【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- i6 F/ U. l0 e2 a5 _$ X' UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 I7 c" Q9 B- {, FI love you I love you with all my heart
+ n" K/ i6 d- j( Q1 }/ r0 BNothing can compare to my love
5 ]3 B4 ?: |% |; h! C7 C4 L8 F( mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ a0 L# @7 l, }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# \% a  N6 n$ P! J( X2 j0 |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 c/ {( ~5 x& f5 v2 A. {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% T, E4 E6 ]5 q) J+ _7 [' eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 F3 ^+ G2 S: V. G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- R. u- D' \" r$ [; ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; {+ q, L( S" `" {8 I3 t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: a5 F  h$ c, ^& K  P) a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% r# S) l" t- P" L  Z) X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. V7 E2 S! c: w2 Y8 E- h; ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, g( V& X" i& B) L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ B8 [5 p; w9 y& @: S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- ?( w- }) U: o# S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% x' D/ ^5 e: q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 j: M* C6 E" ]8 I3 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 v" ], W6 c- x, }3 G! S% C4 f& T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. m3 V4 s9 S0 E- q5 v5 s4 H5 k( O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 T$ E. x8 \& s1 W2 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" \$ y2 Q/ A$ K: \2 U: M1 T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* Z  E+ |% l) Y( |1 V: {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 z2 B! C- o  @7 T' ]3 }* ~+ H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ B* t) l- ^7 _9 @4 J  J, a+ ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" N2 T3 g! @' R5 ~# _+ V0 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. y0 C+ {3 D+ m  G/ ]2 u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' k% S6 t! P, J7 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 J& y: y+ L2 U' b$ g  G6 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 b+ q+ M% M$ B4 A4 X" f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# g! F6 U+ B7 }1 P3 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' u8 h  {) u* \( y0 b7 x7 [# E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 Q) [3 v; Z1 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 j. t. N5 m6 m4 _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 y1 `8 C) a. d8 w) i8 w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% J: T6 x2 }* d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) d# R  }  s9 A3 G7 Q; ?: s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 K/ o/ _7 s, N# u) r# H7 d7 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* S- s0 y9 x" r! _9 O5 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 W: a$ |! {2 K! Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- z5 N- H1 _' `" A* ?( G- r" u$ M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 [- J! x; w( w  @5 b0 F* a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 R3 t! e& P; g0 w; Z5 l我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>