【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* s' ?) c1 \7 N# u2 w; T. \Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 h& ^4 ^9 p) c% r4 s/ t" v% KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, V% X' u7 R* z$ O8 {5 Q0 R$ eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& v5 f) q6 D' Y% x2 y  LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 I- E; ^! p. j* m+ D! c& H4 \3 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# u$ k8 ?. o+ T  b3 u+ TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" X9 g( w) C7 C% m$ L5 F6 oI want so much to see inside your heart
* u3 e0 f, L, Y( yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% [( l& o; p* ^  II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 N6 U* o( V4 P( dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( k( K5 @4 Y# Q2 C  `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 K% ^) y4 i- j2 s2 u  e9 |2 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  R: h- t( G# d1 J- s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* M' P1 X& c) q# a' F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 t  e: l2 @, r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- K9 z" ?# w! U8 `+ \* D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. ^  `" W" k0 E. W  D( _# m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 N( |) r1 d( V) T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. ~9 U+ J' J6 a* A' F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) H# i2 r' c( V. q. a<P>你无需担心</P>
; r, g) y4 |2 t' z! Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- q$ x! p8 F2 R2 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 y+ g- |9 D4 {! ~$ _4 B2 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: q% f4 q8 b$ J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& d5 ~5 E$ V& u" L* q! x: J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 d( y5 N6 \% o8 y/ V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, `9 ~2 m3 ~5 T# P/ W/ x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 O% W3 m9 I! W3 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* U! _* Q" Y6 j; B% V3 t5 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! W: X$ ?: ^, v* E+ m& p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' O1 f3 ~* Z$ ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 S) d" q9 i) H% ]4 n! K% C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: y8 a% K) S7 x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 Q( o. g; _+ \: u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 n: B% c2 C2 p) Q- P6 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 e. s$ Y* p; m: Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>