【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 C8 e8 C8 \3 T- J6 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# j, j8 D) ]% }* FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 n: f5 K" }6 D7 o3 @; d0 fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; x# H$ V1 ~7 B5 h% k% X4 f7 t: uYou needn’t fear anything
$ q( G5 P7 ?7 A' I; PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! v9 s+ ]) y. `+ P- u8 t/ @3 |# [. x) sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ l% Z, ]) K9 v: _# i% Q8 V) xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" N" g3 n+ m3 d" SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 |$ u. ^! z8 s$ qI want so much to see inside your heart
$ b6 X  N( Y8 m3 g" f8 d/ c  mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 |2 A# [/ S4 DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: [1 @. k* `/ i" sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' i3 h4 L: ]2 J1 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. I1 ~: D2 G7 _) N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( Y; j2 d$ A$ x' w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 v; H- q+ h! N0 w& ]; l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ y5 J" p& _6 V7 [: o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ c+ v& K5 U* m0 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 f% s  G# L, A+ e& A- Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: D3 F# d# O8 B1 g% T  V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* E5 M' i) w: F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' n! u1 B1 L6 @: o; ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! S5 E7 y! a. W: m' m2 D; ~3 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" t2 t- M' S3 B# R2 q; _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' e1 d1 M1 T, K: s$ ~, T. I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% c8 y* Y) M. `9 n0 f" d% D' G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ y6 g$ |5 J9 u, L- _4 K1 k/ I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: H3 ^2 s+ Q8 r3 v+ L, j& |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 `) i7 K" i2 i# y) [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 X1 g5 v7 ^9 i+ V9 {$ [7 L# f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) n1 z% [; ]+ v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% Q- @0 i7 C1 e5 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ B& z* X# x/ M; W, {9 f  k- q9 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& U4 t1 `* l! m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( T. N$ J8 A+ L9 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 J+ N* u  O4 b5 G" U5 E0 I4 J) ]* g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! o- y7 p+ Y* B+ m% m2 ~# @4 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ G" P* W5 g% f6 E; [# N* G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 V9 ]+ Q* _1 p7 k6 Q* f' `1 C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 N5 p/ E( U" L8 W8 G) U我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ Y2 Y6 c' s' z' d0 N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>