【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- x) }4 j' I0 ~- v2 ~+ EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% M! @+ U5 y6 ^. V+ H' Y1 R# Q/ L8 P6 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 n- i% z- A6 o! GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 M0 @  n# f4 ?- ~; v3 i( d+ _With the moon kissing it every night
9 T% x# @6 u) P6 DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 S" t6 c) W/ M& L8 e# cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, ~" C" t. q0 E. ?I love you I love you with all my heart
( e; d( H) N+ i2 D4 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 J, r. q& y( _6 S1 k$ [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; x0 X! z6 O1 w9 w4 |1 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  F4 S6 w0 [+ m, j+ f( aWith such a tongue as yours,
6 b+ o4 s7 J7 z8 `  j) q8 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" {3 Z8 X$ ^8 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' @% r6 r+ l: y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, z: C/ r& M3 D  W  h0 M5 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) G7 N! ~! E7 _+ B$ U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  o: v/ c. V. N5 V6 @4 R2 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* i) z, M" G( m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) A6 A1 f# r/ }. z7 A2 M  Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ f% W! Z* m3 ?+ z1 ^) C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 ~- E$ ?% b1 Z0 X' ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) Y2 R9 d% b- w. @! |8 D1 l& n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. S  s" E) F5 z7 d. B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 J- ]* F4 f& P; e( s<P>你无需担心</P>
' g5 h) Q' `4 b: K# M) N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. d5 `% \7 V5 e! ^1 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( `/ [0 f5 f& W- x* G% N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ v+ \1 I! @" s$ b* a( \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* {( O$ f: Q1 g/ Q6 \( i7 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' \+ K4 A0 k* N4 G1 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: i1 n0 @, b6 R5 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- K/ C5 j( N' r& ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( K4 D3 J5 E3 E/ x6 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* b5 @6 G# ^' O+ h6 s! m9 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# _1 b3 l+ o+ _/ A5 N5 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" }$ \# d& |' n+ W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; U+ X5 z; L3 a& t1 @& W' P+ G4 z& D' t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 q: P( U8 T6 w0 x+ U# Y  j# T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 Z- _5 Y# {' H8 z/ \+ V" Q+ q<P>I regret not dying</P>
, r3 T7 Q: e! s( H6 ^. Q  i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 W3 Y' V& e  \5 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ A3 P3 p8 F$ M( m7 E  Y. n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" d0 G/ P9 ^6 m5 e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* v" o' N% K5 D7 G% b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: m# L' `+ u8 Q& x; O5 n" I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  u6 N) x" [! I/ n( B$ n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 p+ ~4 s( `, V5 A( u+ o我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 L. i% J, e) {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>