【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' Z8 ]- w$ [) P7 Y4 m1 w/ N5 {/ O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 ?+ x& {5 `1 ]/ C" j# m6 N8 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" I, W  w3 Q8 Y$ IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  l/ G* }- K& c- L- t. vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! h  }2 m; m0 U  T! J& o7 ~4 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 Y, t/ U* P3 X! Q7 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- ^: q4 _3 N9 Y  _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 ^8 D! m. U. [2 H1 dNothing can compare to my love
! {$ d. g+ ~% F  lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 h& I- A5 T9 H1 t  KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' U7 p/ r6 ?7 H) n! F. ZI want so much to see inside your heart
+ _* `; W% h5 _" c5 s6 o9 U+ C8 ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( a" z4 W, k& N7 {- mI’m still filled with fear
" t3 v. ]+ I/ ]" qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% L4 x! l% |, x( ^% xI regret not dying
* y2 v2 ^! ~) @1 v* y- S6 w/ h  FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ P# [* j- U3 F7 |+ ]% O4 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: G! A9 {% [5 o1 s! Q8 I' J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# A7 |: E# a5 a" U9 J% r8 a8 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( d, d6 `% }' @! z. X5 o5 U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 `- R* y0 ^) p3 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) i" i% P! c! }* t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ Z3 F! b$ \/ e. c) b# ^! G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, _# O6 P* {: r! L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 g' C1 a5 |. T. y/ b$ l+ S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" t, ?$ k& z, r" V% a( {6 [; i! ~<P>你无需担心</P>
, @' _3 o% G# [) R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: s: }5 a" v+ u2 M2 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 Y2 }3 Z( Q" H3 G' @  |8 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( f6 T) D( M% ?+ K# `2 b6 E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 F- |' X! U; D6 v- g& Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 B+ U# X( \& N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 c8 b7 B6 o" [1 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 r$ M# q# y4 [1 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" q0 y/ U9 R8 [6 r1 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  E8 o' p, k1 }6 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ f5 |/ f8 \6 W; y# l  y6 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% j) d8 |5 u3 g. X7 ^2 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! g" m7 \& A8 T+ ]& W1 S4 ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. w! l4 ]+ b3 C3 v0 {3 M9 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  A* n, [7 A: F- F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) S/ d* G- |% _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) c7 P. I( [! h  {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ q# H6 E& ]. o. j: O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 I' l7 ~, D& T) x, w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 W' U/ e0 X0 v' p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. V$ t7 ?: t$ V. G5 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>