【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 B7 Z8 Y& H3 y0 l4 O/ ^; m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, t6 M( W4 D0 b0 P  _$ m. l* EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 {# x6 d1 u. p2 G; U' G3 @7 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 e. f" Y6 P+ L9 N! P0 `7 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  J% G. u- k+ u9 A/ }, WSeeing the sky content with its love
4 G8 P+ a( C& V( C4 r1 hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  B- n* c. s- f% {: f' M" ^; A9 rYou needn’t fear anything
8 E2 K9 t& G) D1 {/ l( c6 OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' x* W, ^. z/ i6 II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- p$ y$ e- i( u6 q# G+ DNothing can compare to my love
# C& y' \, V* p: U4 I* f+ [3 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 L- F/ s4 R/ pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 J2 ?5 b" M# VI’m still filled with fear
( V% x  ^4 e, r+ o: r( cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, Z3 U3 [+ Q! h% ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: m2 Q  g8 a: B/ R% ?With such a tongue as yours,
1 l- S! l; ~% F& G# a+ U/ T" j, mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. b0 q! a  ~3 {9 ?8 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) z8 \( }1 x5 G, E# _9 C- TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  x0 h( i1 o1 }5 {3 X4 h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, ~5 D& f. J7 ^0 E, a) Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; s5 {5 h0 }; N  f; i5 n# y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 s$ F% N5 D1 Q! U- r8 ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ T* |& t# Q+ `* L0 i0 c  X2 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 ^8 J0 u1 d/ w: E! l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ V. o9 S; F+ H" C# [2 i5 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& d- ~0 i/ ^" y) w) `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 k; o" p+ W$ q  t. X6 l$ s$ i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( \0 w+ h$ ^9 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 t; e. S" B1 l- @; S0 u0 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 [5 E# x# U9 U2 i/ ~" r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; |, ^7 V$ S5 s( Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: z8 t+ S! b. m. B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 ]4 {1 Y% q, \8 m$ c  Z* r& P9 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) g1 ~  B9 u6 j$ F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 g! C* v* O, J! F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* j1 R0 r& \  S4 d5 w  F% ?- X. S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; ~( H1 m4 `5 [! y, G* H  V- [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' q4 x4 j" G9 X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) I& q" T! w3 ~( |/ @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

0 y8 Z6 z' x0 A! o7 k0 g7 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>