【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ ^* u% l6 |1 ~1 T" T- t; C9 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. }: i) t, V/ W: e% Z: K9 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. p6 D% p+ R( k1 i% u0 |! K: ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" p: a5 P4 p) Z# _$ a& rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- A" @. |6 e1 U! ~; {  SI love you I love you with all my heart
7 j' x, u+ Y  FNothing can compare to my love
; {& \. O2 S. FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 C0 e/ ^- Y2 p( [  `& E" w8 U) U. gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* G/ H+ b8 v  T0 }/ xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 A8 i3 M% [% W- G$ l- W! \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" j! \, J% A1 I7 l. \* h9 f* fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" K3 k# n& L6 I( l+ I- l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( _) j, u3 W; {# ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 `( p' W/ H0 k: e1 p+ h4 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: b! L. z0 C0 o/ q  q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" Y; ~8 B6 Y. e6 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- M) T7 Z/ w  D4 B6 E5 M/ u7 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 I' I, Z! p  n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 w* S. Z! V9 X, l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) I0 `; Q7 e, K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 I2 j1 K; F! J0 j" B4 ^( W* \  d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- r+ i2 G) x- i, S+ N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 I% n: @; B% m" Q: t" }% o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' \$ A/ V& u" [' N: q) l! r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" `, z- M* W# x" y; j8 o6 R/ D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. T/ a" u6 o2 v4 c  f' g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 u; Z# _# G* k# r: g+ W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) F) l" P  E' e2 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 Z" ^% |2 L6 ~/ W' r. l" ?2 X: i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 G7 g, c$ G9 k/ s+ s% y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( O* v" f& ^! [# D6 L+ ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 B4 n8 w' V, E* T1 B; ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; a# N3 b  j* G) g" r/ k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: Z$ L' b% I9 i5 l! `% N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ t: x3 A+ n7 l+ E: M; J<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 M! }/ v% I- G! o  ~, N) z( s9 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* T. w- f: [2 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" T7 \+ c( X7 Y/ @7 z! J7 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: _2 U6 ]4 Y+ T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 c+ j# N& p# g0 q! {/ b+ H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! k* {7 ~) [% z% l. [( `. G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ ^- x+ h+ s, @& M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 h' D! T& ^9 w/ {) U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! X8 F9 J# \; I6 c我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 O8 O+ i! \) N4 q3 Y! d' a  w7 q6 p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>