【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 ~; v" [" _+ b$ I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 Y: L8 d3 N5 q: M1 ^3 E. a( |& GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 ?+ d- B. y' Q3 }4 e! G; WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ P$ x1 X" }8 sThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 E/ ^7 h( n* M* WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' k- L0 F) M  Q' t; kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& _% n5 Y, s! P/ GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) b3 L, q9 w+ ?9 r4 {. @* m$ lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( \$ ]1 c9 ]9 ~# n; r/ {% ^0 cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ F; V2 j6 Z6 X- w, YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, O# b, s  V" ~4 @I regret not dying
; k9 i& C, O/ k* A/ j* |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 I- P! K/ i  ?9 g# @5 m8 ?8 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# x& P9 |, n! g) \" \- B/ h4 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) q2 ~) r. \8 v( h% s8 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 O9 I( |( a% @: S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 x2 a, Q( V+ R/ P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 V( ~2 x* u, j3 e8 [9 \! B( u! Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" N6 r3 a  O9 n8 y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  |& c; j( u1 M6 a# x2 l- N; N4 O7 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 R/ S0 P6 V; v2 ?2 c- K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) b% i/ k, Y/ C7 {( G' R  |" ]0 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 O$ n# f- c+ P( Z! f8 _5 W+ R, h$ w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 T. \1 e. T/ O6 f0 n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# f" n) v5 X2 s/ L# `% Q' [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' ^; k% z, T% l1 J) L1 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, K5 s: q8 x' d! b7 R; L; g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ f& P: G  ]" [3 D; C' T  s& U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 @+ g! X& |$ H, ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, M1 y3 r; P1 S/ L4 L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 B8 [& L& I$ D: ^+ {0 b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( N' N* v9 n7 H) }4 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ V- o1 ~+ F/ V3 `$ w. V) s+ t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  S) U4 W$ O+ w: A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) b' h1 [) b% L5 e4 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; B5 C' x$ S8 b8 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 m0 W8 l  W  q! s. E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 J# w; n  {% Z- k( O3 {( d  ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" r, d- B/ g8 }* h# u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, M7 _+ }1 q+ w& K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 a- g$ b0 J* G6 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, o4 h& ^9 s) c  L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>