【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ O6 G& o( s% Y* n& YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 x5 e; W/ J2 }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ L  `0 u: C3 [% f/ _. b1 @' ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 X/ Y, b) h; U+ e" _; Q! JYou needn’t fear anything
0 ]5 l( L4 `" x. i, I# Z3 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. ~" M8 ?. \3 e' @% t9 H# S( YEvery other word you utter is love
* M( y) E9 u- A3 k" D1 @4 _# _9 i2 SI really want to know just how much you love me
  x6 B' n; J9 ~9 H5 z2 f" F$ kI love you I love you with all my heart
/ Q& k" O( r8 D  w8 x8 `% O2 ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' t! @# b/ W- S, q) K# RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( T* c& r  W* [+ B4 P& PI’m still filled with fear
6 N, X$ E; y3 d& {, H5 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% w3 G4 \9 X6 a! i0 o: l' OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 j, S& _4 J, JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% U/ ^6 P5 o2 m  _8 x5 o  s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' P7 c" b" a! M6 w' O+ n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, d7 G5 A$ C. v0 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% N- Q; E2 ~* Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 b. ?# N! M' v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 F8 Z$ Q: p" _3 K8 x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 c4 {- p% c3 r) R8 a- y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! h: N4 u% E5 Q- y) w2 b: W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' W; C+ J2 l4 ^2 F# c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 m. w- P, _; Z2 L1 q  ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" M# N) B% u( O4 Z! o) p5 n+ x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 n+ x, z1 u1 p* T9 w% G) j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 v5 k& n( M' P0 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 i3 B  U& o& X% b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ o6 I2 m7 \; z' N+ I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 h+ h" e. h0 \/ ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( C% _5 E4 z+ U0 `! R/ {  m' a* l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' ^3 _" V, {& D- a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, I. H; X9 C) v$ ~8 F1 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 B, c: B: F; s! n; K! s" g& R/ u( t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" l% U+ u- J1 v5 f; D' t6 L% o/ }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' D$ i1 A- B6 K3 }" Q, G- S' M<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 D6 g. g6 O+ N6 A& y; A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) k  Z- d* L5 [" @2 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( g1 G; I1 \% Z1 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! G8 y+ \' n  b7 L3 Y5 `' @+ B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# j# v1 W# [7 G$ g3 J& r! F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 T$ W- m$ k) I4 |$ z7 t; t( f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 e  K# N6 G" z% C3 z& k0 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ a3 s; h+ [( i; G4 b3 j& d1 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>