【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 |, a$ R4 l: u  g歌词我附在后面。
3 R/ M$ W7 j! A4 F' rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ ?- q7 C$ P: R! OThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 a/ C/ I5 t5 [7 U1 `8 m+ b( dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 N! R. E& ?% @I really want to know just how much you love me
7 u' c" `- v, v2 j1 ~0 l; V) [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# ~  B8 O7 p3 S( oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! {$ P0 i0 l2 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, f) N: Q6 e- s5 @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 a" ^+ L3 `. E7 H' NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 T$ A9 v$ k9 e! ~- h3 S- L# u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: j  u5 f5 ^7 f, Q7 y- D4 ~6 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 @- N+ A; F1 o4 _! ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% }' T) V' g& j3 u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. N" h/ ~; y0 n  O# w& k6 ]. L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, b7 x/ E* _2 U3 U' @/ }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  T5 E/ ^; Z! G1 v. w( R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 n( C/ b; F1 S0 V) v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" {& c; l* E6 O3 }- D7 D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( ^* G( ~5 j) Y2 }& i3 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 B1 A5 _7 b/ h5 o2 x1 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 j$ A2 Z5 o5 }/ I( O) Y  H* Q; }7 \# ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 h; @! @8 l0 o8 e# |  j8 G4 m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! |+ n8 S( h! G+ l6 J5 u6 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; V6 L' M& c# m% n) {/ `8 E, g: n" _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 ~, i5 T7 X  @  W* ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 b- g1 {' u9 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 v7 Q- F4 i. [  E  V% \7 s' x+ u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; k# x( j2 l- r- W6 V/ |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: O: e2 b) x4 r$ q6 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 Y, `% y' ]- i0 n! u) Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 @( L' L/ j' Q4 `8 l4 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- P( o0 N- W# F* A7 ?  c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 G' N6 n1 w2 U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 S/ l  O) m' r) N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( N: P1 s' v/ V* O4 V6 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  l& B8 o4 x# L& [9 N, W/ g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# [0 V# m$ y% g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 ]5 R" q: ?) ?9 Z( M" J7 P我请你剖开它

" Y0 H' H6 m2 c$ m0 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) T/ Y- {- B4 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>