【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 B- x6 s, H% `: e( ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% ]. j. m+ P# E! g! I% AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 a& G& N& y$ i+ ^- a0 x6 ~% n0 RI really want to know just how much you love me
! j1 V/ l$ ]5 j9 s+ LI love you I love you with all my heart
! s/ o4 D+ g3 s% CNothing can compare to my love
& h  w6 O4 x; y, A/ ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- }! k4 y" U/ WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( g0 _+ |4 X& [' u6 {. h2 `I’m still filled with fear
: c% p. f7 `# s5 \) eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! P2 F' D4 y. N2 l7 Y. x, L0 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" O) G: v& V# [+ QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ F9 T" I6 l# q0 y9 q0 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, ]9 }5 y. O9 y" A1 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  D1 j% `) \7 n0 }8 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 O% e! G( B' T2 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 u8 \0 K6 L; |# G/ k) s* |1 f, L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" j6 q: W1 Z: Z, G) U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! F. C1 R2 W, D6 P3 o- _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- _  ]5 R) G8 ^' f5 \4 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 T0 ?+ S. U" C; h, L5 j0 @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& B! u. `1 ~# W7 A<P>你无需担心</P>
% c- [5 {/ [' A$ r* ?2 k* h; c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ Z: f& E7 M5 ~' [. G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 w. k' p$ l. }- h6 Z$ o+ S1 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' }, r8 f" ~0 u2 w  e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 [6 A4 d. D  L& s3 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, b' g9 s9 [' C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' w( m6 ^2 N# G, s5 g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. N4 h/ I! [, T" b$ @! s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 Y/ e6 q5 Y/ C7 X$ k* l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 P6 }" _/ [6 I  U+ \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 A# o; C  e) [2 t! x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 r4 j1 @- v2 i, ^/ a( T+ g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% T0 b) a& ~2 S# Y5 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ t8 s+ s/ l) s( p6 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! L( E. _+ Z* t# z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ `( t( E( G, M4 J$ R; V% @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% o, ]8 B7 R+ s$ X+ {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 t# B* D. K0 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* R  y/ c4 _" a# C* l0 B9 z# s' z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ I! a7 q3 Z. w) a' g1 W* g1 F' X我请你剖开它
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+ W& b/ b9 M5 F) @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>