【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* _, r- w& B( e% y: m$ n, K4 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 f5 ^3 p- |9 Q5 U8 L) [4 }7 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 r& s# V/ s, i  ]+ C8 ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* S3 x6 L/ c4 M. }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& y8 `! i2 H! x7 GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) s- e5 u$ n# O% B9 \* ^. [# F9 jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* I* j0 C: {2 Q0 A; L# g/ `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ _+ ~/ y# d  V; r0 ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# `- ^+ R. a4 H$ R: Q8 D# m$ xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 |! r4 ?5 u3 V7 m0 \- p) BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( Q: L2 R/ D  URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  G! Y* y( F% }6 r1 n- o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 y6 |! g6 l( w3 q% Z! w) b4 \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ I* k4 r: ]  I8 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; r  T* k1 }0 J3 P5 P6 K0 @- `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 P3 K& O! O. e; V) E; B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 f2 h3 c7 l" {* m# @& N7 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 Y. E2 x0 [) s) R) Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" \. ?9 X) x8 w6 S; O7 ]% B1 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 b, B6 I- S7 b7 ^. H' o<P>你无需担心</P>
: I" u4 k& K( K( ?  [5 B# b+ q# x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 D2 ~. I# m! y- Q3 j1 A7 Z: G% S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; F! M  U# {; T6 `5 j! [3 I6 R9 }% A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 U8 I. {4 p! Z+ j" k9 y, e8 m) \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: F1 y" o9 {" {' G; l/ @" g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( M! }) R- ?; w2 [' h& H2 }: g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 a, }: K' ?9 F. L" r. M! `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& s% H% k( R$ C; E0 ?1 ]4 ?# K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 e1 q0 g6 I9 K( p" ?9 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ H7 o+ \( L% X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 U( n. t& s  O6 \+ v0 n# H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% `% ^# k: T8 a2 W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 I" a4 ^$ T, c: H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 c" Z% Q) h* p: X" x% \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, Z( r# [; Q% E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; N6 h. L  [2 p& d  P6 ^: Y+ [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 }, @7 F- ?1 \5 d: A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% k1 ^, h8 t. o. ?; [% W* s2 s我请你剖开它

8 @8 ?, M0 n4 M% Q- Q9 { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& p$ l: t# V) b% Q: P7 j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>