【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 ~/ C7 E7 V# W. PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! c* a" a' B8 _$ C! B* C* O7 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. h" R, @0 H5 Z) P9 |% e; DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" h7 h* w1 ^) W* YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ t( O2 G. t7 HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# N) {1 B% M4 y5 }# ?' @7 u7 `Every other word you utter is love
: C* S" Q9 {3 N$ G) BI really want to know just how much you love me
1 j4 n( D8 x% k7 f: s% h3 DI love you I love you with all my heart
! J: Z& W( d& ]' ?( @1 x5 t4 _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) U  g9 R, u! r3 Y- [7 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% W8 [! K: W0 n4 iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 c7 c7 `$ G9 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* I0 X1 a- J# j4 v8 P/ oWith such a tongue as yours,
) C+ V2 ]) l& yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) U, R) `  G* dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 n, p; v3 \+ I1 \9 Z: j& T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. D# a/ Y9 ?/ \( {/ K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! a& r/ K$ z2 o4 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 \+ y- s& I9 D, r1 z0 i/ f# ]8 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 @6 q" r: m) F; u% y$ }- _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' ?3 R/ y1 i8 r& F+ Q3 ]+ i- S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: j% C( e; V" J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ l1 L- N* E- E. z5 K# Z: c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- s3 Q, n- p6 h+ x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 \0 D1 N! a6 x& b4 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 R0 B  W3 t9 v0 }, X* A<P>你无需担心</P>
2 N9 Z( F' \4 i6 T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 o; c9 y# u1 O. K: j' n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! v! U- r( h5 C+ Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: X/ Q9 Z4 R! k( t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ ~" d$ H  c$ p5 ]) |8 N$ C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% D' v8 C" Z; f3 ]$ Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ K2 x8 p  E; j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. k+ j; \0 t7 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* g8 _" N6 p# l' S3 O6 f0 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- ^8 V- [7 K5 Y0 m" j) \" A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; U8 G2 G2 v! Z* _0 u7 R8 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 z% g- r$ v7 W: K, q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" i$ o3 Z( K* a' V/ b0 i( r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" z0 @1 h+ ?0 E- s6 F5 T! N1 {  ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 J2 Y7 W; k/ T3 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. b5 R+ W: e" b- s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- w/ _% T2 t2 c' [$ j3 _9 d$ i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. ~, [% R! R: W5 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" M) i: B' _6 u: j0 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) F; k% h- |9 G& D: Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# Y% h* @6 [, D9 |$ d我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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