【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* ?* D2 x1 _  m- v7 v8 Q8 O0 EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* C6 ?$ I# T) R! B' q# R  D9 OWith the moon kissing it every night
' n/ W/ c+ Y' @  h) |" f' uSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% o( o/ V7 J' [& ]/ C+ x5 RYou needn’t fear anything
0 F3 U- a% v$ a# w7 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% Y) v  K% Y# D- p3 CI really want to know just how much you love me
2 R4 p0 e  Y) ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ O- o8 R% l. A* f8 W1 {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. `" a7 ?1 S2 o, Y- D; Q* b6 _4 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 v" G& Y. g% YI regret not dying
& u5 s# r8 w+ C. G: R# XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" ~7 Y7 A( D& U) Z# V7 n5 jWith such a tongue as yours,
% j# ?5 U4 B% N5 L% Q, YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& ?; G/ C9 }/ p7 ^$ F6 Q" PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 y  G$ v" n- A8 G% F* ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* F7 z- Q* z, w8 w7 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 O4 D$ |! W# ^/ r0 ]& B; C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  _' F1 }0 C2 B( [- m, y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 O0 a$ l6 n6 f4 V, v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 W7 W; D/ _0 M7 A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ J$ {8 [% H% `; Y7 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' `# E; b+ l: g! O/ o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% I. y1 e* M& B$ \  h/ N" j<P>你无需担心</P>
) _9 x8 B* U& \3 `1 I/ g7 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- I! n6 C4 ^1 l3 ]& C' A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ H' r; H1 h& v: H7 P# r2 o7 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 s; j3 Q* K$ ?8 J! f/ K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- Y" X1 _" Z+ e& J3 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ f8 @; i' H- D1 ^( I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, [* r& N: s0 T8 x7 o1 i- t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 ^# _0 _) R  N2 T7 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 ~4 x- ~& ^; j5 P- I& x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* r' u; a/ v$ L  i, V9 T( @% z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ \/ I! D- i, ^. n( e/ p6 c7 n3 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) s2 g' R) B) |7 w9 g' x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( \0 n; X: n% P2 S- x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; n  D/ m, v" q  Y8 b6 f& a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, I$ |7 q+ v9 [5 M4 R$ L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

: y/ D) l3 k; h& z( e5 X! X5 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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