【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" _2 j# m/ F" i2 F. Q" `* }3 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  l8 `% o' r# E# ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 t# I  n/ t0 s8 d! U2 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. C0 `% U7 c: B& p, G( x. wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: P8 X" Y$ y$ z1 \: m. b( VYou needn’t fear anything
( C* m& V% i- L+ b" }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 a- ?& m8 }: J8 P* O: U6 @I love you I love you with all my heart
2 Q( _1 ~. i+ L; o: A* s, DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& S  V# C2 }6 R! t; uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 c  s8 D6 D7 I2 U3 ]: jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' `: [" L" c- f) G2 S! c& WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 i; M9 O5 o7 S( d; D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 }8 ^' f. a4 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; W2 [" P5 E9 [# d/ M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) u. Q9 b+ Y, d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 D# L* O  m% f/ }) G# o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ C' y9 j' \7 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 i9 D  i6 }, y9 x+ k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ I$ s5 U. d3 Z# c- y) \& ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; B2 K! d- @) M5 e( i1 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! v7 L% K6 Z( {+ H9 g<P>你无需担心</P>
6 l6 m: V, F: P3 y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 c3 a+ M$ [5 @, b  S( @' `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& K8 J! ^  z7 B, M& Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# W: z6 ^# F8 Q  F3 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 b- X" Z& y0 n: Q) T* D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 X$ `7 N. C! w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 f6 W5 [% j/ ~/ n! I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: c! y& i! U  D/ Y/ ^3 N  g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 O) ~. P5 X: H" A/ |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ E: v) L& v. W& e( R/ u; e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* R: M+ \( x, L# N2 ^( v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ u5 N' j3 h. T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  o, j$ W! C% N+ Y- o0 o7 S0 C我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>