【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
2 t+ `; b7 d% p5 ~; K% z& y: zvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% p# O" `: d/ |: @夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

! n. x) D2 v8 I- P. S6 @) ~. |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ [- z% T+ B- P$ _  \* w: G凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! Z% I7 L7 q5 H6 [0 k  D+ [月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ g" q4 Q! u/ f* P! L7 _8 k0 _' e一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 m; O& X* \3 k& y夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
( C1 z. \" k+ _% A: s- w0 S, AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
* ?& _2 d& X+ ?9 x爱你爱你 全心全意
/ x# A0 @$ w2 V) DNothing can compare to my love
3 s+ a  E. x+ @7 q, f世间万物  皆不能比
8 c. f; X) @# N0 J' p% ]* }: t
' D4 }+ F  M6 Q9 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
7 d3 p3 J4 ]: {# TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ a2 A0 H8 O9 A0 y; F+ F2 s整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
7 h& l' n+ g  M你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' v$ [6 u+ L, k: j4 k6 u5 r若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
$ ?  u. X' |  ?( I' G$ F, t- F1 G  J6 ZI’m still filled with fear
! b6 y2 G. c; F8 F4 G" a可我依然满心忧虑
# q& o- Y) M3 j9 e: f5 R0 `, V+ QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
0 b1 z- Q9 O) V+ S: s; R' WI regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
' m' e. D+ f9 E. oI only have one tongue
% z1 c" U& \2 \- U/ c( t: w我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
$ @3 [' W2 e; ^7 k4 b! SIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
6 \: N( f7 R  U2 _) T; UWith such a tongue as yours,
6 x+ G5 n9 r" ^你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 |) }" h' m# z$ s2 b) \9 M能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
7 L" J% L: E0 b! n# `" ZRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

) r. n- |, _# S4 Z: ]0 r" X+ LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
# c0 Y9 [" W. bFrom the first moment we met,
8 B7 Y, L0 P# N, H: e对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
# ?& z$ \" J7 Q  s2 d$ L" ^2 G! V从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
; j+ |. c: J" W3 ]8 T你我每天见面寒暄
, M  q0 h) u" V, XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 K0 I( t% P9 q& H$ V  }' W奈何从未谈及内心
- a/ ?* X$ S+ z8 i' o, ^If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
( I2 o1 i( b/ g3 {7 SI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
) X4 z& ~2 [7 z  a+ n: k/ M" [Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 O' ~; E- ~: L, u1 z为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
4 z7 K. k' r+ h* v6 _$ a5 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
* z: `8 A* Q9 r# c' \If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
4 d# C; o* l$ c3 ]. G' v+ FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 [! y; D9 F3 o/ q+ {2 v今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 X  M+ Q3 ?# t" {8 ?- @/ P不愿这份爱 逝如流水
+ h/ h. A9 Q. WCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

# U+ ]1 D7 `9 A, bLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
1 m- I- l5 p8 V: t+ [0 I+ G- h5 \But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
* o6 b( n' [- y& x3 @1 F5 u  JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! u; B  F: L* v$ s今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
9 D5 n' n: N; j4 X( R: Q- ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: c8 l) T8 Y. {& P  y6 ]不愿这份爱 逝如流水
1 d$ }8 M! h; x5 \1 zCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
( U- V/ g. r+ O5 ]9 n
4 d( p0 r2 @# G8 c, n* Z/ Q* F" r% zCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
5 e# n" H3 j; r- f9 |Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
3 }7 ]% s) E0 n1 {+ G6 Z老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
7 s/ n! s6 u- o老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
% e9 y9 y* d, J$ V* i$ f刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

1 s0 p, J2 P& |7 ?* C不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。