【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

2 e: _% I7 \! Z% m; b* Y/ V我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  
* z! P1 U3 [, s, x
From the first moment we met,
% Z# z3 X# t; }) k, S9 p' \I already loved you with all my heart

8 X' b( U0 V2 q- C在遇見你的第一刻
4 s# g+ `0 r' Z# @& C& W0 N你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

1 s8 O2 C" x3 D0 \5 w3 Z1 FWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
! D+ L% b" B9 W0 q: R9 G# _1 O% J* c
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. n' T# q7 n- o" ?0 |$ lI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
8 j1 g% s- h: q5 O我也許就能了解
, I5 v2 T5 D- i1 }! W你的心情
! |, N, o7 t  i4 A
6 _* h, o7 Y8 f! w2 sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 m. ~" j  L- E% {
愛  簡單的一句愛
7 \1 L# G3 v5 G為什麼
# H% C' l" O( n+ y* ^6 z2 K/ s# [如此難以表白?
  x; A2 F" Z7 V9 ?6 `7 `% O
8 @; {% ?0 L' f5 ZI want to confess that I love you,
; p1 {7 }( |  j0 K- A/ F$ J: JBut I never did
* K' h0 `. W/ W9 P1 N$ l
愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 T% ~- r9 |; J, ?( i# w; w9 f0 N* B也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
& ^  h+ l' [( m8 R" }, MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. w" I$ P9 y0 g& m! A
希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

* r3 @. B" ?' C3 r, wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, ]$ y) ^$ G' O% m: y, ~$ n6 }可否讓我托付給你?
2 u; c5 m1 I) L' [- F1 a9 K托付我的愛
收在你心裡
5 w+ y3 m( `% q2 w3 o: L& Q& m3 |
6 m( Q# D0 A" V. m" ~: xLove… just the word love
. r; f( R* n. p; ~' B9 y5 S( h0 N8 `. \Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
! O, {  B3 a4 z, m1 z為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
& N% v" p$ S6 s# ?- g2 iBut I never did

! p. q! l0 ]* T: J5 i% A6 q6 P愛你 我想要告訴你
2 J9 b) o2 [# ~) J卻還是說不出來
8 n3 i% Q( k, P1 X$ b* ?# v( W
5 T- k& \0 e2 g* _) I+ @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
$ g1 u4 M, M( i
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
% x4 L2 _7 o: \7 X" B/ D5 v讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
' b- V( O- I/ X, g2 O, f
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

' ]% s; P, Y+ E4 i7 D" ZCan I entrust it to you?
: d8 t+ Y8 D+ Y( JEntrust my love within your heart
$ X8 D  H: r3 ?% v8 h( M
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
7 ?0 x, s3 W7 O1 M1 p& j
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

  @( w* C" f) h7 H7 ~: W可否讓我托付給你?
5 Z6 T: l0 [9 w托付我的愛 收在你心裡


. ~2 w9 B+ \1 f; ^3 Y, U
3 U7 K* b/ `  X3 R; ^3 W
; Z" j6 [( H  R+ }; i
对唱曲参赛译稿
2 N1 E$ O+ }2 Z& i8 k" s. [
3 [6 {- Z3 \( BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& q& i* [- W" E- ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
! Q1 |4 K* \4 n6 i1 l' Q4 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
1 k$ q; l0 ~. R* O( y& Y3 p我心充滿快樂
5 m8 ~* @+ @9 a5 x( h9 l( }
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) G& @: ~) i8 l( ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 R# F+ q' s! d: l( o. Y9 A/ @3 P
月光映在我的眼底
/ T7 q5 ]7 |8 G: V, n0 b7 U月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
4 A/ [5 C. M, n+ e( a; G% ^5 B. ~9 @星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
; L5 C2 w9 i0 X2 b9 @5 X
我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去
- |+ y% d, x/ A( M& f, q9 W( [; v* K
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 t1 u% Z" B8 Y+ I! G
( u; U( d! T# z, W7 y$ x6 ^你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝
6 N' P. M  q' _4 I: }1 J; \9 {
! s9 m( K1 E# d, z* ^: R5 G4 S' cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' @. l, C2 |( j7 ~4 W
" b! }) q  \) X4 B4 p% B你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

, j2 ~" \% e' _* ^) VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* F5 `4 F1 k* X) A- f' d( c4 q' [
我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
" G7 c0 b  U# v/ V" M8 N
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# j  L: \' n7 [  X: g6 b7 C9 y
能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
* H2 L& }5 _6 ?  s6 S+ I
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ h  y9 e$ }! r  |/ _' d' K整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

# s1 b" E7 m$ j  z9 ^  uI want so much to see inside your heart
5 z' v) N  r7 u0 L
0 H8 z3 G% y: p8 C* {我想看透你的心
$ G4 i2 \. X) _: [% [  a
I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: |1 K0 m$ o9 Y% V
我歡迎你將它打開
4 i3 s9 |4 [6 A9 J: g) L我願意用生命
* Y1 Y/ {; f# z1 M來證明我的愛
- T1 r0 Z* A) q3 }
( {8 ~. K* w+ QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( O1 A" P# C4 _& J# ^' O9 i
我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

I regret not dying
- {" s+ X* K- @4 d9 o  O' HI only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 e, {. R( t9 C& z8 t6 \3 R
可惜我未能以死證明
) ~6 d0 \5 G! Y我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
# a7 T# R* l, I' R
4 E- z( }" w3 z- @: H% qWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! `) ?1 z% b& N9 h
這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 q+ k& ^: o* \  M, D& r2 k; L2 R如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
千萬個心思

Rambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
: p' j9 T  X5 P; D7 ^愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
8 Y4 ~9 h- \- B" gxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒