【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 E& A9 K- Z% }6 q* hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- [! Y  s; s3 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- A) s' S! o/ X5 Z* h. F0 v$ H5 B" tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ T. R) D1 A$ \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 S( i) @7 k0 V- b; bThe sky is happy down to its soul
! S7 P( [3 |# |# V. XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: ]: R3 r/ N' M- \4 z4 dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 q1 o% z& c' u: Z: SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 E4 a& }8 ?! B/ T) y: FI love you I love you with all my heart
+ b# ~5 C: q, T  \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 N/ w4 ^7 F0 z% u* n6 J0 sI want so much to see inside your heart
' T/ ?. s4 T. l( ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 g# v) A0 [" I' v1 qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* U6 Q! v" m) j0 ^' P# N) BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 H. }$ d( A7 f1 D! Q" e2 u9 ^# R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 G- J& U$ l3 e% ?5 Q! t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' Q% p; K; Z" V" {& F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 n! K. y9 a! y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 m+ v7 n# S) I# D7 v# d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, x8 l8 f" l$ z/ `9 L. C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; W2 s2 n& o9 Z9 M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ T: {& y" ?5 j4 Z  j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% e, z8 g" a: a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 ]6 _, l3 T; V7 k<P>你无需担心</P>
+ V; Z* u7 I% s2 u+ q+ ?0 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 ~4 a, d3 b$ p# r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 ?, ]4 N* n/ K) V& L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 I  l4 S( p) l7 N" y- B! E0 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! l  `4 P- h; ^: I7 X9 d0 f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) M9 e- ]8 c% N. S' H+ q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ t2 }4 I/ Y9 B' Z1 z+ K1 `3 C5 k4 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% a7 t3 G4 Q# Z% ~3 E5 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 }+ x1 c6 r: n" C5 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* B3 z1 D1 P7 w) u/ n+ W  i6 M! ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& O- X/ |  A- f) h' k3 t" F( f( y- L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ h2 w2 l/ N2 N( _- m4 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: ~- _* t& S6 O7 e% F" o0 i+ W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! Z0 q& ~! b. @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& Q( W7 |; A# c% z0 y) n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 z/ j4 [; @! j5 e' T- ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- }6 @3 Q* n  q& L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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' W+ J4 F1 f/ \: s8 L/ c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% v2 k. B- @* V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>