?+ S( w' _' A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ ]* O. m; t2 ~6 I- M, g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 y4 Y  E, Q! |! x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 Q2 }9 e" G- q3 J2 p8 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>