【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
( O" B& q% L3 o) VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 P( q* C! m3 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. e5 F- P$ b! A8 X) \% kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 f4 c; l; I7 d, GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& ~7 `, S2 G! ?: mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  r, y4 V9 m6 @+ r$ I" x) |1 CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ [+ E- U) {5 d4 g$ MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% v$ {# R) z9 uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 N/ i8 R  I% W! C  jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) m9 x- O: J) ]" Y$ R8 G. x: [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ c/ M0 e$ U* f. n: a  J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 O" s7 H7 m( w$ u. n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 w# I; I1 R  b0 q+ O2 a8 |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- v/ K7 x1 q5 Q0 D6 I<P>你无需担心</P>
7 M/ P: d6 X  u) x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% b. Y( M/ J9 V$ f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 I; M% Z4 m: c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, f* n' @& ]' }9 \" n" u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 }* G4 r6 H2 H" G4 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* R) z7 F# g* W; w, G0 {: |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' @/ X! L  d1 N- |# U7 Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 I( D: q7 }" ^0 N% v, h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* b2 e) y4 D* b4 J. I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 _* }7 M+ c* V( f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 s! a; R& ^9 e+ L1 C# V1 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, v, T+ j' ~; C8 D- c; h) K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 Y& x2 J0 t% ^, o, C1 V; ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; l& ~( j$ R0 d# m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& S! i  s" H7 `' B8 a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* ?& n6 Y4 R8 O8 U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 r7 N1 u) ^1 L, m我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>