【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. ^2 r& j5 G5 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' H9 v" H! z( D) X  `+ {# d/ MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* W2 ]$ \0 M; A: R5 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, p/ I! h. S5 T! ]3 P( M) ySeeing the sky content with its love
5 L, q7 p. q3 E+ ^5 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 |1 y/ N6 R( B: D2 y' ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 F0 f: |. I1 H/ }5 XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& d( n- ?; y# J) }0 U3 MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 y9 A( Y7 X; oI want so much to see inside your heart
1 ?+ S& Q0 T: k- a) l1 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' K; d+ ?0 o  ]I’m still filled with fear
7 r2 S" }7 z0 O. M4 W( j+ G+ B$ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 `& _- O: j9 g/ |' \. ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 t6 J$ A& R' _4 f0 C" NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ F& ~* o  m5 a6 S4 a/ G) Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% c, D, u" g5 G7 V+ t6 L0 l" \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 e, f! J+ I( D( ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; e3 A, P% \: ]8 t% W$ \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' O' @1 b3 z/ t& {8 z4 y# p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! T+ P4 l" E4 [6 E. e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ |/ y; {% x; ^, v  w  _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ a' d, F# r% D, l: D9 b$ j: r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" P- g! j! t' g& f) G  u5 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* N2 G# y0 U: t8 v. p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: b/ R( {' L/ F: W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 ^' n! f; x8 W8 q* j+ i: j: `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 v- v4 r3 D, T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 `' D$ [: i& L4 [3 k" n1 k( X* o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. d( p9 |- m8 }) ?5 m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  e% Z2 F; k- f( v5 A: B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 ^( n) C' `( H5 d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 T" u: l4 E0 R0 Q3 s% [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! R; |$ S- w7 E: Y1 c& ]+ r8 Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: t$ d! Q" T6 D" K- `8 x! k! K+ n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ J7 V8 o  }* \2 c; N<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 T# x' E- N8 O5 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% i7 D) ~/ U  P& t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 Q; S! k% @0 b# H7 M7 H2 M' o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ b7 H: N! x: D# H$ {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 L& U& `$ I0 k1 Z' y8 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ a  G' H) c; U+ e* m4 z- w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 Q" b! I; a# A: f我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>