【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ x( U& h, Q, r7 h- G1 P  zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 z+ g6 h# h5 e+ {2 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 S- {/ m0 M) E' QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  I( d3 W  P2 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
* P* {+ _3 S: B( wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 D$ {- L, z4 o- Z: `% L6 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; J  _# |8 w" T# OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ t2 F, X7 s/ }) n! `8 DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& j& H; i2 p6 V* v8 L( Z% IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% x% V6 _; J. k; j0 W( B0 ]$ tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- r! A3 j% J# b0 y+ x* N8 h  `I regret not dying
$ c, u3 g0 I' S6 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 t' L, a4 m% o. U0 I$ \9 P! v/ lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ h: D1 y" }) ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 ]$ W0 ~0 i7 u% l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' b8 m& O: m, W9 \+ w/ W# P, J8 D6 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 E! |& V: Z& t' e" ^$ B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 @- s1 Z- f2 u2 O5 Z) A! O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: p7 o& n$ ~: Y: q, L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& Y  k- T" X1 F9 C<P>你无需担心</P>
# I$ u% ]* a* L/ n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ X  V7 W& J( c0 I8 C5 u0 A( J; r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! ]0 t8 e) n: F" T1 S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% X2 N. T' A" b" `4 m& g9 y! ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 S5 O/ I+ m; I) M- H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- b# w5 p+ \0 ^) j3 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 h$ r- U: C2 o' P2 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ `4 h1 G' y+ M7 o' |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 L; w& Z+ `( N, g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* c, O: m& M4 C- H( ~# X' e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 Z0 @$ r% Y2 C" J) j& E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- K! Y; l0 ?+ P: p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 X" G3 `0 W' ~0 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) J7 S: M( a, G8 @- Q3 J8 x4 l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 p* Z. ?6 A$ e- b5 }/ `& H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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) b+ r2 g# a* V- x' S3 _4 n% e3 h' j8 y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>