【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
) {2 W8 G/ f7 |4 `8 L, M8 ?- p袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
7 G; f; A  I, t  \0 c深藏在我心底的那句
' \  K$ n+ }' W  K8 |9 N/ B. {我愛你  

From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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5 O7 G3 E& D7 p1 x3 I* n2 q- r在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
& U% A. _( x( c我的心

We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
0 o$ P  z7 \. n' `9 F還是不能肯定你的心意

4 F/ c8 e! ]- i" T. l! C4 W/ {If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 d( |. I2 w5 L* S& {4 b9 M( XI would probably know how you feel
4 u( T. A9 X0 i" D% f凝視著你的眼
+ N1 S" r# f/ ^# A搜尋著你的魂
) b4 o5 \7 \8 ?我也許就能了解
" F, @& l- g; ~你的心情

: X; Z! w5 I2 _Love… just the word love
/ P  @" u. P( L0 F8 @: |. u  bWhy is it so difficult to express?

$ u6 B6 S3 ?. F) u9 e愛  簡單的一句愛
) h: P" p! ~( M' n2 U$ w4 n, ?4 a為什麼
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4 q; k4 F8 Q$ t) l6 _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

. n9 F" @8 W0 r/ E- F* V愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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7 \" c/ b* K: N% D/ hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. ?5 d3 ]0 t$ }6 `9 c) s3 I9 {也許有一天
, O4 U! D) n* `# J2 {# v你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
6 P/ m) l( L& [( U- Q5 ?5 L讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

8 b% r* |7 F6 r* f* U3 v) @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* n- M8 E( ]: t/ p+ S$ Y可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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Love… just the word love
3 \. e2 i5 w$ N* \+ ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

& C' s) m7 I! Y* nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
$ t( v4 f, f  QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

/ E9 h+ }; _5 t) R希望今天還不會太晚
8 i/ c, X) ]' b5 }9 U1 z) j$ S* N; a讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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, g; v7 B5 x+ Y* m; B; C" [1 BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 S  j, r  r: F5 t2 _4 A& E可否讓我托付給你?
2 ~. D+ m7 @; w0 ?托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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Can I entrust it to you?
& E, q* ?* c! @Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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对唱曲参赛译稿

5 |9 l' f7 o8 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 @/ \0 }, }4 |4 d( M& ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 d- g* M2 \: aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 p. C# W2 C2 I; N9 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
" i5 p" d8 Y- _4 J  rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
0 @4 h1 l2 c5 q. H月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂

- ?. w( p8 w9 U' XIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
7 x4 H( i7 K" D3 C% F) b0 @) v終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
* Y% k7 D" m) v  ~, o我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
+ z- g( T. H/ l6 F. O. c# YI really want to know just how much you love me

+ `6 |7 M# t4 l你的一言一語都是愛
/ B; p; Z/ q. P我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
7 `+ k# q. B+ z8 _+ b& d* WNothing can compare to my love

/ Z, E2 P* R0 d( C; H: E$ q我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

6 B3 Q# c( W; g" t: nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?

5 w! d, U3 H* A5 f/ \3 p; |1 z能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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1 k6 r& v6 t: hI want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心
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' z9 n3 S5 Y4 F; i& ^I invite you to rip it out
8 W( \3 O& R! E3 [' f+ zTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
4 k' D# n5 D( e來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
) m2 B% i% }1 ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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- H' K$ e; `6 O" T, G我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

1 O% U2 Y) r+ k1 p2 P3 x$ G6 tI regret not dying
+ m+ z4 C8 r" I% rI only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

可惜我未能以死證明
$ M6 ^0 ?" T! W2 m; d我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
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0 v0 \/ [7 U, f! @, ?% x4 qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
. A; X  W& ^7 ~8 x3 l. D我將對你訴說
1 E: L+ w, I7 l千萬個心思

1 ^/ }8 n' [  a6 l1 b) o. x& n0 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

# [/ x% r3 B- C' n: s+ A) ]訴說千萬個
$ i# ?3 t2 D0 I2 R) n愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒