【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ j. o, s4 f, X# D  B( U) uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 T/ P' ^  ^+ c5 s) d5 h/ XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 @/ w$ h' h4 B$ vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( C4 S3 g; d+ Q! U3 r$ J: cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 l( p& ~- I+ fNothing can compare to my love
: x, C5 Z  J9 U6 I- j* YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  o( N4 T4 C$ T) z: ?8 `% lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ e8 \9 t8 T. l! iI regret not dying
. L, e* n. s3 h/ A% SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, R# O8 Y' i, J# R% Y! ^With such a tongue as yours,
( }9 h0 I) K- `' B, s0 w  i6 F9 sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 t5 b9 Y; ]) m) |4 x6 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 v5 `, A5 J" r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% g: `! y3 [  c. s% E6 b: I/ H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  h3 n7 I7 |  N0 e+ Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 d2 m; x# B& X( h6 P. Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 D. c: A- Q; k$ u5 u+ |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 [9 U3 X. L  x. }3 P% Z, J3 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  d  ?3 W. \& q- _( c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 H. y  H9 P& a% T0 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& d- x3 n; S  S+ z: e$ k% T8 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  ^) `( }% ]* K7 l  ~8 z2 z: R  i<P>你无需担心</P>
2 O, T  b# f: ~/ w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. [) p# M- a( c3 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; v! `9 K4 ^" v7 a, N% Q4 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ d4 x+ u* v7 r+ ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# k# N9 k/ p1 Q* e7 i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ B, j. X0 Y, B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% [' D/ S6 h% `5 G2 i0 ~; x5 k$ J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 r, I  j+ O& y9 {1 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& v7 N! C' H1 R$ t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! C' a( @5 {% V* e* c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) x$ t% j2 q' X& t9 p5 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) ?8 }; F7 A$ X* t3 N( G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ @6 a% f; X4 R) j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- h/ S! X0 |. }& b' O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% }. j% k/ R+ D% D5 ^4 i/ m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 ]- J8 M' O+ m5 N7 }& ~; q+ v<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 R3 y0 i4 r* g" |) S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' h/ [4 z/ p6 d. X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- m) {, S3 s1 N  E& P/ w: W& H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ G& e: K0 ^0 }2 M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ S  M* L: F, o* l& J* W5 e+ [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" M) E  z0 D7 D0 e/ d" G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 t& m! I" O: b% H. |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 Q) o* ?$ |. `# I5 }4 Z0 q, T9 y" M& j我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>