【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 Z) b1 O$ |! t  `歌词我附在后面。
% Y4 R4 k' t; y3 F7 Y$ U, c+ ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# L3 ]( c; q6 `, `- \! mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' |" @8 @# [" r; M) LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) G( Y( ]% }! TEvery other word you utter is love
8 y/ x1 o. H0 C* I6 C6 z$ oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! Y* P, n/ w% \2 bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' ~; X& t8 ]: l+ BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& l% k' \) @1 JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 J5 m' T4 G3 |9 u4 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! b# k, U5 |& a2 SI regret not dying
( D+ F) y: t' Z7 K% g7 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  T, ~6 `' x8 n. tWith such a tongue as yours,
: v. o& r9 |1 wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 |) `& Q, w# |5 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 B3 R. Y4 f3 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  G* S4 l# j% v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 a3 Q8 r. K( w" U& p" t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 _0 N. |, L; O* ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, q+ U; s  y) ^) q! x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* K7 y. q0 f3 t9 K7 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: m/ g* Q. |8 f( A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 W# j8 v# a8 D  C' u+ M+ M8 R( ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 [8 N& \- s/ ~, Z1 T( o4 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: |1 C8 @: S  T& f  d1 q# [, J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' I! x9 z/ a, X. q( q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; R! `4 z# z$ _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, v: S! l" g8 p5 N, s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& e3 M5 G! I0 e1 x9 ]- R$ S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; I  x  C- ^3 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( ?. }3 F3 g' J0 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" |. a2 Q7 U! Z0 X5 Q- Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ e; W5 \7 p# S  }4 V( U3 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 G* o+ Q& }# s) ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 M+ W3 s- K% d2 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) a* c* w( g/ Q3 ?- a) Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ _4 g! U: R5 i8 p! X' |9 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' ~# y; D, X# D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- N3 r$ N# r# R6 `+ U5 O$ u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 b% A2 ?! s% B8 e7 w& a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) z# y. t9 I# H: X, w4 P4 ~5 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>