【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 ?8 [* j, |; i; T$ O# }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 ]) n# _  x3 Y* p( @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 Q& @2 @9 ?6 c: mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ n2 ~) ^- {( G  mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! M! d! ]' [' fI really want to know just how much you love me
8 S5 Z) [1 q. w$ vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) c5 ~  l. E" @. {3 K% nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' Q# B: q* S9 c9 E. Y6 U6 {1 E0 z. eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: T2 Q/ ^/ S4 A5 T. X6 @) \, Y- A4 XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 \8 \/ g6 t$ w! bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ ]/ w% j7 A' ]# J9 FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& u( v8 Z( z: @& S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 c, q) u- P: |$ n+ s# v# }* B& j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 q2 t1 s4 I! x' U- k* r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! n4 P! c5 S) J$ e4 G! M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' B" M+ U1 R: o+ H! f- ~; @4 q) K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- G0 r1 ]8 x+ F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 P% p6 N" C3 A, g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 G+ l( f' N  g; A' Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% o( }( b/ O% u<P>你无需担心</P>
6 k) v+ m* d/ w8 A9 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 \* T3 U2 S7 n% v' b4 L/ X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ P6 U: Q5 \/ K4 l6 m6 ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; a' V" X. Q/ V2 K% b0 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( H/ V3 k  N' M5 g; Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ p4 s+ W/ g6 c! T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* j/ {1 P5 N* t8 [. h: V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" Y7 R4 i; ^+ D2 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, j/ E, I8 Q6 D! }- s) v1 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 Q0 ?3 Y- O  I" @# T- O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% s9 x2 y' h; f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% d/ J4 t$ \; o+ U, l" v<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 M+ ^/ h' G+ c0 O* a9 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# i: _" j* L$ X  ?6 \* T) O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ z. R9 ?$ x' S$ _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 \+ E7 i1 K7 b5 k0 [7 g) ]$ A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 z- p0 i9 E  Q, G8 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% `! f0 o; M2 s) x# G; i) g# ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; l' l& l6 b5 f9 k1 W4 K0 e+ w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; |* H" ^$ Z/ f- {# Q* d, ?% i3 f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

% w+ ~! M: K8 w1 F# g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>