【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, P' V0 n- N; _/ f6 l+ c歌词我附在后面。
" S1 y! V3 }/ O& v; aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 x1 q- Z: O7 [7 |# o0 XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! k: }8 }% [' C2 x$ G# w- k! \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 V+ R1 q/ p% ]  ~' t/ hYou needn’t fear anything
1 C# l( J) ]$ P# m1 U& KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% b4 }9 }3 d+ Z; M! J- d" ZI really want to know just how much you love me
% [$ R9 ~1 i; E4 i$ v$ _' _. VI love you I love you with all my heart
. a: t, L# e, c. W0 ~) e' uNothing can compare to my love
5 d9 m/ v! z' }3 M6 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 W( |" A; c% D7 II want so much to see inside your heart
* ~+ e8 F1 ]4 l3 Y) D* sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* {- ^  x& w: K0 fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 [, O! h) o- r' z$ X! vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 z/ O) N) z( t0 i# tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ X1 t/ `5 k: [! Q# g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) i$ q6 s( s. H% X0 C8 i- U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 ?+ k: U& A5 v4 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 k  y1 E5 K! k( |% v9 J% d8 \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ C% N. y' p+ }% C% @. W: C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 p" Z4 P( ]0 h# L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: Z( v, J6 [5 z+ u$ M: O) P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: K( C8 K  ^! L" |5 _$ P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; d% E1 \- ?/ n4 ^6 `2 E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 m& t2 ]8 k7 i5 o( n! ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ Z3 ]  E. C. e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; K$ [8 ^; ?9 R% ?) i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 ^" B+ K1 o0 D: x! \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) k- E( h* P$ B  ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 T# a- L9 B& v2 E0 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. p# v" p7 I6 E& r- b/ ^% Z; H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 w# M" v3 w" @& h9 S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 ]: N, q2 i. W5 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 \; C0 @8 q- o2 F6 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 Y3 g6 e0 n5 z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. v) p" H" L7 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& f' a$ v( J  O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* n  o: }1 e: H# o4 {0 W0 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>