【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ t8 p! {$ i; S: G- Q! kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. F. Z6 s( B) ~9 l( x" X+ [: BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 U* J1 s) e) |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* {2 r$ m) D' q8 K. ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  O: x+ v( ]$ ^/ D$ m: S" e* yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 \+ e; _9 A- R- N& eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 V' g* W5 Q; s4 G+ a* wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* s3 k# o3 M7 H0 O2 D/ _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) V/ c4 f) g4 `1 J6 k: _3 HI regret not dying
! ]5 F. [+ b& O$ `6 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 t& c' Y- G/ M. CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 m9 Z, Q6 p9 ]0 X" W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 t: J) k4 m* v3 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& n9 e, T6 ]* o( y2 q9 Y+ w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 W+ p) Q) h2 `3 n+ D# w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' W+ g* N+ h9 {- C' J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ B3 Y$ z6 D9 f2 ~2 R; `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! T; ^4 y' @, ]" J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) }6 u6 h  u3 B8 `7 z( P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 S2 O. G9 |% I# ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 y* K* @( V* w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 a( X8 g- J* d8 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 _; |, [# `/ M8 B& D/ i9 ?% z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; M' r5 N3 [3 b" g% f5 v5 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- o5 M! ?9 W5 X' `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ O* k9 {$ ]! n0 I/ A. w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ S6 r9 y- H. J9 s: A! _" G<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 O$ f& q" `( E- W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 o9 m6 D" l7 d) z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ ]+ f5 z9 k  f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 b' }8 Y$ R+ |. H' ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 c5 E/ C- P# t' [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 L5 Q9 x+ y+ S1 o7 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! m) X( b1 l# V7 L( F) y2 z, A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 O1 U/ q6 Y/ j" C7 I6 \我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* U- K, I* A, _+ |! w7 n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>