【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' ?/ F3 S: y% H- v: [. k. UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 y; t8 J7 m- i5 F9 Q4 S4 w; p6 }* I- gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' A& b+ G3 T! V8 E9 b2 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 ^" H0 a3 G5 Y& @4 Q; @: T, T. V6 wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 F8 ^; H3 M  @: a3 ^  {Every other word you utter is love
+ W2 c% e, \( F) a) TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 w( i$ \7 t3 SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; v- j1 e  u+ c  ~" b! f3 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 |" G2 x  N6 z" lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( _: W( e& g0 I0 B" b. {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 U* e. N+ {% T2 {9 z1 x' G" zI regret not dying
1 Y. v: q* E0 y' g% i, a; B, UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 H9 Q7 s* D' b/ m+ HWith such a tongue as yours,
) C3 g0 k2 l2 `) W4 ?: S0 s2 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ D/ j5 l4 k# N+ N7 i( O. cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: u8 X6 w, u4 f2 C5 }3 @4 u9 z& ]% Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! e$ Y" e4 V2 l: X% r. I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% l* `8 G: u' n' g4 c% z/ e9 P: Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ F( D: o" [' t2 n4 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) o3 R9 N7 U6 \  W' ^# s! X$ L- S2 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( V* x" F2 a; m- j1 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ S8 ]1 E( G. K8 Q  ?& V- K: `8 T<P>你无需担心</P>
1 Y+ g, l, z9 e  J) X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ V; V* H  I: R* b$ Q, A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" H* m/ U% J; g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 l' c# L5 R! A& H% p# f; z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* C, A/ G' ?( b- f  C6 w9 f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 j' a/ M5 ^4 L; r% {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 c3 {8 P, q9 y6 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" |, y3 L6 I5 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" X, L2 L& G7 W4 m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" r& V) e5 x# B% ?3 y5 j7 X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 `6 b5 G& S8 ?9 q" [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( Q: m# ~3 |9 Z" v1 _! U3 R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 B2 ~) Z: r: D: A* ^" W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 h9 |- T9 F. w* r- r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 y6 g4 _: m+ d8 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ P1 w0 }" `( `( \' o2 @1 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 E- h1 ?' l% l5 a我请你剖开它
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  S4 T! ^" I* I! I* J1 X* P. C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>