【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 `) c. x. b( q2 {7 @歌词我附在后面。
- k) C" i1 ^- e1 R+ PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ }: h; K7 N' d0 \& jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" X4 K8 s; l; L% E' z* PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& y; K( ^3 ]& ^& DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ J3 ~# g' @3 VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# a' G- d6 Z. B) HI really want to know just how much you love me
0 \6 I' J4 y! e4 mI love you I love you with all my heart
/ w7 p/ ]5 y9 u3 O' E/ F7 MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) Z  U- F: z3 L/ ^+ T* ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  Z% s: p+ `- |/ d' ~# ?  S, g/ sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ Z# ^( \/ [% w  n) ~1 A( d, cI’m still filled with fear
" W8 o1 R: R7 w: ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ C2 y3 q9 i! II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 i1 o6 W% u! J* ^& ~4 yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 t4 u6 ]2 U  \8 L$ gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: W& w/ X, v$ O  R* Z+ `. ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ R; a5 D* s/ ?: g3 _6 L* u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 U4 L' C& u# L1 A- J$ W! x) e. r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! Y4 O# ~0 o& m) J; M( g8 `5 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 [- j, C' U/ d3 {- p0 |. M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! [' @" W9 f  \3 d/ M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' I: |) a7 F- Q5 k+ w+ {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% X: C3 B1 q; m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& ]7 k7 w3 b9 D6 @/ q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 f- K/ ?9 y" w0 j& F5 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
7 w$ i$ s! X5 Q# p9 G/ q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ Q" _* \3 a, }$ \: z- i2 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 L: z3 e2 ?0 p4 ^4 N$ f1 o( @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- ]8 M. o& u" }3 ^, B( }" `* Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) z& q3 _  P0 E% h) {4 Z; [3 H! G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 r; ]" ^& |2 R' N2 A  n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. N4 V5 R3 |# i9 N9 v1 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 n. Z& d, @. I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 d& f' o9 t) a7 K% c- K, r! O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 o7 I; B0 k- e1 |# B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& N" Q( X! Q9 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ T7 i  D* @8 W; a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 b5 w& }. h8 e8 v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 z! h/ P0 X, H, A8 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* O  k/ h0 ]4 p& V! s) X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! D2 n7 {& G3 k$ M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& q) r" p2 X( q* p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* l2 N) h4 l* p1 T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 E( q4 y& b& E" n& T$ U% {2 T$ G- f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 i' _( [8 a" a2 }: Z9 L9 j我请你剖开它

1 ?3 n" Y  E/ v2 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>