【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 _& @$ N2 S- i6 [, V* j( i, T7 s歌词我附在后面。
8 q# I3 ^; P& H& z- x9 R2 CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  ~& J+ N* D1 C, |6 b0 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ O, c, |" U# o; X: FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 ?9 |$ D2 J$ H& ], Z: G  JYou needn’t fear anything
' X, ^$ z- H1 k( v; `& A9 h0 bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 D5 e8 ^3 V9 p6 ?; x4 kEvery other word you utter is love
  D! Z& w7 I* lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' R/ F/ t  @/ @/ Z# ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! b/ k( y5 X6 ]4 H7 o1 U! KI want so much to see inside your heart
; Y' @% D0 P, y( UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 W8 ~! q4 b+ b/ c3 \; }I’m still filled with fear
: G0 {! |# ?3 C6 F# }( e" w* UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ c7 Y# u" p4 N7 i9 _1 P  N- S! M, OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ F% u- \. j1 Y% ^% B( O* P; KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 I% F) I) t3 ?# m" l' JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 K) {% O& ]8 q! P% k2 _0 E4 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  B2 x0 k+ O1 D' d5 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  |+ {% W1 U3 I% k' S7 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 T: E( \2 x: `" C, m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 [6 X$ x0 O# T  ~0 Z: C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( \7 ]  I9 [7 o5 T3 Q7 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: Q' }$ c4 l7 ?8 \$ [6 K6 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 v( j& b- R0 ~/ K9 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 l2 |3 Q; \1 l0 H, q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ k* r8 S% M. A; a& H7 s3 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! m! O: Q9 L" U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 }% b- n3 f/ ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. J9 V$ E; S7 j5 i& c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& H( Q2 n/ d4 }7 L; e. L3 w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; I; B( ~0 S/ S# s) I9 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 f4 o  |& T% \! [3 M$ _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! S; l9 o1 q' @/ D6 k3 }. `/ i; Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 O0 s: z7 q, G1 ]$ K- a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( F3 i. |; d2 d8 d) S2 \  A( p- T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 Y- k. O2 C! S, I2 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 Z7 R5 g$ l0 N1 m. n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 B+ H$ d1 E) A$ f  ~: j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 Z# |. s! K8 S- F1 _7 A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. S0 g' P! d! }& [+ u5 Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. C9 w% S# U: e: X, R' X* n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- F8 f4 m6 O, p) w3 O/ F8 z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ P; J6 ?) d# C* E$ A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% q+ O( D1 ^4 z: [/ [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>