【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% m0 ]/ J5 q: T8 \, F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! [5 P9 `7 H7 j- m4 H( Z$ BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 I. l4 ~* S& G: RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ K" t5 u2 n4 [  N% l( f2 P$ RThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ v% A) _$ U" u; @! d" lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 i: ~" H* Y! W" VEvery other word you utter is love
. {' H5 k# B- d3 `I really want to know just how much you love me
) Y7 J6 w2 A* ~- F) oI love you I love you with all my heart
7 s# o) Q2 S: r- k9 DNothing can compare to my love
" I' `; E$ D$ N! F% r0 m. iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 E$ y( F; I. c, c1 l1 p9 Z4 c+ }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, q! p8 a1 \! ^; w( n# {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 K" ?* H. S- y6 @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ Z# n: D- C5 U5 ~" e7 J6 c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) w+ {' N' |% m8 N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ D' P, Z. W- T% G5 i0 ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) Y6 \% P. n, m) H% y, {( u  B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 _) D8 O. J# M$ h6 X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 n5 `, @# E$ F; a; ~) x4 J# q9 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; a; H/ ?. {" P1 B; k% U' C' b8 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' G' d! N, u- w. B' S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 v+ T. F: F. r4 i/ M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ Z# m& C* y# o! U% |$ V# R8 J: Y& i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; \8 l% Z% [# _# B9 S5 N3 l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 |! X  ?6 x# ?/ Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 O$ G3 p$ u; A. _5 j1 l: {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& Q5 J$ S& C9 V5 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 W5 n: O2 v7 v  z( s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& h' N& H* j" D: e- S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# C" [! j- O4 x+ i2 O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. C* h6 s3 v! a* Y1 i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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# l; S. W5 ]) [- H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' R  r3 h7 Y# I; E  R5 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( a: n7 z2 X1 g6 h' W! V% d- |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& ]6 W* B- ]4 G9 J! O  g; |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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$ V8 l" t( Z( ~- T# g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>