【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ F& c3 }* c& c' F4 eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- A7 U4 C5 G( D( e: }9 e) FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; X9 T3 j  ]" b' a# L$ D+ HSeeing the sky content with its love
0 k- W7 l4 b2 K  d0 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' u/ E: Q- i$ T1 I, {# c7 g% bYou needn’t fear anything
% s2 {( @* X- v2 j/ K/ Z5 T, sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 q8 N+ K2 {) ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- U: T5 Z: m2 ]0 C5 n* m& HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  X$ r, ]8 q3 {6 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ c( ]# s5 K# s. {9 VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ i; }8 y( g! Y6 ]  J6 Z3 A" rI’m still filled with fear
8 j% N/ U6 a/ C1 E% F$ JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 L* X; z* s- f0 ^  _, ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ E1 }$ K' C7 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  |* h8 F; Y. n( ~; g, FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& k' o, `% |! l5 @! x( r. b5 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& E5 J+ l; c& W! V" }( \0 D% z, w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; V% X0 M7 h% a, x' g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ F# {1 n; H2 p& _+ z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 ]6 E0 Z! `8 D7 w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* p' P( O- ]5 J8 {7 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# w( ?/ e9 G0 U) s4 E9 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: Q! ]; @1 d% _$ c" f! h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# B. [- N* D7 m, k- W3 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ \& O: @' ^1 @3 X: r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 I4 K3 H+ y' `; h+ F7 L3 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
/ A- J- ?' e6 a& X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 q$ W3 @$ Q$ Q! P8 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. \2 n" W. O; Z/ f/ t5 I4 U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% u* m  L! M& W' b, d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& B& V/ ~1 n& _; O/ l( {; t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 t$ j1 h. ]0 K& c  s# X' b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 W6 D+ A. t/ I. x* D1 G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! V5 c6 p2 E, Z* q: I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 G5 l: g  A9 }& f5 V3 E( ]" r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% C& n( h3 B0 Y/ @; B: P$ s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* M; h, a; Q# W* h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 \/ u$ \% J6 Y7 p, J. g6 q% c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; f; c7 y/ b7 ^9 N$ z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* s7 z" c8 I: ~" S5 l* p7 u; Y6 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ H/ I' a3 s1 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 a2 Y# x2 @8 ]! B0 l" P6 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 O( c& i6 U2 s5 k6 `* J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# X8 t0 h4 m/ z/ c9 i  c1 ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 u# C; d" k2 {9 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>