【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  k3 D8 J+ W9 a& U7 r歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 w& q/ g2 a9 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, N* p% F" }+ ?* g2 H. B4 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 C. |0 {2 d. \4 n2 v  F) lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; N) [$ {( u/ E4 Z# BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 u0 @4 x0 j  p7 {: v8 r& x7 tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 c# f9 V1 q) HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 B' \! d( m7 q- h& n/ KI want so much to see inside your heart
  N  M3 d4 u$ m0 O$ B$ V" hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, K" @- o, E( j) x) E9 m9 N8 m  FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: ^- o; A& u% |% E1 y' ?5 dI regret not dying
& E6 T4 w/ S# y" k7 Q$ H1 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; M" L7 o8 l3 L  N& E% P2 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) L3 P& ^) m( [7 UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! H: V; t8 t4 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ g% n! ?% s9 s: o6 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* N9 k) A6 [1 F3 j7 v% g" _: J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- i3 X: a/ ?/ y6 I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! N5 H, v, Q* l) @8 ^$ M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( ]. \6 |8 {; ]7 r: n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. N- c6 F! C# Q3 V$ u& P/ y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 W# M& r/ O9 |' b$ q- x; ?$ C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: w; |! {; \0 K' i9 r& L8 c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( j- M2 w! D% L) c8 @& T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- W% F# h0 i! Z$ G' c7 j<P>你无需担心</P>
$ {! r  Z9 h  s# v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 b5 L$ Y  l, |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# O9 M" s' f+ k$ m' m/ b; ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* h% C) d" t. x% O0 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 I5 f6 q! Z9 e' C- l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ [: Z+ S% F; u2 T$ Y6 s5 L$ k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- @" O$ ^; @, s% h9 M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# t& q( W9 M7 Q$ p& F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* N6 X  K, x7 Y! G: I* H  V- G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ Z1 r( s1 X2 ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: a( c9 w& M* x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 A! \; q$ d) s  Y4 W. r3 `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: G3 w$ P! Q% A) T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* T* c5 @0 X. s* {. ?4 Q# B- V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" z2 g1 \0 B0 ]  d" q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& \* n% d" c5 b) v% e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! I' g( Y2 H% h7 L) N" P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; `1 }' `/ c# o7 Z7 z# D4 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 ]! T1 B! G( z/ Z( d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 p3 X3 p5 H* E5 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ e3 u! I: O& j6 ^我请你剖开它

+ Q& f- f) A7 [4 T  H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( ~: T7 C4 P5 J8 W. ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>