【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 s5 T2 e) x0 t6 t6 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  W% T3 M. G$ k8 \7 oWith the moon kissing it every night
% y) y2 X$ A6 kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" U9 B* r1 g1 ?6 z1 D; lYou needn’t fear anything
; X! H# Z  q( d  ~5 _3 r' \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 \1 j6 i! L/ P  N1 CI really want to know just how much you love me
6 \7 a5 L7 j1 B; p3 V  LI love you I love you with all my heart
8 P( E% r1 j9 M- L  s( CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 I4 Q, u1 t# ^2 @/ d7 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! V3 T% V3 w) z* eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% {: e2 B, h. s' L- k; U) l+ Y; KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* B  X$ P$ U2 `; B! |7 q8 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 r4 H( j: }, x7 L: T  TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! F: F% G8 O. A# \# |+ n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. P" k9 p" C) q, T  X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- K2 y7 s1 d% Y; q  s2 a) _) D8 I  g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& v: e5 s* M/ A# }& e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) b0 I  H6 a0 U% S& `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 C/ `7 ^: F+ m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- X& C9 K/ r8 S: q( Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 G1 f( L' |! K# l! u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* g2 ^: [& d! u+ h- L" S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 B; T* _: ]7 }1 M. y) w' _- F8 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# K# c9 X/ o2 v; X) U, e7 s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' D  b9 Y. I- ]& W, F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 T" U0 P  q$ J& T* {* Y1 a* }# G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 g# ]. W, [" J* }- T4 Y* A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 ^4 M( Q* t: U& `: ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 L' v& L- E- N& r/ \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 D) G% K# w+ I9 n  U- e6 }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 a, F. m* \6 ]- l- B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- P' h& D  Q" K  F* r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) m$ W% [, G% F4 n5 w' X' L8 N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 ~' m6 ]6 `1 [, G+ u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 V7 [+ o! h* z1 c" M$ ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" f, O( @: c; `) b! e/ x8 X) i. z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 P9 n5 h! s+ h( p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 u4 n& I1 f) A6 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 n* m1 R! ?9 K% ~9 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: k. N6 m! W$ M% q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>