【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 K. p6 F3 e1 ~( xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; @4 Z2 L0 _1 I! u0 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% J3 J) w; G( x! |2 M4 c+ s% A( [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  k7 T: M1 ]. L, G) NWith the moon kissing it every night
: P' f! s$ Y8 m" N" m1 pSeeing the sky content with its love
! ]* Z; [' \  Y& a. dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 c6 \3 S2 k0 M' b2 d. B5 iYou needn’t fear anything
) u! Q8 a- j6 h. z0 d. _1 Q' v: vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 Q: d) e5 H- @2 Y/ ^5 gI really want to know just how much you love me
- i# u! W. v9 UI love you I love you with all my heart
/ w; n/ Q) e$ E; h2 s7 iNothing can compare to my love
  Q  M% H9 L+ ?4 W% {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 [+ ]6 v" r& X: n7 @/ S. e5 i0 N. sI want so much to see inside your heart
# H: g  \! _4 L5 F' ^& Q" RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 e' r/ l; x: @' R  ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" g! k" Q/ T, N9 V! M6 k/ _2 T& GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 R# g1 X" D$ n! vWith such a tongue as yours,
- J" q) B# N4 C$ d  SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- _8 a+ w+ S: VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, [' |- k) L3 T- B) U, u3 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, s% `% j' n6 M' S4 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) s( C, p0 {: ~: ^. `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 x+ y- f0 k* F1 N# r) M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" k0 P7 E# p+ w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( }# j6 K: A5 o- K" B; v( R" O, C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 b6 L; ~' ~. H! x9 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ r  b9 s- N4 {+ G5 [+ r4 c5 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 C; I! ~, f) m; x' N- |+ O- _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& ^; y! g/ d) X0 x2 d9 M& ^0 m5 C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 l  P5 ^: n. Z9 Q3 D5 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 ~- A8 _7 U% z, T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 H% X: }# y& V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 t" f2 @( E2 U" R3 z# V: e' B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 R* w0 ?% Y5 L/ T, O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 u7 m5 v8 X/ m2 ~9 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 k( r; {$ k5 R, E! @  u4 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) x  d* m9 H5 B' c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 @1 _: q' e" m2 S( c' b0 a" \2 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ \2 p; Q9 s6 L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* |/ T0 s5 o& S1 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( b0 Z4 R" m, v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" l3 a+ _) k. `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 Y* v6 U& v+ U. m1 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ M$ S- |/ L6 F. V: d! w/ c- r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' L0 Z' V/ v" N  ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% n) m3 l5 Z3 _; H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 A7 n! L6 D9 |! r( J, M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>