【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! w3 F) s$ q4 _5 F7 ^) q& m' _6 W5 m; r, lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) h+ p# i2 m, w5 o! q9 X2 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 Z' T2 N0 x2 F+ J( R: v! R! `You needn’t fear anything
9 P8 `, h% P9 _+ ]5 ^- G6 ?: @) ?6 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' ^' q- d$ K# t) OEvery other word you utter is love
0 _1 q8 t% j" Y$ r8 R: w& y, mI really want to know just how much you love me
& ~. F5 E0 T, w: q* k  }I love you I love you with all my heart
/ O$ k9 b1 r0 G3 j# NNothing can compare to my love
  a& d- C0 H7 a2 R6 t& i3 UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 M1 E4 ]% i: y" [; [1 F, TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* s; `2 n: U  d5 u0 K( _; bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 a: B% r2 ^' t% uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) ]& q. K- g" h* FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. w: v$ J4 u& ]( i& x% CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. U# y0 W; q( g$ A% o. @5 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! r, X5 o$ j2 d: [) q% }( |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 ~1 V8 W2 I5 g1 \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 U! K' n# T9 r' W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ r1 V' @0 Q, I8 G+ H! h2 l, U8 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ P& C! l4 I/ Y! Z4 u) A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# G8 q% D4 `, H- E# @5 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 j. L4 [) L4 q  o4 v/ N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 c; P, u1 m. Z+ n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 G' w) m% W8 R8 @3 s+ J<P>你无需担心</P>
* K  ^1 ~( E& r4 F1 f4 n0 i6 F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: U# w2 b' U( R4 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( i: z2 t1 N" B/ q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) C, l8 K  F# I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: ?. N& P- O! ^. Y' B2 @" b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 w4 I- R3 h3 ]2 y( y0 F- d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& |: h! B  L! d5 r: ]4 S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 f8 V  |' i" L. q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! F2 p! R4 d: h8 q$ ^; D  q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& G0 {  R8 I$ @3 R: \9 Z/ J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ Y( l: U3 f& p  X& y' {3 J+ c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 {+ E- J+ Y; q& b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ z- J2 G1 Z1 ^! I: N4 i' N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 t; `$ e9 |# K2 z; s2 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; V5 D1 e9 ^* I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" O% u. P1 f$ [. j2 Z5 g' f0 r/ g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ p6 K" x3 i& d2 d4 o1 r4 |$ `, a# f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

2 d/ z: Q* h9 ]9 J# { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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