【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 \8 A' T+ A! EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ a9 @+ h$ B# m0 f- V( h# eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; p0 p6 M: p' A. u: ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 i  _; u  g8 P2 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 X% j' I/ M- j1 t" B8 h) wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 X. ?( H& r, T& t. e7 J8 HEvery other word you utter is love
; }4 h2 a; X5 f, uI really want to know just how much you love me
; w* Z* Q. Y. aI love you I love you with all my heart
) I* C. a- w# L/ ?5 _! c/ X# l0 wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- |. R4 ~* [1 DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) N) P9 U' z: N7 \7 cI want so much to see inside your heart
. U0 g- o/ }" s: j! QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; @* U% o) k+ `& g3 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- S6 B9 g  Y/ c* h6 Q, GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: y5 a; W" {. A7 G& _* P# [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! X* s7 b+ Z7 o9 p( M2 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ R! v, m4 b, yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 i1 g7 q( N1 m7 K9 q; z5 ~4 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( W' f2 T! }1 Y& e: G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! R8 y0 c( j9 A' r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 a/ m0 x7 C6 k3 T3 a* b' S/ L* e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 P0 {# D1 J" n; p$ ~+ M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 @: \2 W0 a3 S6 I' ^9 C( R4 k: f5 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 }9 p) x/ N6 x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: n- `+ _7 I6 j0 v. m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' c6 f1 F7 u, x. D8 ]; h" Y7 l" Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' E* u1 E' \1 |! d4 k5 b) V" s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 w* l1 F" A" Q, F# @0 j' d6 M- Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! x1 Q; I5 T+ E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 A% V; M3 g9 i. ?7 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( I" z1 s# i$ m! Y. [1 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: y; H6 v! O! N% q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 j) J& H! J3 [8 g& i. i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 ~9 k. ]. B5 c7 e6 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 @9 M6 b2 t; ?" v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; B& t0 |6 N  K* L! Z: N6 v1 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 }. \+ m$ b1 ]# k3 x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. P; s9 h) M- K% F4 C; ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 |: O0 n! I+ s- v; G1 K! P" {) ~! N) ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 e# G$ _$ c7 b2 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 r2 v, i! }# T9 [0 ^  ?( e- C<P>I regret not dying</P>
  W$ w, o1 f' ]8 ^: x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, i+ Y+ w6 Q7 O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; ]% g4 ?- S. b2 j; G  m4 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  f8 v* n3 y% P  A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" X$ f+ q4 f/ O- Y- G6 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ B( d9 |6 c( I/ _' z/ Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

' y8 @- o6 }1 }* B3 B9 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! r, C4 g$ x7 v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>