【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( t& u7 K! ?- f! c8 \+ OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' j$ t& _6 H. dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" U+ g9 ~2 h6 T! Y% z4 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 M4 u# x! d$ J6 L. Z& _) mSeeing the sky content with its love
! `/ s; F, f$ q* R5 d" S, w5 \  bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* J4 e' ~9 P; r6 @8 l, x1 GI love you I love you with all my heart
1 h/ H; U/ {# GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  Z/ w5 F4 w6 ^7 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 E+ M/ [4 i) J+ i6 }6 nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 X: e  s* p: x% Q3 `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# v2 D4 N. X2 x/ e& [I regret not dying
9 T# }+ g0 Z" j! J+ KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' D: j9 X2 h' f( h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& w# @& q3 L" t; ?. \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. [; \4 Z1 v, F7 Z& x) [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% k: Z6 I- y  N1 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, ~# l. z; S# L2 l1 \" [! F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( \1 `! z. e1 v: m/ n. J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ f) z# D1 ^- a5 X% l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! T. ^1 T: H! h/ K7 n* H" d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* j* ]2 L9 }/ O! A& Q* f; ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 Q2 D$ o1 [7 x; y+ D( M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ w: g+ k# g7 \; h* F3 y: p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 G$ O# m# B; X9 A% e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- Q  w3 [+ d7 d  l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 N4 X$ j2 a2 c9 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; p. O. A! E9 G# H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 E$ {9 ^: g$ r* h. I$ k( F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& b! W9 R: t! C! O; U  a8 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 x- ~! N5 [1 U: j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" B6 \/ ~) S# i; ~3 P5 c& s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 Z+ c9 I8 n) E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( o/ u9 a9 y0 U  Q- Z2 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. D' H2 P2 L0 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! y* B1 i) R6 _( Q- R! u3 n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>