【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! P* ~( y- z, [8 ^9 WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 A& ]5 o6 C- f+ h. nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 \0 N. r, W; q. b% cThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 _  g! N0 W5 s+ T9 f4 gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' k3 |" L  s, P5 N3 k, gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 T9 D3 C! C4 p. i. @5 b$ q3 t, oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ {0 n) F8 s5 R' O* AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) }# ?! h% j) f# N& DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ O( g1 U  W) }( g5 Y& LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" [9 M+ Z+ C* p- mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# d( I8 I# E+ ~2 O+ uWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' S0 {7 P" z2 o  RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. E( Q0 |& S2 R1 _  m5 W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: H0 n! K, W  P, z% l7 v! n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  {' `/ b; I+ u/ m" X" c* X+ d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! _7 x% P4 R9 [/ t6 x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ H/ y8 R' ]% ~* m( k* v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( h% s" D2 M4 k* ^# N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# Z( D3 _$ G. n8 C& G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- r/ @' e2 @! I' R4 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ @6 H/ y) V1 \0 @$ f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ s5 Y# C. E9 z/ n$ r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# }  a4 H! T- e5 [+ ^# x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  [# D; E7 s7 G% F* d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 k& J* A' P; }5 ?2 P1 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* Q2 q" k0 X; q( u) B! ?/ E( o3 _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ P# N" d8 W( P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 C3 X4 ~! ?3 I" S7 v, q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ A; O9 J$ Z* P2 o1 L; D& ^4 [6 a8 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! e. B, m- k: J5 o; [( H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( B4 \4 D" [8 E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ F( k6 X* F# D2 u5 _9 ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ k. c: E6 D* M3 ?# `. u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: F% F  X# j; G, M/ [# ^- s1 C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' P, D# C& r! S( I% U+ `. [% _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( b, n3 D& T4 g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* g7 ~7 Z1 G& a1 c& E% C& c4 n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 [$ u5 Y1 v/ ?! u" e4 |5 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. V$ @5 A' q5 d, Y% B% R5 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, q& G5 x& y' t0 p" P- Q' ^0 H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: \0 k1 ]3 m# Q! @5 ]+ K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 v9 I2 z/ f- M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>