【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 N. R$ k& t7 h/ j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) N3 F# {5 h9 z2 u6 U. ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& `, `' E  l: g1 g9 N1 J& `5 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( c( i4 }( ]' c; i2 P! `( S- ~5 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ Y1 ^% {8 w1 \' `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 q+ B( p9 Z: v- \! ^) j/ }6 GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ L) C# u. }9 o3 i9 B& ]+ SI love you I love you with all my heart
, W% I8 M- U1 T4 BNothing can compare to my love
! s% d7 g& ]8 T; v( i3 Z; c1 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- J" ]$ E" {( V8 u/ C  SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 Q! ]7 B3 y4 @. f1 [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- @1 Q. ]* w5 ]1 ~, zI regret not dying
# x3 Z$ V4 v" d( }3 p# jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 o' x4 }$ P- E' f+ GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* s. Z7 z# O/ y1 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. v, @& Z5 K, P  {: X3 b5 X5 P+ D8 Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# |5 G; j9 e4 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; ~/ j' q" j0 U, i& A0 S6 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) Y7 ]" H) B2 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: i7 _7 l' j. @$ n1 [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' W. q0 z% W3 e# G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. g& M! \6 W4 p8 K8 c  i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" Z: ?/ l$ o) N$ `$ W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( d  K6 ?: ?" c1 M7 K: P<P>你无需担心</P>
) b( ^- f. B+ x' E7 ?/ @7 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 I3 X/ n2 `- y$ f2 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 |/ G; d- f7 i7 D" H4 a. D8 T. b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 `* m4 r7 _' n# g& @) ]9 U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 N/ O" h" B; A9 R$ M  c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" u- v8 l9 r6 [7 t9 a4 c8 h' X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: q8 X) S; f( Y1 l: @: k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 Y1 L9 W6 M. g1 X. E1 i0 I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- X" l8 W6 G5 h7 S: H4 s3 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( ?/ `6 G3 S( v3 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  A% d* N1 `3 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ y3 R; D2 T# V* ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ |& E1 F- R* |3 n* k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ U7 r8 P- w7 I" }& S$ Q! I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& a! j! r3 r7 E  ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% B$ I' \9 R# ^$ K7 I3 K+ I. e  S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 P5 N" V9 _* e( |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 s6 N$ a4 J2 x! ]( d( F8 B2 w+ o& A5 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  ]* E% y1 u6 \4 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ N" \# N, t9 |- o' U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 w3 Z7 ^$ p  f4 w4 o! z. E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 ^/ k! v6 R/ A# U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: d3 w4 v2 q: k' m, m% A我请你剖开它

; m0 [1 s  D1 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- A6 g! O& ?5 C; `& F1 I3 `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>