【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* O, r% K+ B8 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ H# C: E2 a; }; B' fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 u+ ?" @- B* K- k2 H0 W; {6 bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 }4 R3 [8 D' o1 r/ p+ }3 i6 [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' d- f. U4 E0 N/ A1 c9 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 m7 i# q8 ^7 O+ i% p$ U. y2 N/ u7 TI want so much to see inside your heart
0 O$ N2 H2 v$ h9 t$ jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& Z, S, Z% K0 W5 ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 N3 R! C5 @) a' B8 K4 vI regret not dying
/ |! d- l7 N0 K& U' GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 {$ u% z( ]* v% c: F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 M9 Y  R- Z: @4 y3 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) m9 H3 @3 r# z) c4 t" P, G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 k4 I) Y$ f2 u' Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ ^* }: t$ j& K3 ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 I- K6 s8 ~( P6 s, J& Q. }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 o6 ]1 I; S$ u; C: B) @. R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* q, `6 Z2 f  N9 T% {8 `2 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& _$ Q5 U& N7 K  _/ }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 A, K3 q/ J) ?6 n& @3 x( u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ s( k5 p& N* x. J& K6 r& }  |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; o' p. T( X$ V/ r% A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 Q. j4 y! d( B* J+ p/ N" M: y6 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* J4 R% n- x0 }) _# o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- B0 I8 d& N  }. ~3 k# W( P$ N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! T+ V/ Y3 e+ T$ e1 V  k- q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 @; q( v7 F# b; v6 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 O( N" S0 U- F' |* Z4 A; o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  O% V6 S8 E7 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 H- n9 w8 q; ?2 {0 w) R9 k  ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 P+ F5 B; ?9 |% ?( w" g. `+ u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, e9 Z7 l3 f4 R+ z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% p. l0 G0 Q5 W" {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( _; V6 p- x, Y* F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 K6 ?# n) N  y8 b% K* E# w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ T! ~& Q! W* q: K# q/ V0 y; L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- {  j4 c- ?5 ^1 q% I2 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 P5 B) |- y8 `6 Z( r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) L1 t, ~5 ?( Z( b9 j% z8 i9 ]& u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 G6 E* A' c6 P. h2 r3 p# M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ w6 @5 M0 g6 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 M9 U+ X. O+ M9 f$ U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% Q+ w: M) V: K5 c, q( b8 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 ~  e0 w! Y8 k$ J; L" e/ l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! D8 T: B: M, ~. W* q* a( l9 H# d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>