【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: Z4 ~9 g* C1 f% [- q( y! R' Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 R& [& k5 w* G  mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- c0 I  g3 _7 r4 f* Q; qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" t! v; T* v+ ?3 d7 JYou needn’t fear anything
8 W% p4 L2 n0 @1 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; Z0 w! [2 |6 E6 eI really want to know just how much you love me
) s8 @8 ]- Z% PI love you I love you with all my heart
& ?$ `8 j: j5 a0 b9 iNothing can compare to my love
3 N: x* a  @/ V/ G* q3 E/ o8 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& L2 y3 ?1 A% N0 x: Z5 e" LI want so much to see inside your heart
0 Z/ ^/ }; m3 j) SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( @8 n7 W0 I& nI’m still filled with fear
: _7 j. k0 Q! V; T0 _2 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) S" b2 W1 @8 x$ XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 T, `2 w$ S, K4 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' F" y3 p* ?( d/ a% ]! {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* o; ]% p. W0 @. O7 }! H, t/ c3 L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 Y) Q& K! {- g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 ]8 Y. a  X+ M2 d. C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. B3 u8 t& g; D5 h5 ^. P6 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 W* ^+ W" h3 f& Z( E  Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 R. K4 P1 h6 d1 Z3 ^: B0 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' y! b# u: N5 }2 k2 R% a+ t% o! M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# F4 v7 U* ]$ a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" l0 H. {8 t! T! o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; w8 L9 M4 x6 N9 t3 @' h9 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% C: L6 }! z  z8 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) Q$ S" F) Q0 i6 _4 f, d$ u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! U3 \$ T3 c+ _+ ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 c  R* v- M! ?+ J7 ?" @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 G/ r& K) ]6 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ t4 A. R  @4 V0 E# l* e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" V! s- N% o0 E! ^% W3 s5 R& k: c3 }' p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 i. t) J) L# L# s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ K, M& w4 X3 R. W: q# d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. v3 m, r" e( ~- |8 y/ g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( O; x1 }  x( u# ?. c  r0 X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 M; s& ~+ {" d+ \" g. l7 G& E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 z, s+ t. F! F/ v/ q; g<P>I regret not dying</P>
; @) b% M" N2 K  o! u/ X$ H7 w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( c3 l3 j' W5 G- F) f. W; H+ j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. W6 }6 Z) {4 q' ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 Y/ O( d4 K0 I& Z) F; N( r4 b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" b; t" {5 O# F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- L: g/ n. x  d7 H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% c9 w  P- u  p) X1 y% [6 z* K" X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 B  }% ^! l! U' [: B5 c- g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* N* H4 ^6 ?( ?9 ]我请你剖开它
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0 Y& p. M0 P2 ^# i5 m+ U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 a/ C2 l( r. L" W/ x1 Y6 P5 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>