【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! _. g3 Q/ `( C* b& x, xWith the moon kissing it every night
4 A" y" {& `: T" [7 ]6 r1 c6 y+ }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 D0 o; o9 r: w( b1 y6 i5 i% SYou needn’t fear anything
7 ~  s! m" e! Q& M4 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, K$ |6 |2 o/ tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 @  S3 D1 G0 Z& F- FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 ?3 [- W. y; j  N8 f' {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; d! Q7 E: Z% d, ^" RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& b: X% X9 O8 {/ ~! U% _/ j1 jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' K$ G$ }8 a2 g& jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 q6 v5 H# F! d1 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 [) M; ]7 \, E0 g7 [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) v) J" T% ?% ]8 ]' l! q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  d+ ]- H  w" J' s: \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 ?2 i  N8 S, X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. Q; Z. v& Q3 g; q+ u; I2 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ o6 o2 O" _% d6 P: N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' R7 B1 {' Y# o2 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( G! u, O& ?1 `1 \; |" J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) E5 |  I/ F  {' o- [% P. c8 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 E) c1 e1 {$ S! g/ Z$ p( _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 n7 H) Z- A1 m. a* h, p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, E) q4 q  V( y' |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 J$ \  [# P0 R3 A% q" B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 W% |1 r' G. B0 z) S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 N) k! g! A! [! u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" f/ v8 {4 w+ y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; h, C0 g. c. V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- g* a! A0 u1 Q. |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 o1 e% T$ E2 W; n+ w: C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ X$ N4 f: Q- {: {% |' u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ S- y: `5 V) w0 z' w' L. e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 H" N- t/ e. N$ ?1 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' B" G% E& `7 q: q+ }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- b5 Z. f' U) a& O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 P4 A8 S6 e6 }: a6 H+ o" [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. Y* l/ `: V' y% O5 O8 t3 o" L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* c8 x' p+ K8 _0 I) H7 ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) Y, H7 x4 z3 |& j* A+ C. n( _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# V; e' p0 ?4 y6 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ b% m+ L0 I1 c8 m5 i' {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* H: u' X* d# i5 `1 s( m) f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ z& d( b/ V" D3 d' V$ ^1 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" [1 Y- Z! `4 |我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>