【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* e( r' J% w' g2 b4 v' C歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 {- q5 }+ Q) a! PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# k% d( }8 b0 N: ]4 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) Q8 J( s2 \1 w5 [$ w3 L* l5 S" HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 Z# w* g! e  {( {5 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 d6 f0 P5 N  u: J( [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# Z% J3 I  u) J0 _9 U2 e$ T) [Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 v8 n7 C7 g( P7 ?4 }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( ]7 Y( p; c5 R2 g: g% {( _: r, {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' [8 t$ T! v) C0 _! UI’m still filled with fear
1 |7 A0 h0 Y  o; v* U( NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 D3 z- O" G+ F% t/ x' x1 GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" H  `7 b/ V3 e8 x( CWith such a tongue as yours,
  i7 G! T3 `, K. A$ I% [+ R( PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ S9 R2 g) D2 f" S. k9 zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 ~* @- R8 u! h. ?0 d5 p7 s8 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. V+ e. H% @: ?9 d$ y2 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% g# N' I, M/ n: |7 _; `3 u6 N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( @; e, j8 S" j$ Q; K# v3 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' }2 a- X  N! w1 j8 T* B+ v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- O; i5 N# \1 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 t% [2 E4 r0 q9 J0 a( _/ \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% A1 Q0 ^. v; H0 U! e6 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( ]' s$ v. `& b  X. M  w& ~4 u4 U' o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* C; J4 \. p# j, E/ h- B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- j7 z9 F6 V* E0 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ {* U8 o4 v* K) J9 e; Y: u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ l: w' g7 }% H/ v$ Q( g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 z. C, a% X1 s' S0 c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ @. w/ Q- y8 u7 s7 f7 r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 a7 i% e  w! ]8 q) x, e) Q3 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* D; D+ A9 X4 Z! X8 {: I5 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ Z6 E0 t+ v" L+ m- v; J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 W8 g2 q# J% s3 i3 _7 w) @& ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  J4 o% t# s% D( M$ r' t- `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 @, t) q9 k6 ?% Z2 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 R. j  f. c' e# z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 }9 J+ c5 k  ]4 k. o1 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 A( \* E$ K6 o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 H1 ~& r/ H5 f% ]8 j. I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ ^3 i' u3 c6 n  w- {1 W* M' @2 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! h1 a7 R, d: t/ j! O; `: i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 D* W( u8 S/ ~3 H" n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! |2 Y' w5 N* b) N9 U9 N* a8 v9 l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) {" J* \  ]# ?2 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* v, c* Q6 x1 a* J: ~# }/ o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  W3 X9 m, d# a3 i& c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 H4 g1 x. `) {' l3 H* ]' `5 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

# q; I* k9 X* {" {$ H) B+ d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. T. l, X* c# t& b% W9 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>